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Posted: 12 years ago
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HEY GUYS!!!!
THIS IS MY FIRST FF EVER...
ALL THIS TIME I HAVE BEEN A SILENT READER BUT NOW I THOUGHT I SHOULD ALSO TRY😉

THE MAIN THING IS ACCHHA NA LAGE TO PLEASE GAALIYAAN MAT DENA... PEHLI BAAR HAI..😆

THE STORY BEGINS from the point where asad arrives at the gudiya factory on the day of his nikaah with zoya and as we saw on sbs and sbb and forum 32...

asad parks his car and closes the door with a bang...he can not believe he has betrayed zoya... anger and guilt fought over for victory in his heart and all he knew was that he didnt remember anything...
anything of sort tanveer claimed... he just felt his head heavy and all this made it even worse for him to face zoya.

meanwhile, zoya was getting mad- how irresponsible can he be on the day of the wedding he is late ???😲 no he is asad ahmed khan the gr8 y wud he care about me????
but no i'll find him. not to forget i am miss bond.😆

but tanveer exactly knew the state of asad and was enjoying it all... zoya chaahe jitni bhi koshish karle asad to uske haath se gaya 😈😈

zoya asked ayaan to accompany him and went in search for her asad...
they located him and were quite amazed to know that he was in the factory...
zoya and ayaan reached the factory followed by tanveer(this billi has to be everywhere??)

zoya entered the factory to find mr. khan all broken. She couldnt believe her eyes he was crying he was actually crying... ayaan motioned zoya to wait and went to his bhai
n hugged him tight...

mera darr sach ho gaya ayaan! maine zoya ko hurt kar diya...main uss ke layak nhi hoon😭

zoya had enough and shot through the door towards him...
aap apne aap ko samjhte kyaa hain kuch der mein hamara nikaah hai aur aap yahhaan... aur kisne kaha ki main hurt hoon???
😲😲😲



this was it
kaisa tha???? joote chappal ande tamatar sab allowed...
agar achha laga to i'll continue otherwise not...
for the start 2 likes atleast... please😳


PART 2
MR.Khan main aapse kuch pooch rahi hoon????
mr.khaan
asad wad rooted there... he didnt speak a word... but tanveer interupted
woh woh zoya woh asad uhm jammy aur hum woh and shedding her crocodile tears came up with her horrible story...

aisa nhi ho sakta.mujhe mere asad pe pura bharosa hai.
tanveer tum chahe kitni bhi koshish karlo aisa ho hi nhi sakta.

so sorry guys incomplete chodd rahi hoon but bahut zyada zaruri kaam hai
SORRY!!! BUT AAGE KAAFI EXCITING HAI...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey tis is great...
please continue...
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Plzzz continue soon i m waiting
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