MG#2 KHAMOSHI-lakin kb tk/th#3 added - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago
gr8 part..
cont,soon

thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago







khamoshi abb tod do geet...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...





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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update👏
btw belated HFD to u too😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing upd
keep it up
upd asap
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

beautiful dear

my all time fav song


thanks dear 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 18

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His head rest on her forehead, his hand circled around her waist & her one hand clutched his shirt tightly and another rest on his shoulder.

Maan : geet

Ab bhi tum mna karongi

.

.

Geet bhut bhag liye ab

.

Mein ab tumhe khud se durr nhi jaane dunga

.

Geet " I lo

Geet : maan

She know, what he want to say, she stop him in mid.

She came out from his grip.

Geet : Asad mera intzaar kr rha honga

He held her wrist and said "geet mere intzaar ka kya "

She removed his hand and run from here.

.

.

Maan : I love you geet

.

Aaj mujhe yakin ho gya hai

Tum bhi sirf mujhse pyaar krti ho

Ab tumhe jha bagna hai bhag lo

Khehna to tumhe mujhse padenga

*************

She sits on floor and cried.

(NOTE: - friends in these past flashback scenes are added with present)

**********

Maan : geet

Ab bhi tum mna karongi

Geet bhut bhag liye ab

Mein ab tumhe khud se durr nhi jaane dunga

Geet " I lo

********

Maan and geet both are standing alone outside of college.

Maan : mein tumhe drop kr deta hu

Geet : hmm

Maan : bike thodi durr khdi hai

Tum mere sath chalongi ya yhi

Geet : mein bhi sath chalti hu

Maan : hmm

.

Maan (think) :- pta nhi geet kya soch rhi hongi

Geet (think) : wo lines play mein thi bhi nhi

Fir maan ne

Kya ye bhi whi mahsoos krte hai

Maan (think) :- she also hugged me back.

Aaj kh hi deta hu

Both are walking on road, lost into own thoughts.

Few drops fall on her, she felt so much happiness.

Geet : maan Sawaan ki phli barish

He held her wrist and tries to run, but she stops him.

Maan : geet college wapas chalte hai

Yha bheeg jaayenge

Geet : nhi maan

Mujhe bighna hai

**********

He stands near window and see outside view.

Maan : aaj firse tumse whi baat khehni chahi

Phle kismat ne nhi khne di

Aur tumhe mujhse itni door le gyi

Aur aaj jb kismat ne mauka diya hai

Toh tum sunana nhi chahti

**********

She collects water in both palms and throws on him.

Maan : geet

She run, he also runs behind her. Finally he caught her.

He held her wrist and pull near to her, she fall on his chest.

Maan : ab kaha bhagogi

One voice came from behind, someone take her name.

She came out from my grip.

Geet : abbu

************

I shocked seeing abbu in front of me.

Geet : abbu

.

Abbu : geet car me baitho

#

I felt, so scared with abbu reaction, I felt I lost him forever.

My fear came true.

#

impoojaverma thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
OMG geet's father saw maan n geet together
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Posted: 11 years ago

just read part 17 and 18
loved them both
brilliant piece of work
the song selection was superb
and the kiss sealed the part
wow
amazing
geet and maan were caught by her abbu
wonder whats in store next
waiting for more
hungry
famished
please update soon
Edited by doublecross - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
she did loose him
well dammit why did this happen
and she still cant tell him
seems she never will be able to will she
but then what can she do
she cant loose her dad for her love can she
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Posted: 11 years ago
read both updates.
dance sequance was superb and past was sad.her father saw them .what will happen with Geet now
superb updates Priaynka

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