SwaRon OS: Rain Romance!

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Hey guys! It's me to bother you. I was inactive in the writing department because I'm not keeping well. Had fever and stuff. 😭 Sowy . You can expect updates soon!!

Well, I just wrote an OS! Pata nahi how it has turned out! It has many feelings and emotions in it ! And the title won't suit it I guess but phir bhi I hope you read it!

And oh, speakers on!

Sorry I love the song a lot!! 😳

SwaRon OS- Rain Romance!<3

They were done with rehearsals for the day. It was time to go home. And it being night, the girls did not wish to go home alone. Well, the boys didn't want the girls to go home alone.

Swayam had a quick glance at Sharon who was busy drinking water. She sprinkled some water on her face and untied her hair. She looked divine with her hair partially drenched with sweat refusing to move anywhere. He was lost in her' her beauty' her khoobusrati which did not permit him to look anywhere else. He kept staring at her lovingly and didn't realize when she started gesturing at him.

Sharon's glance shifted to the other end of the room, near the door where a cute loving 19 year old boy, or better identified by her heart as "her better half", stood. He was resting his head on the wall next to him and he stared lovingly at her with a smile constant on his face.

She raised her eyebrows trying to bring him out of his drooling land after which he gave a wide smile that automatically made her blush.

So it was like that. Swayam and Sharon had been a couple for a month now, their relationship still being a secret and they had no plans of telling anything about their relationship to anyone. Not even Simmi. The reason being that they loved sneaking out together'. Lying to meet each other. Although Swayam didn't really feel it was right, but as Swayam was Swayam and Sharon was Sharon. He didn't have a say in front of her.

After around two minutes of an awkward silence between the two of them, she started communicating through her heart.

"What happened?"S he asked him.

"I can't stare at you like that?"

"You can' But not now." She said her face towards the ground.

"Then when?"

Sharon blushed a bit and'.

Their cute little conversation was interrupted. Thanks to Nilesh'.

"Guys it's getting late. We should leave."

'. To which Simmi agreed. "Yeah we should leave now. It's getting late."

"I'll go with my Vicky." Neha said although nobody had really asked her to say anything. She held Vicky's hand affirmatively.

Vicky looked at her questioningly and then had a quick glance at others. Nobody was really bothered anyway.

"Simmi you coming with me?" Nil asked her. As if Simmi was going to say no.

"Sure!" Simmi's little face brightened up.

Bharat had already left, and Aashi had not come that day due to some illness, which left only Rinni and Amar with each other. Both of them blushed looking at each other and Amar looked like he didn't really have the guts to ask her out.

While Swayam still stood at the entrance of the rehearsal hall, this time playing temple run on his phone, Vicky assisted Neha outside and well, he obviously had some plans of dropping her home.

Finally after mustering courage, Amar managed to ask Rinni if she was willing to go with him. Rinni didn't say no, and both of them left. Rey wasn't there either, which left only Swayam and Sharon in the rehearsal hall.

Swayam walked towards her slyly, and Sharon didn't move. Instead she let out a smile.

"Shall we?" He asked chivalrously.

"Why should I go with you? And where?"

"To your abode." His voice sounded deep and serious.

"Swayam'" Sharon hit him playfully. "I'm going."

"Alone?"

"Yes." She let out a sigh and picked her bag up.

"You can't go alone."

"Why?" Sharon said as she prepared to walk out of the rehearsal hall.

"Because I am going to drop you." Swayam's voice sounded babyish, cute, and in a way commanding too.

Sharon giggled at his cuteness. "I'm a big girl. I can manage on my own."

"Sharon please' Pretty please!" Swayam sounded like a desperate chic, though he had no plans of behaving like one.

"No Swayam."

"Sharon, only once! This one time! It's late.. please let me drop you!" He made a puppy dog face.

"Okay." Sharon gave in. "The first and the last time. Okay?" Sharon maintained a stern expression.

"Okay promise!"

They walked towards the parking lot. It was pitch dark and not a homo sapien in sight. A dog whined and trolled casually along the street. The weather was pleasant and cool. Her Prussian blue frock which ended just above the knees made her look no less than a princess, angel, diva all at once. Swayam was dressed up casually. Both of them were color coordinated and looked almost like newly weds.

Swayam hadn't brought his cycle to college that day. His cycle had a bad puncture and a flat tire and it was in the garage at that moment. It had been Sharon's wish to ride with him on his cycle once, which hadn't come true till then.

They were walking on the empty street. There was a silence all around and neither of them uttered a word..Both waiting for the other one to start the conversation' Sharon wasn't used to such silence around Swayam'It was just that, she kind of lost herself near him. She was so into him and his cuteness that the very feeling of walking with him up to her house was blissful. All she could sense was him, him and him around her. And there was practically no one to disturb them... She could smell him and his intoxicating scent, although she wasn't very close to him.

Sharon was thinking about him, when he finally broke the ice.

"Are we going to get married?"

She looked at him questioningly. Yes, at some point of time they were.

"What?"

"Why are we behaving like this then? Like a couple does just before their freaking arranged marriage?"

Sharon let out a fake giggle. Swayam could sometimes crack really bad jokes. Swayam got her reply.

"So, how was your day?" He asked.

"Formal talks?" She asked as if she wasn't prepared for them.

"Yes." Swayam said as if he wanted to make it obvious to her.

"I don't want formal talks! They bore me." Sharon complained.

"Then what do you want to talk about?" Swayam asked.

"Well'you and me'"

"You and me?" Swayam said coming coming closer to her' He was reducing the distance between them and had no plans of backing off.

"Swayam..." Sharon said stretching his name with a smile on her face which indicated that she was enjoying this proximity.

"Yes Sharon?" He asked in that sly tone of his.

"What are you doing?" Her smile grew.

Swayam had no plans of backing off, when suddenly'

"What's happening?" Sharon exclaimed. "Is it raining?"

Swayam looked up at the sky and due to phenomena called night; those rains clouds were not really prominent. But yes, it was raining. He could feel it.

A shower which was not even planning to stop.

"Yuk I hate rains." He grimaced and looked at his wet overcoat.

"You what?" Sharon was shocked.

"I hate rains!"

"How can you possibly hate rains?"

"I hate rains! I really don't like them!"

"How rude!" Sharon said at the top of her voice.

"That's not rude! That's the truth!"

"Then hate and stay under this tree! I'm going to enjoy them!" She said and ran to the center of the road and in a matter of few seconds, got completely drenched.

She moved freely under the sky, the moon was completely hidden behind the dark rain clouds, but even under the dark night sky, her beauty shone.

Swayam stared at the beauty in front of him. She looked so beautiful' Without any fake make up, she looked just natural. Just natural' someone so perfect. Swayam couldn't help but thank his luck that she was with him.

"Come na!" She signaled to him.

Swayam just smiled, nodded his head and then walked slowly towards her. She was lost in her own little words enjoying the little drops of rain that were falling randomly on her arms.

He was still mesmerized by her beauty. She looked adorable and at the same time, beautiful.

"Dance?" He forwarded his arm.

She stopped enjoying for a moment and looked lovingly at him. She extended her arm to meet his and felt the moment. She closed her eyes absorbing the feeling.

He pulled her closer and took her petite frame in his embrace. Then slowly twirled her around and again pulled her towards him. Dancing in rain with him was no less than a dream for her.

They moved in sync... their faces were inches apart. Both of them were enjoying in each other's company.. Sharon due to the rains and Swayam, because Sharon was smiling. Swayam kept twirling and swirling her. They kept waltzing on the empty road...No one was there to stop them.. She loved him and he loved her' He lifted her and she spread her arms wide, closing her eyes and letting those light rain drops fall on her.

It was her day' It was meant for her enjoyment.. She was enjoying. After a long time, he could see the real her' the soft Sharon inside her trying to come out in the open and enjoy herself. The person in his embrace wasn't Sharon the diva' she was his Sharon.

Sharon was smiling' Her excitement had still not lowered. That day, she was like a free bird...A free bird, with him, the love of her life.

Swayam smiled at her. She smiled back at him.. Both looked like a happily in love couple. Sharon reduced the distance between them and planted a small peck on his cheek. Whether, it was out of happiness/ excitement/ content Swayam didn't know, all he knew was, that she was happy.. And her happiness gave him immense satisfaction in itself.

"Good to see the real you after a long time Sharon'"

"The real me?" She giggled. "The real me was always with you Swayam."

He smiled at her. "Well I guess so!"

"Rains are indeed magical Swayam, aren't they?" She teased him, expecting a nice reply.

"Yes they are!"

"You know what? Today I felt so fresh! After a long time!"

"That's great.." Swayam said.

"And for that' I love you'"

"Without that?" He questioned.

"I love you without that too. I just love you'"

"I love you too." He said and winked at her.

I accept the fact that I don't know how to give nice endings. Sorry for the horrible ending and sorry for torturing you !

If you liked it, please do hit the like tab and do leave your comments!



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Mihika...

I fell in love with ur writing style since the very beginning ...when i read rose day OS by u ...its still one of the sweetest and simplest OS i hv ever read...i love almost everything u write ...the flow in ur story..the realistic touch ...over all...those sweet wow moments make me smile during ur stories..

Coming to this OS...beautifully written...a moment of love...a moment of admiration...adoring ur beloved...stealing moments of love...flawlessly written...the rain ...the walk..the dance...those sweet nothings...being ur realself in his embrace...such a deep yet beautiful feeling...

Mgical moments of love...magical rain..magical SwaRon...ur beautiful writing style...heavenly combination ...keep writing dear..


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Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res (Yeyh Me Second) 😃
Unres
Mihi 🤗🤗
Ah seeing a pm from you just makes me smile and I just opened it to see a beautifully written OS from you 👏👏 Awww but I am not at all happy with the fact that you are ill and still wrote it Get well soon darling<3 Take care and get plenty of rest
Coming to the OS it was just amazing as always. Simple yet realistic. A simple moment made all the more beautiful with Swaron. The Swaron magic made it all the more beautiful. 😳
Your writing skills amazes me ⭐️ I love reading your work. Awww the real Sharon that was Swayam's Sharon enjoying the rains with him. Fantastic. 😆 Swayam hates it I remembered their first date when Sharon hated it
The song is also one of my favs<3 The title is just perfect simply yet defining the OS!
Plz the ending was different and khoobasurat 😳 so stop saying that it wasn't
Don't you dear write another one until you get well soon plz
Loads of love<3
Edited by HSFA - 12 years ago
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Amazing OS 😊
Loved it
Legilimens. thumbnail
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Sakshi di's comment!!Thanku!!

Wow mihi... Awesome Os.. Loved it simple and sweet... Swayam hating rains and sharon loving them was something quiet unpredictable.. But guess what?? Who wants to be predictable .. Predictable is so boring.. Loved it entirely and love to see how beautifuly u showed swayam's impact on sharon.. And her love.. Their heart talk was blissful..

Keep writing dear...
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wow it was a lovely os..
beautifully 👏penned
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res😳
unres...
oohh it was dam romantic...
swayam ko rains pasand nai h n sharon ko pasand h...😆DEADLY COMBINATION...😳
do write more mihi...i luvs it...😉
p.s. u better take care of urs...😊
Edited by vrushaan - 12 years ago
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A pleasant read... swaron enjoying the rain in the most simplest yet special moments. A cute os ...

Love

Nehal
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mihi
when i saw your pm i was like
coming to the os wowww
it was awesome re loved how swayam was busy drooling o sharon in the rehearsal the way you described her beauty and appearance was really awesome...
really loved how sharon wanted to be the independent and big girl but swayam was behaving like a despo chick

last came the rain dance and it was wowww.loved the whole mood of the os it was simple yet so romantic and swaronish
do write more and pm ke liye thanks
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mihi🤗
lovely os dear...it was really sweet..i really liked swaron heart to heart convo..actually i was imagining dere reactions..sharon's blush n swayam's naughty grin😳
n rain dance was superb..
loved it😊

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