Originally posted by: sadafarsha
Its awaum
I luved it aloootBut chotu thaSwaron are really cuming close slowly but jab dur hongey toh kitna sad feel kereinge am feeling bad for themI wish kriyaansh unko phirse swaron banadeinPlzzz update next part sooon and do pmWaise apne abhi tak pm toh but phir bhiThanx in advance for pmNext tym plzzz update lamba wala plzzz
Originally posted by: Swaronvrushan
So sid is here. ...
Originally posted by: rohan_smile
that was nice and cool going...
waiting for the update...to read the next part...Rohan :(
Originally posted by: sweet16cash
Arrey yaaa a chotu sa update and a cliffhanger then not unfair girl nainsaafi hai bilkul.. .
Love the growing friendship between swayam and sharon it is refreshing to read them enjoying themselves and unwinding making new memories together..π.
Kriya's worries about swayam are very right swayam will breakdown seeing sharon married with someone else mat hone dena sid and sharon ki marriage..
Now who is this new guy?? Update fast eager to know it may either be sid or shivam just a random guess..
Update soon girl..π
Originally posted by: damonTVDrocks
π A cliffhanger... First of all, long time no see n then you update a small one...π But coming to the chappy, the way SwaRon are bonding is awesome... KriYaansh convo was meaningful... But hope this doesn't affect their long lost n newly found friendship...
Wondering who that person is...π² I think that might be Sid.. But, we'll see...π Update soon n do pm me... (This time reached before the pm..π₯±)
Originally posted by: swaronlove001
waoo veryyy nic update...
rey aur kriya shai soch rha ha...
swaron close a gay as a frnd
nd dis new person i guess sid hoga ...
plzzz update fast...
Originally posted by: -spongy-
superb yaar
amazingwowwhat an updateit was amazingim so happy that ur backand swaron chose a gay as a friend πthis mught be sid ππwant the next update soonphata-phat PM karna mujhe π
Originally posted by: dashinggirl
nice,small and lovely update πbut next time big update plzzzreally the bonding btw swayam and sharon after their breakupu ended the part on right point ππΌthere is so much of suspense nowvery curious to know who is the personplzz update soonwant to read next part ...pm me when r u updating
Originally posted by: cenation123
read all the updates in one go
the plot is really interesting till now
the way you have penned this one is amazing
i think swayam lied about his room cuz there nust be sharon pic all over there(just a guess)
loved how swayam being the selfless one is hiding his pain just for her happiness
the choupati scene was nice
i really like how the story is shaping up
hmmm finally sid is here i guess
thank for the pm
update asap and do pm me
-Harshita
Originally posted by: Twinkle_d3
Nice update loved their bonding..
Kr r fab as always pls update soon..
Originally posted by: Suni1986
It was lovely update
Both swayam nd sharon having gala time at beach.
They enjoying their chaat nd each others company.
Swayam nd sharon living their moment bt kriyaansh lil bit worried for them.
Originally posted by: shanaya_shanu
arre waah yeh tho bahut awesome hain dearππ
but it was small...its okayπ³loved SwaRonπ³π³kya suspense diya yaarπsuperb...but update soon dearπwaiting for next chappy eagerlyπππ
Originally posted by: raj_tanha_fan
chotu update but one says short nd sweet.
but didnt want the cliffhanger of an ending!!thanks for the pm nd update soon.
Originally posted by: 8085548022
nice update
swayam and Sharon as a friend nicely writtenthanks for the pm
Originally posted by: trisha19
Amazing update!!π
really liked the chaupati wala part..πwaiting for the next chapter eagerly...
Originally posted by: medhasarkar
now sid ki entry?
bahar nikalo yaar smarty, sid ko entry ke baad jaldi exit karvana ha?i m not gonna pounce on u for chotu updt---just update karne ki kripa ki bahut hai(yeah thats sarcastic)and i loved it. the beach eating scene was fab.continue soon.lots of love--medha
Originally posted by: kamlesh32
Very nice ff...i read all five chapters in one go. I hope sharon and sid dont get married. I wonder who is this new person...is it sid? Well please update soon and do pm me.
Originally posted by: austen4ever
cliffhangerπ‘
what's with you writers,itna kya maza ata hai hume tarsane meinπ
it was small but cute.
i have the same fear that kria does, this time if she leaves him, he won't be able to stand it.
update soon
Originally posted by: anushka1129
awesome update..
am loving swaron growing friendshipπ
swaron enjoying each other company n not to forget both are happy from heart after long timeβ€οΈ..
loved kriyanash concern about swayam..
swaron were so much in themseleves that they forgot about friends hehe..
plz update soon..
thanks for the pm :)
Chapter 6
Person: Hey buddy! Long time no see!!
Swayam (shocked): Shivam!! What are you doing here?
Shivam: Kyun iss jagah pe tera copyright hai?!
Swayam: Whatever!
Swayam takes the two drinks and starts to leave but Shivam stops him..
Shivam: By the way how is Sharon? (Swayam stops) Maine suna she left you! Shayad kisne mujhse kuch kahan tha.. Kya tha.. Kya tha?.. Haan! Sharon kisi loser ke saath belong nahi karti!
At the same time Sharon saw Swayam talking to someone.. As she tried to look who the person was she was shocked.. She immediately called Rey..
Sharon (terrified): Rey..
Rey: Kya hua Sharon? Why are you so tensed?
Sharon (pointing towards Swayam): Wahan dekho!
Rey: Oh shit!
Rey and Sharon both rush to Swayam.. Rey very well knew that Shivam may end up saying something that will get Swayam really very angry..
Shivam: Accept it Swayam! Loser main nahi tu hai! Nahin toh aaj Sharon tere saath hoti.. Kisi bade business man ke saath nahi! Waise manna padega uski choice ko.. Choose kiya bhi toh India's youngest businessman ko! Not bad!!
Swayam was fuming in anger and was about to punch him in his filthy face when Rey stopped him.. Luckily Rey had reached before Sharon..
Rey (in Swayam ear): Dude relax! Sharon yahan aa rahi hai! Please kuch bolna mat.. Main iss kamine ko sambhalta hoon!
Swayam saw Sharon approaching and tried suppressing his anger.. Rey took the glasses and handed it to Swayam and told him to go back to their friends with Sharon..
Sharon (worried): Swayam tum theek ho?
Swayam (trying to smile): Yeah yeah! Don't worry!
On the other side,
Rey: Hey you! Better stay away from my friend especially Sharon and Swayam.. Nahi toh I swear tu next time kisise panga lene layak nahi rahega!
Shivam (acting as if scared): Haaww main darr gaya! I'm sorry Rey! Agli baar dhamki dene se pehle dekh lena ke tu kisse baat kar raha hai..
Rey just left from there as he didn't want to get into a fight.. He went to his friends where he saw Swayam trying to control his anger and Sharon trying pacify him.. Kriya came to Rey to ask him what happened and Rey told her everything.. Kriya saw Swayam and both thought of lightening the mood a bit..
Kriya: Hey guys!
Rey: Guys we are here to enjoy! So let's hit the dance floor!
Everyone: Woah!!!!
They all hit the dance floor and so do Swayam and Sharon.. Both were dancing with the group and Swayam slowly started enjoying as he had Sharon around him.. They all were enjoying when the filthy scum purposely pushed Sharon while dancing and she landed on Swayam.. He held her but the next moment he saw that evil smile once again..
Swayam (pushing Shivam): What the hell is your problem! Agar dance karna nahi aata toh chup chap ek koone main jaake baith!
Shivam: Tujh jaisa loser mujhse yeh bol raha hai.. Jo ek ladki kya chodke gayi usske liye dance bhi chodh diya!
Swayam lost it and held Shivam's collar.. And as usual all our boys started showing their tashan to Shivam's friends who had gathered around him.. Rey rushed and separated Swayam and Shivam..
Swayam (anger): Rey chod mujhe! Aaj main isse nahi chodunga!
Shivam (acting): Mummy main darr gaya! Bachao!!
Swayam (almost pushing Rey): Rey chod!
By now the entire club had their attention on the big tiff that was going on here.. the DJ had stopped playing and the bouncers came to stop this.. Before the bouncers could touch Swayam, Rey told them that he'll handle him and they can go.. 2 of the bouncers were were blocking Shivam's way who was continuously abusing Swayam.. Sharon moved to Kriya.. [Before any doubts Sharon has not heard anything from what Shivam said]
Sharon: Kriya yeh suddenly Swayam ko kya ho gaya hai? Aaj tak maine usse itne ghusse main nahi dekha!
Kriya: Woh.. woh.. Aare tumhe pata hai na Shivam ne past main kya kya kiya hai toh bas he must have said something to Swayam uske wajah se Swayam ghusse main hai!
Sharon: Are you sure? Kyunki maine aaj tak Swayam ko itne ghusse main nahi dekha!
Kriya: Ya ya I'm sure! And chill Rey sambhal lenge Swayam ko!
Just then the DJ speaks out: Guys guys guys! Temperature kaafi high ho gaya hai toh lets not fist fight and lets change the mood to a fair and square battle! What say!!
Crowd hoots'
DJ: So how about a dance battle guys!!!
The crowd again hoots and agrees.. Shivam's friends walk to one side of the dance floor with full on attitude.. Shivam looks at Swayam with an evil glint in his eyes.. Swayam and Rey to their friends who were standing at the other end..
Swayam: Aaj toh Shivam ko main nahi chodunga!
Sharon (placing her hand on his shoulder): Swayam relax!
Swayam looks into her eyes and finds concern and care filled in them.. A smile automatically appears on his face and he assure her that he is fine..
The crowd gathers around them.. and starts hooting.. The DJ plays a nice and groovy music.. [Imagine the face off just like the one shown in D3 during the Dance fest between KR college and St.Louis but the only difference is that Vicky does not fall here (if can't remember try and watch 23rd December 2011 episode)]
The dance battles starts.. After a few attempts from both
them teams the score was a tie..As Shivam's friends were not ready to leave the stage Sharon and Kriya wink at each other and move to the dance floor.. They start moving their hip and groove their feet to the music.. The rest of the girls join them and all the girls just burn the dance floor with their sexiness.. Swayam and Rey were lost looking at Sharon and Kriya move so effortlessly.. Soon girls from the opposite group push them off the dance floor.. After the girls from the opposite group were almost done with their moves..
Swayam (with an evil smile): Rey! Lagta hai inko maza chakhana hi padega!
Rey (grinning): So what are we waiting for!
Reyam: Nil!!
The three boys occupy the dance floor and that's it there was no stopping to them [Rey, Nil and Swayam's performance in the face-off] Sharon and Kriya were having a blast looking at the opponent teams reaction as these three were not letting them dance.. Sharon was continuously cheering for Swayam and laughing her heart out.. The gang was done with their Rowdy dance at the end'
DJ: Hey people this battle has turned out to be really interesting so lets add some more spice to it.. How about a duet from both the ends?
The crowd agreed and was cheering for both the times simultaneously.. Shivam still had his chin held up when two of his friend went up for a duet.. The couple danced pretty well and was good enough with their chemistry.. On the other end Rey looked at Swayam and asked who should go.. Swayam just looked at Sharon..
Swayam (through eyes): What say?! For old time sake?
Sharon (grinning ear-to-ear): Let's kill it!
He moved forward and asked for her hand like a gentleman.. As they stepped on the dance floor the DJ played We No Speak Americano [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CR8logunPzQ] ..
Swayam and Sharon slipped into their tango shoes... They moved and grooved to the music.. Their moves were spontaneous but looked like they've been practicing since ages.. Sharon's body molded according to his.. He was taking care of each move and treating her light a delicate petal in his hand.. While dancing they even shooed of the other couple from the opponent side.. Sharon giggled looking at Shivam's expression and Swayam had the evil smile.. No soon both were lost in each others eyes and were moving in sync with the music.. Suddenly their longing.. their love took over all their emotion and they seemed like drowning into one another.. He twirled her.. Lifted her.. but got her closer sooner.. She held on to him as if he was going to be pulled away.. The passion.. the love had evolved once again.. Swayam for a while felt that it was His Sharon in his arms.. The song ended and he had dipped he and got her closer.. Both could see the pain.. the love.. the longing in each other's eyes.. They were pulled out of their world with the load cheers from the crowd and their friends..
DJ: Wow!! Now that's what I call a sizzling performance! What chemistry guys!!! You'll burned the dance floor!
Their friends came and hugged them.. The boys almost jumped on Swayam and the girls hugged Sharon.. But Kriya was the one who had seen it all.. Now she had no doubt that both her friends still love each other.. She had her doubts with Sharon but now all was crystal clear.. Shivam walked out with his friend avoiding Swayam and his friends.. The gang enjoyed, danced and had a great time..
It was now getting late so all thought of leaving.. Everyone had their rides back home and so did Sharon.. Swayam escorted her to the car and drove off..
Sharon: Kitna maza aaya na!
Swayam: You bet! Uss Shivam ka chehra dekhne layak tha!
Both laughed and Sharon rested her head back.. It had been a long day for her as well.. Swayam glanced at her and was concerned..
Swayam (concerned): Hey, you alright?
Sharon (eyes closed): Just a bit tired!
Swayam: ummm up for a chocolate milkshake?
Sharon (jerked up): Are you serious? It's almost 12! Kaunsa milkshake wala khula hoga?
Swayam: Bachelor's!
Sharon's face lite up as that was her favorite joint near the marine drive.. She immediately agreed and Swayam drove in that direction.. Luckily they were just in time.. Bachelor's was about to close and he rushed and placed an order.. He got the milkshake and both got seated facing the sea.. They kept silent and were just enjoying the cool breeze.. Their favorite chocolate milkshake.. and moreover each other's company.. Being so late at night but still there were some people sitting around.. But it was all so beautiful that both of them were just lost..
Swayam: Sharon ek baat puchu?
Sharon: Hmm pucho!
Swayam (looking at Sharon): Tumne dance kyun chod diya?
Sharon looked at him as she knew this was coming her way someday and then looked in front.. But she also knew that revealing the truth would cause pain to both..
Sharon: Time changes.. Priorities change.. Things change.. And so do we.. (looked at Swayam and smiled)Hai na?!
Swayam: Woah Sharon that was a deep thought! But you're right.. And as it's said change is the only constant of life!
Sharon (giggling): You know you can be a very good lecturer on philosophy..
Swayam: He he he.. Seriously?! Me and lecturer.. Please!!!
Sharon: Nahi toh kya! Jab dekho tab gyaan baate rehte ho!
They both share a heartfelt laughter.. They continue their conversation without realizing how the time was passing.. After about 2 hours or so both left from there.. Swayam dropped Sharon home.. Both were so happy spending such beautiful moment together.. After a long time both gave their eyes some peaceful rest.. Their heart filled with happiness and satisfaction.. Hoping for many more evening to come their way.. But is it possible? Will they have the same comfort level even after the unpleasant truth of their lives? Will they stay happen together? Or destiny has some other plans for them?
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