OS: Zulfe (Part 1) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
ude jab jab zulfein teri.. kuwaariyon ki dil machle... 😉
i loved it babez 🤗 a new concept.. ooh la la.. arjun as sub inspector.. 😉 par cutting chai toh honi hi chahiye uske paas 😆
aww i loved how shree and rathore was laughing at his hair cut 🤣
a beautiful and splendid concept hunnie bunnie 😛
and if Arjun really likes long hair then mere chalenge kya? my hair is about to touch the back of my knees pretty soon 😆
n jaldi jaldi 2nd part likh.. i wanna see how he ends up meeting her 😉
i miss yah gorjuz 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Haye... My doll!! You rock!
Reserved..!!(late-wala😒)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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My dear Shruti,

This is about as hatke an Arjun OS as I could imagine. Hafiz and Ghalib, and the other masters of Urdu and Persian poetry, would have understood Arjun completely and would have approved of his obsession with a girl's zulfen. So would the immortal Kalidasa, and he would have pulled out the similes of dark clouds full of rain to help Arjun along.

But what I, being a confirmed cynic, cannot help wondering is this. What if the mysterious girl had turned, long zulfein and all, and it was seen that she had cross eyes and buck teeth? I bet all of Arjun's obsession would have vanished in an instant!😉

Shyamala Aunty

Hiii Arjunians, I'm back again after a week I heartily apologize for the delay in all my work but I have been really really busy with my college kick starting from this week. As promised I'm back with my Bday gift for all of you😆 I had penned this down long back but never completed it before. However I really felt the need of torturing you all...😆 please read this and give me honest opinions.. With part 2 coming up by tomorrow I'm still editing it!

OneShot : Zulfe

Part 1

Edited by sashashyam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
hayyee sooo nucc plzz update naaa
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
aree waah!!!!!
it is different!!!!
Zulfe!!!! Nice
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
sorry for late comment couldn't have time...
it was awesome and unique concept dr...
totally different...
arjun rawte fall for lovely hair of that girl...
so awesome...
thanks for PM dr...
waiting cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
hey when will you update its next part???????????????
who is the girl?????
the haircut part was gud
continue soon dear.

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