New FF: One Dance Part 2 Page 2

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hey guys, well i saw Veer and Rajji's date and pictured it differently, plus i wanted to start a Fan Fic. so here it goes. 😉

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She looked amazing, he thought to himself. She came down the stairs of her house with a simple yet elegant outfit. she didn't look different than usual, but there was just something about her that made Veer trip while he was just leaning on his car. Rajji saw him trip and giggled shyly. Veer didn't care that he tripped in front of her, he loved the sound of her laugh. He took her hand and led her to the car. He opened the door for her and while she sat in the car, her dupatta brushed against his face.

As they were driving to the restaurant…………

The signal was red, so Veer stopped the car and waited for the green light. As he was waiting, he glanced over to Rajji and couldn't stop staring. They were both staring at each other and Veer was just about to hold her hand when…..

HONK!! HONK!!HONK!!! Everyone yelled from behind "are you blind? Move it!! Can't u see that the signal turned green".

Rajji shyly smiled. Veer moved forward, but he was happy that Rajji smiled, he would do anything to make her smile.

They got the restaurant, Veer opened the door for her and took her into the restaurant. It was the most beautiful restaurant she had ever seen. The restaurant had romantic lighting, an enormous fish tank that covered the entire left side of the wall and an orchestra that played romantic music.

They both sat down and glanced at the menu.

Veer: what will you eat?

Rajji: anything that you order will be fine.

Veer: But I don't know what you like. That's why we came here to this restaurant, away from everyone, so we could get to know one another.

Rajji smiled shyly. She thought to herself, this date is like the one's I watch on TV.

Veer: Tell me about yourself.

Rajji: There's not much to tell. I've lived here all my life, taken care of Papaji and Mummiji. You've already met my sisters. That's it.

Veer: well, I already knew all of that, but I want to know the real you. Your likes, your dislikes, your feelings.

Rajji thought to herself, no one has ever asked her how she felt before, she always followed what her parents told her and never stopped to think for herself.

Veer took her hand and gazed into her eyes. He asked, "Don't you want to ask me anything?".

Rajji: No I got all my answers.

Veer stared at her in amazement, he couldn't believe that she didn't have any questions at all, I mean they were both marrying complete strangers, if you thought about it. Well, that's just what Veer loved about Rajji, her innocence.

Veer asked Rajji to dance and she shyly agreed. They danced in each other's arms, gazing at each other, capturing every moment. After a while, Rajji's feet started to hurt. Veer noticed this immediately and helped her to a table.

Veer: I'll be right back.

Rajji thought to herself, where could he have gone?

Veer came back with ice in his hands. Rajji blushed and her cheeks turned red. Veer wrapped the ice in a towel and held it against her feet. It was perfect. They were having one magical night together.

Rajji blushed. She couldn't believe she would marry a guy who cared about her soo much.

After a lot of staring and blushing and gazing, it was getting dark and it was time to go home, but Rajji's feet still hurt a little.

Veer bent down, put her arm around his shoulder and carried her. He carried her to the car and sat her down and drove her home.

That was the end of their first date. Their first meeting. They didn't talk much and hardly ever ate, in fact, the food was never ordered. 😆 They both just fell more and more in love with one another.

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hope you like it, leave comments, questions and suggestions.

lub,

Riya 😃

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khwaboon_mein thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks 369. and as for the rest of u was it really that boring?/

RIya 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW!!! that was cho chweet!!!! 😳
Wish dey had shown dis scene instead of Durga's face 😛
gr8 ff. do continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wowiee.... beautiful FF.... and congrats for starting your first F in Maayka Section!!!! Make this FF teh best FF you can.. plz continue!!! doing a great job...👏👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yay! Riya! u started one in this section!

i loved it!

it was really sweet and cute! and i hope they show this soon (even though this time it won't be their first date..)

-pari
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wowwwwwwww please continue

i loved the introduction 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: radha07

wowwwwwwww please continue

i loved the introduction 😳



yes plz do continue....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwww 😳 ....their first date 😃 ...tht was kute hun 😛 ....waiting to read the next part...continue soon hun 😳 .....amazing job 👏 👏 👏 ...keep it up!!! 😊

luv,

LiSa
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Posted: 18 years ago
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It was great, Continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks guys for the wonderful comments 😳

Riya

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