SwaRon SS :10 days Without You ❤️..Ch- 1..Pg-1 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
So finally deep is back with a bang
Lovely start do update soon
Is bar jaldi jaldi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
res
unres


so first of all deepika
superb idea...
"KAISE KATENGE... YEH DAS DIN..."
😳😳


would simply love reading this SS
accha i have a question
well it is about 10 days so will it have 10 chapters or more than that ???


now coming to chapter 1:
it was amazing
simply wow!!!
loved it to the core 😳😳
beautiful start...
loved it
MR. MAJNU ☺️


it was simply phenomenal... marvelous.. 👏
the way this chapter was written is getting me excited...
i really wanna read the upcoming chapters...


please !!
please !!
please !!
update soon and do PM me
thanks for the PM
i really appreciate it..
i'm waiting... 😃
Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Res

Unres
Wow! Another write up from The Writer 😃
I was seriously waiting to read another stroy from you 😳
Coming to Chapter1
It was awesome as we all know 😉
loved it
Especially the father-son duo 😆 That was surely a treat to read
And not to forget the MAJNU part... 😆
Continue soon!!! Eagerly waiting 😃
Do PM me...

P.S thanks for the PM 😊
Edited by smartypantstanu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Omg omg omg so cute very well writen it felt so bad wen it ended so soon...loved the dreaming and father son convo...simply amazing plz quickly carry on with it plz cnt wait for more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
And one more thing plz dont forget to pm me...plz plz.plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
ok very firstly i noe dat i m super late to reply , jabki mere os mein u r the first one to read so shoolly .😳 secondly kya khatri likhte ho aap , the first para lines very out of this world , i was like spell bound , mai agar aapke aas pass bhi likhlu naa ,meri nikal padegi ,ok lot off this bhaigiri language , let me try ur way . ur words flowed into my heart as if , as if a romantic breeze went over me .i was literally carried away by the way u use the words . i noe i talk rubbish at times but seriously loved it .👏 swaron u ❤️ haila pehle baar maine itna bada reply mara .
Edited by Sanskruti_tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Love the update

The father-son moments are really nice , love the scene when rishi is teasing swayam about the dream

Great concept

Their emotions are beautifully depicted

Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
soo sweet!
u wrote after so long!
loved the bonding u showed btw swayam and his dad!!!
update soon and continue to pm me!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
lovly OS,
very well written.👏
thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
wowww...lovly
swayam n dad scene
😆
lovly swaron update soon 😳 👏 👏

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