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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#261

sorry vidya dii...this time ur fan comes late...

beautiful update...

whole of it contained Sameer-Arjun convo...hence again making my heart skip a bit...vid th thought of Behzi's leave...

cnt imagine this beautiful show nd this beautiful jodi without him...

so nw finally arjun is going to stop sakshi frm leaving ETF...

continue soon dii...

love
Aisha

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littlebrat

@littlebrat

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Siya madam...woh Sakshi ke ghar usse manaane jaa raha hai...usse accha koyi jagah ho sakhti hai kya? ☺️☺️
or did u mean that u wanted beach waala love again? 😉

Di don't you think saakshi ka ghar arjun ki entry ke baad sakshi ke liye dangerous ho jaye ga...☺️...i mean hot acp already hot dreams se suffer kar raha hai...you know getaway is impossible😉😆...until your devil reveals out of no where

waiting waiting ...yo yo😊

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

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Santhosh Banda

@Santhu.The.King

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

Res... Holy Cow...!!! i Missed 1st Place :P

Unres...

Awesome As Always... 👏
Cute n Sweet Ending...❤️ Superb...😳 I Like To Read More Of This... 😃

Anyways... Thank you So Much For This Short Story... Loved It.. 🤗

Edited by Santhu.The.King - 12 years ago

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NainaSM

@NainaSM

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

wowww so cute ..😳.. so sweet romance ...☺️.. continue soon 😉

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

Yuppie an update

Haaye haaye kitna cute and romantic update tha...just love Arjun saaza☺️ and then sakshi addressing arjun as aap,was sooo sweet,im really imagining this scene,absolutely superb

Nahiii its over...okies yes yes yes we want a sequel,we want a sequel,we want a sequel,we want a sequel,we want a sequel,we want a sequel..please please please

I was stalking ZMD and you updated here

Thank you for the update di,and pm also

Edited by PoohLover - 12 years ago

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marnali04

@marnali04

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

like it? love it.. plz do continue..

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Sakshi

@Sakuu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#268

Loved the update! You've outdone yourself once again!

loved the romance and their nok jhok..

Bechaari sakshi, even if she wanted to hide, Arjun wouldn't let her..

Love this possessive arjun you write in most of your stories..

Guess aapne mujhe bigaad diya, because now even i want a guy who is exactly like this*blush*

And yes please please please do write a sequel! I love reading all of your stories, thou kabhi kabhi i forget to comment, but i always like :-)

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#269

aww...it ended...!!!

whenever any of ur story ends dii...i really feel smthng missing...

bt it ws a perfect ending...in my darling SRK style...HAPPYSS ENDINGSSS...

BT I WOULD LOVE TO READ A SEQUEL FOR THIS SHORT STORY...

PS: waiting for ZMD dii

love
Aisha

Edited by Aisha.Vashishth - 12 years ago

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Anjali.Mital

@Anjali.Mital

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#270

Wow..a perfect ending..
The update was so romantic...
Arjun's way of punishing is soo sweet..
Sakshi's sudden change from "tum" to "aap"..I must say you know
the magic to make a romantic moment..am really happy...

A little bit sad also...another amazing Arakshi work came to an end..

I think its one of the best works in AF until now.. 👏 👏

Thank you very much..for such a comely work...
All the best...