swaron os on current situation (prt 2 on pg 4)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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guys hav written a casual os on swaron...hope u all like it...
so here u go with first part...πŸ˜‰
PART 1...

All was sotted as swayam bought the true face of Mr Adi in front of everyone and all was sotted between swaron and team...

In night at 11:oo pm...

Sharon receiving call from swayam...

Sharon attended...

Sw- hello my luv...kya kr rahi ho...!!!!

Sh- khutch nai bas sone ki planning kr rahi thi n tumhara cal aa gya...

Sw- ohh tho aab sone ki planning mat karo...

Sh- kyu..!!!!

Sw- close ur eyes...

Sh- wht???pr kyu...

Sw- karo tho sai na Sharon...

Sh ok..

Meanwhile swayam just entered in sharon's house through window'.

Sw- ab kholo m sure tumhare lips pe ek big smile aa jayge...

Sharon opens her eyes and see swayam in front of her..

Sh- swayam u here at this time..i mean its 11..wht hpnd is everthing...(she starts blabbering thn swayam put his finger on her lips)

N thn llhh in background pehla nasha instrumental...

After two minutes swayam finally broke the eyelock...

Sharon kitna bolti ho tum. Sharon was trying to speak thn again he tightened his finger so tht Sharon can not speak...

Sw- agar tumne aab khutch b bola thn I ll make sure ki tumhe chup krane ke liye khutch naughty sochu n gives a wink...

Sh- oohh I see Mr majnu naughty banenge..hmmm lets...

she was continuing her sentence while swayam interrupted in between nd gave a peck on her lips...sharon was stunned there..

Sw- kya hua Sharon tumhare throat me khutch problem ho gyi kya jo ek word b bahar nai aa raha h..

Sharon was just looking him with wide mouth open...

Guys nw tell me shud I continue or not...

p.s. i knw its super lame...chappals n rotten tomatoes are welcome...πŸ˜†


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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
continiou.

Mera upd8 chota tha haan??
Tmne kya promo dala h? 😑

update fasttt nai to deep di ke update bhul ja. πŸ˜›


i'm grt na deep di ke kandhe pe gun rkh gole chalaya? πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: swaron9113

continiou.

Mera upd8 chota tha haan??
Tmne kya promo dala h? 😑

update fasttt nai to deep di ke update bhul ja. πŸ˜›


i'm grt na deep di ke kandhe pe gun rkh gole chalaya? πŸ˜‰

shortage of time behna...dnt wry i ll update soon...n deep di ki damki...😲
dnt wry me unse bohot darti hu will update soon...n i wnt update deep dii...πŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Bhavi 😑 kahan lake stop kar di..
N yeh Kya tha do min bhi Nahi laga padne ko itna small update 😑
Next update bada dena Nahi toh main padungi Nahi n comment bhi Nahi karungi..

Well coming to d os it was cute.. Firstly all sorted between them wohi got smile on my face..
N den d sweet surprise n majnu jumping through window n everything was cute..
Very Gud start. .
Continue fast..
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
cliffhanger ke liye tujhe kya punishment doon bhavs???? 😑

kya train me chadte chadte likha??


btw jo bhi likha awesome likha..Swayam sneaking into her room and then those naughty acts of majnu.. bewildered Sharon.. awesome ise continue kar before 22nd plz.. i wanna read more..

and baby di ke naam se kyun dhamkaying..
bhavs di itnisweet hain tu unse darti kyun hai????
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sakshi.ekansh

cliffhanger ke liye tujhe kya punishment doon bhavs???? 😑


kya train me chadte chadte likha??


btw jo bhi likha awesome likha..Swayam sneaking into her room and then those naughty acts of majnu.. bewildered Sharon.. awesome ise continue kar before 22nd plz.. i wanna read more..

and baby di ke naam se kyun dhamkaying..
bhavs di itnisweet hain tu unse darti kyun hai????

😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲
muje dii bana diya...😭😭😭😭😭😭
well dnt wry mene charti hui train me nai likha h...πŸ˜†
are kya karu dii is time pe mene likha h vohi bari bat h...😳
dnt wry will try to finish till 22nd...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vrushaan

😲
muje dii bana diya...😭
well dnt wry mene charti hui train me nai likha h...πŸ˜†
are kya karu dii is time pe mene likha h vohi bari bat h...😳
dnt wry will try to finish till 22nd...πŸ˜ƒ



arey meri buddhu ram maine tujhe di nahi boila... maine bola di itni sweet hain tu darti kyun hai.. qki tune bola na mujhe di se darr lagta hai isliye...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sakshi.ekansh



arey meri buddhu ram maine tujhe di nahi boila... maine bola di itni sweet hain tu darti kyun hai.. qki tune bola na mujhe di se darr lagta hai isliye...

oohh acha acha...πŸ˜†
well dii itni sweet h kya muje tho pta hi nahi tha...πŸ˜†
koi nai aab me deep dii se nai dartii...πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start
Cont soon n mujhko pm karna.:P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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are you serious
itna chotu sa update
promo tha yeh toh... πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

anyway
amazing start tha
thanks for the PM
please continue soon
and do PM me

waiting for this one !1

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