Nazroon se kare baatein-16/9{chp 6,pg-11}

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Nazroon se kare baatein
Prologue

Asad was in darga doing his daily namaaz. It was the time of Ramzan roza.. After eating in the night seeing the moon, he goes to pray. He was praying for his family. He did not want anything more than his loving mother and sister. He felt his family was complete. He thanked God for making him what he is now.. Famous business man, who could fulfill all his ammi's amd sister wishes and keep them happy.
He brought his palms down that were covering his face as he finished his praying. He slowly opened his only to see a face that had all beauty and simplicity in it..!! he was so mesmerized that he did not realize for how long he was staring at her. Then he slowly observed that her eyes and nose were red.. it said that she had been crying since long time. He felt nothing but to console her. It felt as though she was going through a great difficulty in her life and she needed help. He felt like helping her. He suddenly realized his surrounding and he looked in other direction just to get distract from her. But her angelic face did not leave his mind.
He prayed for one last time and saw her for once and left for his home. He was thinking about her all through the way to his home. He reached home and entered living room. His ammi and sister were having some discussion. They saw him as he entered.
Dilshad: Asalam walikum beta, namaaz hogaya?
Asad: walikum salam ammi, ha hogaya.. Aap aur tamatar (His sis, Najma) kya baatein karahe the??
Dilshad: Kuch nehi.. hum soch rahe the ki humara jo upar ka ghar hai woh aise hio khaali pada hai, tho kyuna hum koi poaying guest rakle??!!
Asad: Paying guest?? Kyu ammi?? Who ghar tho hum Najma ko shaadi ke waqt dene wale the na??
Dilshad: Ha Asad.. Par uski shaadi abhi kaha hone wali hai??jab hoga tab dekhenge..
Najma: Ha.. bhaijan.. mein itni jaldi ammi aur aapko chodke jane wali nehi hu..
She told that hugged Dilshad..
Asad: Par ammi.. woh kitna problem hoga.. mathlab koi aur ayega humare saath rehne..
Dilshad: Kuch nehi Asad.. sab thk hai.. itne bade ghar mein sirf hum 3?? Ache nehi lagtha.. koi achi si ladki ko mein ye makhan dungi..
Asad: thk hai Ammi.. par itna dhyaan dijiye ki humein koi problem na hojaye..
Najma: Thanks bhaijan..
Then they all went to their respective room to sleep.

Zoya came out of the darga and went to her room in the hotel .She had only two months with her. She had to find about her Abbu. She wanted answers to her questions. She thought she would start from tomorrow with the leads she got till now. She had asked two months from her Aapi and Jiju.. she had to be fast.. before that she thought she need to find a place to stay for 2 months. She slept off thinking about the upcoming tasks she had to do..

Precap: Dilshad: tumhara naam kya hai beti??
Zoya: Zoya..

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The characters are the same as the real ones. If there is any changes will mention as it comes..
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hey, dis z intresting. Cnt and PM me
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Hey nice start 👍🏼 looking forward for updates so update nxt part soon and pm me when u update...😊
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thanks for the response..😊
hope you guys respond me in the same way..here goes..
Chapter 1
Next day morning all finished eating early in Khan Mansion as it was Ramzaan month. Asad left for office as usual. Dilshad and Najma decided to go for shopping as they needed many gifts and new dresses foe Ramzan.
They left for shopping near to lunch time..
Zoya woke up early and ordered some food as she could not have later. She wanted to be with her aapi during this month..!! but she was helpless.. She ate soon and started to work on the places she should visit to day..!! She left for the mall first, as she needed to clean the old photo she has so that she can have a good look of that!!
Dilshad and Najma were in the shopping mall busy looking through the cloths,. They were searching cloths for Asad. Dilshad decided to look in other shop.. they were busy talking and walking until Dilshad bumped into one girl making her ipad to fall..
Dilshad: Sorry beta.. Meine aapko ate hue dekha nehi..
Zoya: Its ok aunty.. mein bhi other hi duniya mein thi!!
Dilshad (not understanding): huh??!!
Zoya: I mean.. Koi aur hi duniya mein thi..
She started picking her ipad which had fallen.. it had opened out and come..
Dilsah(smiling): Oh..!! par beta meine tho aapke ipad kharab kardi..!! hum yahi kahi repair shop mein chale??
Zoya(smiling): Its ok aunty.. mein yeh khud thk karsakthi hun!!
She picked up all and fixed it.. It resumed.. Dilshad and Najma both were impressed..
Najma: Wow..!! aapne tho sach mein thk kardiya!!
Zoya (proudly smiling): I know!!!
Dilshad: ha..! tumhara naam kya hai beta???!! Kaha rehti ho yaha??
Zoya: my name is Zoya Farookhi!!! Mein NewYork se hun.. yaha abhi hotel mein rehrahi hun.. kuch kaam tha India mein.. isiliye aayi..
Dilshad: Acha.. Kitne din ho beta??
Zoya: Din nehi aunty.. 2months!!!
Dilshad: 2months!!?? Tab thak hotel mein rahogi??
Zoya: Patha nehi aunty.. Par yaha 2-3 month keliye kaha rahne ko milega..
Do not know why but Dilshad liked this girl from the first site only.. her smiling face, simplicity, talking.. she got an idea in her head..
Dilshad: tum hamare ghar mein rehlo beta..!! yahi paas mein hai..
Zoya: aise kaise rahsakti hu aunty?? Abhi abhi tho milein hai..!!
Dilshad: tho kya hua?? Humare saath raho tho aur zyada janenge tuhare baarein mein..
Najma: Ha ammi..!! yeh bahut achi idea hai!! Hum inhe lejatein hai..!!
Zoya too had like this mother and daughter. She thought that there wont be any harm in going their house, more over she wanted one home only to stay as she was far from hers!!\
Zoya: Thk hai aunty.. Waise aapka naam kya hai??
Dilshad: Dilshad, aur yeh meri beti Najma..!!
Zoya (shaking hands): nice meeting you Najma.. thk aunty mein apni hotel se samaan leke aapke ghar aati hun.. aap address dedijiye!!
Dilshad: Nehi beta.. tum abhi aao.. hum pehle hotel jayenge aur tuhare samaan leneke baad ghar chale jayenge..
Zoya: Thk hai aunty..
Dilshad: Yeh muje aunty math bulao.. ajeeb lagtha hai.. muje phupi bulao..
Zoya (smiling): Thk hai aunty..oops sorry.. phupi..!!
All 3 headed to car ant to the hotel. Zoya checked out from there and went along with them to KM. As they entered the gate Zoya's mouth opened in surprised looking at the hosue!! It was like a mansion, palace.. She thought there were king and queen living here..!!
Dilshad: Tum ander aajao beta, yeh log bag ander leke aayenge..
Zoya: Thk hai phupi..
They all entered and Zoya was busy looking the mansion.. it was way behind her imagination.. She had never seen this kind of house till now.. She admired the person who had planned it..even the interior decorations were excellent..
Dilshad observed Zoya looking at the house in praising eyes. She understood her mind and told her
Dilshad: Ghar acha laga??
Zoya: Ha phupi..super it is!! The person has a really nice taste..
Dilshad (proudly): hmm.. yeh mere Asad ka plan hai!!!
Zoya (confusedly): Asad??!!
Najma: Ha!!.. woh mere bhaijaan hai!!!
Zoya: Oh.. nice..!!
Dilshad and Najma took her to her living place upstairs..it was like a small house itself..it had a bedroom, kitchen, small living area and bathroom.
Dilshad: Beta dekho, khane keliye tum neeche hi aajao.. sirf yeh karma tum use karo..tum yaha alag nehi rahiogi.. humare saath hi rehna hai tuje..!!
Zoya: Nehi phupi, mein yeh kitchen use karungi.. muje bahut acha lagtha khana banana..!!
Dilshad: Nehi..!! agar itna bhi acha lagtha hai tho neeche kitchen hi use karo..yaha nehi chahiye!!
Zoya: Nehi phupi.. aapko takleef kyu?? Aapne itna kuch kiya.. kam hai kya??!!
Dilshad: Phupi bhi bolti ho na muje??!! Toh phir takleef kaise de sakthi ho??!! Mein kuch nehi sunna chahti.. tum neeche aaogi..bas..!!
Zoya: Thk hai phupi.. Par occasionally mein yaha cook karungi.. thk hai??
Dilshad: Thk hai.. Abhi aaram karo.. raath thk kuch kha nehi sakthe.. thk gayi hogi..
Zoya: Thk hai phupi..
In late evening they all were in the living room. Dilshad was in the kitchen and Najma and Zoya were in living room busy talking. Zoya and Najma bonded very soon and she liked Zoya a lot!! Even Dilshad loved this girl..Zoya used to make them laugh and smile all the time.. she was so loving.. but still Dilshad could see some pain deep in her eyes..
It was time to open their fast.
Dilshad: Chalein..? roza khole??
Najma: Ammi bhaijaan nehi aaye??
Dilshad: Nehi beta, phone aya tha uske.. kehraha tha urgent kaam hai ane mein deer hojayega.. woh baadmein aake khalega..
Najma: Bhaijaan ko kaam se zyada kuch nehi hai..!!
They all sat finished their prayers and ate. It was delicious. She remembered her home food.. The taste was good, she felt like some motherly touch in that. She thought if she had her mother then even she would the same way. This brought tears in her eyes. She wiped of soon before anyone could observe!! But this did not go unnoticed by Dilshad. Now it was sure that this girl was in some kind of pain..!!
After that they all went back to their rooms. Asad came back in the night and had his food...

Precap: Najma: Ammi!! Zoya has fever..She cannot get up.. I will go and give food in her room only.
Dilshad: Thk hai.. make her eat all.. I will make kada for her..
Asad did not see Zoya second day also!!!

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Nice update love the bonding of three ladies of the house..😊 waiting to see how asay meet so update nxt part asap and pm me when u update...😊
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hey.. wrote the next chapter.. but not happy with it..
will write the next chapter really well..
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Chapter 2
Next day early morning, Asad came to breakfast table. Everything was ready. But it surprised him to see 4 plates on table rather then 3..!!
Asad: Ammi, koi guest hai kya??
Dilshad (remebring): Oh Asad..Mein batana hi bhul gayi.. Kal hum shopping keliye gaye the right??
Asad: Ha ammi..
Najma was full excited to tell to him. So before Dilshad continued..
Najma: Tho bhaijan waha pe hume paying guest mili.. who abhi upar rehrahi hai!!!
Asad full confused..
Asad: Aapko mall mein paying guest mili?? Mall main yeh sab bhi bikhtahai??!!
Dilshad (laughing): Are baba no.. Najma.. thk se bolo.. warna tere buddu bhaijan ko patah nehi chalega.. Beta hum waha ek ladki se mile.. bahut achi hai.. bechari ko rehne keliye jagah nehi thi.. isiliye hum leyaye..
Asad (still confused):ladki mili aur aap leyaye??!! Kay ammi.. Aapko patha hia aise kisike ke upar vishwas nehi karsake.. na jaan na pahchaan..kuch hogaya tho??!!
Dilshad: Kuch nehi hoga.. who bahut achi hai..!! newyork se ayi hai.. 32-3 mahine rehna keliye.. kahrahi thi kpoi important kaam hai..!!\
Asad: Newyork se??!! Ammi.. aapko koi aur ladki nehi mili.. muje tho acha nehi lagraha hai..!!
D: Are beta tum itna pareshaan kyu ho.. sab thk hai..!! Najma.. Zoya ko bulao..
Najma went and came back with worry..
Najma: Ammi.. Zoya ko bhukaar hai.. woh kehrahi thi use kuch nehi chahiya khanekeliye..woh neeche nehi aasakthi..
Dilshad (worriedly): Ya allah.. ye kya hua.. ek kaam karo najma.. tum Zoya ko khana uske kamrein mein leke jao.. mein khada banake lati hun..
Asad was shocked seeing his family's reaction. It felt like one of his family member was ill.. Dilshad left everything and went to make khada.. She then came out and told Asad
Dilshad: Asad.. tum khana shuru karo.. mein baad mein karthi hun.. pehle mein use yeh khada deke aati hun..
Asad: Ammi.. chahiye tho doctor ko bulaiye.. itna tension kyu lerahi hai!!?
Dilshad: Kyu nehi tension loongi?? Aagr tumhe ya Najma ko kuch hua tho?? Who hamare sath rehrahi hai Asad.. humko khyal rakhna chahiye uski.. ya allah.. muje uske kamrein mein jana hai..
She told so much and went. Asad started eating as he had to go to office soon. He thought that he will check on her in night.
By noon Zoya was fine.. her temperature had dropped down and she was able walk. She felt bad that on first day only she made them to do so much. So she decided that she will help Dilshad rest of the day..
Even though Dilshad did not allow her she managed to cook dal for night. It was almost time to do namaz..Dilshad told that they carry on as Asad will join them soon..
They all were praying when Asad entered. His eyes was stuck only one person..he saw her again..same way..praying.. but the only difference is she was at his place!!!! He could see how adorable she looked, simple, beautiful..!! He was more than happy, surprised, shocked!!! He had no time to react as his Ammi finished her prayer..
Dilshad: Asad beta.. tum agaye??
Asad was in no position to answer also.. he just smiled and again looked at Zoya..Dilshad followed his gaze and understood what he was meaning..
Dilshad: She is Zoya Asad.. she is the one who I brought as Paying guest..
By then Zoya and Najma too finished their prayers. Zoya saw Dilshad speaking to and he staring at her..!! Zoya came to Dilshad..
Dilshad: Zoya.. yeh hai mera beta.. Asad..!!!
Zoya (smiling): Hi..mera naam hai Zoya..
Asad brought all his senses back so that he could speak..
Asad: Hi..
Only he could tell. He told and left to his room to get freshen up..he really needed that.. he did not know what was happening..he was processing what he saw out there..!! she was here..the girl whom he had seen, the one with sad eyes..!! He went to have shower which was really needed for him..
They had a quite dinner and after that they all went back to their rooms.. Zoya was thinking about Asad all long wondering what was wrong with him. She observed that he was seeing her all time, but she had to admit that he was handsome hunk!!! Here Asad could not stop thinking of her..he was remembering her how she was staring at him dinner table.. it was difficult for him as she will be staying here for a long time. Just then he realized that he was thinking of her too much.. He cnt let her effect him so much!!! He should control.. he cant loose for her like that..!!
Next day morning all were eating in table and Zoya said..
Z: Phupi..!! muje Pizza khana hai!!!
\Asad looked at her shocked..was she asking for Pizza in this oddly time that too for early morning break fast??!!
Dilsha (smiling): Oh Zoya..!! aaj rath mein banayenge..
Zoya: thanks phupi.. waise poore 2 din hogaye muje Pizza khaye hue..I'm so impressed!! I thought I couldn't control myself!!!
Asad (sarcastically): Oh yes!!! 2 days is really a long time Ms. Farookhi..!! Aap wakai hi bahut great hai!!
All laughed..
Zoya (irritated): Mr. Khan.. Aapko patha hai mein rooz pizza khati hun..!!! so 2 days is a big deal.. dnt be sarcastic!!
Asad: Ms. Farookhi.. Sarcastic nehi.. telling the truth..!!! dnt be irritated..
She glared at him angrily..
Dilshad: Asad stop it..!! dnt irritate her..
Najma: Waise Zoya.. Aap ki fav pizza kaunsa hai??!!
Zoya (full excited): Oh..!! muje sab acha lagtha hai!!! But I have one wish.. I want to eat authentic Pizza from the Land of Pizza- Italy!!!
Najma: Oh…!!! Acha dream hai.. hope it will come true soon..!!!
Zoya (wishing): Hope so..
All long Asad was watching her expression and was lost in her.. the way her dimples used to form when she smile..!! he just felt so pleased!!! He did not realize when he knocked down the water glass next to him and spill it all over.. All turned to him to the sound..he looked at the table and couldn't believe at what he did in the rush of looking her..
Najma (hurriedly): bhaijan.. mein abhi saaf karti hun..
By then dilshad ran and brought tissues to clean the table.. both cleaned it ASAP ans Asad was making sure it was cleaned properly.. there was a smell drop left which he showed to Najma.. She cleaned it tehn..
Zoya was totally amused and shocked by what she saw.. She thought that this person really has OCD..he is a clean freak!! She decided that next time he pisses me off she will not let him go that easy!! But she could not stop herself..
Zoya: Allah miyya..!!! Aap tho clean freak hai Mr. Khan!!!
Najma and Dilshad both laughed at her remark..!! Stared at her..
Asad: AIsa kuch nehi.. muje bas sab kuch saaf hone chahiye!!
Zoya : Ha.. par normal logonki tarah nehi.. kuch zyada hi saaf chahiye!!! Phupi agar Mr. Khan kitchen mein khana banana jayenge tho kya hoga sochiye..?? yeh khana banana se pehle clean karna shurukardein te hai..!! oh god!!
Najma couldn't stop herself.. She laughed loudly not even caring her bhaijan's glare.. the eating time went like this only with laughter and joy.. first time Dilshad felt that her house was alive.. she liked it..
Then Asad left to office..Zoya left to her room to get ready as she wanted to go to photo studio!!!
Dilshad and Najma were sitting in the living room and discussing..
Dilshad: Zoya kitni achi ladki hai na??!!
Najma: Ha ammi.. muje woh bahut pasand hai.. kitni lively ladki hai woh..!!
Dilshad: Ha.. aur mann ki bhi saaf hai.. joh bhi hai boldeti hai..woh ghar pe hai toh ghar hasi se khil utthi hai.!
Najma:Ha ammi..
Dilshad thought that she should find out more about this girl.. like her family, living and all.. Dilshad had some long term idea in her mind and she knew she has to work hard for that!!
Zoya was in the photo studio showing the person the old photos she had..
Zoya: Aap muje yeh photos ko phirse develop karke denge??
Shop person: Ha madam.. ho saktha hai.. lekin yeh kafi purani lagthi hai..
Zoya: Ha.. muje yeh sab clearly chahiye.. specially sabke chehre..
SP: clear hona mushkil hai ma'm.. par mein try karunga..Aapko kitna copies chahiye??
Zoya: Aap jitna hosake utna clear kijiye.. please.. muje yeh photo bahut zaruri hai!! Muje filhaal 5 copies chahiye.. aap jitna time chahiye utna lijiye.. par muje zyada se zyada clear chahiye..
SP: thk hai.. will give in one week..
Zoya: thanks..
She gave him her cell number and advance money and left.. she came back by noon and saw that Dilshad and Najma were busy discussing the arrangements for Ramzan..this Dilshad wanted it to be a family function. So she decided not to call anyone..even Zoya joined them.. then they all went to rest till evening..
All the arrangements were done and they were praying.. Zoya prayed that she should succeed in this mission so that she could go ASAP. Asad had maintained silence in the dinnaer time. He was simply observing Zoya and this did not go unnoticed by Dilshad.. she smiled and let it go..
After dinner all went back to their respective rooms. Zoya was feeling very lonely today.. she went to garden outside and sat on the bench.. she was thinking of her mother and why her father left her like that without reason that too in her young age.. She had tears in her eyes. Just then Dilshad came there with a cup of hot coffee.. she gave it to Zoya and sat beside her.
Dilshad: Raat mein aise baitke coffee peene ka maza hi kuch aur hai!!!
Zoya simply smiled looking at her..
Dilshad: tum in tarron se kya baath karahi thi??!!
Zoya: Phupi.. mere aapi humesha mujse kehte the ki job hi insaan humein chodke jaatein hai woh aksar taarein ban jathein hai!!! Isiliye jab bhi muje ammi se baath karneka men kartha hai tho mein taaron se baath karthi hu.. shayad woh meri baath sunle!!
Dilshad looked towards Zoya.. he eyes was filled with unshed tears..
Dilshad: tumhare aapi ne sach kaha hai..!!! aur woh zaroor tumhare baath sunenge.. unki bati jo ho..!!!
Zoya started crying and she hugged Dilshad.. Dilshad really felt bad for this girl.. she did not want her to ask her about that.. she decided that she will only slowly make her to tell every thing.. she knew that there was so much more than what this girl is telling her..
Asad was standing near the entrance way of garden and saw the scene in front of him.. his ammi hugging Zoya and consoling her.. she was crying and he felt bed for that. He also felt jealous of his Ammi as she could hug Zoya and not him.. He had the habit of sitting in the bench and having coffee with his Ammi.. but today that place was taken by Zoya and for a change he was not angry for that.. he left from there and went to sleep..

Precap: Zoya: Mr khan..!! aap aise nehi kehsakthe..!! muje chahiye..
Asad: Nehi Ms. Farookhi.. aap nehi jasakthe..
Zoya: Yes.. I will go..
Asad: No..
Zoya: Yes..
Both Dilshad and Najma were laughing looking at the scene in front of them..

sorry for mistakes.. did not do the proof reading!!!
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