Asya SS: Those Secret Words(excerpt on pg 2)

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Prologue



What happens when the world seems to be
closing in on you? When people don't trust you anymore? What if the thing
that's dear you are under the threat of being lost, forever? Well enter such a
land.



A land of complete strangers.



Of hidden secrets, and of nightmares.



And in a land such as this;



For a lifetime of happiness, what would
you choose?



Would you choose?



Fear over faith,



Betrayal over trust,



Fantasy over reality,



Or,



Death over life?

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Okay so here I go with another helping of my khayali palao! I know I'm supposed to update something else but I simply couldn't stop myself!! happy reading!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: cosmina

it's only the title?😭

Oh buddy its now done!!

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Originally posted by: Meself

Oh buddy its now done!!

👍🏼 just a little!please,update soon! thank you!
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awesome! love the title and can definitely say will love the ss even more so..

eagerly waiting for it to start !

please make it soonish? yeah? thanks!

:D

ps: i am urja by the way :D
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attractive banner..
eagerly waiting for the palao to be served..
cheers for the new ss..
thanxs for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
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ok this is so interesting i really can't wait for the first chapter
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great one, i am looking forward to it 😊
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Excerpt
"I did see her….It is…I'm not lying and…."
"Stop it!" there came a roar that was enough to silence the incoherent mourns.
"Just please stop! Stop making a scene. There's no one like that here. All that you think you saw is just your imagination and nothing else! People have started talking….they tell me my bride's mad, now tell me are you mad?"
She couldn't believe his words. Her husband she thought was the biggest support she thought she had but it wasn't like that. Tears welled in her dark eyes. The ambers were ready to die.
"I'm so sorry I didn't mean to….Zoya….please look at me...just once", he tried reasoning. He wiped her tears and pulled her in his strong embrace, one that always melted her fears and yes her anger too. He held her close to his heart and kissed her forehead. He could sense her tiredness and so he led her to that soft bed and lay her down. He pulled up the duvet and she snuggled in peacefully. Just when he was about to leave she held his hand.
"You do believe me……right?"
"Zoya...I love you and…"
"No that wasn't my question….do you believe me?"
"I…."
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Okay before anything else I thought it would be better if I give you a little bit of sneak peak into the story. Hope you find it interesting!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting!

Thanks for the PM! 😳
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👍🏼 great,with one complain: too short! 😉

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