MERI AASHIQUI chapter 11 part a on pg 86 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: rinkrk

nice update... im finding difficulty with d characters... n d precap, ahaan... cont soon... grt going... oops... sorry i dint saw character sketch... n after going through character sketc i read again... thank u for pm...

thnk u soo much!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
thnk u!!
will updt soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
thnk u!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Miss.Perfectiie

Amazing part
emotional bhi hai!! Sob sob
a different story!
Want to knw what had happend before!!!
Can't wait 4 next update...
Akku jaldi update karna plzz

thnk u adaa!!
hmm!! emotional part thi!!
past pata laagane ke liye wait karna padega!!
aaj updt doonga!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: titli4love

Aaa! What is dat in precap? I cnt believe Rk hs played wid her. There mst b sm reason 4 breakup!! Updt soon.

precap?? woh toh mujhe khud pata nahi!!
belive karna padega!!
reason 4 breakup?? wait for it!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Rapiya1030

kya? rk ditched madhu?? hw cum?

hw can he evn did that?
poor madhu
hey i loved her profession

hey wait wait
did u just said that
AAA
they already made love?
madhu is not V?
awesum
plz plz plz updt soon

yup!! he ditched her!!
hw can matlab wait karo!! pata chal jaayega!!
ya!! nw shout!
thnk u soo much aaru!!
i'll updt soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

awesome story 😊 please update the next part soon & Pm it to me 😃

thnk u!!!
i'll updt and pm will be infront of u soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: revti21

really nice...rishbala kissin in past or present?

thnk u!!
its present!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: aDarkAngel

It's awesome😛...so Madhu is a singer and now has been welcomed by her maternal family after 25 years..😊

OMG !! Is RK related Madhu ?? Yup they were in relation !!! Argh!! 😡 Rishabh is a maniac..how can he do such a thing..and i believe that he doesn't even know about her parents death!! Pls continue soon so that we will know what actually happened hehe

yaa!!
she's a singer!!
tat's a lovely comment!!
thnk u soo much!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 2

Its 3:30 then :

Madhu woke up and saw tat her room is in very critiacal state and she is in a very awkward position. And the floor is totally covered wth glass pieces..

Madhu: aah!! (she cried in pain)

Her hand . its bleeding!! Blood is cntunously oozing frm her hand.

She got up and went to washroom!!

She came in a plain white kurti and pink Patiala pant….

She's lukingg cute !!!!

She cleaned the room. The room which was totally messed by her is nw luking neat and tidy .

Madhu: I need sum fresh air!! I badly need it!!!!!

Tears r cntunously flowin frm her eyes!!

She came outside her room and saw tat evrythi g is dark!!

Madhu: ab main kaise jaaungi??

Somehow she went down without disturbing anyone!! She quietly closed the door behind her.

She's in the lawn nw!!

She closed her eyes as her tears r not ready to stop!!!

Again everything came in front of her!!

"mein sabse zyaada aur hamesha!! Tumse hi pyaar karunga!! "

"dil hai kahaan?? Who toh tune le liya zaalim"

"humara kal kaisa bhi ho!!! Hum milke use khoobsurat banayenge"

Madhu: kyun kiya rishabh!! Kyun kiya tumne aisa!!

And there!! Tat day came infront of her!! Wer he completely breaked her heart!!

"pyaar toh usne ki humse!! Humne toh bas dillagi ki!!"

Madhu cudn't cntrl anymore so she thought to go into her room itself!! She turned and she had her second shock of the day!!

Madhu: rishabh??

Here he is luking at her wth a smirk on his face!!!

Rishabh: madhubala!! Ahhaan!!

Madhu fumed in anger and strted moving past him wen he caught her by her waist and she is completeing caught between his hard chest and his playful fingers which r playing on her back!!

Rishabh: yaha kya kar rahi ho madhu??? (luking intensly into her eys)

Madhu: none of ur business MR. KUNDRA!! Ab hatiye!! Aur mujhe chodiye!!!

He pulled her evn more closer to him!!

Madhu: this is note sum joke rk!! Plz leave me!!

Rishabh: ahaan!! Itni bhi jaldi kya hai!!

Madhu is struling to come out of his grip!!

Madhu: ouch!!

Rishabh: madhu?? (wth concern)

He left her and took her hand in his!!

Rishabh: yeh kaise hua??

Madhu: mujhe chodo!! (she shrugged)

Rishabh: chup!! (he shouted on top of his lungs)

Madhu is luking at him wth fear. This is not the first time he shouted on her . he wud shouts on her that she doesn't takes care of herself!! But that time he was her boyfriend!! But nw?? who is he to her??

Madhu: who the bloddy hell do u think of urself??

Rishabh: RISHABH KUNDRA!!

Madhu: bekaar ki baatein mat karo aur chod mujhe!!

He left her and strted reducing the distance between them…

Madhu: rishabh dur raho!!

NO USE!!

Madhu: rishabh plz!! Tum kuch nahi karne wale !! u got that??

Madhu turned her head towards the left and unexpectedly he lifted her in his arms and strted moving towards his mansion rather than madhu' s while she Is constantly trying to get free frm his grip but being failed evrytime…

Madhu: rishabh chodo!! Plz!!

Rishabh: take a chill jaan!

Madhu: rishabh chodo!!

But he didn't listen to her and went inside his bunglaw!!

Here an old man is standing bewildered near the entrance gate completely shocked in seeing rishh wth a girl and in this time and that too in his own house!

Old man: yeh ladki kaun hai aur iss samay mein yaha kya kar rahi hai?? Aur rishabh?? Use utaake?? Omg!! Iss umar mein mujhe aur kya kya dekhna padega?? Yeh rishabh bhi!! Kya kar raha hi uss ladki ke saath!! Jald se jald pata lagana hoga mujhe!! Par jaake sota hun!!

Saying this he went.

Madhu: yeh kya kar rahe ho mujhe!! Chodo!! (haterd bhari tone)

Rishabh: madhu chuppp!! Iss duniya mein sab hamare jaise shitaan hi nahi kuch log bhi hote hai!! Aur ab unn logo ka sone ka time hai!! So plz!! Chup raho!!

Rishabh's room:

Madhu: mujhe yaha kyun le aaya??

Rishabh: mere paas kapoor mansion ke ghar ke chaabi nahi hai!! So yaha le aaya!!

Madhu: kyun?? Kya karne wale ho?? (she's a bit scared)

Rishabh: kyun?? Ab kya karu? Jo karna tha wo tho bohoth pehle ho chukka tha!! Ab kya hai chupane ke liye jaan!! Aur wo bhi mere paas?? (he said wth a very mischevious voice and winking)

Madhu: stop ur rubbish!!! Tum mujhse iss tarah ke baatein nahi kar sakthe!! And dare u rishabh!! Mein chali jaaungi yaha se !!

Rishabh: accha sorry!! Baito yaha!!

Madhu: I'm leaving!!

Rishabh caught her arm and pulled her!!

Rishabh: chup chaap mein joh keh raha hun who kar!! Nahi toh tumhe pata hai mein kis hadh tak jaa saktha hun!!

Madhu luked at him wth fear and sat on the bed.

He went near the cupboard and took the first aid kit!!

He came near her and sat beside her and took her hand in his .

Madhu: yeh sab natak karne ki zaroorat nahi hai!!

Rishabh: guess it is wrong!!!!!! Yeh naatak nahi hai!! Bas mera agla side!!

Madhu just was quite all the while!! And she found her cheeks being wet as tears r cntusly flowing frm her eyes!!!

Rishabh: ab kyun ro rahi ho??

Madhu: none of ur business MR KUNDRA!

Saying this she got free frm his hold and strted moving wen again rishabh pulled her and pinned her to the wall!!

Rishabh: yaha kya kar rahi ho madhu???

Madhu: its none of ur business!!

Rishabh: madhu sawaal ka saaf saaf jawab dho warna!!

Madhu: warna kya karoge?? Aur kitne logon se darna hoga mujhe??? Aur kitne lagon se bhaagna hoga mujhe?? Kyun rishabh?? Mein kahi bhi rahun tujhe kya problem hai?? Kyun mujhe akele chodthe nahi?? Kyun …..

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Tada Tada!!!!

Madhu eyes widened as soon as his rough lips toched her soft ones. Madhu is not atall cooperating wth him but soon she found herself drowin in that kiss. Goose bums shimmer across her skin as he digged his fingers into her hair. Umm…… madhu moaned ….. rishabh here is thoroughy enjoying this kiss!! Its really a new feeling!! Afterall !!! he's kissin her aftr 5 long years!! Oh god!! She is soo gud!!! Her taste is just umm…. She licked his lips in ancipation . he deepend the kiss and here madhu is also not less in it… her one hand is on his hard core chest and the other digging her nails on his soft hair. He's still the same is the thought which came into her mind. He entered his tounge inside her aftr wat felt like an eternity. She want him but don't want him. This is the one which was making him restless. He bited her lowe lip vigouously which caused it to bleed and he strted suking her blood nw!!!! madhu here is soo lost In the kiss that she didn't evn felt the pain and is equally kissing him wth passion! She opened her eyes and looked that his jaws are clenching as nw the actuall kiss is strted!! Reality hitted her and

THUD!!

She pushed him .

A shaky exhale came out frm madhu while rishabh here is cntunsly luking at her!!

Madhu: wat the hell was that MR KUNDRA!! Hw dare u!!

He came near her and held her by shoulders and asked her: and wat was that madhu??

Madhu is nw luking at him wth anger and hate!!

Rishab: kyun apne aapko takleef de rahi ho madhu??

Madhu: maine nahi!! Tumne diya mujhe!! Zindagi bhar ke liye!!

Rishabh: maine kuch nahi kiya madhu!! Sab tumhari galati thi aura b bhi tumhari hi hai!! Aur mujhe pata hai ki ab bhi tum mujhse pyaar karti ho!!! AUR SIRF MUJHSE!!!

Madhu: nahi!! Mein tujhse pyar karti thi!! Ab sirf nafrat!!

Rishabh: aura b jo kuch bhi hua!! Who kyat ha??

Madhu luked in other direction.

Rishabh: who pyar tha madhu!! Jo tum mujhse karthi ho!! Aur mein tujhse!!

TERA ISHQ HI MERA JUNOON HAI MAAHI BEKARARI KA HAI YEH KARAAR BHJHKE NA BHUJHE YEH , PYAAS OO RABBA JAANE YEH KAISA HAI PYAAR??

HUM HAI DEEWANE TERE DEEWANE HUM HAI DEEWANE , TERE DEEWANE HUM HAI DEEWANE , TERE DEEWANE HUM HAI DEEWANE , TERE DEEWANE

Madhu: mein sirf nafrat karthi hun tujhse!!

Rishabh: nafrat aur pyaar!! Dono ek saath nahi reh sakthe madhu!!

Madhu: tum pyaar ke bare mein na bataao!! Toh hi teekh rahega!! Kyunki jiss insaan ne ek ladki jo usse apne jaan se bhi zyaada maanti thi!! Usko dhoka dekhe , usko chodke chala gaya!! Wo aaj pyaar ar mohabbat ke bare mein speech de raha hai!!

Rishabh: madhu mein nahi tum chodke gayi mujhe!! (he shouted)

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