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Kamala

@Kamala05

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

It is really brilliant piece of work.

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dprover

@dprover

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

made me cry, beatifully written

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reshkn

@reshkn

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

wonderful...

kushi's agony ,her refusal of reality...brilliantly written..👏

i broke down each time she called out for Arnav...😭

and finally finding the strength to let go... beautifully portrayed..

the intensity of the os...you just nailed it

i loved every bit of it...

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esk1990

@esk1990

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

y du u hav to make me cry..?? i luk lik a cartoon character girl now... my eyes brimming wid tears that threaten to spill over... it was so beutiful but i wont say i lik it coz i love my happily ever afters..

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cupcake1234

@cupcake1234

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

This is such a heart wrenching OS.

I was in tears while reading this.

The void Arnav had left in Kushi's heart , her pain and finally her letting it all out was all beautifully penned!

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Shraya Biswas

@ShrayaBiswas

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Why do you have to be so heartless to kill Arnav? :'(
but all in all, great os!
Reading how Khushi was suffering was unbearable! It was heart-wrenching!

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

I loved it. I often wondered if they had gone ahead with Arnav's death and continued the show his Khushi would grieve. Thanks for this beautiful insight!

However, I am glad it never happened!