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Posted: 12 years ago

** CHAPTER 5 **
** pyar mein takraar **

viren : manvi...
no response...
viren : jaan..
no response...
viren : baby...
no response...
viren : manvi... cmon yaar open the door... (knocking on the door)
no response...
viren : manvi i swear if u dont open the door i will break it...
no response...
viren : for god sake manvi... reply to me atleast... its so frustating to keep talking to walls... (knocking loudly on the door)
manvi : i dont wanna talk... go away viren...
viren ; manvi... listen i am sorry...
manvi : i dont want your sorry... go viren... leave...
viren : i am already going far away from you... dont worry...
manvi opened the door there n then without wasting even a second...
manvi : i didnt mean it... i meant go away for teh time being... i wanted to be alone sometime...
viren : i know... but i really had to tell you...
manvi : you are not going anywhere... please... (wrapping her arms around his neck and hugging him)
viren : manvi i have to go... its important babes...
manvi : are u sure its more important than me...??? (holding the fistful of his shirt)
viren : nothing in the world can be important than you manvi...
manvi : then dont go na... what will i do without you viren...???
viren : you can go and find out a new boyfriend...
manvi : promise me that after coming back you wouldnt hurt my new boyfriend...
viren : kya kaha...?? (breaking the hug)
manvi : i said that dare u hurt my new boyfriend after returning... (saying it innocently like a baby)
viren turned around to leave when manvi held his hand and looked ta him slanting her head in one direction.
manvi : kahan chale sarkaar...???
viren : to inform my boss that i cant go... i cant risk my love for that petty job...
manvi : hehe... dont be stupid... i only love you jaanu...
viren : i love you too... please dont think about anyone else manvi... main jee nahi paunga...
manvi : viren why do u act so senti sometimes...??? i might fight with you, i might not talk to you in anger but i only n only love you... no one can ever take your place...
viren : i love you too... and if anyone tries and take my place, i will kill him...
manvi : woww... then i would have a criminal boyfriend... wouldnt that be interesting...!!! its criminal...!! na na na na...
viren : manvi in singer mode... i love it... (picking manvi in his arms)
manvi : what are you upto...??? where are we going...??
viren : bedroom... wahan sunnuga tumhara gaana...
manvi : u will listen me sing and that too in the bedroom... are u sure...??
viren entered the room and n close the door with his foot. viren fell on the bed wtth in his arms.
manvi : should i...??
viren : sure... set my mood baby...
manvi : in your dreams... (showing her tongue)
viren started tickling manvi as she is the most ticklish person.
manvi : hehe... s..hehe... to.. hehe..p... stop... hehehe... plss
viren : okk... fir gao gaana...
manvi : hoo... (trying to catch her breath)
viren : cmon baby... bahar toh bahut gaana gaa rahi thi...
manvi : toh abhi sunati hoon...
viren : sunao... but make it hot baby...
manvi : i am already hot sweetheart... excessive hotness will burn you... (tracing her finger on his face from forehead to his nose tip to his lips)
viren : i am already burning in your love and passion...
manvi : so...???
viren : so... shhh... (keeping his finger on manvi's lips)
manvi clearly saw desire in his eyes and smiled... she knew what was coming and she closed her eyes. viren saw it and leaned towards manvi and captured her lips in a passionate kiss. the feeling of having her close delighted viren and he felt complete. having manvi in his arms made him feel that he has everything he ever dreamnt of... his life was just perfect and he somewhat believed taht nothing would ever go wrong in his love story...

scene shifts
chandigarh
jeevika : virat...
virat (busy on his phone): hmm...
jeevika : i am really ocnfused... what should i wear on the wedding...???
virat : kapde pehen lena...
jeevika : bandar concentrate here na... where are you lost...??
virat : let it be... u tell me what is your confusion jeevi...???
jeevika : main kaunsi dress pehnu... help me choose na...
virat : jaan its not our wedding... remember...??
jeevika : yes but...
virat : shh... wear anything you like... you look good in everything jeevs...
jeevika : aww... chooo chweet... thats why i love u soo much...
virat : yeah yeah i know... now can i go...???
jeevika : why cant u spend time with me...??? where do u have to go...???
virat : i am going out with my friends...
jeevika : then you can take me as well... what will do here alone n mom dad are also out... take me na viru...
virat : jeevi... listen you stay at home na,...
jeevika : but why...?? i know you going for clubbing...
virat : if u know it, then why do u want to spoil it...
jeevika : arrey i dont wanna spoil it... actually na couple entry sasti hoti hai, toh tumhari paise bachana chahti hoon...
virat : kyun...???
jeevika : because a good wife should save her husband's money...
virat : who in the world taught you this...???
jeevika : arrey i know some of the fact bandar... i am not useless like u... i am well read u see...
virat : jai ho scholar jeevika ki... now we will discuss it later...
jeevika : but...
virat : jeevi sit at home n learn how to be an ideal daughrter-in-law and an ideal wife...
(saying this virat moved out of jeevika's room)
jeevika : i think he is right... i shouldnt waste time...

after few days
vanshika : virat do u think viren will come...???
virat : bhai will come maa... i believe he would
vanshika : so lets go... but where is jeevika...???
virat : must be getting ready... i donno why she is that excited...
vanshika : chup... wo aati hi hogi...
jeevika : main aa gayi... how am i looking maa...??
vanshika : very beautiful... hai na virat...??
virat : haan... theek hi lag rahi hai...
jeevika : he never praises me... i took around 3 hours to get ready...
virat : lets go maa... we are getting late... n jeevika call bua as well...
jeevika : okk...

at the wedding
virat : maa bhai is nowhere to be seen...
vanshika : i think he will not come...
swamini : call viren...
virat : okk.. he isnt picking up the call...
swamini : try again...
while jeevika was fidgeting with her dupatta thinking what is wrong with viren.
virat : no... still not picking up...
vanshika : try the landline number...
virat : hmm...
virat dialled the number and someone picked it...
virat : hello...
manvi : hello...
virat : hello bhai ko phone do...
manvi : tumhara bhai ko filmstar hai kya... ya kahin ka koi gunda hai...??
virat : excuse me... viren bhai ko phone do... (to vanshika) these servants i tell you...
manvi : kya...??? tumne mujhe servant kaha...??? arrghh how dare u...???
virat : give the phone to my brother right now...
manvi : he is not at home... get lost...
virat looked at his mobile and cursed teh lady on the other side...
virat : bhai is not at home... par koi btameez naukarani thi...
vanshika : naukarani... nahi... there is no servant at his place virat
virat : shit mom... i think wo manvi thi...
jeevika : haha... you called viren's gf a maid... she must be so angry on you viru...
virat : shittt...
swamini : keeping this aside... it is clear that viren isnt coming... so what will we do now...???
virat : lets see bua...

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Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update but short tooo😊
wow soo manvi will meet the vadhera family soon 😛
what will happen...and viren still not ready for marriage🤔...but really possessive about her huh😛
cont soon😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update just read the last one and now this wohhhow😃😃
awww viren n manvi are sooo in love just love their romance❤️
virat doesnt love jeevs that much and she's soo sweet also doing everything for him
its sooo different to read viren in virat's role u know...but loving this viren and mannu to bindass😉
hehehehehehe virman's first convo and virat already taken panga with a sherni by calling her a maid😆😆...eagerly waiting for their first meet😉

Edited by amgud - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
mumma resh😉
unresh😲
mein itni jaldi unresh kiya hawww😲
awesome mumma loved it
jeevs was tooo cute loving their jodi but virat doesnt talk to jeevs like jeevs talking to him
aap ki mind mein kya chalraha hai mumma😆
den manvir mein yeh donno ki bare mein kya bato they are super cute
my second fav couple😳
waiting for next part
love u mumma🤗
Edited by keertu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow naina awesome blossom yaar
love d every bit but i love the most last para virat called manvi maid... 😊 lolz
actually Naina I knw i've to wait 4 it but give to try to ask... i watched in banner virat n manvi pic is there any scene between them or it just casual
love the viren and manvi sequence loved that.
thanx 4 pm Naina
waiting 4 next part
update soon
take care
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jannat89

wow naina awesome blossom yaar
love d every bit but i love the most last para virat called manvi maid... 😊 lolz
actually Naina I knw i've to wait 4 it but give to try to ask... i watched in banner virat n manvi pic is there any scene between them or it just casual
love the viren and manvi sequence loved that.
thanx 4 pm Naina
waiting 4 next part
update soon
take care

thanks jannat 😃
i too love it yaar... my fav8 as well 😃
yes its early but yes u will get to see virman in the coing updates... baki secret hai... shhh
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey it was nice !!
loved it
update soon
thnx for da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Awesome Update...But short one dear...I loved this a lot...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update viren and manvi both love
each other a lot but other jeevika try ti impress
him but not showing any interest update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous update 👍🏼 loved it ❤️ lovely convo between viren n manvi :D jeevika aur virat kaa bhi cute tha ;) !!! Haww virat called manvi maid 🤣 tumhara bahi koi filmstar hai yaa koi gundaa hai !! Omg tat line was hilarious 🤣 awesome !! ^_^ ab sirf virat n manvi aamne saamnee aanee kaa intezaar hai :P looking forward for next update !! Continue soon !!! :D

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