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Lovely.

Ab toh maan bhi babaji se baat karne laga hai
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Part - 27

Maan: Geet, ab mein office bhi nahi jaa saktha

Maan sounds disappointed……KC se dhoor rehna toh Maan ke liye bahut mushkil haina?

Geet: mein kitna pareshaan hoon, aur aapko apni office ki padhi?

Maan: aaisa nahi hai

Geet: toh kaisa?

Maan: woh mein soch raha tha ki ab toh hum wapas bhi nahi jaa sakthe, toh

Geet: toh?

Maan: toh kyun na hum thoda goomle? Mein tujhe Delhi ke khaas jagae dikahtah hoon

Geet: par mein toh Delhi pehle hi dekh chuki hoon

Maan: magar kaise? Tum toh har waqt ghar pe hi rehthi

Geet: mein bhai aur beeji ke saath yahan aksar aathi thi

Geet thinks of her family…..

Maan wants to divert her attention……

Maan: lekhin Geet, ye jagah toh bahut khaas hai, ye sirf mein jaantha hoon

Geet: aaisa kaunsa jagah hai?

Maan: samjo ye MSK ka Mecca hai, ya phir mera apna khailash

Geet: mein kuch samji nahi

Maan: Geet, log shanthi ke liye Mecca ya Khailash jaathe haina? Aaise hi mein bhi kabhi kabhi akhela mehsoos kartha toh yahan chale aatha, camping karne, yahan thode din rukhne se mann ko shanthi miltha, tumme bhi ye jagah bahut pasand hoga

Maan takes her to a nearby jungle….it's at the foothills of some mountain….

It's very calm and peacefull……

One could hear only the bird's singing…..

It's very lovely……

They drive amidst tall trees….

Finally Maan stops near a stream….

Maan: lo, aagaye hum

Geet gets down,,,,she takes a deep breath…..

It's very refreshing out there with a cool breeze welcoming them……

Geet: Maan ye toh bahut sundar hai, aap ahan akhele aathe ho?

Maan: haan

Geet: par mujhe toh dar lagtha hai, yahan toh madat karne ke liye bhi koi nahi hai

Maan: tum aaisa sochthi ho, lekhin mujhe toh yahan aaram karna bahut pasand hai, yahan toh humme disturb karnewala koi nahi hai

Geet: aap hanesha akhele rehna pasand karthe ho?

Maan: aaisa nahi hai, par mein apne bachpan mein akhela ho gaya toh dhere dhere mujhe akhele rehne ki aadat padgayi

Geet feels sad for him…..

Maan: par ab lagtha hai ki mujhe yahan aana nahi padega, ab mein akhela nahi hoon Geet, tum ho mere saath

Geet goes and hugs him….

Geet: haan, ab hum akhele nahi hai

Geet thode dher walk karthi…..aur uss stream ko dekhthe hi rehthi….

Ussko pani mein khelne ka mann kartha hai……

Lekhin kaise> ussko toh tehelna nahi aatha haina?

Toh woh darkke dekhthe hi rehthi…..

Phir Geet pani ke paas jaakke apne haath muh dothi…..

Maan comes and pushes her into the water…..

Geet dar jaathi…..

Geet: hare, ye kya kar arhe ho?

Maan: Geet, ye koi samundar nahi hai, yahan toh zyada se zyada 2 ft pani hi haga

Geet: anhi nahi, mujhe tehelna nahi aatha

Maan: woh toh mujhe patha hai, chalo haath pakdo

Geet Maan ke haath pakadthi…..

Maan: daro mat, mein hoona?

Maan Geet ko dhere dhere pani ke andar lekhe jaatha……

Phir Geet ko bhi confidence aagay, ye toh bahut shallow hai…….

Koi bacha bhi yahan dhoob nahi saktha…….

Thode dher aaise hi pani mein khelthe hai…..

Geet ab pani se bahar aana hi nahi chahathi hai…….

Maan: Geet, ab chalo, hum phir kabhi aakke yahan camping karenge

Geet comes out…..

She looks at Maan….

Maan removes his shirt and dries it in the wind…..

Geet: Maan

Maan: kya hai Geet?

Geet: mere kapde?

Maan: lo mujhe do, mein sukhatha hoon

Geet: kay?

Maan comes mear her….

Geet: mujhse dhoor rahi

Maan: hare Geet, tum aaise gadhi mein nahi beit sakthi

Geet: Maaan

Maan takes off her duppatta……he puts it ona tree to dry…….

Geet turns back…….

Maan comes…..he touches her shoulder…..

Geet: haath mat lagao

Maan: hare Geet

Maan turns her towards him….

Maneet eyelock……mahi……

Maan: Geet, ye hummare liye pehle bar nahi hai

Geet: kya?

Maan: isskke pehle bhi meinne tummare gille kapde ko change kiya hai

Geet ke chehra sharam se laal ho jaathe….

Geet covers her face with her hands……

Maan lifts her and takes her to an open space……

Geet: hare, ye kya ho raha hai? chodo mujhe

Maan Geet ko neeche uthartha……

Maan: tum kabhi bhi mere barein mein kuch achcha nahi soch sakthi?

Geet: kya karein? Aapko dekhkke toh koi achchi baat dimag mein nahi aathi

Maan: toh ye tummara problem hai, mera koi dosh nahi hai, haina babaji?

Geet: aapka koi dosh nahi hai?

Maan: haan, meinne kya kiya?

Geet: aapne kya kiya? Aapke nazar hi kaafi hai kissi ko khaayal karne ki

Maan: achcha

Maan looks into her eyes……

Geet: aaise mat dekho

Maan: kyun?

Geet: mujhe kuch kuch hotha hai

Geet turns back…….

Maan: aaise mat karo

Geet: kyun?

Maan: mujhe bhi kuch kuch hotha hai

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, tum aaise hi sharmathi toh mein apne aap ko rokh nahi patha

Geet: aapka kya matlab?

Maan: tum aao mere saath

Maan Geet ke haath pakadkke apne saath lekhe jaatha……

Geet: mujhe kahan lekhe jaa rahe ho?

Maan: Geet, yahan iss dhoop mein thode dher walk karthi toh tummar kapda apne aap dry hojayega

They stroll in the evening sun for a while……

Geet rests on Maan's shoulder and keeps walking…….

Geet ab bahut tak jaathi……ab aur chal nahi sakthi……

Maan lifts her and carries her to the car…….

Maan looks at his mobile……

Dadi had called him……

Maan calls dadi……

Dadi: Maan bete, aap teek toh haina?

Maan: ji Dadi

Dadi: Geet kahan hai?

Maan: yahi hai, mere saath

Dadi: aapne phone kyun nahi utaya? Hum toh bahut dargaye the

Maan: woh humkahin bahar chale gaye the

Dadi: ab aapko kahin bhi jaane ki zaroorat nahi hai, aap ghar wapas aasakthe hai

Maan: woh log chale agye?

Dadi: haan bete

Maan: teek hai Dadi, hum abhi ghar aathe hai

Geet: Dadi ka phone tha

Maan: haan Geet, chalo ab hum jaa skathe hai

Geet: par

Maan: Geet, dev Hoshiarpur wapas chala gaya

Geet: teek hai

They go back to KM……

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part25 26 and 27 are very nice as expected it was dev thankgod maan sahi samay par geet ko bahar lekar gaye loved their moments
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part 26
awesome...
their banter is so funny...
lovely dear...
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Part – 28

Dadi is waiting for them…..

Geet ghar aathe hi Dadi ke paas jaathi aur galle lagathi…..

Dadi: Geet, aap teek toh haina?

Geet: ji dadi

Dadi: aapko darne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, ab aap akhele nahi ho, hum sab aapkke saath hai

Geet: haan

Dadi: iss mamle ko humme jaldhi katam karna chahiye, Geet aap jaakke aaram kijiye

Geet goes to the OH….

Maan: dadi, mein bhi chaltha hoon

Dadi: Maan bete

Maan: ji dadi

Dadi: aapse kuch baat karna hai

Maan: kahiye Dadi

Dadi: Geet ke barein mein

Maan knows what Dadi is thinking……

Maan: Geet ke barein mein?

Dadi:haan bete, hum soch rahe the ki Geet ki uss zabardasthi shadhi ke wajhe se koi problem toh nahi hogi?

Maan: kaunsa problem Dadima?

Dadi: woh Maan bete, jaise aap chahathe ho waise hum bhi aap donno ki shadhi jaldhi karwana chahathe hai, isskke pehle uss Pammi and party ko Geet ke barein mein kuch patha nahi chaltha, humme jaldhi Geet ke zindagi ko bachana chahiye, haina?

Maan smiles……

Maan: haan dadi, waise jaane anjaane mein, mein bhi uss galthi mein shamil ho gaya

Dadi: haan, kissi na kissi tarah hum bhi Geet ke saath uss nainsaafi ko rokhne ki koshish nahi ki

Maan: par dadi humme toh patha nahi tha ki Geet kaun hai?

Dadi: phir bhi, Geet ke jagah koi bhi ladhki hothi, shayad uss Meera bhi hothi toh bhi humme uss shadhi ko support nahi karna chahiye

Maan: ab toh sab teek ho gaya haina? Waise Dev ki uss galthi se hi humme Geet milli hai, issiliye hum ussko maaf kar sakthe hai

Dadi: humme toh abhi bhi dar hai ki Dev wapas yahan aakke koi drama kadhe na karein

Maan: aap fikar mat kijiye Dadima, mein iss bar koi galthi nahi hone doongha

Dadi: humme patha hai bete, ab aap Geet ke khilaaf kuch bhi nahi karne denge

Maan: Dadima, mein kal hummare lawyer se baat kartha hoon, aur unsse poochtha hoon ki koi legal procedures hai kya?

Dadi: zaroor bete, hum iss bar koi risk nahi lena chahathe hai, waise bhi Geet ne bahut kuch saha hai, ab toh hum sirf unkki kushiyan chahathe hai

Maan: aap Geet ki fikar mat kijiye, ab toh aap Geet ke chehre pe sirf muskurahaat dekhenge

Dadi: teek hai bete, gud night

Maan: gud night Dadi

That night….

Geet is getting ready to sleep….

She is praying to babaji……

Geet: babaji, mujhe jaldhi iss mushkil se bahar nikhaliye, mere wajhe se Maan bhi kamakaam pareshaan hai, mein unkko aur takleef nahi dena chahathi

Maan has just come……

He closes her eyes…..

Geet darjaathi……

Ussko laga koi chor hai…..

She tries to hit him with her chadi……

Geet: chodo mujhe

Maan: Geet, ye mein hoon Maan

Maan pushes her and opens her eyes…..

Geet looks at him and is shocked to see him there….

Geet: aap,

Maan: haan, mein hi hoon, aur Geet, tumme chintha karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, babaji ne tummare praarthana ko sunliya hai, aur woh tummare pareshaaniyon ko jaldhi katam kardhenge

Geet: aapko kaise patha? Aap unkke secretary ho?

Maan: nahi, lekhin mein vada kartha hoon Geet ki aage koi bhi pareshaani ko mein tere paas nahi aane doongha, ussko pehle mera samna karna padega Geet

Geet toh bigalgayi…..

Geet Maan ke bahoon mein apne aapko surrender karthi…..

Maan assures her that everything would be fine……

Geet: toh Maan, aapko neendh nahi aayi? Chalo ab jao, gud night

Maan: gud night?

Geet: haan, jao, mujhe sona hai

Maan: mujhe bhi sona hai

Maan goes and lies down in her bed……

Geet: ye kya hai?

Maan: Geet, ey bisthar hai, tum bhi aao

Geet: aap yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Maan: Geet, mein toh sonewala hoon

Geet: kya? Yahan?

Maan: haan

Geet: par ye toh mera kamra hai

Maan: woh Geet, meinne socha ki tumme akhele sone se dar lagega toh mein tujhe company dene aaya hoon

Geet: kya? Usski koi zarorat nahi hai

Maan: beech mein pillow nahi ho toh bhi chalega

Maan winks……

Geet: aap toh bilkul badmaash ho gaye ho

Maan: achcha

Maan pulls her and she too falls on the bed……

Maan gets closer…..

Maan: Geet, aaj toh teri galatfami ko dhoor karna hi padega, ye toh MSK ki izzat ka sawaal hai

Geet: kya?

Maan: tujhe kya lagtha? Mein kuch nahi jaantha, abhi patha chalega ki mein kya kya jaantha hoo

Geet: aap abhi yahan se chale jao, warna

Maan: warna

Geet: mein chale jaoongi, Dadi ke paas

Maan: jao, mujhe koi problem nahi hai

Geet: kya? Hare babaji, ab mein kya karoon?

Maan: kuch nahi, ek gud night kiss dedo, mein chale jaath hoon

Geet: pacca?

Maan: haan

Geet kisses him gud night…..

Maan still stands waiting there…..

Geet: ab kya hai?

Maan: hare, mein kissi se uthaar nahi letha, kabhi letha toh bhi interest ke saath wapas detha hoon

Geet kuch samjhi nahi…..

Maan pulls her closer and kisses her……..

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Part €" 29

Next day€€.at KC€€

Maan kissi na kissi bahaana banakke Geet ko apne paas bhulathe hi rehtha€€

Kabhi coffee toh kabhi designs€.kabhi file€€.

Geet daud daudkke tak jaathi€.

Finally€€.

Maan calls her once again€€

Geet has decided that she has had enough€..

Geet: ab mujhse nahi hoga

Geet is very angry€she picks upthe phone€€

Geet: ab kya hai?

Maan: Geet, woh naye project ka file tummare paas haina? Usse lekhe aao

Geet takes all the files and her things from her table and goes to Maan€™s cabin€€.

She throws them on his table€€

She sits infront of him€€.she is really furious€.

Maan : Geet, ye sab kya hai?

Geet: subhe se aapki seva karkke mein tak gayi hoon, ab aur nahi

Maan: matlab?

Geet: aapko jo bhi file chahiye aap hi lelo, sare files yahi hai, ab toh mein yahi beitkke kaam karthi hoon

Maan: ye toh tum pehle hi kar sakthi thi?

Maan Geet ko dekhthe hi rehtha€.

Geet: kay dekhthe ho? apna kaam karo

Maan: mein apna kaam hi kar raha hoon

Geet: kya?

Maan gets up and comes near her€.

Geet: hare, ye office hai

Maan: toh kya hua?

Geet: Maaan

Geet stands up€€

Maan holds her hand€..

Maneet eyelock€€mahi€€.

Ye toh Maan ka cabin ka zaadu haina? Andar aathe hi inkki ramonce shuru hothi!!!!!!!!!!!

As usual, Adi knocks€€

Geet: koi aaya hai

Maan: aane do, come in

Geet tries to release from his hold€..

But Maan tightens his hold€€

Adi€™s trademark laughter€€€.

Maan: Adiii

Adi: koi problem nahi hai sir, mein badh mein aatha hoon

Geet: Adi sir

Adi leaves€..

Geet: ye teek nahi hai

Maan: kya teek nahi hai?

Geet: chodo mere haath

Maan: achcha€.chod diya

Geet gets back to her table€..

Aaise hi KC mein Maneet ki masthi chaltha rehtha€..

Next week€..

Adi €" pinky ki shadhi hai€..

Adi sabko invite kartha€.

He is leaving for Hoshiarpur today€.

Adi: Geet

Geet: Adi sir

Adi: mein aaj Hoshiarpur jaa raha hoon

Geet: haan, mujhe patha hai

Adi: woh Pinky tumse baat karna chahathi hai

Adi goves her the phone€..

Pinky: hare Geet, tum kaise ho?

Geet: mein teek hoon, sjadhi Mubarak ho Pinky

Pinky: aaise kaise? Yahan aakke wish karo

Geet: who€.Pinky, mein kaise aasakthi?

Ye Pinky ko yahan ka problems patha nahi haina?

Aur toh aur khan eke alawa ye jaanthi bhi kya hai?

Ab Geet issko kya bathayegi?

Adi snatches the phone from Geet€€

Adi: Geet, mein ussko samjatha hoon

Adi: Pinky, mein badh mein call kartha hoon

Adi: toh Geet, mein chaltha hoon

That evening€..Geet bahut udaas lagthi hai€..

Ussko apne bhai ki yaad aagayi€..

Itne din se usse koi kabar nahi hai?

Kahan hoga? Aur kaise hoga?

Teek toh hoga haina babaji?

Geet Brij ke barein mein sochne lagi€..

Maan notices this€€

Maan: Geet

Geet: hmmm

Maan: kya soch rahi ho?

Geet: kuch nahi

Maan: tere bhai ki yaad aagayi?

Geet:haan, woh teek toh hoga haina?

Maan: haan

Geet: phir mujhse milne kyun nahi aaya?

Maan: ussko kaise patha hoga kit um yahan ho?

Geet: woh Hoshiarpur mein hai?

Maan: nahi

Geet: aapko kaise patha?

Maan: woh meinne wahan ka SI se baat kiya hai, jab bhi Brij ka kuch patha chaltha woh humme inform kardhenge

Geet: achcha

Maan: Geet, tum fikar mat karo, woh ab dar gaya hoga, thode din mein kudh wapas aajayega

Geet: hmm

Geet is still worried, she is not feeling good€..

Maan knows what to do?

He opens his arms like SRK€.

Maan: Geet

Geet Maan ko dekhthi hai€.

Geet Maan ke paas duadkke jaathi aur usko galle se lagathi€€

Maan Geet ko console kartha€€

Maan: Geet, tum apne parivaar ki fikar mat karo, ye bhi tera hi ghar hai aur ab ye tummara parivaar honewala hai

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, ab tum meri bangayi ho, aur jaldh hi Mrs.Khurana ban jaogi

Geet doesn€™t like that surname€€.

It€™s very general, haina?

Geet: Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana kaho

Maan: haan ji, Mrs. MSK, ab kush?

Geet: kismat ka khel dekho, kaise mujhe iss parivaar se judtha aaya hai

Maan: ye toh taqdeer hai Geet, Geet toh hamesha Maan ki hai, Maan ki Geet

Maneet passionate hug€..mahi€€.

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nice update ab jaldi indono ki shadi karwado
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part 27
awesome...
Maan is so naughty...
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part 28
awesome...
how is he gonna protect her from Dev and for how long?
lovely moments...
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part 29
awesome...
only Maan can do this to her and Geet only she can argue and fight and yell at Maan...
too good...
cont soon dear...

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