SwaRon OS : A Walk To Remember!

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hey guys, back with another os :D u guys must be thinking im mad but god knows what has got inside me, i love writing OS these days though i know they arent upto the mark . anyways coming back to the OS, looking at the title dont make assumptions. as swayam says " assumptions is the mother of all goof up" . Lol, on a serious note this is not at all related to the book " A Walk to remember " by Nicholas Sparks. its totally different. that book has its own beauty and i can't even do 1% justice. that book is beyond perfection. anyways too much of her books publicity done i guess :P . this title actually fitted in the story perfectly so just used it . and obviously my undying love for the book as well :P so now time for my OS. just something based on the current track bot exactly but yes , partially. basically the day Sharon comes back. and now to know further read my story...
new readers, SPEAKERS ON and old readers, u know what to do, right? :P





SwaRon OS : A Walk To Remember


"Love is always patient and kind. It is never jealous. Love is never boastful or conceited. It is never rude or selfish. It does not take offense and is not resentful. Love takes no pleasure in other people's sins, but delights in the truth. It is always ready to excuse, to trust, to hope, and to endure whatever comes."
- Nicholas Sparks, A Walk To Remember


The classes were almost over and everyone was planning to go back home. It was the wintery weather and everyone wanted to reach home as soon as possible. No one would like to face the over chilled weather at night. While everyone were saying bye to each other, he pulled me out of everyone into another classroom

" kya kar raho ho Swayam, agar hum pakde jaate"

" tab ka tab dekhte. But today I wanna drop you home"

" Swayam ill go by myself"

" no I want to drop you home today. Ive not met you since 10 days and now when im trying to spend some quality time with you, you are ignoring me." He said with a pout on his face

" okay fine, gussa mat ho. Ill come with you "

" yeahh that's like my girl. chalo"

" wait, let everyone go first and then we can leave"

He came closer to me. Barely inches apart. I could feel his breath. He slightly bent and whispered in my ear

" ure wish is my command"

He kept coming closer and closer when

" Swayam I think sab chale gaye"

A blush suddenly crept on to my cheeks. Not being able to control it I ran out of the classroom towards the parking lot.

" Swayam where is ure cycle? Dikh nahin rahi" I said when I saw him coming behind me

" Sharon the diva wants to ride a cycle. Surprising. There is the car. I never knew Sharon loved cycle rides so much varna I would be more than happy to have a cycle"

I went and sat in the car. He came back started the car and we left the college. He switched on his collection of some beautiful romantic songs but they were just making me feel more and more drowsy.

" Swayam these songs are boring. Put some fast rock songs"

When Swayam was just about to change the channel the car suddenly came to a halt.

" What happened?"

" I don't know. Let me check"

I saw him walking towards the car bonnet through my glass. He tried putting water and tightening some wires but by his expression it looked as if none of them worked. I went out of the car next to him.

" The cars not working."

" Toh ab?"

" Toh ab kuch nahin"

"What do you mean kuch nahin? Kuch toh karna padega. "

" I don't think getting an auto in this abandoned road is possible. Lets just walk further, we may find one on the way "

" By the way this is not the route I take everyday"

" haan , lamba route liya to spend more time with you"

We started walking. It was almost 10 minutes since we were walking and still neither a taxi nor an auto went across us. Even a rickshaw would do today but seems like today is my bad luck. The chilly wind was like adding fuel to the fire. The biting cold wind blew across my skin-sending shiver down me. I started rubbing my arms while walking, which Swayam did notice. He took out his jacket and like a true gentleman put it on me. I just held on to his arm and continued walking. It had been I guess another kilometer we had walked and still no vehicle to be found. Extremely tired and famished I sat down on the middle of the road.

" Swayam I can't walk anymore. My legs have given up"

" Come on. I guess just another 15 minutes and we will reach ure house"

" Swayam I can't walk anymore"

Okk wait. He came closer to me. He gently picked me up and made me comfortable in his arms and he starts walking

" Swayam tum thak jaoge"

" tumhare saath kabhi nahin"

He continues walking while I stare at him. At his perfect face, his beautifully carved lips, his expressive eyes, his angelic smile , his soft little hair everything. Suddenly he lifts me and holds me tighter to get a better grip I guess. I just bury me head inside his chest and throw my arms around his neck. He brings me closer to his face and nuzzles my nose. He then places a small little peck on my cheek. I jus dig my face again into his chest and he continues walking

" Swayam I think I will be fine now, I can walk"

" Are you sure?"

" yaa"

He carefully places me down and I clench him by his arm. Resting my head on his shoulder we continue to walk when he see an auto parked at the corner of the road. We move there and see the owner lying down listening to music. It was an awkward scene for me. Swayam asks him to drop us to my place to which he agrees at the cost of taking extra money. Not left with an option we sit inside. This was actually the 1st time I was sitting inside a rickshaw. He started cycling and the wind blew across our faces. Both of us took out our faces feeling the pure blissful wind. I closed my eyes and the moment just seemed perfect. Swayam just put his one arm around my waist and pulled me closer. When he was not even an inch away, he gently placed a kiss behind my ear nibbling it softly. We both just close our eyes in anticipation feeling that beautifull moment. Suddenly we hear the rickshaw guy say we have reached.

We both get down and he leaves.

" Swayam you can take my car home and then you can pick me up tomorrow morning. While coming back I will drop you."

" Sounds cool"

" So I think ill leave then, byee "

I turn to leave when

" Aren't you forgetting something? Where is my good night kiss"? he aks with a small little glint on his face

" None for today"

I just walk inside my house with a smile on my face imagining his gloomy face. I go up to my room. Take a piece of paper and write

" ill cherish this moment all my life. Luv u <3

-Sharon"

I put on a red colored lipstick and place a kiss on the side on the paper. I go to my balcony and still see him standing there. I just throw the paper downstairs. I wait till he opens it and the gloominess suddenly fades away. He places a soft little kiss again on the on the one I had. Feeling too shy I turn around and the next moment I turn back he was gone. Suddenly my phone beeps. I open the text message and see his name

" I love you too baby. Good night <3"

This had to be one of my very special days.


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So guys how was it? Good? Bad? do let me know. ure comments mean alot to me. will surely reply to each :) and yes please do like and comment :)

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and guys do let me know if you can hear the bg music or not! because i suppose in my last 1 noone could. it would be of a great help


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Posted: 12 years ago
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now you guys can reserve :)
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Beautiful OS dear..loved it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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simple n beautiful os..
loved it..
keep writing more on swaron :)
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Awesome OS vodka 🤗

It was romantic and lovely os 😳
beautifully penned down...great job 👍🏼
loved it ❤️
Edited by swaron_pk - 12 years ago
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❤️
TOTALLY
AWESOME 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waooo veryy nic os loved ut last scean is superb
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awesome os
very romantic and cute
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Omg it was supercute..
Loved it
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Beautiful
Love the concept
Thanks for the pm :)

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