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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
a heart touching and emotional update
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Emotional update..luvd it...
.plz update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
friends , on sim_taarey 's request i m changing n name of this story from jeene laga hoon 2 HUM MAR JAYENGE ..
AND I THANK U ALL FROM D BOTTOM OF MY HEART 4 PRAYING 4 MY MAMAJI , AAP SAB LOG BAHUT ACCHHE HO , DIL SE THANK U SO MUCH , HE IS DISCHARGED FROM D HOSPITAL BUT STILL ON LIQUID DIET , TREATMENT WILL GO ON TILL 6 MONTHS SO PLSS KEEP PRAYING , I M HEARTILY GRATEFUL 2 U ALL , LOVE U ALL MY SWEET DEAR BUDDIES .. AND DUE 2 MY LOW HEALTH I COULDNT REPLY 2 ANY COMMENT SORRY 4 THAT BUT I WILL TRY 2 REPLY THEM BY THIS WEEKEND .. THIS STORY IS CLOSE 2 MY HEART SO I CANT STOP MYSELF FROM WRITING THIS , SO READ IF U WISH BUT PLS DO LIKE N COMMENT FROM HEART
~~~HUM MAR JAYENGE ~~~
chapter - 3

SWAYAM REACHED HIS HOME BUT SHOCKED 2 FIND HIS HOME LOCKED AND NO ONE IS THERE
SO HE RING D DOORBELL OF HIS NEIGHBOUR'S HOME
sw - ab namaste , kya aapko pata hai ki chachi , taani aur baaki sab kahan hai aur ghar and kyun hain ?
neighbour - namaste , aur aap swayam shikhawat ho na par aapko nahi pata ki vo sab to america gaye hain ,
( swayam is totally shocked )
sw - par kyun , aur mujhe kisine kuch nahi bataya ????????
( by then an old man came who was shikhawat 's old servant , buying vegetables n stuff
neighbour - arrree lo kaka aagaye , aap unhe se puch lo ,
( kaka knew about taani's cancer but unhe bhi taani ne apni kasam dekar kisiko bhi uske cancer ke main batane se mana kar diya tha )
as soon as kaka saw swayam , some fresh tears formed in his old eyes ,reflecting some deep pain n fear , he was dam restless from inside as he saw d 2 bro - sis , swayam and taani growing up , their childhood till now , their cute n sweet antics , sharing of sweet n sour memories together , their possessiveness , n love n care towards each other BUT NOW WHEN TAANI IS GOING THROUGH D WORST PHASE OF HER LIFE MAY BE D LAST PHASE , AND FIGHTING WITH HER CANCER BUT STILL HER BROTHER IS UNAWARE OF THIS , EK AISA BHAI JO APNI BEHEN PE APNI JAAN CHIDAKTA HAI USSE HE APNE BEHAN KI ITNI BADI BIMAARI KE BAARE MAIN NAHIN PATA , AUR VO BEHAN JO APNE BHAI KE LIYE KUCH BHI KAR SAKTI HAI , JO BHAI USKA OTHER HALF JAISA HAI AAJ JAB SWAYAM KI TAANI KO SABSE ZYADA ZARURAT HAI TAB USSE HE APNE AAP SE USNE DUUR KAR DIYA , TAAKI USKE PAIN KA DARD USKE BHAI KO NA HO ,.😭.
but kaka was also helpless that he can't tell d truth 2 swayam , can't even tell a loving caring brother that his sister is fighting with death with cancer 4 her life every moment ... he was cursing him 4 not being able 2 tell d truth 2 swayam and 4 not uniting d bro- sis ... but still he have 2 keep his promise so he wipes his tears immediately but still he has some doubts that swayam may got 2 know about taani's cancer somehow that's why he is here

kaka ( acts happily) - arre swayam baba , aap yahan ,kaise , mumbai se kab aaye ???????
swayam( firstly goes n touch kaka's feets n then hug him , they treat him as their family member ) - jee kaka main to abhi aaya hun , aap kahan the , aur aap ro rahe the ?????????
kaka - arre nahi nahi beta , vo meri aankh main kuch kachra chala gaya tha ,
swayam - aur kaka taani , chachi sab america kab gaye aur kyun ?????? mujhe kisine kuch nahi bataya aur koi phone bhi nahi answer kar raha tha , baat kya hai , sab thik to hai na ??????
kaka ( trying 2 say lie ) - haan haan sab thik hai beta , kisiko kuch nahi hua , aap andar chaliye thak gaye honge main aapke liye khana bana deta hun (then moves forward and open d door )
(swayam find something weird , still ignores it and decides 2 ask after some time )
kaka - aayiye na ,
swayam goes in
as he enter in d veranda , walks upstairs 2 taani's room first , while some childhood memories keep flashing in his mind
*** flashback *******.
tayam playing pakadam pakdai ( race ),
taani running fastly in between looking back at swayam and😛 showing him TONGUE and with thumb on nose 😆 as if teasing him and showing him a little pride of being winning d race , ... hehe😳
but then a mischief strike swayam 's mind 😈 , and he act as if he has fallen while running and as if he got injured ,
swayam ( shouts intentionally and sits on ground holding his leg ) - AAHHH , uhuu uhhuuu
taani looks back n when he saw swayam , she immediately rush 2 him - bhaiii , kyaa , huaa aapko , kyaa hua , ( till then d tears were formed in her little cute twinkling eyes )
swayam (while giggling )- kuch bhi to nahi , mujhe kya hua hai , buddhhu banaya bada maja aaya , hehe
and then swayam ran ..taani - BHAIII , MAIN AAPKO CHODUNGI NAHI ..
but swayam reach d winning point first ,
sw- yeahhh main jeet gaya , main jeet gaya , hehe
taani ( with tears in her eyes )- cheating , cheating , this is not fair bhai , choti behan se cheating karte ho sharam nahi aati aapko , main aapse KATTI hun , phir kabhi aapse baat nahi karungi
(turns other side keeping hands on her chest)
swayam ( was very guilty seeing tears in his sister;s eyes so he says holding ears ) sorry sorry sorry taani , plss mujhse katti mat ho plss , varna mujhe sach main bahut dard hoga

( while looking through d corner of her eyes , she says cutely )- kahan
swayam - yaahan ( keeps his first finger on his heart ) ,
taani - sachi
swayam - muchii
taani - thik hai then ABBA par ek sharat pe , ki aapko mujhe ice cream khilani hogi vo bhi 2
swayam (smiling ) okk 😃
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a big smile has crept swayam's face as he remember his cute childhood and taanis' sweetness care n love alongwith her bubbliness , n cute antics
swayam then enters taanis room and surprised 2 see it full of his , rey's , sharon's gang's pictures , taayam's photos of childhood n of college , and most imp there was A BIG PHOTO OF TAANI'S
MOM-DAD ABOVE HER BED , on one side of bed was taayam;s photo and on other side taarey's photo
swayam - wow , wow wow taani ne saari yaadon ko kitni khoobsurti se saja rakha hai , aur unhe aur bhi zyada pyaara bana diya hai , then he go and open her cupboard , but there was nothing in it , it was empty , and questions starts occupying his mind again ...
swayam - taani thode din ke liye america gayi hai ya hamesha ke liye , ki apne sab cheezein le gayi but then ye photos kyon chod gayii
( kyunki vo apni khoobsurat yaadon pe bhi apne gamon ka , apne pains ka saaya nahi padne dena chahti thi , aur , vo photos to shayad sirf kuch jhalakein thi un yaadon ki , par taani ne to unn khoobsurat lamho ko jeete hue apne dil main hamesha ke liye basa liya tha , as if capture kar liya tha , par uske liye uske vo apne , rey n swayam itne zyada precious the ki vo unki photos ko dekhke kamzor nahi padna chahti thi isiliye un photos vahin chodkar , un khoobsurat aur pyaare lamho ko apne saath apne dil main basaye le gayi )

swayam sit there on her bed but suddenly his eyes caught something , A DIARY , he pick it

( actually she has wrote 3 diaries 2 convey her heart's messages 2 her loved ones in case if she dies fighting this cancer but 3rd diary by mistake fall from her bag and left here only )

sw - ye to taani ki personal diary lag rahi hai , should i read or not ,
no i shouldn't ,after all it;s her personal diary ,
but i m her brother , i should know everything about my sister ... hey krishna ji maaf karna and immediately opens d diary
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ok ok friends end of this chapter , do tell me how it was and whether u like it or not ..
so DO LIKE AND COMMENT FROM HEART AND REALLY SORRY IF IT WAS NOT UPTO UR EXPECTATIONS , KYA KARUN HEALTH ZYADA SUPPORT NAHI KARTI ,DIL KO FOLLOW KARKE WRITE TO KIYA BUT THODA SA HE LIKH KE TIRED HO GAYI 🤢 SOLLY , BUT WILL TRY 2 GIVE MY BEST IN NEXT CHAPTER PAKKA 😊
lots of love
moni
take care 😳
keep smiling always 😊
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Edited by chinudolly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Res before pm :)

Unres umm
It was beautiful update dear
Loved taayam
Flashback was cute
But to taarey ;(
Update soon
Plzz
TC dear
Love ya :) <3
Edited by Reytanni4ever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Awesome chapter
But was tooo short
Aur bahutghalat jagah end Kiya
Plz plz plz update soon and thnx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
lvd taayam
flashback was cute
updt sn
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
first of all, I'm glad to hear that your mama is released from the hospital inshallah he will get well soon
Awesome update
very emotional😭😭😭😭😭
I hope in the upcoming chapter Swayam and Rey find out about Taani's cancer
please update soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Awesome update
loved it

update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
I read all three chapters in one go so u can imagine how much I cry...
It's so heartbreaking, on one side is fighting for her life and on the other Rey is a craving for her love.
Rey dancing and pouring all his emotions and love for Taani is very emotional
The way be spoke about his undying love for her is beyond amazing
I hope Reyam found out soon about Taani and go be with her.
Swayam memories of him and Taani is so sweet and touching
Outstanding updates, u doing a fabulous job.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
omg...moni...this is awesome...i totally loved it...eager to know reyam's reaction when they will come to know about her...such a jhakkas story...

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