os:kar ke dikhavo part2 updated challenge complete

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hi my friends, here i am writing an os for the first time.it is related with the real episode but i have changed a little.😉it starts from the scene that the first time anjali calls khushi in the RM and arnav gets angry with that and says that is his house, whatever happen will only be according to his decision. anjali got hurt due to this and she goes from RM to temple..pls forgive if it is a crap work part 2 on page 2.

OS: KAR KE DIKHAVO


The hall of RM was stunned when arnav literally yelled at his sister. The lovely sister whom always look after him and took his side in his every decision. Anjali's eyes welled up with tears and she was ashamed not only in the presence of whole family members but also khushi. Anjali was the one whom invited khushi to RM so that Lavanya would learn some family values culture and tradition from her.But now her beloved brother is saying that her decision was wrong.Not only that but the home they are staying is only belong to him and there will anything happen according to his decision.

Khushi turned and her eyes were also welled up from the insult that she suffer at that moment. She take strong decision to not return RM in her future. She suffered a lot. And now it was not even her fault.She came there only in the request of Anjaliji. She stormed out from their to her home where she could live in peace.

Anjali saw khushi going from there, but she cannot stop her. Her brother had taken the decision. But this time he is gone to change it. She marched to her room thinking this.
After some time Arnav get out of his angry and he wanted toapologize to his sister. He went to her room, opening the door he called out "di...". But no one was in the room .
"di, where are you " he called for her in the entire RM. other family members also joined him.Now he was getting panicked because she was not in the house.Nani said
"chotte thumhe anjali se aisa nahi kehna chahiye tha. she brought khushi here only to teach lavanya. par thumne kya kiya..patha nahi anjali bitiya kahan chali gayi??" Mami came with her tooti footi english.."Arnav bitua what you tells anjali bitiya? don't know where she goes."
mama also said " haan arnav ab tho humein unhein dhoondna hi hoga. patha nahi kahan chali gayi"
when arnav was about to leave nani said
"ek minute arnav bitua, humari anjali bitiya ko hum janthe hain. wo aise nahi wapas aayegi. thumhe khushi bitiya ko bhi sath lekar jaana hoga. thabhi wo maan jayegi."

"what the!! no way nani. wo meri di hai. muche patha hai ki use kaise manavum."

"acha tho aap jayiye dekhthe hain ki kaise manathe hai"

"whatever" muttered arnav grabbing his car keys and stormed out.
he was also sure that his di is so stubborn in her decisions. so he drove to khushi's home.
At GH an angry khushi was making jilebi's and eating them during the process and blabbering to herself
"laad governer, samachthe kya hai apne aapko. anjaliji ki bhi bath nahi manthe. jab bhi humein dekho tho gussa hi gussa. aur kuch aathe nahi kya unhe.hume bath bhi karne nahi diya..rakshas!". At that time the door bell rang and buaji went to open the door saying" Hai re nanda kishore, kaun hai, aa rahi hun". Arnav was standing at the door way and Buaji looked at him and asked." arre yeh tho titaliya ka boss hain na.. yahan kisliye aye ho?"
"wo muche khushi se bath karni chahiye aap unhe bula lijiye.."
"acha bitua thum andar tho avo,, arre sanka devi ye thumhare boss aya hai thumse milne jaldi bahar ana."

khushi came outside and saw arnav who was waiting for her eagerly.
"acha aap hai .ab aap ko kya chahiye. humein ghar par datt kar ke man nahi bhara kya thaki aap idhar chale aaye aur..."

her words were cut by arnav" mein yahan thumhari shikayath sunne keliye nahi aayahai. vo muche di ko dhoondna tha aur vo thumhe ghar par dekhe bina nahi aayegi.isliye thumhe vapas lene aya hun."
" anjaliji kahan chali gayi aur aap..." she was again cut by arnav" khushi no more arguments come with me"
"nahi, hum nahi ayenge aapne hi humse waise bathein ki thi." but before arnav could say anything buaji interrupted " arre sanka devi unki bath suno unhe thuhari madad chahiye, chalo anjali bitiya ko dhoond ke lao." khushi fumed but went with him without further arguments.
Arnav was searching for anjali by driving his suv crazily. khushi some how managed to say him that anjali will probably in the temple. arnav silently drove to there.
he break the car and climbed the stairs without looking khushi but she followed him.

he found her sitting lonely in the mandir. he went near her and apologized without any hesitation and said that he had bring khushi back. Anjali was happy and hugged him. The return journey was in silence. they reached RM. whole family was happy to see anjali back.
khushi want to talk to him and make him apologise for what he did to her. knowing this arnav skipped from her view and went his favourite poolside. at that time khushi entered with courage and asked "aapko humse maafi mangni chahiye."
"main, sorry, our thumse, unbelievable!! infact thumhe muchse thank you kehni chahiye because you are again in this house and on the job."
"humari vajah se anjaliji ghar par vapas ayi hai aur humare bina aap yeh sab nahi kar sakthe the.."
" acha tho khushi kumari gupta keh rahi hai ki ab main unke bina kuch nahi kar saktha. but khushi there are some other things jo thum kabhi nahi kar sakthe."
" aisa koi kam nahi hai jo main nahi kar sakthi"
" tho thum muche yeh karke dikhavo" saying this he instantly grabbed her hands and made her collide on his chest and gave her a kiss on her left cheek and leave her. khushi was shocked and dumb to the situation created by him. she blushed furiously by putting her hand on the cheek. how dare he did this and she turn to his side to ask and see him leaving. but before getting into his room he turned and said to her

" kar ke dikhavo khushi kumari guptha.."


i am sorry if it was a bad work😲. thanks for reading. if you liked it please click the like button and make your comments.⭐️



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chavvi16 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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now she has to do the same
after all he just challenged KKG man
and no one gets away after doing that
so go on KKG just do it yaar please
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks dear. you are the first one criticising me. thanks a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you. 😊
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Originally posted by: chavvi16

now she has to do the same

after all he just challenged KKG man
and no one gets away after doing that
so go on KKG just do it yaar please


really loved your comment. i will try my dear to update this os for you
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks a lot
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awesome work loved it 😊
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luved it... plz continue...wanna see how khushi completes her challenge...😉
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thanks for all who commented and liked.. as per your request iam continuing to part two.pls read this too..
part 2: CHALLENGE COMPLETE
At GH. It was around 8pm.khushi was still in the kitchen like as the morning.she had made lots od jilebi's and was munching it.both buaji and payal were looking at her.they were observing her around an hour.now, they went to talk to her.buaji turned off the stove and ask"hai sanka devi thu kya kar rahi hai?thu jalebi tho banathi hai ,par yah ka? ithne sare jilebi?kiskeliye aur iske beech mei n ka bol rahi ho?".
payal"han khushi, aur iske beech mein thu sharma kyun rahi hain? bathavo muche.."
khushi"voo...nahi hum sarmaye..kab?? oho jiji humne kabhi nahi sharmaya,hum kyun kare.wo bus ye...ha stove ka heat lagtha hai na isiliye mugh vaisa hua hai"
payal"acha, tho kam se kam yeh tho sach bathavo ki thum kis bath pe pareshan ho?"
khushi"vo laad governer...hh...kuch nahi"
payal"laad governer vo koun hai"
khushi"koi nahi jiji..buaji ,kya hum humare ghar pe ek jilebi nahi bana sakthe?"
buaji" ek tho bana sakthi hai ,par ithna??haire nanda kishore ab yeh kaun ghayega??"
khushi"hum hain na buaji" saying this she took the plate and moved to her room.buaji and payal looked at each other without understandinfg anything.
khushi in room, in front of her DM, munching jilebi's and asking" hai DM ab hum kya arenge? vo LG ne tho humein...(blushing and touching her cheek) nahi, hum unhe jawab zarror denge,par kaise? voh tho ithne lambe hai, ahgar humein unhe kiss karna hai tho unhe gale lagane padenge. vo tho hum nahi kar sakthe. hai DM kuch kijiye na our humein un rakshas se bachayiye na.." that while payal get into the room.knowing this khushi stopped her blabbering and went near her jiji to sleep. she prayed to her DM for help and dossed off.

next morning, in RM.
khushi was sitting near lavanya but her thought was on how she will complete her challenge.lavanay"chamkili,yeh dekho naniji ne muche geetha(bhagavath geetha) diya hai padhne keliye, par muche tho kuch samach mein nahi aa raha hai. thum kuch karo na."
khushi"lavanyaji, aapko yeh kithab padhne hi honge, iss bare mein hum kuch nahi kar sakthe."
lavanya"khushi, iam bored.pls thum mere liye kuch banake lavo na"
khushi"teek hai hum aapke liye pakode banake lathe hai"saying this she stood up and moved towards the door.but she turned and asked lavanya"lavanyaji, ek bath poochum?"
lavanya"ya chamkili,kya hai?
khushi"vo..arnavji ka height kithna hai?
lavanya"ASR ka height,mm..i think it is 176(asume) but why?"
khushi"nahi, kkuch nahi bus aise hi.."and she went to kitchen.on the way she thought unka height tho 176 hai aur humara sirf 169, ab baki 7cm ka hum kya karenge?.at that time she saw arnav was going inside his room inorder to take something urgently. khushi suddenly got an idea. she went to the door side and searched for something so that she could adjust her height. at last she found a small table which was there to place a pot on top of it which carried a small plant. she took that pot and placed it on the floor. she climbed on it and waited for arnav to return through the door.so that she could kiss him without touching.she planned that when he comes she will call him and when he will turn towards her she will kiss him. she waited for more than 15 minutes.
"what the!!"
hearing this she turn back and see him staring at her.she was shocked to see him at there.
arnav"what are you doing at here, aur wo bhi is tharah?"
khushi" haan...wo kuch nahi, hum tho bus iska ..iska..masboothi dekh rahi thi.bohath masbooth hai, kis se bana hua hai"
arnav just stared at her. she smiled sheepishly and get down from that and went to kitchen leaving a confused arnav behined."unbelievable!! kya kar rahi thi wo yahan?" thought arnav and he also followed khushi in the kitchen.
"hai DM LG vahan kahan se aaya, plan tho fail ho gaya."
"kaisa pla" asked arnav and khushi again get shocked to see him in the kitchen.
"aap yahan kya kar rahe hai"
"this is my house khushi kumari gupta, aur main jahan chaho ja saktha hoon"
"haan aapka ghar apka kitchen aur aapka challe...rehne do aapse kya kehna"
"whatever". he came to near her to take some water.she saw him and suddenly got another idea.she took a little big glass and put it on his feet.he jumped and yelled at her" ouch, what the! khushiii"
"oh, humein maaf kar dijiye. wo humare hath se nikal gaye,sorry"
"you stupid girl"and he bent to look at his feet.khushi also bent" hum bhi dekhe?"
"nooo..." and he was observing his foot. khushi look at the surroundings to know whether anybody was there. there was no one so she moved closer to him and observed his face. he was looking damn handsome in the morning(ya he is always handsome). she moved more closer and pecked on his cheek.arnav was deeply looking at his feet suddenly something soft touched his cheek.he realised that it was khushi's lips.and he got shocked to the moment.he looked at her amused. there was a mischievous smile on her face.she stood up looked directly to his eyes and said"hum ne kar dikhaya Mr.Arnav Sing Raizada". at that time arnav got her idea and realised that she purposefully put the glass on his feer and was completing the challenge given by him.he was about to move forward then anjali came there with mami asking"kya hua chotte, humne thumhara aavas suna"
khushi" kuch nahi anjaliji wo arnavji ke pair par glass gira tha"
anjali"chotte, thumhe lagi tho nahi?"
"no dii"saying this he once more stared at khushi and stormed out of the kitchen."yeh chotte ko kya hua? subah tho teek tha"anjali said while mami commented"lagtha hai arnav bitua ke pair par nahi gaal par glass gira hai. wahan pe reddish nasar aa raha hai" khushi's eyes widen on hearing this, she blushed and turned to make her pakodas.
at last i have completed my os. pls like and comment..

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it was super cute.
loved it
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