I cant keep a secret (swaron os) *replies*

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

that was fabulous and great well pen written... do continue soon and pm me...

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Rohan :)

@RoHaNmAlHoTrA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Swaron.maniac
Hy rohan
Congrts for the first OS glad its about swaron
Love the title very attracting
I can understand ur feeling coz it wznt long ago wen i wrote ma first os and was very scared of ppl reaction but i guess swaron fans r very kind here.
And ur OS is much much much better thn.ma first one dude so dnt worry
Am gna wait for the update plz do pm 👍🏼

it had to be swaron...

thnx for the title...

aisa kuch nahi hai...u r a grt writer too...

yaa i wud do dat...

Originally posted by: smartypantstanu
Hey Rohan,
Kya baat hai itni jaldi humari baat maan li...
Very good very good!
Coming to the OS it was really good... I'm impressed
Loved the cute moments of Swaron 😳
Aur yeh kya pehle hi attempt main cliff-hanger?! 😆
Well eagerly waiting to read the next part..
Please update soon 😃

P.S Thanks for the PM 😊

thnx...i glad u liked it...

abb actually aage sujh nahi raha tha... :P

i wud do dat...

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron
Nice start
Cont. soon

thnx...i wud...

Originally posted by: Swaronvrushan
Hey rohan...nice Starr...,I love the Sharon self talk and how swayam forgets all his anger listening to sharon...hope the surprise surprise us too

thnx
i hope so too...

Originally posted by: zk456789
Nice work do continue soon

thnx

Originally posted by: freya123
nice one
conti soon

thnx..i wud

Originally posted by: Sanskruti_tanha
supa cute , first try then gr8 job buddy , i noe how it feels for first tym , i m relly waiting for next part do update soon n thanks for the pm .😃

thnxx...

i wasnt nervous..i knew i wud suck..!!! :D

i wud conti soon...

welcum..

Originally posted by: swaron9113
Hey 1st congratulation rohan on becomeing writer.
Btw os is amaging.
Whole os was written beautyfully.
I loved it.
Plz plz plz write 2nd part of ths os too.
Nd yeah do write more nd more u hv brillian abailty of writing.

i m no writer..

thnx...

i wud update soon...

thnx again..

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien
that was fabulous and great well pen written... do continue soon and pm me...

i wud..

thnx

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen
Hey rohan
as you said, it is your first OS , this is also my first swaron story i am reading and the way described sharon's feelings , is awesome!
So there is a surprise he is planning for her! Lets see for how long he can keep the surprise a secret😉
Do continue soon ! And don't forget to PM the next part as well😃
thanks for the PM!
Nice it is😳

i happie dta coz of me u read on swaron...wese i m nowhere here...u must read the one's...other people write...like the person who commented after u...she is THE fab writer...

thnx a lot...!!!

i wud...

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha
unres😊

so glad to see u writing

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Hey Rohan..

Its really great to see u writing...writing is is not just meant for entertaining others...its a medium to express those hidden emotions ...when u feel very happy...emotional...or sad...try to write...u will feel much better ...its just like sharing ur feelings wid a frnd 😊

Enough of my lecture...a big congratulation on ur 1st Oneshot on SwaRon..lovely start...

They are cute...romantic...madly in love...Sharon missing Swayam 's majnu side..Swayam listening to her amd trying to mend his mistake...its beautifully written...

Cant wait to see Swayam's surprise 😊...it will be amazing 😊

Continue soon ...

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Deepika

thnx..

i wud..

Originally posted by: pooja123456
very very cute!
loved it!
cant wait for his surprise!
update soon!

thnx...

even i cant wait...:P

i wud update vry soon...

THANK YOU EVERYONE...HERE'S THE NEXT CHAP...

guyzz i m really very sorry...i wrote the next chap but i sub consciously pressed the refresh button...pls wait till tomorrow i would definitely post it ASAP...i m sorry...

Edited by rohan_smile - 12 years ago

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Rohan :)

@RoHaNmAlHoTrA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

CHAPTER 2

sharon's deep sleep was disturbed because of the damn alarm clock...she disgustedly got up...switched it off and went again to lay back in swayam's arms...but wait!!! where is he??? he was supposed to be next to her but he wasnt she quickly scanned the whole room but he was nowhere...she got from the bed and went to the hall to see if he is there or not...but he wasn't now she began to worry..it was early morning and when could he go without even informing her...

"whoa!!"

she was about to fall on the ground because of the shout but quick enough the culprit caught her in his arms...

"hahahaha look at your face...aisa lag raha hai subh subh kisi bhoot ko dekh liya ho...hahahaha" said swaym still holding onto her...and laughing out loud...

sharon was relief ed to see swayam and irritated too to see him laughing but she very well knew how to stop him from it...

" so correct naa...baby subh subh tum ksi bhoot se kaam lagte ho..." and she broke into a laughter...while messing his already messed up hair...only to make him even more cute with the pout he had jst plastered on his face...

"ha-ha-ha very funny..." a sarcastic swaym replied "main bhoot lagta hoon ki nahi woh toh pata nahi but tum hamesha bohot khubsurat lagti ho...specially in the mornings..." he bent a little and sweetly kissed her lips...to which she responded..(that goes widout saying :P) breaking the kiss..."good morning shona..." he said in full on romantic mood...

"gud mornig romeo..." thats all she could manage at that moment...even after 6 months of thier marriage she wud blush as if she jst confessed...by now she was straightening his hairs which she just messed..she would love to do that...

swaym backed off a little moved a hand on HIS hairs...of course she had full right but his hairs..."ammhmm meri zulfoon se baad main kehlna now get ready..."

"kyun?? kahin jaana hai??" inquired sharon...

"haan wo aaj hum..." trailed back swaym as he was about to spoil the whole plan...turned his back toward her

"shit!!! mere andar koi baat tikti kyun nahi hai..." he said to himself

"hummm...?? " sharon stressing the word "pls continue"usse 50-50 % shak ho raha tha..she came in front of him

"woh...hamain... hamain" stammering swaym unable to think anything ...

"hamain kya ha romeo?? " shak 60-40%

"hamaien...hamain...mere i mean hamare office jaana hai as tum chairperson ho its ur responsibility ki tum office ko vist karo project ki report rakho and check karon everything is fine or not main acche kaam kar arha hun ki nahi baki employees acche se kaam kar rahe hai naa accounts main koi problem toh nahi hai...so u shud come" spitted swayam in a sibgle breath turning 360 degree again...

"what ??" chuckled sharon now 100% knowing...again coming to him

"wth swaym tu dhange se jhoot tak nahi bol sakta...usse sab pata hal gaya...so so so wonderfuuly lame excuse...baccha bhi samajh jaata...

God i cant keep a secret..." swayam cursing himself for his stupid behavior...

"You got it right" said swaym in a low tone..he was sad he really wanted to surprise her...looking down...

"of course i did..." lifting his face up by holding it in her hands..." but i loved the way u lied" she chuckled again...and he joined her...and he scratched his head " so now dont get sad...wese where we going??"

"nope...woh toh definitely nahi bataunga...so go...freshen up and come fast..." he said...

"bataona...pls pls pls" sharon making a puppy dog face...

"no no no...no making cute face go now.." swayam shaking his head and slightly making her heaad towards thier bedroom...

"okay!!! stubborn" said sharon..

"woh toh main hun...but sharon pls thoda jaldi haan..bus shamm ke pehle taiyaar ho jaana..."teasing her...

"haww!!!!" approaching him with a open mouth and beating him playfully...

"accha achha soory shona...now go..."

"okay...romeo"

TO BE CONTINUED...

Rohan :)

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934800

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Wow super amazing loved it y is too short i.mean was enjoying it so.much.and it stopd...eagrly waiting for.the next update...plz make it quick

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sanskruti marathe

@Sanskruti_tanha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

utter cute , shona n romeo ☺️ loved this one , waiting for the next one , plzz jaldi update kario , i dont like to wait , but i noe u were waiting for my comment rite !! 🤣

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Amit

@Swaronvrushan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Nice update rohan...poor majnu can't keep anything secret from his laila...loved sweet lovely doubly mrng talks...

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Heena

@kamlesh32

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Really nice update! It was fun to read! Please update soon...

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

they are having a conversation in their sweet nick name...
the chapter was nice... do continue soon and pm me...

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anushka1129

@anushka1129

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

read both parts ..n it was so cute n amazing os.
sharon missing her manju n swayam feeling bad :(..
but but suprise is there waiting for sharon😃..
aww swayam can't keep the secret nor can lie properly hehe😳..
update soon..
really wanna know more :)