OS: Zulfe (Part 1)

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Mahi

@_mahi_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

ude jab jab zulfein teri.. kuwaariyon ki dil machle... 😉

i loved it babez 🤗 a new concept.. ooh la la.. arjun as sub inspector.. 😉 par cutting chai toh honi hi chahiye uske paas 😆

aww i loved how shree and rathore was laughing at his hair cut 🤣

a beautiful and splendid concept hunnie bunnie 😛

and if Arjun really likes long hair then mere chalenge kya? my hair is about to touch the back of my knees pretty soon 😆

n jaldi jaldi 2nd part likh.. i wanna see how he ends up meeting her 😉

i miss yah gorjuz 🤗

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Sanchayita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Haye... My doll!! You rock!
Reserved..!!(late-wala😒)

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

My dear Shruti,

This is about as hatke an Arjun OS as I could imagine. Hafiz and Ghalib, and the other masters of Urdu and Persian poetry, would have understood Arjun completely and would have approved of his obsession with a girl's zulfen. So would the immortal Kalidasa, and he would have pulled out the similes of dark clouds full of rain to help Arjun along.

But what I, being a confirmed cynic, cannot help wondering is this. What if the mysterious girl had turned, long zulfein and all, and it was seen that she had cross eyes and buck teeth? I bet all of Arjun's obsession would have vanished in an instant!😉

Shyamala Aunty

Hiii Arjunians, I'm back again after a week I heartily apologize for the delay in all my work but I have been really really busy with my college kick starting from this week. As promised I'm back with my Bday gift for all of you😆 I had penned this down long back but never completed it before. However I really felt the need of torturing you all...😆 please read this and give me honest opinions.. With part 2 coming up by tomorrow I'm still editing it!

OneShot : Zulfe

Part 1

Edited by sashashyam - 12 years ago