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Posted: 18 years ago
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thats was sooooo cute..... 😳 good job 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank you guys, for your wonderful comments, they really mean a lot. i hope you like this update. it's a little dry, but the next one will be really juicy, trust me.
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The next day, Rajji was sleeping and still in dream land, with Veer of course hehe.


*Rajji's dream*


they are gazing into each other's eyes when various love songs play in the background.


Everything was fine, until she heard, get up, get up rite now.
She was awoken by mahi and soni. They were too excited to find out what had happened the night before oh her date. She shyly pretended to sleep with a goofy smile on her face. They kept shaking her and telling her to get up. They were too anxious to find out what had happened.


Rajji finally awoke and ran to the bathroom. Mahi and Soni chased after her and kept pounding on the door. She opened the door for a split second and said, "hahah you'll never find out" and slammed the door shut. Mahi and Soni were annoyed and wanted to know and Rajji was laughing loudly in the bathroom.


Rajji got dressed and came downstairs with a big smile on her face. She followed mahi and soni, waved goodbye and headed off to college. The whole way there, Mahi and Soni did not speak to Rajji. Rajji was suspicious about that and asked why aren't they speaking to her, they replied that they weren't speaking to her because she wouldn't tell them what happened with Veer. Rajji laughed and said, well you'll never find out, now. Hahahhaa. Mahi and Soni seemed frustrated, but Rajji didn't care, she was lost in her own RajVeerland. Hehehe.


As they almost headed to class, Mahi and Soni looked at Rajji with sad faces. Rajji broke down with a giggle and said, fine fine, I'll tell you what happened, but after class and she ran to her class. Mahi and Soni yelled Rajji Di, but she giggled and ran away. Mahi and Soni had to wait till the looong day was over.


At home………..


Rajji told Mahi and Soni everything that happened on their date, and Mahi and Soni kept making comments and watching Rajji blush.


At the end, Rajji mentioned that they were going out again tomorrow. She said this time they weren't going for dinner, but out to Khandala for a whole day. Mahi and Soni were shocked with amazement and joy, they were extremely happy for Rajji and couldn't wait till she went on her second date.


It was 3 am in the morning and she had butterflies in her stomach. He couldn't sleep and kept thinking about her second date. She had to wake up in only three hours but each second took forever to pass. Rajji couldn't wait for her second day with Veer.


The alarm rang and she was wide awake and just couldn't wait to get the day started.


She……………………..

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i hope you enjoyed it. leave comments and suggestions.

lub

Riya 😃
Edited by khwaboon_mein - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13

me first 😃 will read then update comments!

wow that was superb...loved it!!!😳😛😃

Please continue soon😳

Edited by radha07 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
very interesting 👏 keep writing.... 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cute part... Mahi n Soni buggin Rajji... n Rajji in dreamland 😳 cho chweet... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thats was really good n so cute 😳 👏 👏 ..plz do continue 😳 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww RajVeerland :)) TOO funny!

Too cute! Loved the part! Soni and Mahi are really cute! Too bad I don't have a sister! Anyways, I have you to bug me each and every single day, so its okay!

Anyways, write a longer part girl! It was short but really cute and sweet! Loved it! 👏

Now continue soon!

-Pari
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
Wonderful ff Riya,
Liked it.
Soni and Mahi are so sweet and devil bugging their sister asking about her date.....Rajji in her dreamland 😆 haiiiiii.
plz cont. soon.
Ridhi
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Rivya its really nice hun. RajVeer Land...lmao. Please do continue soon.

Sobia
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
That was very nice story.pls continue .

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