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Posted: 12 years ago
#11


awesome writing arshi ji ..

but kumi is not that helpless 🤔

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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Arshi, soul stirring poem, poignant.
Racking, racy rendition of a similar sorrow by Adele.. Different way of expressing is int'd?

"Rolling in the deep, we could have had it all" by Adele,
Copy pasting the lyrics:

There's a fire starting in my heart,
Reaching a fevered pitch and it's bringing me out the dark.
Finally, I can see you crystal clear,
Go ahead and sell me out and I'll lay your ship bare,
See how I'll leave with every piece of you,
Don't underestimate the things that I will do.

There's a fire starting in my heart,
Reaching a fever pitch and it's bring me out the dark.

The scars of your love remind me of us,
They keep me thinking that we almost had it all.
The scars of your love, they leave me breathless,
I can't help feeling,

We could have had it all,
(Your gonna wish you, never had met me)
Rolling in the deep,
(Tears are gonna fall, rolling in the deep)
You had my heart inside your hand,
(You're gonna wish you never had met me)
And you played it to the beat.
(Tears are gonna fall, rolling in the deep)

Baby, I have no story to be told,
But I've heard one on you and I'm gonna make your head burn,
Think of me in the depths of your despair,
Making a home down there as mine sure won't be shared,

The scars of your love remind me of us,
(You're gonna wish you never had met me)
They keep me thinking that we almost had it all.
(Tears are gonna fall, rolling in the deep)
The scars of your love, they leave me breathless,
(You're gonna wish you never had met me)
I can't help feeling,
(Tears are gonna fall, rolling in the deep)

We could have had it all,
(You're gonna wish you never had met me)
Rolling in the deep.
(Tears are gonna fall, rolling in the deep)
You had my heart inside your hand,
(You're gonna wish you never had met me)
And you played it to the beat.
(Tears are gonna fall, rolling in the deep)

Could have had it all,
Rolling in the deep,
You had my heart inside of your hands,
But you played it with a beating.

Throw your soul through every open door,
Count your blessings to find what you look for.
Turn my sorrow into treasured gold,
You'll pay me back in kind and reap just what you've sown.

(You're gonna wish you never had met me)
We could have had it all,
(Tears are gonna fall, rolling in the deep)
We could have had it all.
(You're gonna wish you never had met me),
It all, it all, it all.
(Tears are gonna fall, rolling in the deep)

We could have had it all,
(You're gonna wish you never had met me)
Rolling in the deep.
(Tears are gonna fall, rolling in the deep
You had my heart inside of your hand,
(You're gonna wish you never had met me)
And you played it to the beat.
(Tears are gonna fall, rolling in the deep)

Could have had it all,
(You're gonna wish you never had met me)
Rolling in the deep.
(Tears are gonna fall, rolling in the deep)
You had my heart inside of your hands,
(You're gonna wish you never had met me

But you played it,
You played it,
You played it,
You played it to the beat.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Arshiii...



Beautiful lines ... BEAUTIFUL !! 👏

How well you have summed up all that must be going through Kumud's heart and mind right now... you have this wonderful gift for putting thoughts into beautiful , poetic words ... Fantastic !!

As for the decision that Kumud will take ... of course it is too early right now for her ... it is just the second day of her marriage ...

Let us see which path the CVs take for Kumud ... But i hope that SLB decides to show us a strong woman of today ... rather than following the book in this case ... Hoping for the best .


Thanks once again for these lovely lines . 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Arshi aren't u Kumud herself?? Kumud is a a poem freak also and u seem to know her n her feelings so well.
I need to confess something. I have a big problem to read Hindi n I concentrate so much that I end up not understanding wat I read 😳
But I took my time, I read each paragraph n buddy u r amazingly very good in portraying emotions in such poetic style.
Poor Kumud. Destiny has played a big trick to her!! 😉


Thank you OSJ, I am so touched, I know a lot of people here find Hindi difficult, many are from non Hindi speaking areas and so many are settled abroad, so I really appreciate it when you all put in that effort to read what I write!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: -B.N.K-



awesome writing arshi ji ..

but kumi is not that helpless 🤔


Agreed Toni, I don't think she is helpless, right now she is in a dilemma, too much has happened too soon, for her to even make sense of all this!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Adiani

Arshi, soul stirring poem, poignant.
Racking, racy rendition of a similar sorrow by Adele.. Different way of expressing is int'd?

"Rolling in the deep, we could have had it all" by Adele,
Copy pasting the lyrics:

There's a fire starting in my heart,
Reaching a fevered pitch and it's bringing me out the dark.
Finally, I can see you crystal clear,
Go ahead and sell me out and I'll lay your ship bare,
See how I'll leave with every piece of you,
Don't underestimate the things that I will do.

There's a fire starting in my heart,
Reaching a fever pitch and it's bring me out the dark.
The scars of your love remind me of us,
They keep me thinking that we almost had it all.
The scars of your love, they leave me breathless,
I can't help feeling,

We could have had it all,
(Your gonna wish you, never had met me)
Rolling in the deep,
(Tears are gonna fall, rolling in the deep)
You had my heart inside your hand,
(You're gonna wish you never had met me)
And you played it to the beat.
(Tears are gonna fall, rolling in the deep)

Baby, I have no story to be told,
But I've heard one on you and I'm gonna make your head burn,
Think of me in the depths of your despair,
Making a home down there as mine sure won't be shared,

The scars of your love remind me of us,
(You're gonna wish you never had met me)
They keep me thinking that we almost had it all.
(Tears are gonna fall, rolling in the deep)
The scars of your love, they leave me breathless,
(You're gonna wish you never had met me)
I can't help feeling,
(Tears are gonna fall, rolling in the deep)

We could have had it all,
(You're gonna wish you never had met me)
Rolling in the deep.
(Tears are gonna fall, rolling in the deep)
You had my heart inside your hand,
(You're gonna wish you never had met me)
And you played it to the beat.
(Tears are gonna fall, rolling in the deep)

Could have had it all,
Rolling in the deep,
You had my heart inside of your hands,
But you played it with a beating.

Throw your soul through every open door,
Count your blessings to find what you look for.
Turn my sorrow into treasured gold,
You'll pay me back in kind and reap just what you've sown.

(You're gonna wish you never had met me)
We could have had it all,
(Tears are gonna fall, rolling in the deep)
We could have had it all.
(You're gonna wish you never had met me),
It all, it all, it all.
(Tears are gonna fall, rolling in the deep)

We could have had it all,
(You're gonna wish you never had met me)
Rolling in the deep.
(Tears are gonna fall, rolling in the deep
You had my heart inside of your hand,
(You're gonna wish you never had met me)
And you played it to the beat.
(Tears are gonna fall, rolling in the deep)

Could have had it all,
(You're gonna wish you never had met me)
Rolling in the deep.
(Tears are gonna fall, rolling in the deep)
You had my heart inside of your hands,
(You're gonna wish you never had met me

But you played it,
You played it,
You played it,
You played it to the beat.


Yes, I can see what you mean, I am sure a part of Kumud will be saying this, esp @bold!

As I told Toni above, too much has happened too soon to her, imagine how dark and full of despair her life must seem to her and what a sea of emotions she must be engulfed in!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: NISHADEEP

good imagination and inspiration


Thank you dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: twila

Arshiii...




Beautiful lines ... BEAUTIFUL !! 👏

How well you have summed up all that must be going through Kumud's heart and mind right now... you have this wonderful gift for putting thoughts into beautiful , poetic words ... Fantastic !!

As for the decision that Kumud will take ... of course it is too early right now for her ... it is just the second day of her marriage ...

Let us see which path the CVs take for Kumud ... But i hope that SLB decides to show us a strong woman of today ... rather than following the book in this case ... Hoping for the best .


Thanks once again for these lovely lines . 😊


Love your warmth and encouragement Twila.

Poor Kumud has gone through a lot hasn't she, do din main toofan aaya, phir tsunami bhi, ab bhhokamp ka jhatka, ek ke baad ek!

She needs time for all this to seep in, then she can think of what to do!

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