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ItsPearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: ...Ashley
Hey update soon , I just read it in one go ...
So Awesome ! Mind blowing , the way you have describe their mixture of pain , anxiety and something called 'Love ' .

You are amazing writer and I know that you may know that but I just felt like saying this .

Can you pm me ? I have sent you a buddy request ! 😊

P.S Are you the same pearl of Myed ? Just curious !

Aww... Thank you so much, dear! Welcome aboard!

Well, the compliments look too much to take at a time for me, especially I"m not working at FanFictions at my peak - but you know what - it just feels awesome to read them! Thank you once again! I'm so glad you liked this story...

I'd definitely PM you for the future chapters. I just hope I would live up to the image you have of this story with the next parts.

And umm... No... I'm not the Pearl of Myed. I have no clue what that is!!! :P

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: Sana_malik
Yayy me first!!

Wow this was an amazing chapter! I loved Arnav's helplesness when he found out khushi has been living in such bad conditions. I feel he always took her for granted in the show so reading this is refreshing 😃
looking forward to next chapter

Aww... Thank you for this sweet comment, dear...

Yeah, I feel Khushi was taken granted for a lot of things and it would have been awesome if we had a few closures in the original plots. I craved redemption since long, so I thought I'd give this a shot!

I hope you like the next one as well...

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: koisk
Amazing updates, read all of them in one go, I am interested in reading your future chapters, can you pm me please?

Certainly, I'd love to PM you, only if you are interested in actually reading and commenting the updates. I won't sing the boring song about how difficult it is to PM so many readers, but you get the point, right?

I am glad you liked the story! Thank you!!!

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: dumas
intense update he found where she was but she was long gone she stayed in that stinky room so she can sheesh mahal so sad she is back at where they started please let her be ok arnav anger is well describe the guilt the hurt the pain you can feel it loved the update amazing

That's one of my favourite snaps of Barun! Awww...

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the update!

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: samaz95
Loved the amazing:)
Hope all is well with you now!(:

Thank you, dear!

Yep, I'm good now. The weather has stabilized and so have I!

I hope you enjoy the next chapters as well...

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kiran deep kaur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

read ol 3 chapters

amazing

superb superb superb

loved it

waiting for next part

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: -MeraBarun-
amazing story

so beautifully written.
I loved the last chapter the most. The way Arnav reacted when he found out the condition of the place Khushi lived. very well written.

I hope Khushi is fine.

Waiting for the next part now.

Awww... Thank you!!!

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ItsPearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

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dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: -.Pearl.-

Arnav equals impulsive. Somehow. But most of the times. I guess he always pretended to be stronger than everyone else around him and screw up when it really mattered. The display of strength just flew out of the window every single time he needed to act and he lost many things then and there. Right?

And umm... I guess you can take some more pain, ehh???? :P :P :P 'Cause there is some more on the way!

You have stated the truth! Hail thee.

YES!!! Bring more pain!!! I Love pain!!

*this is getting creepy now.*

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dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 12 years ago

#190

CRAZY!!! BAT SHIT CRAZY MAN!!

pardon my language.

*exhales*

Like earlier i said, impulsion is what kicks Arnav in the gut and makes him act, it is exactly what happened here. What clicked in the first stance is that she wanted her mother with her yet Arnav being Arnav looked around and grabbed the Payal that seemed to him was the one but it took him a while to dig in deep.

I love how you jotted that down.

His breakdown and realization were quite natural and I love the portrayal.

The emotions seem all tangled up and even the flow of energy between them is quite strong. Wonderfully written.