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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




read updates...

very interesting...

is it Geet the girl who is sending letters...Geet ke siwa aur kaun ho sakti hai because from her brother she can easily know where Maan lives... but according to u Geet is very sweet girl so I am confused...

waiting for next part...


is she sweet.. look like i mixed the story with another one..😆

next part me saaf ho jayega.. just wait for the update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
thanks for starting this and for finishing it...hopefully soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 3
nice part...
who is that person?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 4
nice...
oh wow the stalker is sending Maan letters here too...
who is she?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Maan se jyada to mai curious hoon ...ki ye bala hai
kaun...???😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 5


One day maan was in market when he saw some boys teasing a girl. The girl was looking familiar to him. The girl was engrossed in her bag trying to find something completely ignoring the boys. Maan went ahead and recognised the girl. She was geet, armaan's younger sister. He was furious thus went ahead and beat those guys. When he looked at Geet with the expectation of a terrified geet, he was surprised to see a angry and face making geet. He has hardly interacted with geet in those days. As a matter of fact he has hardly interacted with any girl in his vicinity because of those letters. They were driving him mad. He was falling for the girl whoever writing those letters. He can guess that the girl is a big time chatter box and also a fun loving girl. Sometimes it was hard to understand what he was feeling after reading those letters. May be because he was lonely and trying to find solace in those letters.

He accompanied an agry Geet to her house. When he was entering Geet came before him and folded her hands.

He raised his eyebrows.

She simply said u r not invited.

He got a shock. This is the first time they were interacting. He couldn't comprehend. She just stomped her foot and went inside. He followed and asked the reason for her anger.

Why did u come in between. I was not running away. I was searching for my weapon to teach them a gud lesson.

What weapon maan asked after recovering from the shock.

My pen.

WHAT!!!!!!

Do u wanna see a promo urself???

You ruined everything otherwise they all would have been in hospital by this time. U didn't even let me slap them. It was my fantasy to slap one guy atleast in my life and this was the perfect opportunity but u just ruined it.

Aapne unhe saste me chod diya. Saying this geet went inside leaving a shocked maan behind.

After recovering from this filmy shock, he just lie down on sofa without looking at it. He felt some books under him. He was putting those books on table when he noticed the writing on the books. Why god was after him by shocks after shocks. It was the same writing.

Geet come with a cup of tea for him and saw him looking at the book. She immediately knew that He has recognised the writing. She just took a deep breath. She knew that she has lot to explain. The day was ruined now first she shouted on him for very idiotic issue. She didn't even thank him. And now this. She was preparing herself to confront him but now it is looking worse. She didn't know where to start.

Maan looked at her. What the hell was that. It was her, Armaan's sister, who was writing those letters.

Geet made some pitiable faces loking at his angry face.

Explain.

Wo wo wo wo ...

EXPLAIN. No wo wo wo geet just tell me what is it.

First promise u will listen me completely and then will think and won't interrupt me..

What nonsense.

Promise otherwise i won't sat anything

Maan was very angry now. He just wanted to strangle her for making this mess.

FINE I PROMISE. NOW SPEAK.

You know. No u don't know how will u know.

GEEET just stop talking non sense and come to the point.

I'm trying please be calm. Otherwise i won't be able to say anything.

Maan looked at her angrily.

Armaan bhai always wanted me to be a doctor. I hated biology but still just for bhaii tried. I joined coaching classes for preparation. Then you came. Now biology class was my favourite. It was more of a drooling class. We all girls were latoo on you. When we discussed it with one of my friend's sister she told us about you. One of her friend was there in your first batch. She was the one who gave you ur first love letter.

We also started planning to write. She warned us about it and also told ur method to catch the culprits. I wrote first letter and put it in your book. U started ur methods. But as we knew it already, none of us wrote name on our papers. So your plan failed.

Till then it was just for fun but when u changed the batch, the disappointment i felt was not about losing a gud teacher. It was more. I keep writing to you. But now they were written from my heart.

Then came red alert when i got to know that u were my brother's bestie cum roommate. I tried to stop writing the letters. But till then i had lost control on my feelings. That prank or fun was changed. I thought it to be infatuation but when i came back for my Bachelors studies in Bhopal i realised that it was love and it is love. I kept writing those letters. And now I'm madly in love with u.

She ended her part with her confession.

Maan was flabbergasted. He didn't know what to say.

Now say something. Geet urged.

What

What what. Say what is in ur heart.

There is nothing.

Oh REALLY. That's why u have kept those letter securely in a file.

Maan looked at her.

I saw u putting them in file. Now say something.

Maan just looked at her angrily and left from there. It was so difficult for him to say or to even think about this.

That girl for whom he was falling was his best friend's sister. He felt cold when he thought about Armaan's Reaction about this. What will armaan do. Will he be angry or happy. Why he was having a bad feeling about it.

Geet reached his house just after 5 minutes and start cribbing about wasting her tea. When she didn't get any reaction, she went and sat beside maan and kept her head on maan's shoulder. She used to do it with her brothers whenever she wanted anything kind of emotional blackmail it used to be.

Maan started getting up.

Don't leave maan please. I love u. I really love u. Please don't reject me.

Please geet leave me alone right now.

No

Why are you not understanding geet. I have not even sorted out my feelings. And Armaan. He will never accept it. You are going to make our friendship more complicated. Please go away right now.

No i won't. Everyone got their love- Abhi bhai, Armaan bhai. Then why can't I.

Don't be stubborn leave. Just leave.

Trust me maan please give me one chance. I really love u. I will persuade Armaan bhai. He has never denied me anything. I can't live without u maan. Please.

No. I don't even know you. We both can control our feelings at this stage. We will be over soon.

You are mocking at my feelings. Ohk let's make a deal. Give our relationship one month. If in the end u don't fall for me, i'll stop writing the letters. But u do then u won't back out.

Geet, listen.

Give me just one month maan. Please just one month.

Maan looked at her.

Just one month. I promise i won't trouble you much.

Fine just one month and after that you will stop writing the letters.

Dust danav

What.

Or nahi to kya. "stop writing". Why. Geet mallik never fails.

Get ready to loose your heart Maan Singh Khurana.

She winked at him and left from there.



This is it. I know u people will be thinking why this girl is writing when she can't write.

But then i'm little mad..

Thank you for reading my story. Cudn't update. Was damn busy. Will try to be regular.

Note at next page..

Edited by mannubhardwaj - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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And who want PMs please like this post..

I have 86 friends in my list. and many of them are star writers. so i can't PM from my buddy list.

last thing but most important
thank u so much guys for liking my story..
Thank u Thank u..🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 5
nice...
so he has come to know its Geet...
but her cribbing was funny...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely story
loved it
geet is really awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 6

It's been nearly 2 and half years since that day..

Geet made so many efforts to impress him like cooking special dishes whenever he came for lunch or dinner. Running around him. Giving hint to her brother so that this news won't shock him. Helping him to buy gifts for Annie.

It was not like that he was immune to all this. He was just in shock and when that shock was over, he had lost his heart and soul to the girl who wrote those letters and now taking every damn effort to pataofy him. But every time Armaan came in front of him, he felt guilty. He decided to talk to Armaan. He really didn't want to loose Geet. All his life, he has cared for others it was first time someone was caring for him. He really wanted Geet in his life.

After his decision to tell Armaan about his feeling for Geet, he went to their home. Geet was alone there. She had that broad infectious smile on her face.

He just looked in her eyes and simply said "I love u, Geet". she hugged me with all her energy. And then main gate opened. It was Armaan and Ridhimaa. I didn't know how to react. I just stood there. Not doing anything and then i was on floor. Armaan was furious seeing him hugging his sister.

"GET OUT. GET OUT OF HERE BEFORE I LOSE CONTROL. GET LOST, MAAN"

He went away. He couldn't say or do anything. He shifted to Pondicherry pursuing his research engrossed too much in work. he was working working and working mainly o divert his mind from their last meeting. When she got to know that he was leaving, she came to stop him at railway station. She even asked him to take her away with him. He didn't. He couldn't. He cudn't betray his friendship with Armaan. Armaan took promise from him to stay away from Geet next day when Maan went to meet him in his clinic.

He just left. Left every thing. His love, his soul, his friends, his smile, his life. He used to receive letter from Annie once in a month. He hardly wrote back. She was happy with Arjun and her job. Finally last month he received Geet's wedding card. She was getting married. This thought killed him thounsands time. He was a failure a big one as a brother, as a friend and now as a lover.

Today was her marriage. She will be someone else's now.

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It's been three weeks since Geet's wedding. His meals and sleep reduced to minimal. He has lost so much weight. Big dark circle under his eyes were making many persons worried in his hospital. He got a telegram yesterday to arrange two guest houses. Annie- Arjun and prem and heer were coming for vacations. It was first time someone was coming to meet him here. They were to reach today. He couldn't go due to an important case so sent his butler to pick them from station.

He came back at 10 in night. He has bought chocolate for Annie. He really wanted to pamper his little sister whom he has completely ignored since last 30 months. The realization came when he was buying groceries for kitchen. It hit him badly. How could he do that. He has loved Annie as a daughter. And here he ignored her, didn't even replied.

He was feeling very depressed with whole situation. He knocked the door of his apartment and waited for Annie to open it and then to knock out his breath with her tight hug. He smiled imagining that scene. But he got another big shock that really knocked him out of his breath.

"GEET"...

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