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Posted: 12 years ago
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its my first experiance to write a story hope u like it

r.k had shooted sultan by mistake infct he dont want to killl him..then r.k reached home with madhu and bituji...he was nt in his senses..his mom ask him that where were he and then he told her tht he had killed sultan..radha,siki,and depali all get shockd aftr hearing tht news from sultan..tears were droping froming rahda's eyes and then r,k went in his room,madhu follows r.k
radha told bituji that aits all finished nw, all the things become messed up nw...
Dipali and siki went into their room then siki said to depali that what will happen nw...?????? r.k had kiled sultan and nw r.k will go to jail...depali made him quite and saoying to herself tht madhu and r.k will get separatd,i have to take the advantage of this situation...
in r.k and madhu's room...madhu hold r.k's hand,trying to control hr tears...saying to him tht it was juxt a incident...u had nt killed sultan...r.k repliad hr tht truth will remain truth,and whenever the investigation strts,police wwill come to knw the name of the killer and then they will bring me to jaill,madhu was all shocd she hugged r,k thightly and said tht i won't let him go anywhere..madhu was crying...
depali went to sultan's house ,meera was sitting on the dining table holding that toy into his sultan,depali came near to hr and said tht meera ji r u missing ur child?u know who is he???????its sultan who has green eyes..meera was slight shockd and told to depali tht sultan is hr sonn,the one who give her place to live in his house...she was veeryy happy and hen depali interupt her sayind tht he has died nw...meera was alll shockd
PLX COMMENT ON IT AND LIKE ITT..AND IF U WANT THT I'LL CONTINUE MY STORY SO PLX DO COMMENT😊



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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
it's nice
it's ur first try
i think you shoud continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice 😊
Plz do continue 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start...pls cont 😊

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