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So this os is on the request of madhu aka @madhukumari , And haan meine iss mein kria ko nahi rulaya :P

True love

It was a new day for everyone , Sharon was finally returning to st.louis again . And swayam was really happy on the fact that he could finally see his Sharon after so many days . Even rey was a little happy but he was still disturbed with the fact that taani was no more with him .

Sharon entered the gates of St.louis college , she looked a little upset . The gang took her in a tight hug . Sharon smiled and hugged them back.

"Kya hua Sharon? You look upset?"

"Nope i am not upset simmi."

Simmi was still not convinced she looked at swayam , even he was looking a little doubtful.

"Guys where is rey?"

Sharon asked looking for him.

"He is in the locker. Must be coming."

Sharon nods . At that time a girl came inside , she was wearing shorts and a off shoulder top with her hair let open , all guys had their eyes on her . The gang had not noticed her . But swayam got the feeling that he should look up and he did .

"Kria?"

Was all he could say , kria looked there . She had changed that was sure . Her hair was longer , her dressing sense had completely changed and no one could deny she looked breath taking gorgeous.

At that time rey came to the atrium . He saw her and being shocked was an understatement for him. Kria ignoring his gaze , went to Sharon .

"Sharon?"

Sharon turned .

"What is your problem kria? You are in the college right , it is not as if you have never been here that you need to know where the principal's office is!"

Sharon did sound rude .

"First of all Sharon , you don't have a right to speak to me in this manner . Secondly i am just saying that you have a pimple on your chin , and thirdly this is so not your home , where you can speak to me in any way you want . And i am not the same kria."

"Oh yea! I know! You are a b***h!"

"Oh thank you so much! I like hypocrites."

And saying this kria went away.

"That girl , i will seriously kill her!"

Rey looked at Sharon in confusion , he had seen this anger at some point of time , he had seen kria's attitude somewhere . But he was confused . He closed his eyes and tried to remember this attitude . And that is when it struck him . Now he knew why Sharon was so upset as she had got her competitor back.How could he forget that girl . She was the girl he had once hated on the day he had seen her . She was the girl who had two sides , and he had witnessed both the sides . She was none other than Kria Rai Prakash , Sharon's twin sister . Kria and Sharon had never shared a good equation . Sharon had always been the impulsive girl who would react and think after that . And well kria she was the Diva . But her dad had always preferred Sharon over kria , so kria had been sent to boarding . He had never seen till they were in 8th , she had come to study for an year , as pria , their mom had forced gautam to bring her back . At first rey had hated her cause she had loads of attitude but then he had seen her soft and angelic side , she acted like a typical small baby , but that identity of hers was just shown to her friends . Gautam was fed up of krisha's continuous fights and had ultimately sent kria again . Kria in anger had broken all her contacts with each and every one of them . Though gautam knew about her whereabouts , she never met him , never called him . Rey had always felt kria ghai to be kria rai prakash but her dressing sense would make him believe that he was wrong . But know he knew that she was the same kria . He was happy , as now he was sure kria could never use him , but sad that he forgot her so soon . He knew he was in for some huge trouble.

The gang looked at him as to know why he was smiling. Sharon looked at rey and at once knew he had understood who she was and what thought was going in his mind . Her anger vanished. She went to rey.

"Rey!"

"Ya?"

"Are you sure?"

"About?"

"About you asking for forgiveness? She was at fault right?"

"Sharon , why would she use me for popularity ! I mean to say that you were a diva lekin she is a much bigger one than you! Now don't give me that look when you know i am saying the truth."

"Yea you are! But mr.reyaansh singhaania . This girl is not the same . With the diva attitude she has turned into a cold hearted girl."

"Well it would be fun to melt her heart!"

"You are so not understanding rey . Her college fees was not paid by dad, she used to work on weekends . And then she stayed with that witch smriti ghai! (Kria and sharon's step aunt they hate her.) On top of that , she wanted her so called daughter to marry you , and so she took a promise from kria that she won't ever dance and break her contacts with you. And kria she is really angry with you as you moved on so easily ."

"When you knew everything why did you even ask me that!"

"Gosh! I am just testing you! No matter how much i dislike her at the end of the day i am her 5minutes elder sister , and i do care about her , plus i want that friendly kria back again."

"But you have not seen her friendly side!"

"Excuse me! I have! Fine i agree we always used to fight , but yaar hum dono behene hain . We love each other the most . But rey , are you sure you like kria? I mean you love taani right?"

That is when the reality struck him. He looked at Sharon .

"I love kria!"

"You are such a creep rey . Pehle kria usske baad taani ab kria! I mean you promised taani not to move on right?"

"Who said i am moving on! I just moved back!"

"Itni jaldi taani ko bhula dia?"

"Sharon , mein thodi na keh raha hun i forgot taani , taani was a way to special person in my life , and i won't ever forget her . But Sharon kria , she is my life! And not just a person in my life."

"Awh! That is so sweet! How this sudden realisation?"

"Just seeing her after an year made me feel so alive."

Sharon smiled . Swayam heard everything , he knew this would happen when kria would come back . But he was shocked to hear that kria was sharon's sister . He had known kria's diva side . He just wanted to talk to her and scold her . He knew where kria was , and went to the fire escape . He opened the door and saw her sitting there .

"Kria?"

Kria turned . She looked away . Swayam sat beside her.

"Gussa ho?"

"Nahi!"

"Jhut mat bolo kria."

Kria looked at him and hits him lightly.

"Ek baar bhi nahi call kia mujhe! Bahot gande ho tum!"

"Sorry na!"

Swayam knew about smriti's promises.

"It is okay!"

"Kria rey is really sorry. And he loves you."

"Mujhe pata hain."

"Toh phir?"

"Swayam! Mein Kria Rai Prakash hun! Mein jaan kar bhi nahi maanti hun! Mein rey ko tadpaungi , usse guilty feel karwaungi . Usse tests dene padenge . Tab hi jaakar voh mujhe paayega!"

"You are a devil!"

"Rai Prakash hun , being a devil is in my blood!"

They laugh.

---

Days passed with rey always running behind kria , asking for forgiveness , he used to gift her something or the other every day . She was melting from inside , but had put up the cold hearted face.

One day , rey was in the atrium , Sharon with him . Kria came out of the rehearsal hall and was running . Swayam also came . He was trying to catch her and finally did holding her from her waist . Kria kicked her legs in the hair.

"Chod mujhe!"

"Nahi chodunga."

He tickled her , kria burst out laughing . The paper in rey's hand was slowly crumbling. Sharon noticed that and smirked.

"You know rey , i am noticing these days . Kria is 24 hours talking about swayam and swayam he is ignoring me and is always with kria . I think they have started liking each other , and i am coming in between them."

"NO! They are just good friends Sharon. And plus they don't look good together."

"They do , see how comfortable kria is with him . And on top of that Just good friends hi toh relationship ki shurwaat karta hain rey."

Rey gulped . He closed his eyes and imagined kriyam's marriage , and then kriyam having two kids.

"Nahiii!"

All look at rey , who shouted . Sharon controlled her laughter , she winked at swayam who understood and smiled , he turned kria.

"Kria ignore him na! We were talking about something right?"

"Swayam?"

Confused , swayam winked . Kria understood , and puts her hand around his neck.

"Swayam! You know aaj kal tumhaare bina ek ghanta bhi rehna itna mushkil ho chukka hain."

"Meri bhi wahi condition hain kria!"

Rey was damn jealous , the poor paper was torn into pieces . Sharon was having a hard time controlling her laughter .

"Rey , dekho na dono ek dusre ke bina ek pal bhi nahi jee sakte! Ab mein kyun unke beech mein aaun! I guess mujhe swayam se break up karna chahiye."

"Nahi! No break up Sharon . Dekho swayam bas thoda bhatak gaya hain . He loves just you."

"Nahi rey dekho na they are hugging now!"

Sharon made a baby face . Rey looked there . And saw that kriyam had hugged. He lost his cool , and went there . He pulled kria back.

"Reyaansh! What the hell!"

Rey not paying heed to her , took her to the fire escape and locked it from inside.

"Rey? Paagal hogaye ho!"

"Haan hogaya hun mein paagal! Aur jaanti ho kiski wajha se!"

"Taani right?"

"No! It's not taani! It's you who has made me so mad . I am madly in love with you."

Kria rolled her eyes.

"But i like swayam."

"Whom are you kidding! You love me! Agar tum swayam ko like karti toh tum kabhi bhi usse aur Sharon ko ek karne ki koshish karti hi nahi!"

"Yeh baat tumne pre valentine's day par nahi sochi?"

Rey looked at kria , and cupped her face.

"I was broken kria , meri team disqualify hogayi thi , and you were also not there . I was so confused that i trusted your false words!"

"If you loved me rey , then why taani?"

"I am sorry kria. Taani was just an infatuation! You are my life , my everything . "

"Rey you are saying this cause i was your first love . When taani will come you will go back to her !"

"No i won't!"

"First love can never be forgotten , but true loves buries it !" (Ohkay so these lines i had read in some edit of kriyaansh in someone's siggy ! Jisska bhi hain the credits for these lines goes to you! :D )

"What if my first love was my true love?"

"Then you would have never moved on rey."

"Kria , a guy can flirt with thousands of girls , like most of them . But at night before he sleeps , he thinks about the girl he truly loves . And you are the girl who comes in my dreams!"

"You could have tried to find me just once rey!"

"I did try to find you kria . I had searched for you everywhere in Mumbai and in Dehradun! I just never knew you would be in delhi!"

"You were always so lazy and so confused rey."

"You are the girl who knows me more than i know myself . You know what kria , you were my first teenage crush! But i never knew that you will one day become the girl i love truly from the bottom of my heart. I love you kria and i am sorry for whatever i did! I promise i won't ever forget you once again . I will always love you."

"That's what i wanted to hear rey. I knew you loved me , but i wanted to hear it from you! I didn't need those gifts."

"I loved gifting you those gifts. And i was too ashamed to confront you. But today for a second i thought i was going to lose you . And that thought gave me a push and i confronted you . I love you more than anything in this whole world."

"I love you too rey ."

Saying this kria hugged him tight , and he hugged her back . They hugged passionately , and now even the worst of demons could never separate them . Cause now they were one! Forever and ever.

END


Hope you liked it . And haan meine nahi rulaya 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res. . .
See mai aa gayi wapas 1st. .
Unres. . . . . . . .
Yupiee. . . . , .
Me 1st. . . .
Dhinchika . . . . .
Yu hu. .hu. . . . . . . . .
Me 1st. . .me 1st. . . .
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Dhinchika. .dhinchik.a . .
Yu. .huu. .huu. . . . . . .
U knw ishu,tu jb apne update ke upar mera naam mention kerti h. .haiyee. .i so love it. .thank u 4 doing it. .
So,chal review time. . .
finaly u updatd the OS. . .
The OS was superb us usual. . .
Waah,ishu kya conenction banaya hai KriSha ka. .awsome. .
Kriya in full diva avataar. . . .wow. .i so love it. . .
KriYum pagalpanti karing and sharon bg comentring karing and bechara rey jal ke raakh hoing. .hahaha. ,
And rey,usko jeolus dekh ker mere dil ko kitni shanti milli hai. .haiyee. . .
KR ka fire exit wala part. .haiyee. . .it was superb. .i totaly lovd it. .
Super -duper os,
and itne mast os ke liye
meri tarah yeh badi jhappit to u. . .
Thank u so much. . . .
Love u. . .muhhaaa. .::-*
p.s = thank god,tune kriya ko nahi rulaya,werna mai tujhe itna rulaati ki zindagi bhar tere ghar mein paani ki kami nahi hoti.
🤣🤣🤣
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acha jokes apart. .
Thank u ,kriya ko nahi rulaane ke liye. .
And see,aise mast-mast OS likha ker,
i realy love reading it. .
And haan,
mujhe lambe OS read kerna pasand hai,
so nxt time lamba OS likhna. . .
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Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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not fair

madhu i hate you ...

i wanted to be the first one 😔

anyways..

loved the OS ishana

it was fab

super cute

and super adorable

thanks for the PM

lovely

great work 👏
Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago
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Fabulous OS :)
So adorable :)
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

unres

lovely & beautiful os

thanks for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice os
krisha are sister
a is reys teens crush
loved it
yhnx fr pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww loved rey getting jealoused
it was a cutee one :)
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it was fab
haye mera kriyaansh
amazing
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main morning sey scoh rhi ho ki os post kro ja nahi
ki kroo confuse ho main
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but was osam
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Posted: 12 years ago
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super awesome
n i loved that line
Who said i am moving on! I just moved back!"
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fantastic os
kriyam ki shaadi nd then do baache 🤣🤣
loved rey getting jealoused
it was a cutee one :)

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