Saathi...(Dedicated to all KAAians...)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Dear KAAians,

Its been nearly 3 months since I joined the KAA forum, and its been an awesome ...to be a part of this IF... it often struck me quite a surprise, how in the name of a mere serial, many a like minded people, meet and form bonds of a lifetime... and establish relations through mere words... and thoughts... and feel the presence of another , through heartfelt emotions,expressed in words....

I have been blessed with a warm welcome into this forum and have received adulation far more than I deserve and its deeply humbling... this one is a mere attempt in expressing the beauty of this virtual world and the bonds people share in this world as well...

Yahin soch kar man mein aaye khayaalon ko shabdon mein bayaan karne ki koshish ki hai ... and this one is dedicated to KAA IF and all the KAAians...😊

-Sareeta

Saathi...

Saazishon ke bhanwar ...
Mein uljhe kirdaaron...
Ki baatein..
Lage mazedaar .....

Aur karne yahi ...
Chatpati baatein...
Nikal padte hain...
Dhoondhte hue saathi...
Karne apne dil ki baat...
Gumnaam galiyon mein...

Chehre ki pehchaan...
Na ho Jahaan...
Chehre ki hasi ...
Na dikhe ..
Par mehsoos ho ...
Man ki muskaan...
Aur khayaalon se..
Ho insaan ki pehchaan...

Khayaalon se bande...
Rehte hain...
Ek doosre se...
Jahaan...

Judte hai dil..
Jahaan..
Shabdon ke taar se...

Aankhon se nahin...
Lafzon se bayaan ...
Hote ehsaas dil ke ..
Jahaan....

Bante hai rishtey...
Ehsaason se...
Jinhe maante hai...
Jahaaan ... dil se...

Ehsaason se bande...
Dilon ke rishton..
Ko yunhi nibhaate hain..
Yahaan...

Saathi ko pehchaane
Jahaan...
Man ki aankhon se...

Khayaaal yahin..
Aaye hamein..
Jab bhi ham..
Guzre..
KAA IF ki galiyon se...

-Sareeta

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prab_rockinn thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow.... its wonderful..... 👏
you are toooooooooooooooooooooooooooo goooooooooood.......
thankyou so much......
aapne to apne shabdon ke taar se sach main dil jod liye hain...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 dii! that was awesome.........mindblowing di!!! each line beautifully stated the emotional bond that we share.....every thing u wrote is so true.....ehsaason ko iitnii khubsurat shabdon mai aur iitni khubsurty se bayan kiya hai apney.....lazawab....MASHALLAH....jinta mai ap ki likkhi kavitaye parhtihu utna hi chauk jaatii hu.....di aap yeh kaisey kartii hai????
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sareeta such great lines..

i'm feeling so emotional and with these lines you have clearly stated the bond that we share here on IF...

love this bit.."Judte hai dil..
Jahaan..
Shabdon ke taar se...

Aankhon se nahin...
Lafzon se bayaan ...
Hote ehsaas dil ke ..
Jahaan....

Bante hai rishtey...
Ehsaason se...
Jinhe maante hai...
Jahaaan ... dil se..."

sareeta i'm speechless and it touched my heart ....

yeah sacchi dil ko chulene wali baat kahi aapne...

marvellous and a grand bravo to you sareeta which you deserve sincerely... 👏

another one in my fav list of your writings... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great lines, Sareeta....and how true. Loved the third stanza, particularly.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

wow.... its wonderful..... 👏
you are toooooooooooooooooooooooooooo goooooooooood.......
thankyou so much......
aapne to apne shabdon ke taar se sach main dil jod liye hain...

Oh bless my soul, thank you soooooooooo much!!! Am so humbled!!! Really , thank you sooooooo much!!! 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sareeta u are a superb writer 👏👏👏

Ur each and every word touches a heart. Its so emotional and heart warming. Great job and hope to read many more from you 😊

Naina
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nazrinkhan

👏 dii! that was awesome.........mindblowing di!!! each line beautifully stated the emotional bond that we share.....every thing u wrote is so true.....ehsaason ko iitnii khubsurat shabdon mai aur iitni khubsurty se bayan kiya hai apney.....lazawab....MASHALLAH....jinta mai ap ki likkhi kavitaye parhtihu utna hi chauk jaatii hu.....di aap yeh kaisey kartii hai????

Kaise karti hoon, yeh nahin jaanti yaar, par bas khaayaal aate hai aise zehen mein bas, aur likh deti hoon....its not deliberate... its only when I get the thought that I write, agar soch kar likhne baitu , tho likh nahin paati hoon.... bas dil se aati hain saari thoughts... isse zyaada kuch hai nahin.......

Tujhe ye post pasand aaya, thank you sooooooo much!!! I felt them so deeply , my exp on IF, because of all of you has been so wonderful... socha aise shabdon mein bayaan kar doon!😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thank you soooooooooooooooo much Rimli! So glad you liked it soooooooo much!!! 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: 3 angels

sareeta such great lines..

i'm feeling so emotional and with these lines you have clearly stated the bond that we share here on IF...

love this bit.."Judte hai dil..
Jahaan..
Shabdon ke taar se...

Aankhon se nahin...
Lafzon se bayaan ...
Hote ehsaas dil ke ..
Jahaan....

Bante hai rishtey...
Ehsaason se...
Jinhe maante hai...
Jahaaan ... dil se..."

sareeta i'm speechless and it touched my heart ....

yeah sacchi dil ko chulene wali baat kahi aapne...

marvellous and a grand bravo to you sareeta which you deserve sincerely... 👏

another one in my fav list of your writings... 😊

Khyaatee, now you leave me speechless , with your words!!! Dil se , nikli thi , dil ki baatein bas, aur agar aap ke dil ko choo gayi hai, tho isse zyaada, tareef kya ho sakti hai...

Aapko haamare khayaaalon ki itni kadar hai, bas yahin kaafi hai..!!😊

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