MERI AASHIQUI chapter 11 part a on pg 86 - Page 3

Originally posted by: azrazaid

wow...another ff eagerly waiting thanx for pm

Chapter 1

PADNE SE PEHLE PLZ PLZ PZL JAAKE CHARACTER SKETCH PADIYE!!! WARNA AAPKE LIYE MUSHKIL HOJAYEGA!!

THE KUNDRA'S AND THE KAPOOR R FAMILY FRIENDS. ITNA JIGARS HAI KI ISKE GHAR THO DEKHIYE!!

Ya!!!! They both r neighbours too!!

As soon as madhu stepped out of that Mercedes 220 a chill runned through her spine .

Her house. Ahhu ahhhu!! Her hone wali house is waiting for her.

" KK VILLA" "KUNDRA AND KAPOOR MANSION"

Madhu is lost in her thoughts wth that stress lines on her forhead thinking whether to go inside or not!!

She came frm her thoughts by a sweet voice.

Priya: madhu!! Ruk kyun gayi beta??

Madhu: mami mujhe darr lag raha hai!!

Priya smiled and luked at radha who is also smiling .

Radha: aisa kuch nahi hai beta!! Kuch nahi hoga!!

Madhu: nahi aunty!! Mein andar!!

Priya : kuch nahi hoga!!

Madhu luked at priya who kept her hands around her shoulder and gave an assuring smile.

Madhu at once lost all her tention and stress.

Priya: hum hai yaha!! Tumhe koi kuch nahi kahenge!!!

Radha: priya tum jaoo!! Mein bas mera shaitaan bacche ko lati hun'

Priya and madhu strted walking and aftr few mins madhu found herself near the entrance

Priya: monaa!! Monaa!! Aaoo!! Madhu aagayi!!

Mona came out frm the kitchen wth thaali in her hand wth a very excited face . she came near the entrance and stopped their as soon as she saw madhu and tears formed In her eyes .

Madhu luked at her and gave a lovely and cute smile'.

Mona stood their perplexed while ram , jatin , anika and nani came'.

Madhu is getting shocked by seeing one by one cuming and being shocked lukin at her'..

Madhu luked at priya who is also luking at her wth loving and caring smile'.

Madhu: mami??? Aise kya dekh rahe ho??

Priya nodded and luked at mona'

Mona came frnt and hugged madhu'.

Madhu felt very gud!! And she hugged her back!!

They broke their hug

Mona: bilkul paddu jaisi!!!

Madhu is overwhleamed to hear this frm her badi mami!!

Priya: mona!! Pehle madhu ko andar toh bulaao!!

Mona: ohh sorry!!!

Mona did that grih pravesh thing and madhu entered.

Madhu came near her nani and took her blessings wen dadi caught her by her sholders and hugged her'.

Nani : bata bhi nahi sakthi ki kitni kush hun mein tumhe dekh ke!! Tum bilkul meri beti jaisi ho!!!

Madhu: meine bhi kabhi nahi socha ki mein aapse milungii!! Aur'

Nani: shhh!! Aur baatein nahi!! Jaake aaraam karo!!

Madhu nodded and luked at ram and jatin who r luking her wth love and care but t suddenly changed intoa blank and stern face.

Priya came and said: madhu!! Chalo !! kamre mein chalthe hai!!!

Madhu nodded and went wth priya and mona .

Its 8:30 pm then

Madhu's room:

"mamma!! I just loved ur home!! Infact yeh ghar nahi!! Ek mandir hai!!! Mein bata nahi sakthi ki mein kitna khush hoon ab!! Wo' urghh!! Bhook lag rahi hai!! Khaake aati hun!! Par usse pehle nahaake jaati hun!! "

She's talking wth her mamma's photo!!

Cute na!!

Meanwhile bulbul and anika came to madhu's room to take her for the most awaited dinner'.

They came inside as the door is unlocked'.

Anika: kaha gayi??

Bulbul: mujhe thodi na pata hoga!! Idiot!!

Anika: bull bull!!!

Bulbul: its bulbul!! Not bull bull!!

Anika: mujhe idiot kyun kaha??

Bulbul: coz ur tat!!

Anika: isiliye rishabh tumhe hamesha bull kehtha hai!!

Bulbul: uss stupid ko beech mein mat laana!!

Anika: kyun??

Bulbul: coz wo tumhe bhi tease karta hai!!

Anika: ohh!! Yaa! (she thought)

Madhu came out in a bath robe singing but she didn't expect sumone 2 be in her room wen she's in bathing'.

Madhu: aaa!!!

Bulbul and anika: aaa!!!

Madhu: aap dono kaun???

Bulbul: wo!! Hii!! I'm bulbul kapoor!!

Anika: anika here!!

Madhu undrstud so she smiled nervously and said: madhu!!

Anika: tumhe kaun nahi jaantha!???

Bulbul: u knw her anika??

Anika luked at bulbul and said: madhu meri fav singer hai!!

Bulbul: ohh!! Madhubala malik??

Madhu: yaa!!

Bulbul: dinner ready hai!! Chalo !!! (she caught madhu's hand and strted dragging har)

Madhu: bulbul I'm in robe!!!

Reality hitted her.

Bulbul: sorry!!!

Anika: urghh!! Hum baahar wait karte hai tum aajaao!! Saath mein chalthe hai!!

Madhu; okay!!!

Near Dining Table:

Madhu: badi mami!! Plz!! Aur nahi khaana hai mujhe!!

Mona: plz madhu!! Priya se bet lagayi meine ki tumhe mere haathon se bani hui kheer acchi lagegi!!! Aur tum yeh poora ka poora cmplt karoge!! My princess! Plz!!

Madhu: ohh noo!!!

Priya: nahi!! Madhu ko mere hathon se bani hui parathe pasand aayi hai isiliye wo kheer nahi khaana chahthi!!! Hai na madhu!!

Madhu; aisa kuch nahi hai!! I really loved both the dishes!! Ek pal ke liye maa ki yaad aagayi!!

Priya and mona luked at madhu wth love and care while bulbul and anika luked at eachothr and then at madhu!!

Bulbul: madhu!! Abtak kitne gaane gaayi hai??

Madhu: no idea!!

Anika: 56 songs!!

Madhu and bulbul luked at anika!!

Anika; I said na!!! I'm ur fan!!

Madhu: dinner ke time par hum aurthon ke alawa koi dhikaaayi nahi de raha hai??

Bulbul: abhi shuru hua hi kaha???

Anika: all r on their way!!

Bulbul: mamma!!! Mein kal cllg nahi jaaungi!!

Mona: kyun??

Anika: hum madhu ke saath kal concert jaa rahe hai!!

Priya: madhu!! Kal tumhari concert hai??

Madhu nodded!!

Priya: toh kal breakfast mein hum dono upma bana denge!!

Madhu: aapko kaise pata ki mujhe upma pasand hai??

Mona: paddu ko bhi upma pasand hai!! Aur tum bilkul uski jaise ho toh we guessed it!!

"AAA"

All r bewildered wth that screme and luked towards the direction wich is entrance door!!

Poorvi near the door!!!

Madhu got up and luked at her!!

Poorvi: madhubala malik?? Omg!! I'm ur huge fan !! (she said while cuming towards her)

Madhu; ohh!! Thnk u soo much!!'

Poorvi; I can't belive this!! Plz pinch me!!

Bulbul came and pinched her arm hardly!!

Poorvi: ouch!!

Bulbul: dekha yeh sapna nahi hai!!

Poorvi: bulbul!!!!

And she strted running behind bulbul''

Laughther filled in kapoor mansion. Bulbul , poorvi and anika r running behind eachthr wen they luked at madhu who is smiling luking at them'..

Bulbul: madhu!!! Aur haso na!! smile nahi!! Laugh!!

Anika: haan haan plz!!

Madhu just smiled at them'..

Poorvi; yeh aise nahi manne wali!! Lets strt our game!

All the three strted cuming towards her directiona but madhu stud ther as she' didn't get wat r they upto!!

Once they caught madhu they strted tickiling her and madhu here is cntuinously lauhing!!

She strted running and thud!!

She's abt 2 fall wen she was held by strong arms.

She closed her eyes and opned aftr hearig his voice'.

Rishabh: madhu??? (bewildered)

Madhu luked at him blankly as she saw him aftr 5 long yrs!!

She is in front of her ex boyfriend. Her dreme boy. Her destroyor. He creater. Her admirer. Her prince. Her devil.

Madhu : rishabh!! (she said while being in the same position) (rab ne bana d Jodi pose)

There he is. Superstar rk. The man who destroyed her life by playing wth her emotions. The man for whom she fell for. The man for whom she would do anything. The man who can take her breath away by his simple touch and smirk. The man who acted as he loved her. The man whom she was ready to die''

Madhu got out of his strong hold .'

Tears r brimming in her eyes'.

She is just luking at him wth many questions like a statue'..

The expression of love had changed into anger . frm anger to disgust and then she just ran away to her room and here rk is not leaving his gaze on her retreating figure until she closed the door of her room.

Madhu's room:

Madhu sat near the door.

Her room is in a critical state!!

Everything is broken!!

Sum glass pices were on the floor and evrythng is out of its place!!

Madhu is holding her mom's hoto near her heart

"kyun maa!!

Kya mein kabhi kush nahi reh sakthii??

Kyun har baar mere saath hi aisa hota hai???

Meine kya gunaah ki hai??

Kyun maa?? Aaj mujhe aapke jaane ke baad pehli baar aisa laga ki ab aajse mein unko bhul jaaungi aur meri zindagi ko ek alag tareeke se jeeungi'

Itne mein yeh kya hogaya??

Kya bhaghwan ko meri khushi se koi prob hai??"

And she again sted crying!!

Or lemme say sobbing like a baby who is uncntrlable!!

Suddenly all the moments flashed in frnt of her

1. 1. Their meeting

2. 2. Them being friends

3. 3. Date

4. 4. Dance

5. 5. Proposing

6. 6. Their first kiss

7. 7. Bunking classes

8. 8. Hangouts

9. 9. Meeting spots

10. And that day!! THE NITE THEY BOTH BECAME ONE!!! THE NITE THEY MADE LOVE!! THAT NITE WER SHE GAVE HERSELF TO HIM COMPLETELY!!!''

Madhu: plz go away rishabh!!! G away!! Plz!! (she wisphered)

precap: rishabala kissing eachothr??

WAAH!! badhia likhtey ho akhil⭐️

grt work & a very interesting story line👏

liked ur updates in truly hindi style😳

coming to the story...i m beginning to hate Rk😡 for doing this to madhu

i know he will repent & hope he has a solid explanation 😕

warna i hate him...😆

loved the the relatives & there warm welcome specially the gals😃

hmm..the precap--woa lets see is KISS ki kya MISStery hai 😛

pls continue soon...pm the upd..plzzz

vibs😊

Wow nice started
amazing update

It was awesome...
Just luvd it..
By d way when r u gonna update ashiqui???
M dying to read dat too!

nice update... im finding difficulty with d characters... n d precap, ahaan... cont soon... grt going... oops... sorry i dint saw character sketch... n after going through character sketc i read again... thank u for pm...

Amazing part
emotional bhi hai!! Sob sob
a different story!
Want to knw what had happend before!!!
Can't wait 4 next update...
Akku jaldi update karna plzz

Aaa! What is dat in precap? I cnt believe Rk hs played wid her. There mst b sm reason 4 breakup!! Updt soon.