Arhi OS ~ The Terrace Rendazvous

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

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Posted: 12 years ago

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aisha1996
Nice os

Thanku!😃

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

if they were sharing a flat and they were meeting after one month what was right moment they were waiting for

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ranogill
if they were sharing a flat and they were meeting after one month what was right moment they were waiting for

no dear! they are not sharing a flat, they just live in the same building with their respective families!

and due to some unavoidable reasons, they couldnt meet for a month...thats upto u to decide whether they had exams, or one of them could hav been out of station...anything!

sorry, I failed to clear this part out!

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

res... *omg!! my princess writes too!! *

unres...

sorry baby!!! I know m late but I have been attacked by pharangitis...so m always down...even my work's pending..

now regarding the story... I loved it <3 the concept itself was so cute..upr se quite realistic! being flat mates does nt mean u can meet regularly!! nd if u r a couple then this type of dooriyan makes u angry nd agitated. therefore I loved the bharas nikalo avatar of Khushi.

Ash, you must write more.. aur nahi likha to I will chase u with a danda..got it??

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Rekha

@Caskett

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

Awsum OS!!!
Being a teenager myself and that too of the same age that you mentioned, I can very well relate cause we have all done the sneaking and meeting boyfriends 😆
I don't see why you took so long to write.
You should write more.😊

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vplh79

@vplh79

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

I have to say that this was adorable! For your first time I has to say that it was really well written! As for being cheesy... I love cheese! It was super cute and I lied how it perfectly embodied teenage love! It's feisty, passionate, moody, and innocent. Arnav was a cute boyfriend who knows how to make his girlfriend happy again while Khushi is the kind of girlfriend who will baselessly get mad but only to show her love. The pair was perfect and you write quite well! I hope too see more work by you soon ;)

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arshina223

@arshina223

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

You don't have hide behind the bed ash...

its an awesome OS.
Arnav knows how to shut her up huh..??

Loved it.

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Amrita

@Amti4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

So, my little sis writes too... You didn't let me know... 😔.. But, it was the best surprise for me..😊.. I was feeling bit low in the morning but your OS lit up my mood..😉

So, you now left my group of readers and joined writers batch...😃... Why didn't you write before dear...?????? Don't tell me you were busy studying and all... Now, I am well aware of how much you study..😉

Do write more..😊...

Coming to the updates... I love these kinda teenage self.. kya karu.. Dil tho bacha hai jee...😊

arnav and Khushi meeting after a whole month..and I think she is not aware of when he will come, but she goes on to the terrace almost everyday to check if he will come or not...and she had returned back home disappointed also..😔...

I love to watch serials and films where the lovers sneak and meet..but, good that they both share the same building...

Loved how Khuhsi is also concerned about her parents getting to know about this...

Arnav really knows to handle his love... and Khuhsi even though she is mad at him his one touch is enough for her to lose..😉

The last part was really cute.. (Mummy ko bolun beti kya kya likh rahi hai???????)😛

Now tell me one thing... this is not from your personal experience, right????😉

Awesome update...I don't like strawberries much, still I read it.. 😉

I was about to add Update sooon... lol.. In your case, Do write more...Take your time... and don't get much distracted from your studies... I know I know...you will be thinking here also I started my bhashan..😛. Kya karu, I am too much protective and strict in all these matter...😃

Take care..

Your Amrita di...

P.S

Happy Raksha bandhan to you... 😉..Enjoy your holidays...

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Niki

@..Enchantress..

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

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Don't tell me this was your 1st attempt 😲 !! This was absolutely lovely. ❤️

I like this kind of teenage stuff where Khushi is a cutie pie and Arnav is beyond adorable

It was a lovely read...an angry Khushi who seems strangely cute and a flirty Arnav who knows to pacify his girlfriend. How I love it !!😳

Would love to read more from you in future !!