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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shreya_arjuhi

awesome start really loved it.

manveer engaged but she loves someone else.
its looking interesting.
sorry for the late comment and thanks for the PM :)



THANK YOU SO MUCH.
YEAH SHE LOVE ROHAN
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sukklover




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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vrushanharshi

amazing prologue n chapter

thanx for the pm
and continue soon


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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER TWO NAME-PAIN IN LOVE...


new day one PRINCE CHARM sleeping peace full sudden he wake up n shout "NOOO" sudden he open his eyes he saw a very danger wild dream he said "nah princess u r mine this dream is not truth mai is dream ko sahi sabit hone hi nai doga rohan tumhe mujhse door kar hi nai sakta u r mine forever it's that sit"

he went to washroom and start tap of water is so cold so much cold he still think about manyata her face around his mind and ayes he didn't think anything he think only manyata her eyes her smile her body her happines her tears sadnes playfull...etc.!!

he remember spend time wid his love his soulmate lover his eyes are red his face pale of red he burning on anger he remember all moments wat he spent wid manyata in last night he spoke to himself in really really loud voice...!!

uday-it's ur big mistake miss manyata kumari it's ur big mistake now you wait n watch n waiting 4 my tiger nature b4 u see good looking smiley loving caring nature uday but now you see my tiger nature my upcoming mr.s tigress...ab tum tadpo gi mere pyar ke liya...he threw his hand on the mirror bleeding start on his hand...he forgot all the blood n give shower wen shower while he went the room he saw manyata clean his room (cuz tonight he come wid anger he threw all things n drunk so much whiskey bear)

manyata-umm...so howz you??uday !! she try to apologize wid him

uday-dont be act n not think i m ur majnu go away he said in full anger he face is red pale he turn his face n dry his hair wid towel but still his hand start painning n bleeding


manyata-uday plss dont hurt urself n no give more pain she said to made him happy cuz she know she do big mistake she spoke once more time uday plss talk to me listen to me i m sorry u remember b4 we are college best firends can we firends once again please..<333

uday-noo manyata no u always hide our meet's on ur majnu n u try to forgot me cuz ur majnu dont like me u finish our firendship on college last day cuz of ur majnu remember yuvrani manyata kumari..he shout said all loudly he had so much pain he love only one girl in her life he love her in childhood and now how can he forget her??HE CAN'T FORGET HER..HE CAN'T REMOVE HER PICTURE ON HIS HEART

FLASHBACK

college last day all firends together except uday but all gathering sat on one table talking start talking eachother all firends try to tease manyata n rohan because both plainning to enagaged soon uday love manyata he dont listen these celeberation n talking about his love his princess he didn't saw and listen his princess love another guys so that's why he siting on club drink whiskey so much...

all firends plainning to go club in same club where uday drunk so much n hurt hinself he is red fully wen manyata rohan and all gang reached sudden one firends said
"guys see he is uday"??
"yeah he is uday" second firend said
manyata-he said he is busy so is kaam mai busy tha mr. abhi batati ho
she try to go towards him and soon he step towards him but sudden someone held her arms tightly n pinned her another way side of wall she saw he is none of den "Rohan"
manyata ask him
"wat is this why u held me so tightly why u pinned me Rohan??"he dont reply..she confused why he reacting like this his noes rubbed her check manyata didn't like this cause she didn't allowed him so much closenes in after married and she try to push him lightly but she stuck he held her hands tightly n already pinned her hands...manyata feeling so uncomfortable than she thought she speak n try to free herself it's better and now finally she spoke...
Rohan pls leave my hands i need to go she try to move but he still held her same position like b4 I w
ant to spend time with you and you also come with me not uday than why you try to go towards him??he dont like manyata go towards him talk 2 him and all what's wrong with you Rohan u have NO sense what you saying i know what you thinking and what is your intension but i told you many time's he is only my firend

i know manyata but you know i dont like him i dont like you move close to him i love you so much i can't live widout you please manyata 4 me you love me den plss tum use dur raho mere liya please he said and make a puppy face manyata understand him she quickly hug him so much tightly and manyata spoke still in hug i love you too ager tum aisa chate ho tu theek han aisa hi sahi but mai tumhe ek baat phir kahri and i told earlier he is my childhood best firend ise ziyada kuch nai..but ager tum chate ho mai use na millo tu theek han.she feel cry cuz she losse her bff

rohan and manyata still hugged eachother tightly sudden both heared clap voice both fastly seprate and turn manyata have a great shock to saw he is UDAY and rohan happy and smirk..manyata tears rolling to her checks.

uday meri baat suno please she try to tell her all situation bas u shut up dam it she gave towards step wid him dont try to close me and he walk away

FLASHBACK END'S

but uday tumne us din bhi meri baat nai suni thi or aj bhi tum yahi kare ho mujhe ek bar baat karo please uday dekhu tumhare hath se kitna khoon beh raha han she crying hardly uday saw her tears he just melt but he take long breath and spoke manyata chali jao please chali jao yaha se he boiling in anger but uday ur hand

uday held her arms tightly open the door manyata spoke many times uday kya karu ho..again she spoke uday chodo kya karu ho kyu kare ho he open the door throgh his left hand pull her to out room n slammed the door on her face she crying and go away side day also sat on the foor and start crying hardly he whispered to himself I LOVE YOU PRINCESS i love you i can't give you more pain i wnat you i need you please princess..!!!


precap-uday forcing himself to manyata...!!

we reached chapter one hope you all like it and give amazing reponce we both glad you like chapter one n prologue and give an awsome reponces
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Q1-kya uday manyata ke sath zabardasti karega?

Q2-kya manyata uday ko mana payagi??

Q3-kya uday manyata again firends banega?

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Edited by Ayesha.behroz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Edited by Ayesha.behroz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome

Amazing

MAnveer were colg friends

reveal soon abt rohan's exit

Update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsssmmm chapter ayesha and humaira
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome dear...
dunt like dis Rohan ...
abhi k liye i dunt feel k uday will force upon manyata ...he can't see her in pain...

hope manyata will b able to persuade him n den dey may bcum friends again...
but i dunt feel its happening in near future...
Edited by Jane523 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aj tou main Jaldi Unres kar rahi hoon 😆
Behna 🤗
Awesome Update 👍🏼
Poor Uday and also Bechari Manayta
Haye kitni complicated Story hain 😆
But I didn't understand Rohans character 😕
Develop his character also 😳
Love u behna 🤗
Edited by _Maggie_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏 👏 awesome 👏 👏
That was great
I hate manyata how could she broke her frndship for her
Lover 🤢 😡
Precap was scary 😕
Thx for pm
Plzzz update soon

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