||The Whirl of Destiny|| Updating .......

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys,

I know you all must be thinking me to be a nut case, she already has a FF running which hardly gets updated and now another one '. 😆

I just couldn't help myself '. 😳

Anyways, this story is going to be totally different with a new essence.

And one more thing it's a DamVeer one and will not have Satya and Savitri because I don't even know who they are '. 😆

So here it goes ...

Prologue

Zaap !

Veer smirked as he saw his reflection in the mirror; with the new suit on. He

walked out of his room, down the stairs and out of his mansion; ignoring the

servants bowing down. All the servants sighed in relief seeing the tyrant

walk out and breathed in.


Sitting in his car, with a long trail of cars with his bodyguards behind, he fell

into deep thought.

The dream ! The prophecy ! The magic ! What is all this ?

He suddenly seeped back into reality and immediately applied the brake

seeing a girl cross the road and almost come beneath his car.

She is beautiful ! Was all he could think as she skipped away not even

realizing the danger she was in just a few minutes ago.

With lovely dark eyes and a fair skin complementing her long shiny hair;

she looked enchanting !

The words flowed out of his mouth as he looked ahead with a dazed look.

That's when it hit him.

She is the one !


So how was it ?

Good or bad ?

Do leave behind your reviews (and likes) !

Would be waiting to read them !


Anyone wants to follow my Manveer FF then here's the link :

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3636796/the-devils-keep-updating



Vidhi

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Prologue : Above (Page 1)

Chapter 1 : Page 8

Chapter 2 : Page 11
Edited by catty2000 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just mention it in your comment and i can send you a buddy request !
Edited by catty2000 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow wonderful. Loved it vidhi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was really good vidhi!!
do continue!!
and continue soon 😊
Edited by ronnie30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome!!
Your promos are amazing as always.
Loved it loads!!
Do continue soon.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOME PROLOGUE VIDHI.

WAITING FOR CS.

CONTINUE SOON.

DANZS FOR PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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FABULOUS!!! And PM for me too please!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanx for the buddy request Vidhi Eagerly waiting for PM
Edited by Astoria - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting start.
PM me please.

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