Virika SS:I'll stand by you! ~Thd II|Part 24 pg 67|11 Dec - Page 37

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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry for late comment...but update was as usaual superb..loved virika romance especially the dialogue of viren mentionong jeevika queen..hating maanvi and sb...nw update next part asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh my god I can't believe so much happened while I was away! So sorry my charu karina marzi haju!! Apologizing on knees😉
Im seriously hell lot of busy but today by night il update this story
I won't be able to do others but this kne surely by tonight coz I haven't received such a love before
Thanks a ton and sooo sorry too😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
When's the update coming? :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow
ekkkss what n update madhu
love it re
n hahaha viren cooking noodles n
the precap jeevs unconcious

yy kya hua meri jaanu ko pls
pls update soon pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello all I am back! And this time much earlier, as you all know i write 2 other stories, this always remains the special one! so despite my bust hectic schedule i have updated this for my loves charu, marzi, karina aka madamji who have actually spammed here for the update! i am feeling so overwhelmed babes that i can do anything for you all! i have no words..so this update is all yours!
I have read each and every comment, i am so sorry my timings arent allowing me to reply you all, will surely try from next time! But heartfelt thanks to each and everyone who have liked and commented!

here goes the update..

PART 20

Manorama was about to say something but she heard the ringing of bell, so she went to open the door. She saw manvi and swamini at the door, she greeted them and took inside. She asked them to sit when swamini spoke," Arey wah manorama ji you are behaving as if nothing has happened.." She spoke in a real loud tone and barun came outside, manorama was unaware of what they were speaking so she was about ot speak but manvi interrupted,"Don't pretend you don't know anything aunty.." Manvi yelled and barun lost his cool.

He yelled,"How dare you both come to MY house and yell at MY mother?"

Swamini and manvi were shocked but composed themselves, swamini spoke, "Barun don't you have common sense that you aren't supposed to shout at elders!" Barun retorted, "Well swamini aunty, I guess you need to tell the same to your bahu who is shamelessly yelling at my mother who is ELDER to her." Manorama asked barun to keep quiet and asked them what their reason to come there was?

Swamini spoke, "Manoramaji I know you have done a lot for jeevika but don't you think its high time you stop being behind them? I know my viren and jeevika aren't actually missing us only because of you. What are your plans? To spoil our family? .."

Barun spoke,"Aunty don't speak to my mom like that! Understood? And coming to viren not missing you all, its totally your fault for whatever you have done to them. This is the last warning I am giving to you, before I lose my manners please leave from here. Its high time you stop hurting jeevika and viren. If they are willing to come back, they will by themselves and for that no one needs to force them!"

Swamini and manvi left the place and viren and jeevika were coming inside. Viren was shocked seeing them there! He ignored them and walked away! Jeevika followed viren without speaking anything. Manorama asked," Barun are you mad or what? Why did you speak to them like that? Don't you know they are viren's family? " Barun spoke," Mom I don't care. If anyone speaks rudely to you, then they will see the worst in me! And family my foot? Didn't they know that they shouldn't blame us for whatever happened?

Viren and jeevika were shocked listening to their conversation, viren interrupted them,"Blame? What blame barun? " Barun and manorama thought of keeping quiet and not letting viren and jeevika know anything. They just said no and left it but viren knew something was up and his badi ma and manvi had blamed barun and manorama for something.

Manorama took them inside and asked them the reason for their sudden visit. Viren spoke, "Who aunty, we were just going to the nearby temple, so thought we would stop for a while." Manorama smiled and invited them for breakfast but jeevika spoke ," No ma, I don't want to eat anything till I go to the temple! "

Manorama-" but jeevika its not good for your health?"
Jeevika-"No ma, its okay, just for today"
Viren-" See this is her behavior from morning, I am sure her mood swings are kicking up"

Jeevika hit him on his chest and he winked at her. This didn't go unnoticed by barun, he spoke, "Oye, viren what is that? You are winking at my sister in front of me? That too infront of an unmarried man?"

Viren chuckled and spoke, "tell me something, are you angry that I winked at your SISTER? Or the fact that you don't have anyone to wink at for now?"

Barun gave an angry glare and viren bursted out laughing! Viren and jeevika took leave of them and started off to mandir. Today was very important day for jeevika! So she decided not to take a sip of water till she finishes her prayers.

Viren and jeevika reached the temple, and they performed the prayers. They sat down for a while and jeevika went back to get the Prasad, while she was returning, she started to feel dizzy but left it. She sat down and gave the Prasad to viren. After a while, they stood up and started walking when jeevika was feeling sick. She felt dizzy and was about to fall. But viren held her on time and was trying to make her conscious,

"jeevika get up, what happened?" while jeevika was losing conscious viren carried her in his arms and took her to the hospital. The doctor was examining jeevika, and viren was waiting outside. He was getting worried as it had been quite some time since the doctor went in.

The doctor came to viren and spoke," nothing to worry Mr. Vadhera. Your wife was tired and due to staying hungry for a long time, she fainted. But the great news is, your wife is expecting twins Mr. Vadhera.!"

Viren's happiness had no bounds.! Twins! Two babies! Oh my god! Jeevika? Then he spoke," doctor did jeevika get conscious? How is she now?"

Doctor smiled and said, "she is awake Mr. Vadhera. You can go and see her.." before the doctor could complete, viren ran inside and saw jeevika sitting on bed! He hugged and her and said,"jeevika we are having twins! Twins jeevika!" Jeevika was controlling her emotions from the time doctor broke this nws, but seeing her husband she hugged him tightly and started to cry. She was unable to express her happiness. She felt she was the luckiest lady. The doctor came inside and viren and jeevika broke the hug, doctor smiled at them, "I can see how happy you are! Well Mrs. Vadhera now that you are expecting twins, please don't stay hungry for so long, you need to eat more, rest more and must take care of yourself. And Mr. Vadhera please make sure she does all of these!" viren nodded and waited for the doctor to leave, he spoke, "Jeevika are you mad? Why didn't you eat anything? I was telling you its not safe and now see what happened? " viren was yelling at her and jeevika felt very sad, tears welled up and she spoke,"virenji I am sorry…"

"keep your sorry to yourself jeevika, what would have happened if I lost you or we lost the baby? I know puja was important but don't you think being a pregnant you should eat something! I don't understand for a small puja, you had to do all this"

"ITS NOT SMALL PUJA VIRENJI, TODAY IS MY PARENTS DEATH ANNIVERSARY!"

to be continued.. ..

Precap : Barun meeting his lady love and viren pacifying jeevika! 😉

So how is it guys? Hope i didnt bore you guys?

P.S: I do not wish to hurt the sentiments of anyone, i just added the mandir scene to bring about jeevika's past to viren!

PMS will be sent once i update all the other ffs of mine! sorry friends, time constraints!

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Posted: 12 years ago
resss

~UNRES~

YAY MEEE IM FIRST AGAIN 🤣 whoop whoop partyy time 🤣
Update wass so so so amazing musketeer
It was worth waiting, just loved everything
Loved how Barun yelled back at manvi and badi ma..hate them both!!
OMG Virika are having twinsss?? eeekkksss me so exciteddd 😃
awweee jeevikas parents death anniversary 😭
wonder how her parents died!! me wanna read more musketeer
and precap is so exciting..Barun meeting sanaya/khshi
and Viren pacifying Jeevika...so so excited!!
update soon pleaseee..i hate waiting so long musketeerrr
lastly thanks for dedicating this update to me too
i just love your story and your writing..keep up the good work musketeer ❤️
Also dont worry too much about replying back to each and everyone
we know your busy and we know that you read every single comment
and we know you love us and we love you too 😆 too many "and" i used there 😆
UPDATE JALDIII PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ 😳
Edited by Marzii - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
unres
Finally after so long I am active on If.
And the first thing that i found was ur update!!😊
Ur update are always amazing dear.
Sorry for not liking and commenting on ur stories.
The update was amazing.
Love you and Update soon.
Edited by Sameeha.Tacker - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ressy


**UNRES**

You know, I love you Studentji!!!!
I love how you bring out your anger for the show and characters in your story 🤣
No joke, I'm so glad Swamini and Manvi were talked to like that 😆
I sound rude, but come on our Virika are the best 😳
The update was just awesome!
There were so many punch lines that just made this update so unique especially the winking part!
And then TWINSSS ❤️
OMG I have to tell Ashy now... you're gonna have one more new reader!
She is obsesssed with twins ❤️
Now I hope Virika have one of each 😳
Picture perfect family, picture perfect update!!!
Thank You Studentji 🤗
Edited by Kays94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
unres...
the update is very beautiful...
flawlesss...
luved the way barun talked with swamini nd manvi ..they deserve tht...
nd viren and jeevika gng to have twins...amazing!!!!
cont soon...
Edited by millee18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Twins yipeee!!!! Vurens got a lot of pacifying to do. Wonder whos Barun girl lol. Thanks for the update and update soon. Cannot watch the show atm and ur update was fantastic.

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