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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nakshatra92

nice part...


sam - swathi's wedding...

arjun's change in attitude... so many changes lvd it...😊

his concern for priya... i wish ki priya open up herself woh bhi jaldi...

update soon...

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Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: life93

hi shilpa dišŸ¤—... i was eagerely waiting for this update😃 and i got it😃... well update was awesomešŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘... sam is asusual so caring 😃...seedha shaadišŸ˜‰šŸ˜† achha idea haišŸ˜†...swati also understood his reason behind postponing the engagement😃...sam n swatiā¤ļø...n what swati had to shop for priya?Smile well priya i just loved her like i love reva😃...both the ladies briught a smile on my face and i have always resapected both of them...she wasn't sleeping...and arjun was watching her from SUV ... so he did his work very well...priya didn't want to let out the real reason behind her sleeplessness...so arjun's betšŸ˜‰ smart onešŸ‘... both the kises were so sweet😃...and oh god ! somebody knock some senses in priyašŸ˜†...she think herself as burden...but what she has gone through after that its natural hope arjun wil do it this time soon...and priya think that he was being affectionate because of his guilt...

my demind...plz reveal the truth of scar...plz di can't wait more...
n this time fast update plzzz dišŸ¤—

Thank you so much and sorry for the wait. Wish I had the time to write the whole thing out in one go, who knows, may be soon.šŸ˜‰
Yep, she would have to shop for Priya, she knows her too well. You will see what I mean soon,
Its an honor for Priya to be thought of same as Reva and yep both have the inner strength that keeps them going.
We can count on Arjun's sharp mind to figure things out eventually.
@Scar secret, soon, for now they are going to attend a wedding.

Originally posted by: hal96

Awesome part yaar

Yeh happy wala tears
Loved it
Sam n Swati voin 2 get married yaaay
n da best scene wen Arjun in SUV n rang Priya
sooo cute n sweet
n den kiss 2 scar
n da last dialogue b4 he went
ā¤ļø
Update soon
Cant wait
😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

Hey ...
Awww this part was just amazing !!!

Loved the Sam and Swati scene sooo much ... :$
Oyye Hoyye !! They are getting married ... :D
That's great news ;)

Ah !! What can I say about Arjun and Priya ...
They are way too adorable !!!

Arjun always knows how to corner people :P
The pecks were too good :$

Thanks for the pm :D



Thank you so much, glad you liked the update.

Yep happy times for Swati and Sam.😊

Arjun and Priya, yep they are sweet and yeah he is too good.šŸ˜‰



Originally posted by: yas23

awesome update
loved sameer and swati scene
so they are going get married soon..so happy for them
arjun and priya scene was amazing..loved their conversation
loved the care he has for her
waiting to know whats going to happen next
continue soon



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Originally posted by: Payal_156

Shilpa di congo dat dis ff again in fanfiction section šŸ¤—
So finaly u updated
a long tym
di thoda jaldi update kiya kro pleej
awesum update
wow swati n sam bro 🄳
Beautiful scene
claps
den arjun priya amazing!
damn sik huh
wat is d reason of scar i hv my reason
waiting for urs di...
oops hw priya thinks she is burden!
omg cute gestures
very wel writen di
awesum
waiting for d revelation
do soon di
pls update soon
hats off šŸ¤—
Ps. ur speech too gud di
i lov ur creation!



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Yep, time to celebrate and after that revelations. Next one coming up soon.



Originally posted by: Harman987

awesome

love it
thanks for the PM
please cont. to send me PM



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Thank you!


Originally posted by: rizwanaa

superb update
sameer n swati finally getting married
loved sam-swati scene
arjun had been waiting down in suv
was really cute
his concern n love for priya reflects in his gestures
n words
loved arjun-priya scenes
the way priya stopped him from going
n when arjun caressed her scar n gave a peck on it
but priya had been through so much that its not easy for her
their convo was amazing
thanks a lot for pm
continue soon



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Originally posted by: umamah70

wow..

loved it to bits...
i love shilpa anand as priya..perfect choice...
sameer and swati getting married...yayyy...
loved sam-swati romance...
arjun waited for her in SUV...so cute..
loved arjun's gestures...
loved when arjun kissed priya on scar and cheek...
update soon...



Thank you so much. And thanks for liking my choice for Priya, yep I too think she is perfect.

Next update coming up soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: alee001

seedha shadiii?????


Congrats sameer- swathi!!!!

ahaaa!!!! lovely romantic scene

loved conv between arjun- priya!!!!



Thank you so much.

Yep no engagement, he doesn't want to wait anymore.

Glad you liked the update, next one coming up soon.


Originally posted by: shona14

aww sam and swathi hugged 😊 kitni excited thi swathi wen sam told him that priya will come wid them😊 sam must be singing --dulhan hum le jayengešŸ˜‰

i loved the convo between arjun- priya...
hw well arjun understands priya... priya is already messed up wid her thoughts bt this girl thinks too much...aur sab apne baare mein bura hi sochti hai.and she is trying to avoid his questions ... though i know watever happened wid priya had made her like this...bt still she shud stop underestimating herself..
and wat arjun said was absolutely ryt sumone who can risk her life fr others will do anything fr the person she loves...
i hope and i know arjun will make her believe that she also deserves that love ,care everything she wished for once ...and will fill her life wid happiness😊

loved this part di u rockšŸ˜ŠšŸ¤—



Thank you so much Shona. Glad you liked the update.

Lol...Sam and singing, yeah I suppose but once he made up his mind there is no going back.

@Priya and Arjun, yep you got it, they are unique that way. And he does know her the best.

Next update coming up soon.


Originally posted by: gujjupari

di... u updated finallly after like a month.. tut tut tut.. just joklingšŸ˜†


awesome update...
sam-swati gettting marrried🄳🄳... tht scene thoughā˜ŗļøā¤ļø awww sam overcoming his commitment phobiašŸ¤—... i just wannna give them a masssivee hugšŸ¤—.. and i wanna a dhamakedar shaaadi for them di plsss😳...

and arjun-priya... aww these 2 are reallly a interesting couplešŸ˜‰... first they fight, then they make up & then they fight agnšŸ˜†šŸ˜†... and priya's traumatic part is still causing problems, i wonder how she's gonna overcome thisšŸ¤”...
conti very very sooon di... pls don't make me wait for another month for an update *litterally begging u with the biggest puppy faceee😳😳*
& thnx for pm... oh & i read the note & all i hve to say is tht i love this story diii, ofc remembering the last commment, this one not as hulk-likešŸ˜‰šŸ¤Ŗ




Awe..thanks so much, and sorry for the wait, but sometimes things just don't work out like we want to.

Glad you liked the update. Next one coming up soon.



Originally posted by: ..sweetchilly..

Liked it..
Nope..I totally Loved it<3
It was awesome..
Happy happy wala tears really..
Finally Sameer decided to take the step towards their new relationship..
Happy for both Swati and Sameer..
Trip to Delhi..
Looks like it's gonna bring a lot of changes in everyone's life..
Reasons for not being able to sleep..
The sweet gestures by Arjun..
That was really impressive..
A Big Hug..
for this happy wala update..
Loved the entire update..
It was amazing di..
Loved it to the core..<3
continue soon..
Thanks for the PM..



Awe thank you so much, glad you liked the update.

next one coming right up.


Originally posted by: Pisces_Gurl

Wow..
That was cute wid the lil romance...
Love Arjun n Priya scene..
He was sooo shweet..
Update soon



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Originally posted by: Nikita121

Awwssmmm... part
Beautifully written
loved it
cont soon
plz pm me



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Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll

Wow!!!we got another superwoman here.Uptil now it was only vidya dat i knew & now its u.😊Its a pleasure to know you shilpa.A wife,Mother,professional.Hats off to u dear for Multitasking.šŸ‘šŸ¼.
For the update:
Res for nowšŸ˜‰



Haha...thanks so much, its tough on some days but somehow I make it.


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

Supereb Di..

Love Arjun & Priya's interaction..
Loved Priya's thoughts..
And ab to Rathod ka kya kehena... vo to Duhlemiya bange...



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Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe

awesome update loved it thanks for the pm



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Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll

Thanks for the SYS session.Got to know you more & believe me it was my pleasure.😃

Back to the update:
Oh!! I was so very much missing Swati & you brought her.😃Thank you shilpa.šŸ¤—This is the reason she is a darling to me.She is not physically as strong as Priya is but when it comes to being a support system no one can beat herā­ļø.Her being beside Sameer was what he needed the most at this time.šŸ‘šŸ¼
I think we should skip the engagement and get married right away."😭😭(Happy Tears)

His decision to get married instead of being engaged is the only way he can be with her & ensure she is safe.
"Yes, I have waited long time to be yours Sameer. I have been ready for a long time; I was just waiting for you to catch up."😭😭(Again Happy Tears)

COming to Arjun-Priya:
Each & every conversation of theirs was BRILLIANT.ā­ļøšŸ‘šŸ¼
"Why didn't you go home?"
He was there for her safety.😃

I don't have anything left to give to anyone. I would only end up being a burden in any relationship."😭😭(Sad Tears)

My heart went out to her.It might be so difficult for her to stay away from the one whom she loved all her life & cant even voice out why she is moving away from him

"You wouldn't believe me if I told you now, but one day I will make you believe, I promise.

"I was not there when you needed me the most, don't stop me from being there for you now."
😭😭(Happy Tears)
Glad that Arjun is handling her patiently & hopefully this tiny little gestures of his will break the barrier that she has built between them.

Thanks for the PM dear😃





First of all thank you so much for the long comment and your feedback, they always help to motivate me and improve myself.

Yep, I did at your request and more of her coming up also. In fact most of the updates now will be divided between the two couples.

If Arjun is smart than Sameer is no less here, he know exactly what he stands to lose and he is not having it this time.


Priya and Arjun have a long way to go, but things are getting better, and the road ahead is rocky but let's see what happens.

Thanks again for the wonderful reviews always.

Next one coming up soon.


Originally posted by: -lisana-

lovely update..

cont soon
thanks for the pm :))



Thank you so much.


Originally posted by: Savi_S

hey

just catching the last few parts i missed...
i like ur note...
willl coment aftr reading all parts...



Hi there, long time no see. Hope school is going well for you.

Thanks so much, and take your time.😊


Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...

Sorry for the late comment...

Awesome Update Shilpa Di..

Sam and Swati are my favo... I love them so much!!!
They are getting maaried...
What can be a better news...😃

Arjun and Priya's Conversation was superb...
Loved it..

Continue soon!!



Thanks so much Mithu.

Yep its party time for our Sam and Swatil. Glad you liked the update.


Originally posted by: angelirebelli

Wow another fab update.. ā­ļø


A few things stumped me but I ain't complaining.. šŸ˜†

Keep the fab piece piece of imagination going, don't let silliness get to you.. šŸ‘šŸ¼

P.S. - Cant wait for the next installment, bring it on Babe.. šŸ˜‰




And there she is my angel.šŸ¤—

Thank you so much Sweety...left you stumpted, did I? Yeah few changes since we talked about it.šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†

Die hard romantic that I am, I couldn't help myself.


Next one coming up soon.šŸ˜›




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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello everyone! I am back.

Okay so next part is not very long but I hope you like it anyway.

I have added something different to this update, so I am bit nervous, go easy on me.šŸ˜‰

Once again thank you everyone for all the wonderful comment, I am sorry I wasn't able to make longer comments.

Here we go..


Part 30

Arjun was about to get back in the SUV and wait out the night when he felt Priya's gaze on him. He looked up at her window and sure enough she was standing there watching him. He couldn't read her expression from afar but he sensed her pain.

Her words echoed in his mind. "I don't have anything left to give to anyone. I would only end up being a burden in any relationship."

What are you hiding from me Priya? He asked with his eyes as he turned and leaned against the SUV.

Ek Din ..Ek Din Teri Raahon

Baahoon Mein Panaahon Mein

Aungaa Khojaunga

Ek Din Tera Ho Jaunga

Yeh Dil To Na Keh Yeh Baatein

Dil To Na Keh Saka

Dil To Na Keh Saka

Arjun knew she wouldn't be able to read his expression from far away yet he couldn't help but cross his legs at the ankles and relax against the SUV to show her that he was not going anywhere. He let everything go and let his feelings show on his face and in his eyes.

Tu Jaane Na Tu

Chaahat Meri Kitni Betaab Hai

Ho Jo Barso Meri Palkon Mein Tha

Tu Wohi Khwaab Hai

Har Ghadi Har Ghadi Yaadoon Mein

Vaadon Mein Iradon Mein

Aungaa Khojaunga

Ek Din Tera Ho Jaunga

Yeh Dil To Na Keh Yeh Baatein

Dil To Na Keh Saka

Dil To Na Keh Saka

Priya had no control over her heart or her emotions anymore. She couldn't help but go back to her room to get another glimpse of him. She had meant to only catch one glimpse then move back but one look and she froze in the spot. Before she could move he looked up at her window and saw her watching him.

Try as she might she couldn't pull away from the power of his dark eyes even from a great distance between them. It was as if he was trying to communicate something important with those potent eyes. She had never been able to resist him anything when he used those eyes to talk her into things.

She remembered Sam joking about Arjun making criminals sing like a bird with just one fierce look with those eyes and at the time she remembered thinking not just the criminal but any girl he wanted also. God knows she had never been able to resist him when he had used that intense look on her.

Another memory flashed in her mind, which immediately made her lower her lashes and break away from his gaze. She turned away from him and leaned against her bedroom wall so that she is not tempted to look back at him.

Yeh Jhukti Nazar

Jaane Jigar Hosh Lejati Hai

Mein Kaise Kahon

Ek Ajnabi Dard Dejati Hai

Chupke Se Chupke Se Teri Neeedon Mein

Khwaabon Mein Khayalon Mein

Chaaunga Khojunga

Ek Din Tera Ho Jaunga..

Arjun saw Priya break their eye contact then turn away form him. This further made him realize that he was still missing some pieces of the puzzle. Something or someone had hurt her badly and he needed to figure out what that was before she erects stronger walls between them.

He saw the light in her room go off and finally moved to sit in the SUV. He reclined the seat and leaned his head against the headrest as he continued to look up at her window.

Ek Din ..Ek Din Teri Raahon

Baahoon Mein Panaahon Mein

Aungaa Khojaunga

Ek Din Tera Ho Jaunga

Yeh Dil To Na Keh Yeh Baatein

Dil To Na Keh Saka

Priya waited few minutes after she shut the light off then peeped out the window to make sure he wasn't standing there anymore before going to bed to lie down. She tried her best to relax but the fear of the nightmares and the ongoing tug of war in her heart kept her from closing her eyes to get badly needed sleep.

Next morning Priya woke up with gritty eyes and a slight headache. She had dosed off to sleep at intervals but kept waking up before she went into deep sleep. She freshened up then picked up her phone and walked towards the window.

Arjun sat up suddenly when his phone started ringing loudly; he looked around then picked up his phone when he saw Priya's name flash in the caller ID. "Good morning!" he said then stretched a bit to relax his stiff limbs.

He sighed when he heard the silence at the other hand and noted her hesitance. "What's wrong Priya?" He asked.

Priya strengthened her resolve and spoke with the confidence that she was far from feeling at the moment. "Nothing, I just wanted to see if you wanted to come up and freshen up and have breakfast before we head off to ETF."

"I will be right up," Arjun said as he grabbed his bag from the back seat and got out of the SUV.

Priya just shook her head then hung up the phone before heading to kitchen to start breakfast. She put the teakettle on the stove then went to open the front door for Arjun.

Arjun hadn't wasted any time in case she changed her mind about inviting him again so he arrived at the door just as she opened the door. He frowned when he saw the dark circles under her eyes and realized even knowing he was not too far she hadn't slept well. He hoped that this trip would help her relax and catch up on much needed rest.

Priya was not at all surprised to see the bag and his hand. He had always believed in being prepared for anything. She opened the door wider to let him then headed towards the kitchen. "You already know where the bathroom is so make yourself at home, come to the kitchen when you finish." She said to him as she walked away.

Thirty minutes later Arjun came into the kitchen just as Priya put his tea and breakfast on the table. Arjun smiled his appreciation and grabbed the tea. "Thanks so much for this, I really needed it." He said as he took a sip of the hot tea.

Priya gestured for him to sit. "You should have gone home last night." She said as she started eating.

Arjun ignored her and spooned the delicious smelling food. He sighed as soon as he tasted the food. "Your cooking always reminds me of my mom." He said without thinking.

Priya gave him a skeptical look, "I doubt I am that good of a cook."

"You will see when we go there." He said without looking up.

Priya's fingers tightened around the spoon when he mentioned going to his home. She needed to tell him her plans now before it's too late.

"Actually I was thinking about staying at my parent's house." She said quietly and kept looking down at her food.

Arjun's head snapped up and he looked at her with pain in his eyes but she wasn't looking at him. "Your parent's home?" He asked slowly.

Priya avoided looking at him. "Yeah, my parent's home. It's been in a trust since their death, I am thinking about putting it in another trust for orphanage. It's no use to me."

Arjun couldn't help but think that the house is just an excuse to avoid staying at his parent's home but nor could he call her on it since she doesn't know that he knows what had happened during the investigation.

Arjun pushed his plate away, "I see, and what will you tell Swati and Sam?" He asked as she stood up to clear the table.

Priya paused then shrugged. "Swati is a big girl Arjun and she understands that I need to do this. Besides Sam will be right beside her and this is her time to get to know your family and for your family to get to know her, after all this is the only in laws she will have."

"In other words you think you will be in the way of all those getting to know sessions?" Arjun asked as he picked up some dishes from the table to help her clean up.

Priya made a face at him. "I just think I don't need to be there to complicate things." She realized what she said and immediately corrected herself. "I mean it's best if she does this on her own."

"It isn't just about Sam and Swati's engagement Priya, there is a matter of you safety also." Arjun said getting annoyed by yet another wall she was trying to build between the two of them. "Sikandar could take advantage this."

"And that is another good reason for me to stay away from your family. At least I wouldn't have to worry about him hurting innocent lives." Priya said and thanked him silently for giving her another reason to stay away from his home.

Arjun's jaw's clenched in frustration at her selflessness. He wanted to put his fist thru the wall in defeat but he held back because he knew his anger wouldn't help the situation at all. If he pushed her more she will only push back much more. He hoped that Swati and Sam manages to knock some sense into Priya's hard head or else he will be spending lot nights in his car outside of her Delhi home.

At the ETF office Swati hopped on one foot to the next impatiently as she looked out the window and waited for Priya to arrive so she could share the news about her and Sam's marriage.

Sameer saw her fidget yet again and smiled in amusement at her excitement. "Relax Swati, Priya will be arriving soon."

Swati glared at him. "I wouldn't be so impatient if you had let me call her last night to tell her. I bet she will come in dressed in her work clothes too." She said as she perched herself on the armrest of Sameer's chair.

Sameer closed the file he was reading and pulled Swati on to his lap. "It wouldn't have been fun sharing the news with her over the phone." He nuzzled her neck to distract her.

Swati wrapped her arms around Sameer's neck and closed her eyes when she felt him kiss her pulse point lightly. She jumped from his lap when she realized he was distracting her and his office door was wide open.

She placed her hands on her hips and glared at him mockingly. "Sameer Rathore, shame on you. What if someone had come in unannounced?" Her lips twitched at his wink but she didn't give in and moved back to the window.

Arjun and Priya had just pulled in and soon as she saw Arjun's resigned and Priya's blank expression Swati knew something had happened between them.

"Uh..oh" she muttered under her breath. Sameer joined her at the window. "What happened?" He asked as he placed an arm around her.

"Looks like something has happened between the two of them, judging by the expressions on their faces." Swati said with sadness.

Sameer pecked her lightly on the forehead then turned her towards the door to wait for Arjun and Priya. "You know things won't be easy so why feel sad?"

Swati nodded but didn't give a reply to his question. As soon as Priya and Arjun arrived in Sameer's office Swati dragged Priya away from there.

Once in Priya's office, Swati came straight to the point. "Okay spill it, tell me what is going on between you and Arjun."

Priya rolled her eyes at Swati and headed towards her desk. "There is nothing going on between me and Arjun."

Swati placed her hands on her hips and glared at her best friend. "This is me you are talking to Priya, you can't hide anything from me. Now are you going to tell me or should I go ask him?" She waited for Priya to relent.

Priya bypassed her desk and headed for the lone window in her office. She sensed Swati's presence beside her so she started talking and told her best friend everything that had happened in the past few days.

*~+~*


Sorry I am stopping here, but I need to work on Priya and Swati's conversation. I will try to give a longer update next time.

Please forgive any errors, I didn't get another chance to proof read this.

😊
Edited by ll-Shilpa-ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey B1.. šŸ¤—

The song fits in just perfect.. Those lyrics convey their heart's innermost feelings; (esp. Tiger's).. You should do more of those! šŸ˜‰

Darn.. Those eyes.. It's the eyes behna.. Always.. No surprise there that even she fell prey to his dark eyes.. šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†

And 'khidkiwala love' at its best! Or maybe the best is yet to come.. Who knows.. šŸ˜› Yeah.. I admit.. I'm being greedy.. šŸ˜‰

Okay.. enough nonsense..
So, Priya Ji does realise that he isn't going to back off.. Her heart yearns for him but she cannot have him or rather, at this stage doesn't want to entertain his advances towards her..
But what she doesn't realise is that she's fighting the inevitable.. Anyhow.. Lets see..

My Tiger! ā¤ļø
He's a gem.. And Mr. Smarty Pants as well.. šŸ˜› I knew he'd guess it..
So, for now, he realises that she's hurt and is hiding something very crucial.. I trust him to get to the root of it very soon, but then she's the Tigress as well..
It won't be easy..

Hello.. excuse me.. knock knock..

'Another memory flashed in her mind, which immediately made her lower her lashes and break away from his gaze.'

What was that about?! 😲 Kuchh toh choot raha hai, B1.. šŸ˜‰

Okay.. so, morning after.. šŸ˜‰
Lol.. So he'd come prepared for a night out in the car.. How well does he know her, really! šŸ˜›
So, she does care.. And there begins the tug of war..

Her terse words must have definitely made bells ring in his head but ah well, he's tiger..


"Your cooking always reminds me of my mom."
Ahem.. Okay.. I'm ignoring it, for now.. šŸ˜›


And there she goes and starts building up a wall.. Of course, that is a pretense and she's using it wisely..

"In other words you think you will be in the way of all those getting to know sessions?"
Now that's quite like him..

"I just think I don't need to be there to complicate things."
Okay, now that is something he has to deal with, in his own way once they get there.. Coz obviously, it needs to be sorted out.. And only he can do it..

Tch tch Priya.. Really.. How selfless can she get..
But I'm glad he's there now to stand by her and Samjhofy her if and when needed.. And I think she's in for a good session, pretty soon..
By Tiger or our soon-to-be Mrs. Rathore, not sure.. šŸ˜›

Also, very happy that he's realised that she is pushing him away.. That realisation was a must, else he'd pull out his hair! Maybe the visit home and Swati's samjhofying session will just be the right push needed for things to fall in place.. And I'm soo looking forward to both!

(These women in out Hotwa's lives will drive him mad one day.. šŸ˜†)


He hoped that Swati and Sam manages to knock some sense into Priya's hard head or else he will be spending lot nights in his car outside of her Delhi home.

Bwahhaha.. This cracked me up hard.. Darn! So no more Khidki wala love?! 🄺

Aha.. now to the soon to be married couple.. They're cute, aren't they.. 😳

I bet she will come in dressed in her work clothes too."

Didn't quite catch that one.. So they're leaving right away, is it?! 😲 If yes, then (You know why!) šŸ˜‰

Sameer Rathore, shame on you. What if someone had come in unannounced?
Haha.. Poor Hotwa's really.. 🤪
Both their women are testing their patience and more.. šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†

"You know things won't be easy so why feel sad?" Swati nodded but didn't give a reply to his question.

Yupp.. good she didn't.. Coz sadly it is the truth.. But I guess the journey to them getting together is what BL is all about.. And hence, it has to be slow and subtle.. An unforgettable one.. 😳

Now now.. The assertive BFF.. This is why I love your Doc, amongst many other reasons..
She knows just when and how much to push Priya's right buttons..

Eagerly awaiting their conversation..

B1, this one was a short one.. But who's complaining! I loved every bit of it.. šŸ˜‰

Long way to go, until she relents, but I think for the time being, getting her to Delhi and staying put at his place is what matters.. And I hope, the doc, Sameer and Tiger are able to accomplish it..

Fantastic work yet again.. And I absolutely cannot wait to read more..

Please update this one asap.. Waiting, waiting and waiting..

Jai Ho Tiger.. 🄳 🤪



Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Conspiracy Aka Stalking queens šŸ˜›

Unres

Yeh bahut chotu wala update tha ...hamka aur chaiye šŸ˜›

Okies ...Firstky my fav part Sam- Sawti ...I just adore the couple

I could feel her excitement to share the news with her best friend ...and Sam ways to distract her...Hamra ETF cheif bana Romeo..

He is there to distract her and too support her too...I loved the fact thy Sawti didnt beat around the bush and came to the oint ..shows there friendship

Priya- Arjun -

hayee the window wala romance reminds me of old hindi Movies jahan hero heroine ek dsure ko chup chup kar dekhte the

Only the case is complicated here ...

Aap zara hotwa ko itne hot mat dikhaya karo...šŸ˜‰...Ankhiyon se gole mare yeh hotwa

There is so much he needs to know ..and so much she needs to let go..but isnt that the beauty ..that two scarred people will make the most perfect couple ever ...as thy have good
Heart...and the lady is so selfless

I am so eagerly awaiting delhi trip of there ..and yes Sikky to be there

Edited by sips_crazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ITS OK DEAR TAKE UR TYM BUT NEXT TYM UPDATE LONG
LOVED IT
AWESOME UPDATE
CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 12 years ago
A really good read. 😃. You can certainly hold the reader.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey! This was such a lovely update which focused on Riya and Arjun. I love how their relationship if I may call it so is moving forward though Riya is still reticent but you can feel her mellowing down. You always know how to captivate your readers and also leave them hanging at the end. I always find myself wanting to read more and more and see how you'd explore further their relationship. Eagerly awaiting your next update!

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