Finally Found You- Kriyansh OS *HBD Vaishu*

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Heyo peeps..

Its vaishali's birthday ... yes your very own KR writer --vaish-- 😃

Actually.. her bday is over.. & i'm making this thread pretty late 😳

well.. my net is the culprit ... believe me vaishu 😭

so... jis jis ne bhi usse wish nhi kiya .. ab kar do.. she'll be more happy 😆



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Happiness, Joy and Prosperity
Happy life, good health and peace
All these are my wish for you on your birthday
May you get all these, you deserve it..

happy birthday vaishu babyy 🤗





love you dher saara..

you are one of my bestesttt frnd here.. my kuchi kuchi ku..

obviously aur kisse itni bakbak karti hun 😛

my sweet lil chatterbox.. I love the way u care for me.. when i'm sad ...😊

& I love to irritate you with d3 talks.. even if u don't wanna listen.. its fun 😆

& so sweet of you.. that u did'nt demand any gift .. but i'm here to pakaofy you 😆

that too... so so late.. kill my net 😭

well its already dead 🤢

so.. here u go.. hope u like it... 😃




now u know... why I was asking you about ur favourite scene 😉😆


well.. next 1 is my favourite picture.. so you are bound to get it as ur gift.. u know very well.. i love to torture you 😆



If this thread is late... its just bcoz of these edits.. & me ofcourse.. itni late jo banayi 😳

..



~~Deepika di's wishes~~


Hey swthrt...
Happy birthday.
May god bless u and all ur dreams come true...

we dont know each other from long time...

i knew u as an excellent Kr writer since long time...

but we started interacting finally thanks to the challege thread. ...

u r one cutee kid...(u can pull ur cheeks on my behalf)...

i love interacting with u...be it about our obssession towards writing or other fun stuff...be d same always...cute. ..adorable and straight forward...

Much love...stay blessed

ur deep babu ❤️




----Scroll down to read - Kriyaansh OS----

(yes vaishu, you have to read it.. besides knowing my writing skills.. u still have to go through this torture.. its last.. i promise 🤣 )

Edited by yogini64 - 12 years ago
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*Read at your own risk* 😆

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Finally Found You - Kriyaansh OS



Standing by the beautiful lake, Kriya inhaled the familiar air to revive her old memories...

Dehradoon, a place where She was born & spent all her childhood was so close to her heart...

She was back there after a decade, & not alone,, with her husband, Rey...

He planned it itself, as their honeymoon destination & she was more than obliged to see, he values her happiness... From all the glorious cities of the world, he choose her hometown...

She turned back to see him smiling at her, she smiled back & hugged her gently with her head on his chest & he hold her protectively, kissing her hair...

***


Their marriage was arranged by their parents & they were happy with their match...

Kriya was a simple yet beautiful girl, her family values were everything for her, she was calm n composed & happily working in corporate world... She controlled herself, to not to fall in love with anyone... Maybe she restricted her heart...

Rey was a fun loving, handsome guy.. Any girl would be happy to have him... He used to flirt a little but he didnt go on dates with anyone...

"Hii.. I'm reyaansh singhaniya"

she looked up alarmed to see him flashing his charming smile.. trying to find something in his eyes...

"and whats your name?" he asked, as he didnt get the answer at first...

She sighed a little.. Smiled at her imaginary thoughts..

"Kriya ghai"

"Beautiful name"

"Thanx" she smiled...


His smile widened, girls like compliments & he managed to do it every time to see the beautiful blush & her smile which reached her eyes... He knew it was genuine & she actually enjoyed every time he joked...

She was a shy girl, but she never enjoyed this much talking with a stranger & never really laughed in a decade... Except when she was with 'him', whom she missed, every time...

"I really like you, Its yes from my side.." he stated at last...

She was shocked,, he decided in just 1 meeting, its not that she didnt liked him but she needed time to think, to know him well...

He was the 1st guy, she was meeting for marriage..
& she knew, she is the 1st girl for him as well...

"Are u sure?
I'm sorry . . . . I mean-- I guess I need time, we should meet one more time..." she said it as politely as she could but she fumbled with words due to nervousness...

He smiled & leaned a bit forward...

Her heartbeats fastened in anticipation of unknown fear...

"I just told you my decision; you are free to decide what you'd like...
Take as much as time to think..
But, my answer will remain same" he said lovingly, looking straight in her eyes..


She stared back in his eyes, they were confident & full of love, no signs of uncertainty...

But still. . She needed time...

After 2 more meetings, she agreed to marry him... She couldnt find any flaws in him, he was just perfect.. In fact too perfect for her..
But she was happy with their wedding...

By the time they got married, she had fallen in love with rey... He pampered her a lot... Making her proud on her decision...

He proved to be the most loving husband as well... He kissed her, cuddled with her, but never forced upon her..


***

It was 3rd day of their honeymoon, she found him in balcony...

"yahan kya kar rahe ho?
Mujhse chhup rahe they?" hugging him from back, she asked giggling...

He smiled, pulled her gently in front, kissed her forehead...

"kriya, I need to tell you something.."

He looked somewhat nervous, never ever she saw him like this...

"Ok . . Lets get seated inside... Tumhe itni thand ki aadat nhi hogi" she said jokingly to lighten his mood...


A faint smile appeared on his face..

'Kriya, its time.. I should tell u everything..'

Pulling him on the comfy couch beside her, she holds his hands lovingly & gestured him to speak...

He was happy to get her care, but was unsure to tell her what he intended too... Will she love him the same way, like she does now?


It wasnt a big thing, but she may get hurt or get happy . . . He didnt know...

"Kriya.. Have you ever loved someone before?"

She was pretty aghast..
She was running away from this question from so long...
She knew, she cared a lot about her old 'friend' ... But she never knew whether she loved him or not... She didnt knew, what is love till then? After all, no other guy had ever been friends with her... So, it was pretty natural for her to crash her brains over that...
Yes! She loved 'him' as a friend, good friend.. Thats it!!

"NO!" she stated coldly..

He smiled knowingly...

"But I do.."

she shot up her eyes to look at him... He was calm.. How could he say that now.. When they're married.. & why are they discussing it now? Whats wrong with him?

"What? And you are telling me now?" she was angry, but still tried to sound calm...

"Then why didnt you get married to her? & why didnt you tell me before?" she was restless now... Her fairytale seemed to have got evil traces now..

"Before I could tell her.. She was gone" he answered calmly..

"Who is she?" her face was burning with anger...
She shivered with the thought of loosing him, knowing he love someone else...
Why is this happening to her?
Didnt she deserve her share of happiness ever...


He cupped her face & looked in her eyes before replying.. "You"


What? Did she hear him right?


"Rey.. I'm angry..
It doesnt mean, you should stop this convo...
Tell me... NOW!!"


"Kriya.. I'm reyaansh.. Don't tell me, you forgot your old 'friend'"


He can't be 'him'..
Its impossible...

Tears made its way out of her pretty eyes...

He tried to wipe, but she jerked his hands away, & got up with jolt..

"Enough of this drama,, just because you share the same name of my friend... Doesnt gives you the permission to mock at me.."


she had told rey about his old friend from 10th standard who had the same name, as she missed him a lot & couldnt hide it from her soul mate..

But why he was hurting her this way, she couldnt understand...


He got up, & hold her shoulders gently- "Because, I missed you Love, my chashmish!!"


she went numb with his each word.. He used to address her with the same names- 'Love' & 'chashmish'


When she came in her senses, she saw tears in his chocolate brown orbs... Yes, same eyes, he had same eyes..


He just transformed from a cute boy to a mature handsome hunk..
How could she doesnt recognize him...
Yes she was suspicious when she first met him, but 10 years are enough to change a personality...


"I missed you & loved you from past 10 years" she heard him say..


She felt herself drowning in the memory lane...


***


continued below..

Edited by yogini64 - 12 years ago
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Continued..


Kriya topped her 9th STD exams & happily started new session...

She was a sweet n studious girl & her getup was quite simple...
Hairs tied in pony, sleek spectacles & neatly tucked uniform... She was always a disciplined & obedient student..
Unlike other girls, whose Barbie looks seemed alien to her thoughts..

No wonder, no guy would ever befriend her... Some of them talk with her just at the time of exams or asking notes... Otherwise they were busy flirting with other chicks..


A few days later, rey joined her school.. He was unbelievably the smartest guy of the whole school... Girls would drool over him & guys would burn in jealousy...


He was well aware of his charms & he used it very well... He was a big flirt & girls would feel pleased to get his attention...

But kriya never paid any attention to him...

Once, he was made to sit with kriya in the maths lecture, as he was new & didnt score well in tests...

"Hii, I'm reyaansh" he said flashing his million dollar smile...

"Hi, Im kriya" she said with a genuine smile..

"Oh.. So you are the topper" he said keeping his elbow on bench & his head on his palm, never loosing the eye contact...

Generally, other students used to say it on mocking purpose, like it is a fun in calling her a nerd.. But he was appreciating her talent.. She could see that..


"Ya" she said slowly...


"Great then! I'll learn the whole maths today itself"

She had to laugh..


"Arre... This old teacher know nothing,, he didnt bother to tell me my mistakes.. Just scolded me & told me to sit with you, & learn something from you.. As if you'll teach me from now on" he said with a pout..


He looked so cute with those hopeful eyes...


Well.. It was a record; no guy could talk to her for so long...
And here, he looked so interesting... She never knew he would be so frank...


"nice talking you babes... See u later" he flashed his teeths again & went away after the bell rang...


Maybe it was just for a lecture, & he couldnt stop talking... He must be a chatterbox.. Well, He is.. She chuckled inwardly...


But her perception turned wrong, when he started showing his presence to her.. He would meet her daily, wave a hii, always finds time to talk with her..


He may be termed as cassinova by all; he used to flirt around...
Even with her, but she never mind it.. He wasnt nasty in anyway... He was very friendly...


As time passed, they grew close, became very good friends... Even if she wasnt good in love matters, still he would seek her help.. & advices in other matters too...
He would change girlfriends every week.. 'Idiot'
Just for time pass, neither he would be serious nor would he take any advantage of them...


She was happy to chat with him at night daily.. He had brought a lot of changes in her...


Whenever she was sad, he would call her 'love',, not that she bothered, she knew it was friendly...

& when she was happy, he would call her 'chashmish' to irritate her... But she really enjoyed these friendly banters with him...
She never had any friends who would make her feel special, like he do..

...

"hey chashmish... Do you think pari would like to be my gf"

for some unknown reason, her heart sank.. pari was her friend, but she didn't want them to get together...

"Dont know"

"Ok.. Why don't you ask her on my behalf? *wink*"

thats what she hated to do, still she replied..
"Ohk, Ill do that"


"Aww . . Chashmish, I love you buddy"

Those words worked like knives on her heart.. He shouldnt say that if he's asking her to set him a gf... :(


"Feeling sleepy.. Good night"

"Good night love :)"

Thats it.. She put her phone on silent & tried to sleep . . To wash out the new feelings developing in her heart..haunting her...



Next day, she asked pari,, she happily agreed & hugged her tight.. 'Like she would say no.. Duh'


She knew it won't last long of course... But she wanted him to stop doing this weekly time pass..
Reasons- unknown ?? :(

...



Finally, their session was over & the whole class set a party after the exams...

She didnt know her happy mood would be ruined forever...
He announced that his father got a transfer again & they would be shifting very soon...


This means he won't be there. . With her.. Just like 1 year before...


Everyone bid him farewell with moist eyes, but she didnt cried...

He bid his goodbyes to everyone & at last came to her...
He could see- how sad she was...


Hugging her tightly, he said- "I'll miss you chashmish, don't forget me.. Plz"


He pulled back, looked at her for a moment, she nodded.. & he kissed on her cheek, making her shut her eyes...


Without saying a word, he left the place, left her alone...


Once, she was back home.. She cried her heart out... He won't be back.. They would never meet again...

She used to miss him a lot... He was more than a good friend... But she couldnt name their bond... She was just so depressed & so confused..

Some days later, she got to know that her father got promotion & they would be leaving soon...


She mentally prepared herself for a new life... At least that would help her get out of his thoughts...

As time passed by, she recovered & occupied herself in studies, but still she missed him daily..


******


She had shed a pool of tears by now & looked towards her husband, her old good friend, reyaansh who was in same condition..

He continued "When we shifted to our new home.. I felt something missing.. Missing in my life.. My happiness was gone.. I missed you all.. It would happen with me every time we used to shift... But that time, it was different.. Joining new school even didnt help... I would miss the old aura, I would miss you... I lost my all contacts, so I couldnt talk to you ever... I even went to our school once, just to meet you, but got to know that you also shifted..."

She shut her eyes.. Wishing she could be there...

"My heart broke.. I used to recall our memories & finally realized that I was in love with you... & this time It was serious" he said confidently, smiling..

She twitched her lips in pain & pulled him in a desperate hug... Not letting him go...


He pulled apart after sometime & kissed her forehead...


"I had a belief that if my love is true n strong, I'll definitely find you.."


"How did you search me then?"


"Well.. Thanks to universeji that we both landed in same profession.. & by chance in the same city.. & who don't know about the efficient manager of XYZ company- kriya ghai... Thats it.. I got my first clue.. Then I started my investigation & got my facts right & clear..*wink*" he said proudly..

She stared at him unbelievably...

"Why didnt u tell me all this before??" she was confused now..


He holds her hands, brought her knuckles to his lips & kissed them...


"You are too precious to lose again.. I couldnt afford it.. I wasn't sure that you would say yes to me, knowing my old playboy image.. I feel even guilty for hiding all this till now.. So I decided to disclose the truth now" he said sadly..

She didnt know, how to react... Whole life, she thought.. She lost him forever, she had lost hopes...

But never ever she thought... She'll get everything without wishing anymore...

Now, everything seemed clear to her... That why he was ready to marry her on 1st meeting itself..

She cupped his face & kissed his eyes...

"No need to feel guilty... I can see your love this way.. In fact I missed u a lot, life was lonely without you, but I couldnt call it love.. You know I wasnt good at it" she replied slowly...

He chuckled lightly..

"by the way, I never dated any girl after that... I just couldn't get over your thoughts..." he winked..

Her mouth opened in shock,, knowing his stupid pass times,, she couldnt imagine him falling head over heels for her, being so committed with her, even if she was not there...

He closed her mouth with his finger & laughed at her state...
She too joined later on...

And he pulled her close,, their foreheads touching & they were still laughing...
They slowed down & shared an eye lock; slowly their lips reduced the difference & captured each others in an unsaid promise & closed their eyes to relish the moment...



As things heated up so well, their desires grew wild... He pulled her closer till their every body part was in contact with others.

He was caressing her cheeks with one hand, while the other hand entered beneath her top feeling her soft n smooth skin on her waist...

While her hands roamed on his back & other massaging his hairs..
And their lips moved in synchronization passionately...


After what felt like an eternity, they pulled apart panting... He could saw the desire in her eyes.. He didn't need any reassurance.. Finally it was the time..


Without wasting any second.. He crashed his lips on hers once again &pulled her legs up, wrapped them around his waist & paced towards bed...


He put them down on bed gently, in the same position & pulled apart... Tracing her face with small kisses, he went down her chin; bit on her throat lightly making her moan while his skilled hands undressed her slowly...


She was in frenzy, feeling loved, feeling special... The way she never felt before.. Whatever he was doing to her, she couldnt put in words...

She felt him caressing her curves, kissing them lovingly for long & toying with her belly button... While his hands caressed her thighs...

She couldnt take it anymore... She pulled him up, kissed him hardly, bit his lip & ripped open his shirt, started giving love bites her share of torture...

He never knew that his soft n sweet kriya would be a sexy wild tigress in bed...
He let her do her work till she gets exhausted...


After sometime, He rolled around & made love to her for the first time...

...

laying beside her, he pulled her in his arms & covered them with sheets while she nuzzled closer & dug her face in his crook of his neck...


***

As the sunlight made its way in room, her eyes flew open...

Its the best morning ever in her life, she rose above & kissed his cheek...

He smiled & wrapped his arms around her- "good morning, my love"
Making her blush even more...

"kriya.. Lets go somewhere special.."

"Special.. Umm.. I know there's a valley .. 1 hr drive from here & ..."

"No.." rey cut her in between...

She looked at him with eyebrows up...


"Nothing can be more special than where we met first time, where we talked first time... Right?
Aaj apne school chalein?"

she couldnt imagine better place than that... He was the sweetest guy indeed.. He values those small lil things...

"Yes... I would love to cherish our first time memories" with that, she threw her arms around his neck & closed her eyes feeling all the happiness of world...

Life couldnt get any better...


~~THE END~~



Edited by yogini64 - 12 years ago
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Res :-D . . .
Unres :-D . . . .
HAPPY BIRTHDAY VAISHU DI. .
And yogini di,
superb OS. . .
Beautifully written. .
Loved it. .
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Many many happy returns of the day
Happy birthday
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res res
happy b'day vishu
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Reserve

unres

beautiful os yogs👏👏

loovveedd ittt very much😊

once again happy b'day vaish🤗
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Amazing os
love every bit of it
so sweet n cute
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happy birthday ...vaishu..and awesom ff like a fairy tale 😛

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