~*ArHi FF: Jee Le Zara *~ Ch:4 Pg 33/NOTE:36

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ArHi FF: ~ ❤️Jee Le Zara ❤️ ~

credit to .Mandy.
Okay *scratches her head* errmmm hello all :| *awkward* well before I start my first journey of ArHi FF! Want to let you all know who I am' as this is not my real ID ! My real .FlawlessSarun. Which is banned AGAIN*shakes head* ! God knows when they will decide to unban me this time lol!
Anyways I'm Manal! Many know me from my siggies! But been busy since 3 months now so haven't made any siggies!

But now that my exams r over! I thought why not write a FF ! Instead making siggies' no no I'm not quitting siggy making :P just not now lol! Anyways enough of my crap lol! I think I talked a lot shit ! Now bk to business *wears her invisible glares*

So here is my very first FF! It's my first try writing something but that does not mean I don't want you guys to be honest with me! Even tho I'm not comfortable writing but this concept has been in my mind since long ! N just like a lifeless maniac ! I have been imagining the whole concept on Arhi <3
So here it is!

The reason I named it "Jee Le Zara" you can say its the song from "Talaash" tht inspired me! No it's completely different from the movie! It's just the song lyrics inspired me a lot!

The people who inspired me to write Inesa / Jyothi / Tina <3

Dedicated to bunch of maniacs in my life <3

-Milli, Rose, Aneesha, my momma shazeena, sara, Inesa, Saij, Jyothi, Yogi, sandy, Bijal, Hibs, Shagun My Tom <3 n KD tannu <3, Maham, Saru.

And a special shout out for my behooda Gang ! Who not IPKKND or ArHi fan! But always forced me to write FF <3
So Div, Rabdi, Alee Baba , Tweeno Aal <3 here <3
Prologue:
Jee Le Zara
Live a little
He has been betrayed!
He lost a lot ...
But he never gave up... Not that god exist for him but for him life doesn't end with fallouts.


She lost her parents ... But she still smiled n lived for sake of it... Until she lost her everything she had ... For her, life ended!

She smiles but it never reaches her eyes.

It's a miracle if she laughs her heart out.

She is alive but for the world... Deep inside she is nothing but a broken mirror.

Will she wake up one fateful day and decide to use her the precious life n live a little more ?

Will he be her shadow, hold her hand and bring a ray of shine in her life?

Will he sprinkle happiness in her life?
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Chapter:1..Scroll down

NOTE on Page 36

This FF Will be continued on a NEW Thread by my Own REAL ID .FlawlessSarun.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter: 1
" Nani ..." She said after a phone call "he is coming back" screamed Anjali in excitement, which vanished away after seeing her Nani lost in thoughts.
" Nani...? You should be happy right? But why can't I see that happiness in your eyes?" "Anjali bitiya, of course I'm happy! Why won't I? He is coming back after 5 years... But you know what happened 5 years ago that made him go away from here right? You think he is ready to be back?" Spoke Nani, finally breaking her silence with moist eyes. " Nani I know my Chotay! Yes he took that drastic step by living India and going to Dubai, he wanted time for himself! Away from everything. But now when he decided to be back, I'm sure he is ready to leave his past behind." Said Anjali. " our Arnav Bitwa is smart sasu Maa! Lets just get everything ready to welcome him" joined Mami after finishing her touch up.

Arnav Singh Raizada, The ruthless, heartless yet the inspiration for the young generation. A name that created history in the business world in a very young age. He may be ASR for the world, but when it comes to his family, he is still the same Arnav who was 5 years back.
Walking out of India, may have been a drastic decision but he needed that space to find some answers. Find who he is and what exactly life demands from him.

Stepping outside of the airport he should have felt weird, because he is back on the land that changed his life and forced him to stay away from his loved ones, especially his Di, who for him meant the world.
"Bhai" taking his glares out, he heard someone calling him, he turned around and found his cousin Akaash, who is more than a brother to him. " Bhai" he screamed n jumped on his brother, trying to control himself but couldn't after seeing his best friend in front of him.
"Akaash! Dude calm down! You no more the match stick! But damn bro seems like you have been sleeping in gym since last 5 years huh? " said Arnav, breaking free from the hug. " wow dude are you crying ? Shit wipe it off or what if any girl see you like this" said Arnav knowing very well why his younger brother couldn't control his emotion. " you know what you mean to me right ? N you very well know how these 5 years were for me n for the family! On top of that you completely refused us when any of us talked about coming to Dubai to see you" said akaash not controlling his emotion after seeing his best friend Infront him.
" I'm sorry! I know I hurted you guys with my decision but I really needed this space. Needed to find some answers! Weather all this time it was love or just an attraction just like her. And honestly I really needed this 5 years, it made me who i am now!" " how can we forget the Arnav Singh Raizada. Bro you don't know how proud I am of you! But wait don't tell me you completely changed n you are no more the party animal" said akaash while settling himself in the car. " funny akaash! It's nothing like that, it's just I don't want to be the old Arnav anymore! I prefer me, who I am now. It's needed for this world who like playing with emotions." Said Arnav lost in his own thoughts.
Akaash knew its better to change the topic " so bro have you spoken to Aditya?" " of course I did! He is my best friend since childhood! Im not going to punish him for something his sister did to me! And anyways she doesn't matter to me and these 5 years helped me realize, she actually never meant anything to me! It was never love. And anyways I hold no grudges against her as she is good for nothing for me"

The never realized when they reached home. They say " home sweet home" it's always good to be home, that is exactly how Arnav felt stepping in Raizada mansion! Meeting his family who welcomed him with teary eyes.

For Arnav Singh Raizada, nothing changed except two things, do not judge anyone nor trust anyone easily. One has to earn his trust and once it's gone, it's gone.


Precap: Arnav in Gupta mention

Edited by ArnavKhushiAT. - 12 years ago
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Res
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First of all Screams ,woah..Manal writing her own story..Okay this is Huge.. 👏
Coming to intro. Nautanki we know you.. Don't start on that 😆

Prologue what an amazing and gripping it is., already hooked me to it.. He lost but didn't gave up.. 😳 She lost her parents yet lived for herself but OMG she lost everything again 😲 😭
Will she wake up
Will he be her shadow ..
And I knew that I'm hooked to it and its gonna be one helluva journey.

1st chap: ASR returns.. He returns after 5 long years.And he has a different man.He want to be that. 1st chap is lil different from prologue ,But Okay I liked that easy camaraderie shared between brothers,thought he is changed for family but he is still the same Arnav for them,a loving bro to akash 😃 wonder why nani is lil scared and what happen 5 years back which made him leave country. Can't wait for it to unfold more..
Manal amazing start 👏 update soonish as u know better the wait for updates..
Edited by .Saraa. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh yeh!! first of all a whoop! Manal writing!! waoo!!!

And ohh I lvoe the character glimpses! He seems to be more at ease than her.. I love this Arnav..His friendship with Akash is cute!!😆
Wonder who this other girl who betrayed him, what happened b/w them...

And Khushi it seems lost a lot...and aww waiting for their paths to cross...

ooh waiting for the next parts to unfold!! ⭐️

Edited by princessunara - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woahh manu you are back here 😲😲



I am so happy 😃😃😃 with this new project of your New writer here on IF😃😃😃


Aww thanks for dedication




Back to update 😃😃

Well nice attempt, well the way you wrote it was amazing noslow pace just to the mark.
No bakwass no shit only what is needed. 😆😆
Well ASR in Dubai must be living with Manu 😆😉
Good that this Akash isn't boring and shy type🤢😛
Aww what happen with him which girl hurted him😆😳
i don't think its Khushi but lets just wait and see 😃😃😉
Amazing loved it completely. 😃😃😃

TO buzz me next time when you are about to update i want to res first 😆😆

Continue soon please 😃😃

I am loving it


Love
Sandy 😃
Edited by sandy1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting! Manu I to,d you u r good at this! I'm excited and anxious to know the whole story! Keep the update faster! Btw I love the way you described ASR! Akash ain't the softy wala I can see that! I'm assuming khushi is his bestfriend's sis! She betrayed him? OMG u keep my curiosity level to high! Love it dammit can't wait for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I like how you have described Arnav.

I love the prologue. Has a poetic effect to it.

Looking forward to reading this one!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A very nice attempt considering this is your first FF. You managed to reel me in despite my self restraint to stop reading any more work. What I liked was you divulged a lot but you kept a lot also. It gathers the readers interest. Similarly, I am tempted to read forward. A very apt description of ASR. And your last line was the truth of life. Trust is a pinnacle of life...Well done :)
Edited by InvisibleSmile - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Saraa.

Res
--Edit--
First of all Screams ,woah..Manal writing her own story..Okay this is Huge.. 👏
Coming to intro. Nautanki we know you.. Don't start on that 😆

Prologue what an amazing and gripping it is., already hooked me to it.. He lost but didn't gave up.. 😳 She lost her parents yet lived for herself but OMG she lost everything again 😲 😭
Will she wake up
Will he be her shadow ..
And I knew that I'm hooked to it and its gonna be one helluva journey.

1st chap: ASR returns.. He returns after 5 long years.And he has a different man.He want to be that. 1st chap is lil different from prologue ,But Okay I liked that easy camaraderie shared between brothers,thought he is changed for family but he is still the same Arnav for them,a loving bro to akash 😃 wonder why nani is lil scared and what happen 5 years back which made him leave country. Can't wait for it to unfold more..
Manal amazing start 👏 update soonish as u know better the wait for updates..



Saru <3 lol thanks to you guys I finally started the FF<3
Will try not to disappoint you guys<3

Glad u liked the prologue <3

What happened 5 years back! Not in next few chaps but soon u will know <3
I think I will update chapter 2 tomorrow! Let see how it goes <3

It's just new here, would love encouragement <4

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Originally posted by: Vallon

Interesting! Manu I to,d you u r good at this! I'm excited and anxious to know the whole story! Keep the update faster! Btw I love the way you described ASR! Akash ain't the softy wala I can see that! I'm assuming khushi is his bestfriend's sis! She betrayed him? OMG u keep my curiosity level to high! Love it dammit can't wait for more



Yogiii baby <3 love you dammit <3 next update you will know who Khushi is <3 I think will update tomorrow <3

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