Love Blossoms2 : Arjun SS *Discontinued* - Page 24

Created

Last reply

Replies

393

Views

39.2k

Users

46

Likes

955

Frequent Posters

ponnuz thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Hey,though i am a bit sad that the story came to an abrupt end,i totally respect ur decision.I mean , it happens...but i am sure this is a passing phase..so dont get desp so fast..but as i always say i always have faith in ur writing abilities...😊 personally i think ek writer ko apni characters ke saath mental synchronisation hana bohot zarrori has..if u couldnt find the same with Rosh in LB 2 ,then take ur tym..😊 we people r ready to wait 4 ur next work..😃..but yes..dont lett that wonderful,creative mind and brain of ur's go idle...
keep smiling😊 be happy..
..pink.. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Hey 😃
Remember me??😳
And the story??😛

Quick recap :

Roshni has been diagnosed with retrograde amnesia and has forgotten everything about her love and married life. She is living with Aisha for the time being as she cant live with Arjun now since she doesn't remember him. Arjun didn't want her to join ETF for her safety, but she being she, joined it and he had to give in to her. Arjun yelled at her as she entered goon's den without anyone's permission. Roshni doesn't seem to like him as she finds his over protective behavior weird. Rathor suggested to visit the kids - they are staying in Delhi...

Rathor and Aisha - there's something that Rathor feels for her but its not clear in his mind. As for Aisha, we dont know...




Chapter 12

Rathor and the rest reached at Arjun's place. Everyone was quite excited to meet the kids. Aisha stepped inside slowly opening the sliding door.

Aisha : "Gia! Giiaaa!"

Rathor (looking around) : "Sab kaha hai?"

"Arre tum sab aa gaye!" An old lady came outside " Manju Maoushi " she had been part of Arjun's family since Arjun's childhood days. Sameer knew her because of Arjun .

[Maoushi u all know na! ...Mausi or maasi in Hindi. Maoushi is in Maharashtrian. ]

The kids were staying here in Delhi with Roshni's cousin brother Sanjay's family. He had dropped them all safely here yesterday and Arjun had asked Maoushi to come here so as to take care of them.

"Arre Maoushi! Kaisi hai aap?" He asked getting near her "Bacche kaise hai? Aap log kal theek se pohoch gaye the na?"

"Sab theek hai. Kal dopahar me pohoche the... Tum logo ko aane me taqleef to nhi hui na?

"Nhi sab theek tha"

"Uncle! Aunty!" Gia came running down the stairs and smiled at them. She looked at the door but then turned to them when seeing no one there "Mumma Papa?"

"Ummm wo aa rahe hai...abhi baat hui...Aap tab tak hum logo se mil lo!" He smiled and picked her in his arm "Aur baaki ki paltan kaha hai?"

"Wo so rahe hai. Bohot sote hai wo log uncle, main toh bore ho jati hu." She said pouting her face and spreading her hands expressing how much she gets bored.

"Ooohhh! Yeh to bohot badhi problem hai... " Rathor said nodding his head and with a concerned expression on his face, as if he really understands her problem.

"Arre ab hum sab aa gaye hai na. Tumhe bilkul b bore hone nhi denge!" Shree grinned and pulled her chubby cheeks.

"Arre koi nhi so raha! Lagta hai un dono shaitaano ko b pata hai ki unke papa aa rahe hai... Aaj aankho me neend kaha hai unke..." Maoushi smiled and pointed upstairs to their room.

***

Everyone gathered at the sitting area and patiently heard whatever Gia had to say to them. It seemed she had collected lots and lots of things to share with them.

"Aur fir pata hai main use kheechti gayi aur wo badha hota gaya, hota gaya..."

"Bas bas! Bohot baatein ho gayi. Kuch Arjun k liye b to bachao..." Maoushi came there and offered them tea.

Gia just smiled and then looked at Aisha. She was really fond of Aisha as she always used to find her pretty, especially her eyes. Aisha liked her too. She held her hand and pulled her "Tani Tashi upar hai. Chalo na!"

Aisha was first a little hesitant to go with her leaving everybody else as it was her very first visit to Arjun's place but then getting a nod from Rathor, she agreed.

"Arre wah! Hum sab log itni durr se tumse milne aaye aur tumhe sirf Aisha aunty ki padhi hai." Chotu said bending down on her knees in front of her.

Shree too got up from his place "Lekin kuch b kaho! Itni derr ho gayi aur Gia ne aaj koi b shaitaani nhi ki, ye kaiseee..." and he was not even able to complete his sentence. He was moving to Gia when he stepped on a roller skate which took him straight to the sofa at the farther end of room. He fell over the sofa and looked at others holding his head trying to settle down his shaky vision.

"Maine kuch nhi kiya!" Gia said innocently, hiding behind Aisha, holding on to her arm.

"Shree are you ok?" Aisha rushed to see him.

"Padhne ko kisi ka b pair padh sakta tha lekin padha sirf mera! Aisa mere saath hi kyu hota hai!" Shree tried to get up keeping his hand at his back.

"Oh ho! Ab uth b ja! Zor se lagi kya?" Chotu said and helped him in getting up.

"Gia! Kitni baar kaha hai cheezein sahi jagah par rakha karo. Bechara Shree gir gaya na!" Maoushi said in a bit loud voice.

"Nhi nhi! Theek hu main" He said trying not to show his pain. "Main soch raha hu thodha sa aaram kar lu...aaah! Thak gaya hu thodha..."

Shree didn't want others to blame Gia for this, but his back was paining and that was true too. He chose to rest for some time. Maoushi showed them their rooms and all moved towards it, except Rathor.

***

Rathor and Maoushi were sitting at a table in the kitchen, where Maoushi was taking the peas out of its pod; she was doing it for the dinner preparations may be.

" Gia to toofan hai..." Maoushi said while doing her job.

"Haha! Wo to hai...aur Tani Tashi?" He asked knocking some peas in his mouth.

"Poocho mat! Har din koi na koi cheez gaayab ho jati hai ghar se aur baad me bahar padhi milti hai..."

"Uffo Kya Kaku! Abhi to papa aaye b nhi aur aap shuru b ho gaye..." Gia came in with Aisha and the two little trouble makers. Tani and Tashi are toddlers " just one and a half year old " they can babble and can walk taking the support of things around them.

"Arre ye dono yaha hai" Rathor immediately went near them and picked both of them in his arms. He smilingly looked at them "Aankhe ekdum Roshni jaisi hai. Hai na!"

"Nhi mujhe to lagta hai Arjun jaisi hai." Maoushi said.

Aisha was just smiling seeing a family environment around her. It had been so long that she hadn't visited her family and had a good time with them. And then Rathor, how many would have seen that angry chief smiling.

The toddlers were more than happy in his arms. Both of their hands quickly reached his moustache as it was something new for them. But then soon they were hanging on to his shoulders, struggling to come down. He put them back on the ground and they started walking towards the kitchen cabinets in their own new found walking style. Gia too went to accompany them. Aisha sat around the round table and started helping Maoushi.

"Arre arre! Tumhe karne ki zarurat nhi hai. Main kar to rhi hu."

"Koi baat nhi!" She replied with a smile.

Maoushi smiled back and then gave a tight slap on Rathor's hand which was yet again stealing some peas from the bowl.

"Kitni baar kaha hai gande hai, dho kar khaya karo...rakho wapis... aur tum log..." She said looking at Gia who was trying to take out the cookie jar standing on a chair "... abhi koi buiscuits nhi khayega..."

Rathor looked at her with the expressions as if he's a small boy and his candy has been snatched from him. Aisha started giggling seeing her chief being scolded like a small kid, but then controlled herself as Rathor got uncomfortable.

"Tum yaha baith kar matar kha rahe ho! Apne dost aur uski biwi ki koi fikar wikar hai b ya nhi! Kaha hai wo log? Shaam se pehle aa jana chahiye tha unhe aur ab andhera hona shuru ho gaya. Unhe phone..."

"Wahi kar raha tha..." He replied innocently and got up from his seat, placing the cell phone on his ear but not before taking some peas secretly, and winking at Gia.

But how could a cop's eyes miss that. Aisha without thinking once immediately holds his hand "Arre Maoushi ne toh mana..."

Rathor surprised looked at her and then her hand which was firmly holding his. Aisha looked at him and then realized that she don't have any right to stop him. "Sorry sir wo..."

Rathor just smiles and his fist moves back to the bowl to release the peas. He then walks out of the kitchen to call Arjun.

***

Some time back

"Hum ab tak pohoche kyu nhi?" Roshni asked looking at him with a restless look.

"Pata nhi itna rush kyu hai aaj road par! Sam to aaram se nikal gaya..." He replied peeping his head out of the window.

"Ek to inke saath mujhe bhej diya aur upar se ye traffic..." She thought to herself "Ab isse bura aur kya hoga"

And yes, then the worst happened. Some noises from the vehicle and it stopped all of a sudden.

"Kya hua?"

"Pata nhi! Let me see..."

After few moments, Arjun took out all the bags from the car "Kya hua? Aap saaman kyu nikal rahe hai?"

"Car kharab ho gayi hai."

"Hawww fir?"

"Hawww fir!" He imitated her "Waise to ghar paas me hi hai but tum kaho to hum taxi..."

"Nhi its ok." Though she wasn't in any mood to leave the car but yes sitting for so long was tiring too. She thought walking may do wonders "Let's walk!" She replied with a faint smile.

As they were walking, Rathor called him. He told him everything "Haan! Bacche sona chahe to sula dena... zyada wait karne ki zarurat nhi hai..."

As Arjun cut the phone call, he noticed a confused expression on Roshni's face and he knew exactly what was confusing her.

"Bacche?" She asked

Arjun just smiled "Jaldi chalo! Hum bas pohoch hi gaye..."

Roshni looked at him surprisingly. She thought its best to just follow this weird man.

Roshni (in mind) : "Kya ho raha hai? Pehle to sirf girlfriend thi, ab bacche b hai...kuch der baad kahenge inse milo Roshni ye meri saasu maa hai... main kaha phas gayi hu...isse bura kya...nhi nhi" She looked above her head and sent silent prayers to God "Sorry sorry! Kuch nhi...aap apna kaam kijiye..."

Arjun turned to look at her standing still with folded hands and yes, she was muttering something. He walked up to her "Kya kar rahi ho? Ghar nhi chalna"

"Haan! Haan chaliye na...main aapko follow karungi..."

And then the walk continued.


***


Please leave ur commnets..😊


Edited by ..PriyaB.. - 11 years ago
Payal_156 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
res
di look stalker is back
do mahine bad dusri bar stalk kiya
yay
honestly apne btaya ni dat today u 😉
Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago
vidya.anand thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
firstly welcome back!

Lovely update...
loved the masti and fun at home. Gia's prank..awww bechaara Shree!

superb cute romance between Raesha!

and why are Arjun and Roshni stuck still?

the part about GF, bacche and saasu ma was very comical. Roshni toh ek typical piece hai!

cont soon
Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago
IlaTanwar thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
its a nycc... And awwh bechaari roshni...
Payal_156 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
wokay d update was 👏
awesome
real me bi sid hurt
n apne wo use kiya
well i know maasi
in btw sam bro aww
hehe gia was lol trouble maker
haww back
i imagine bhaiya imitate rosh lol
tashi n tani waiting fr trio hw dey pareshann my arjun bro
maje aa gye di
lov it
jise bhule ni to yaad krne ka sawal ni sys?
ps . me first yahoo
saritak thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
plese sent me pm
anu91 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Wow u again started...
Thanks for updating...
Gia was so cute...
Loved rathore and maasi...
Arini scene was nice
How will rosh react seeing the kid????
Cont soon yaar
thanks for PM dr ...
638783 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Sweet update😊
thanks for continuing😊
Moner_Radio thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
priya :

first of all i didnt read the previous parts of the SS. i guess you might have pmed me, but then my entire inbox got deleted when i was just trying to delete a few pms ! and i had 92 unread pms in that ! i literally wanted to pull out my own hair in frustration at that time ! so pardon me if i didnt reply to your previous pms.


okay now back to the update. an amnesia track , here too. ek baat batao, why cant a story move forward without someone (read the main leads ) losing their memory ? ( in case you are wondering what's wrong with me, lemme tell you, my fav show is also going through an amnesia track of the male protagonist ) khair, chodo usse. arjun, roshni aur unke do chote-chote, pyare-pyare bachhe. plus Gia. plus Maushi. plus ETF family. ekdum bhara-pura, sukhi sansaar😉. Shree will be Shree, always being the source of amusement for everyone. but what came as a surprise was Rathore's habit of stealing peas. even i do the same thing.😉


ps : poor Roshni. kal tak sirf girlfriend thi, aaj bachhe bhi aa gaye. frustration toh banta hai boss ! 😆

Edited by Moner_Radio - 12 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: minakrish

5 months ago

Uncharted Roads ~ ZNMD OS [Arjun+Imran🌈] #PyarkaTropefest

Graphic Credits: itsShonali This is one of my entries for the Love-O-Rama #1: Pyar ka Trope-fest Trope: Set A: Opposites Attract Set B: Road...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul

6 months ago

Meri Aashiqui Ho Tum( You are my love) Veer Zara SS

Meri Aashiqui Ho Tum( You are my love)Part 1 Thank you my dearest friend Sydell for the beautiful cover page. I dedicate this SS to mili_ai who...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: MidnightLibrary

4 months ago

Punishment sequel to destiny of love ( Climax))

Hey there, readers , Just a quick note: I wanted to let you know that since the old module is now locked, I've created a new one for you. You...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42

8 years ago

Rivanya,Ishveer,Swasan and Shivika ff - Ishq wala love

Here are Characters of the Story Ritik : elder brother of Shivaay , Ranveer , Sanskar and love interest of Shivanya Shivanya : elder sister of

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42

8 years ago

Rivanya and Raina ff - Love me like you do

Ritik Mehra : Business Tycoon and Elder brother of Raghav Shivanya Kapoor : Doctor and Elder Sister of Naina and love interest of Ritik

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".