Ek Ajnabi (RN) Last part pg126 - Page 92

Hi Arwa

Ok so now one more reply on next update.

Suhaagraat one. 😉 😉 😉

Raj was desperate to meet Naina but these people can not make that easy. All the rituals were being done by Sameera and that was nice.

Ok so these sisters and girls can never leave the opportunity to blackmail her brother and saare ladke bhi itne desperate hote hain apni wife se milne k liye to yahan koi un ko itne asaani se milne kahan deta hai?

Khair ab ye rasm to poori honi hi hai na, Raj ne bhi Sameera ko pareshaan to kiya thoda sa par kitna jyada pareshaan karta apni pyaari se behan ko.

Good gift she gift. Finally he was with his Naina all alone as he wanted.

Par ye Raj k saare devil doston ne jaan moojh kar dono ko disturb karne ka plan bana rakha tha. Kuch aur nahi soch sakte the jo alarm clock me alarm set kar k rakh diya.

Raj bechara dhoondhte dhoondhte thak gaya ki Naina ko us ka gift de kar us ne kaha change kar lo aur so jaao, that's funny. Yahi to vo sab chahte the na.

But Naina bhi acche se jaanti hai ki sote hue sher ko kaise uthana hai, us ne bahut acche se Raj ko kuch yaad dilaya aur feel bhi karaya ki un ki first wedding night aise hi chali jaayegi.

Bus ab kya tha, Raj ko sab kuch samajh me aa gaya aur shayad aage kuch kehne ki jaroorat nahi hai abhi mujhe na………….that was truly hot, passionate & beautiful too.😳 😳 😳 Whenever they do romance it is beautiful and u make it outstanding too. 👏 👏 👏

Lovely ending and a bit hilarious too. 👏 👏 👏

Raj went on a honeymoon of a month, I think only Raj can make this possible and I think now I shouldn't say more about their love encounters, they are truly amazing and super hot.

Naina left him one day and when she was back Raj was busy watching T.V. and all that ladies and obviously Naina will feel irritated after all leaving his hot and sexy wife he was watching those good for nothing girls ( from Naina's POV)

But Naina showed him another side of her while made Raj drool over her but she doesn't know that Raj had another plans for her and he gave her a sweet surprise by that message.

After that all scenes were cut by our Arwa sensor board but lovely while reading that. I liked that disc scene and the song u used EK AJNABI recalled us the title of the Fic.

One year later:-

Oh Raj had become very hard working and how can we expect from her not to romance with his beautiful wife which is his right.

Ohoo he got his leg fractured and now he is completely dependent over Naina. Poor Naina how much work she can do and how can be she happy after a tiring schedule.

It's her obvious reaction that she can be frustrated and irritated after hearing Raj's childish complains. Raj should understand her situation before complaining like a school kid and on another hand Naina should also think about Raj's condition.

This argument was really needed after all we can't see always lovey dovey scenes. These small fights and arguments develop an interest in a relation. Often people say na more sugary things make the taste boring so spice and chili is needed too in life otherwise life becomes monotonous and dull.

Now they understood each other's importance and will try to understand the situations now and will think about each other with empathy. Raj was snobbish and Naina was rude and both realized their mistake and sorted out soon it was nice.

Raj has cooked many dishes just for Naina and it proved that how much he loves her and Naina too realized her mistake both were really cute in that scene.

Finally Neelu and Alekh got married on same date when our RN celebrated their anniversary. Raj......oh god he wants three cute girls and Naina wants a baby boy now it reached up to four and really u fulfilled their wish too.

Raj is really very shameless how he can behave in front of kids like this? When Naina sad baby he was thinking that Naina was joking, but he already has two time experience of being a father thank god it was not three times but in first time she gave birth to twins and both are opposite in nature one is like Raj and second is like Naina.

Raj can always win the bet, how can Naina think of wining a bet when Raj is ready to win that. Sneha, Suhana and Simran and now Prem has also come in their lives making it complete. But u know four kids are more than enough to handle, I can never imagine to handle four kids.

Their children are happy and more than that Raj & Naina are happy to have a lovely baby boy, now in this way Naina's wish has been fulfilled. All selection of names from Ekta's shows hai na but whatever it is all was great.

Here comes my view on the whole fic of yours.

Well done and really great work Arwa,👏 👏 👏 first thing I would say about your fic is it's always easy to start a FF but it's not easy to finish the FF.😛 😛 😛 We had a lot of good writers here who started lovely fics but never end up those fics. but u did that and made me feel that how much u love RN like us.

Ek Ajnabi, the journey has started being a short fic and it ended up same too 😊 😊 😊 but if I remember exactly u wrote it for RN FF competition na but changed that in to a sweet story we wanted to enjoy fully. 😍 😍 😍

Raj and Naina met first time like strangers in a hotel in to their Europe trip and spend some lovely time together 😉 😉😉. Who knew that the famous Casanova Rajveer Singh Shekhawat can ever love a girl like this? 😉 😉 😉 He just made a bet with Huda to make Naina drool over him and yeah it happened after all it's Rajveer's charm which can never be failed. 😳 😳 😳

Naina was the first in both of them who realized that she has started liking Rajveer 😉 😉 😉 but he was busy with his life than and he realized when Naina left him all disheartened and with a broken heart.🥺 🥺 🥺 I still remember two scenes mainly one was the beech scene and second was the hand cuffs scene and I loved both of them a lot. 😃 😃 😃

One more is there when Huda tried his best to create misunderstandings between Raj & Naina and he got successful in it with help of the girl 😡 😡 😡 ( I don't remember her name). 😛 😛 😛, he was just sick.😵 😵 😵 Thank god Raj realized his love for Naina and came back to her on time. 😳 😳 😳

Enjoyed that scene in the gym and the most funny one when Raj planed with Neelu to bring Naina in the park and he wanted to say sorry to her.😉 😉 😉 When he said"lagta hai tunky me paani khatam ho gaya hai" I still remember it and it was damn funny. 😆 😆 😆

And the confession when Raj was about to fall from ladders and Naina finally accepted him and his love.🤣🤣 🤣 The lovely journey started from that and their passionate romantic encounters made them super hot.☺️ ☺️ ☺️ Naina and Raj's family trip and their families approval for marriage, every thing was lovely & I liked that so much.👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj's all pranks, the ghost one and in the hospital when he had some fight with Huda that was cute and lovely.😍 😍 😍 Now to the wedding and honeymoon to four kids everything was perfect and I loved whole the story which made us love them even more.🤗 🤗🤗You know sometimes I feel that whenever I read RN fics I start to love them more than the previous time.😍 😍 😍

Awesome work Arwa, keep on rocking and writing such wonderful RN fics.🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

The end 😲😲........... was not expecting it too soon 😳😳 ......... but as they say all good things come to end ....so this FF also 😊 😊.......... will definately miss this mischeivious & fun loving Rajveer 😳😳 ....... which was complete opposite of Capt. Rajveer we knew 😳😳 ....... - aaaaaaww thanks very much and yeah all gud things must cum to an end and i guess it has been a long journey of two to three yrs now

coming to the last part ... ☺️ ☺️..... it was bful 👏👏 .......... so guess both RN had njoyed their honeymoon 😉 😉.....spclly that climbing pipe on honeymoon 🤣 must say naina got adventurous husband 😳😳😳 ... good to see them back where the love story started 😛😛😛 - yeh so much happened and it came all back to the beginning with better memories to keep

poor Raj got his leg fractured ..... but guess it taught him the lesson 😆😆😆 ......... - it sure did and big one too

finally alekh & neelu also got married & sameer & sameera 😃😃 ....... - everyone's story had completed

😲 😲........... 4 kids 😆😆😆............so Raj fulfilled his dream of 4 kids 😆😆😆 ... 3 girls which he had been dreaming since beginning ........still remember him sharing this when they went on the farmhouse 😉😉😉 ........ - hehehe yeh him and his dream. Wow gud to see someone remembered abt that. Yeh since then he wanted three girls and now he got them

overall FF had been wonderful journey 👏👏👏........ ofcourse credit goes to the writer's creative ability to make the story have a smooth flow 😃😃 ..... & make readers njoy it 😃😃😃 - thanks very much for have loved my work all throughout

since its last part cant say continue soon 😆😆😆........ but yes continue Lost soon 😛😛 ......... its been long capt rajveer is cosy in lovers paradise 😆😆😆.......... & not to 4get Romeo juliet 😉😉😉........guess u urself might have 4gotten that FF 😛😛 ..... - hehehehe yeh I know i know. I 'm working on it and soon shall be back with it




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Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

very long part phewwwwwwwwww.😆😆😆............you forget to pm me😭😭😭......... - hehehe yeh long part and sorry i forgot to pm . there are so many that i forget who ive done and who i haven't

raj naina romance was awsome their honeymoon part is beautiful and poor has to climb 12 floors to reach to his room poor raj - thanks very much for loving the part a lot. Hehe yeh well its gud to do some exercise for a change

and the epilogue was very wonderful with their four kids around them and completed their happy family....... - I'm glad really liked the picture

.now im in a hurry and have to run remaining comments i will post later.........till then bye and cya......