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Posted: 11 years ago



rocking update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago



frnd...šŸ˜›

4 comment sooo late......
ur update was
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u done a
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lots of 4 u.šŸ¤—..



the job up dear..šŸ‘..





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Posted: 11 years ago
both parts awesome
n music is perfect
both boys n girls enjoying their last day b4 marriage
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Posted: 11 years ago
of course waiting di
yeh bhi koi question hai bhala
jaldi update karo na di
update soon
waiting eagerly
muahhh
luvvv yaaa
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Posted: 11 years ago
course
i am present here
jaldi update do na plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
will type after dinner tomorrow will post...

in the morning itself😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting very eagerly..i love this ff
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Posted: 11 years ago

hey guys i am back with part 43

thanks all for your support




PART 43






thank you to all those readers who read and commented...

{SILENT READERS STAY AWAY FROM MY UPDATES THESE R ONLY MEANT FOR REGULAR LIKERS AND COMMENTORS}








A new day emerged a new ray of hope in the lives of four individuals..today the day will mark that they will belong to each other..their lives will be bind with each other..they will live with each other and they will live fo each other ..maan was lying on the bed with his eyes closed today after seven years those eyes were again haunting him..
his Arabian girl..
maan was having a contented smile , the yearning that he was feeling all these years was suppressed somewhere
but today it was pretty much visible..
Same was with geet she looked at the her wedding attire that was kept on the side table.. it was cherry red ..the adornments were kept along with it' Arohi and her mother came..arohi was already ready it will be the time of gauri pooja in some thirty minutes and geet was still not ready.. Rano came and looked at geet ..she was gazing at her wedding attire while her eyes were on the photoframe in her hands..her ma and papa.. she though never said to rano but rano knew that how always craves for her mother affection..though she never differentiated between arohi and geet but still there was a need in geet to have her own parents
but sadly this wish can never be fulfilled..
she lost her parents and once they are gone she can never reterive tham back.. Rano gave arohi a green color saare and asked her to get ready..while she sat with geet and kept her hand on her cheek' Rano: geet.. Geet immediately looked at her mother and smiled' Geet: mumma I am just going to get ready..she said with a smile that was missing its charm' Rano: geet simran ki yaad aa rahi hai'rano knew that geet was always emotional she was just like simran who was just like a younger sister to rano ..geet was in all senses a copy of simranbut still the feelings that simran always was able to confront to rano geet never did.. Geet kept her head in her mumma's lap and let out her feelings.. Geet: mumma ma papa khush toh honge na' I am missing them mumma'I wish wo mere saath hote.. they would be here to bless me and aru' Rano had tears listening to geet but she wiped them knowing how can her tears affect geet .. Rano: bacha simran aur verji are seeing you and showering their blessing on you..phir meri geet toh babaji ki favourite wali bachi hai..your ma papa will be always there.. Geet looked at her mumma and envelope her mother in a bear hug' Geet : mumma you feel bad na..I somehow end up hurting you and papaji by taking ma papa's name..aapne aur papaji ne jo mere liye kiya hai wo koi nahi karta hai'I was an orphan aur aapne.. Rano jerked geet and made her look at her..this was the first time that geet was saying these words.,,these were the feelings that were too
much prominent in her life and her heart but today
she let go them infront of her parents.. Rano: geet kaisi baaten kar rahi hai.. we didn't do anything for you' it was you and your love..
hume toh ek beti mil gayi.. ek baat bata geet agar simran aur veerji aaj hote toh you wont you be calling us
mama papaji..kehti na..
Geet nodded and kept her head on her mum's heart .. Geet: mumma I am sorry.. but sachi main I didn't wanted to hurt you..par hare k baar I end up you in tears.. Rano wiped geet's tears which were on its way.. Rano: ye aansun na isliye hai aaj meri dono betiyaan mujhe chodkar chali jayengi..
aur mujhe pata hai ki meri choti kitni badi jhalli hai..
Geet cribbed listening to rano.. Geet: mumma choti mat kaho.. Arohi who came after wearing her saree and was now with geet.. Arohi: now go you lazy girl ready ho ja' Geet glared at arohi and went away taking a bright red saree.. both of them were getting ready for the gauri pooja.
.
IN KHURANA MANSION.. The preparations were going on it was already getting late with both maan and arjun were on their toes to see
what was actually the reason that their mother was getting hyper.. maan had came out of his illusion of his
Arabian girl.. he never tried to discover who was she where is she now .. not actually aware of the fact that she is
the one for him and today they will be tied in a relation for the lifetime'
The rituals were going on , dadima was looking after the things that were needed for the ghurchadi'
after all this is the most splendid tradition in big fat Indian wedding'
Naina looked at her sons they were standing like they have time for their lifetime' and she scolded both of them.. Naina: ye kya what are you doing here.. go and see if everything is ready I don't want any hitches in the last time'

This was the umpeeth time that they were getting scolded for no reasons' Arjun: mom why are you scolding us see..everything isfine.. Maan brought his mother's breakfast and made her have .. Maan: stop being hyper mom It is not good for you or you know what I am going to do.. shadi postponed ' Naina glared at her son' Naina: let my bahu's come..tum dono ko ko phir dekhungi' Arjun: mom hume dhamki de rahi ho' He said coming closer to his mom..while maan was thinking what will be the future his future their future ..
geet and him.. while seeing arjun he can easily guess his days..
Naina: sirf tumhe nahi maan ko bhi.. Maan couldn't take this anymore this wasn't any kind of teasing for him but the things will get clear once he
will get to know her'

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Geet and arohi were sitting where as the panditji was telling what to do .. they offered all the offering to
goddess gauri and made the idol wear all the ornaments that they have brought.. bangles' anklets .. toe rings..
vermillion powder and did the complete SHINGAAR just like they will be done..
This ritual was most important since according to hindu mythology as goddess parvati/gauri is considered to
bless the brides to be and to shower their blessing on the couple'

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Priya disha divya were making the brides ready geet was wearing a cherry red lehenga and arohi a peach and red one.
. they made them wear the anklets all the adornments.. they were wearing toe rings the girls were glowing with the
shyness and the anticipation and nervousness.. geet was looking down when made her look to the mirror which was
praising her beauty'
Priya: dekho toh geet kitni pyari lag rahi hai' Divya: bhabhi aru bhi toh kam nahi lag rahi hai.. Disha kneeled down and looked at both.. Disha: aaj toh khurana's ki chutti kar dengi ye dono' The red blushcrept on their lips..they were looking totally heavenly..






Whereas on the other side..maan and arjun were sitting while nidhi was doing the last ritual before they
will start their journey to take their dulhania..it was making her brother wear a long chain and then she will be
given a token of gift which is called NEG' nidhi does that and the guys were ready..
Nidhi: chaliye chaliye abhi toh bahut naachna hai bhai ki barat me' The excitement was too much and all the hearts were elated some were to meet HER and others were to see
them getting tied'
The baraat arrived..rano did the aarti of her Son in laws.. and the baraat entered.. it was actually divine
and beautiful feeling for the divine couple while maan was with his mother and daadima arjun was with his
friends and their BIL's were lookin after them.. the atmosphere was already having their charm it was just the
long wait now that will complete
with their sight which is needed to bless the yearning eyes'
The brides came with their brothers..it was arohi who came first and then their was jaimala with all teasings..
and next was geet..she was coming slowly compared to arohi while maan's eyes were just looking at her..it was
difficult for him to keep his eyes away.. but he did he kept his eyes away may be
kahin
USKI HI NAZAR NA LAG JAAYE'


Geet was blushing and smiling lightly she came and it was the time of jaimala'
as maan was about to put geet's brother took her in his arms making her float in air maan smiled
and for a second he was shocked but this teasing is must .
.and when it was geet's turn he just obligedby bowing his head making her sure
that this is going to be the start of their relation'
Both the couples were sitting infront of the holy fire'the priest was chanting the mantras ..
maan and arjun forwarded their hands and the girls kept in their .
. arjun and arohi's kanyadaan was done by rano and mohindar while geet's and maan was done by daarji..
daarji had tears in his eyes seeing his granddaughters getting married'
The priest called for gathbandan while nidhi did t for both.. it was the time of the seven vows.
. maan hold her hand while he could feel her tensed though their handlock was hidden with her chunri so no one saw.
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The first four rounds maan was ahead and the last three geet was ahead..
They vowed each other to be with each other all their lifetime' they will share the responsibilities of each other..
they wont back out on any thick and thins of life'
They were seated..maan made her wear the MANGALSUTRA and filled her parting with a gold ring'

arjun and arohi too followed the same rituals..
They were marked for each other and with each other' Maan and geet and arjun and arohi took the blessing from their elders'

later it was the time of the bidaai' this was the nost difficult time for not only girls but for the guys too they

cant see teir brides crying..geet was sobbing crying hugging her daarji and arohi with her veerji..while tej blessed
both of them ' rano and mohindar blessed their daughters and asked maan and arjun to keep them happy and to
forgive them if they does any mistake..
Maan didn't knew how to support her whereas arjun was completing supporting arohi..it was
arohi who was sent first then it was geet..she sat beside maan' and left the HANDA's surname

and her life for a new beginning'







Finally married
So how was it A kind of boring I know but from now on this wil be on MAANEET' Finally I will be able to write all those scenes which I am fantasizing almost a year and a half.. And yes , there's a season 2 for A SECOND LIFE too..








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Posted: 11 years ago
yippe finally married
will be waiting for next parts eagerly
greatly written
thank u
loved it

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