ArHiSS:AnApateAffair#4,Ch21,Pg124,(19/07)COMPLETED

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#731

Last chapter you bought lot of memories back ... Miss them...
Aap ajjeeb how much i like this conversation you have no idea..
Santarika nahim mila naa ... I don't know they will back or not but I wish you should.
Amazing update Sp . I love it.
Anjali she can't change it's in her blood lol i enjoyed lot.
Khushi blurring her sleeping position ... I wish there should cot breaking mami's cricket playing too...
Take care... Bye

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sj_arhi

@sj_arhi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#732

SJ res1

I know the feedback is too delayed, sorry won't even be enough.

First I want to say that the dedication piece you wrote on Z was such a pleasure to read Saiyu, specially ur version of papad ka tukada.

Arnav is always late in the matters pertaining to the heart. Khudh ko businessman kehetha firtha hai par ek simple si baath process karne ke liye bohot der lagatha hai. Poor Khushi must have waited for a confession of love or a loving caress and instead sees Arnav rushing out of the window! Now the thick heads that they both can be, they prefer playing 'she loves me, she loves me not' way into their wedding.

Saiyu u made a bidaai scene look funny, daath deni padegi. There is certainly a contagion effect when it comes down to tears at bidaai. All ladies cry irrespective of whether they are from the boy's side or girl's. Some remember their own bidaai and cry while there are some who cry seeing everyone else cry. Loved the way you played the scene.

Arnav is desperate whether Khushi is wearing red or green. He just wants to get done with the rasame and have her to himself.

When Arnav was surprised that Shashi speaks and compares his state to Mamaji, I wanted to tell him he would soon join their league. After-all being Khushi's husband is no easy task.

Of all people Arnav chose Buaji to confess that he loves Khushi!

In the end why on earth is Arnav sleeping by the poolside? Investigation karne ka padi! {blows the non existent smoke from her finger tips}

Edited by sj_arhi - 11 years ago

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sj_arhi

@sj_arhi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#733

Payal is surely having fun at Khushi's expense; twisting all innocent words to serve the purpose (Like you did to my economics in Unnamed). Enjoyed thoroughly while reading the scene. It is hardly necessary to search for ways to tease Khushi, the innocent girl walked to the snare herself. Oh god I can totally imagine their embarrassed faces, specially Shashi and Mamaji. Khushi had no option than to run and hide her face.

This is the only place where I look forward to Shyam Anjali scenes, they are such an unmatched pair; one finds reasons to cry, whine and cling while the other plots plans that are bound to fail. A lovely spoof on the couple. Anjali are you sure you do not interfere, well of course the question of whether Payal-ji is shy or not was out of genuine interest towards your brother's wife's sister out of the blue.

Chaahe din, mahine, saal beeth jaaye hamare Arnav and Khushi will not stop rabba veying and will definitely not stop fighting over trivial issues. A lovely end to a wonderful story. This will surely be missed Saiyu.

About your note, it is your decision Saiyu and I respect it. I will always miss your stories and cherish that I once read them. Thank you for the entertaining updates. If you ever want to write an os ss or ff, do let me know, will be glad to read.

Since, as of now, this is your last update on IF and my last comment on your story this one is for you;

Saiyu we first interacted on IF when you scrapped me regarding my comment. I hadn't known then that a friendship would build over a series of scraps.

You are a simple and genuine person who stands by a friend. The fact that you love your family and your sister makes me love you more, the stories that you narrate on Azra makes me wish for a niece too. There are instances where I have admired you, one such example is: irrespective of how engaged you may be, you always take out time to do your namaaz.

Saiyu I will always be glad to have found a friend like you. 😊

Edited by sj_arhi - 11 years ago

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Hot_Chocolate

@Hot_Chocolate

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#734

i donn know what i am feeling right now when i am typing this comment, but one thing i am sure there is no negativity or sad emotions..! i feel good!

last chapter par my first ever banner!!!😳

in all chapters of AAA how beautifully and smartly you use the original lines of IPK in a completely different and good way! the convo between Amma and khushi is heart touching.the dialogues were so same but the emotions were different...arnav is listening there also and he is listening here too but yet that tym i felt bad but this i feel good!

Payal- i can never imagine this lady to do anything like to tease her sister that too such kinda teasing...u really give me a good smiling and happy go lucky payal!

taekwondo poses??? that is the reason? they made love and khushi throw arnav out of bed coz of her sleeping patterns😆🤣 khushi never slept like that in RM in show,ya? even arnav also wondered about that. i too wondered why? they never woke up together..they never even slept together..ya khushi pehle soti thi ya arnav ya fir arnav k nightmare ki wajah se dono ekk sath uth jaate the ya fir arnav khushi ko bed tak carry karta tha aaannd thennn...blurrr! and morning where kabi arnav is getting ready or khushi is making breakfast or aarti or whateva..!***sigh***

khushi and her naiveness!and that holi wala dialogue...ooohhh,,,,i am Gleeeng!😃

haaye no rabba vey for shyamu...even anjali throws him out.and anjali saying that she will not interfere,,,hell! she is most interfering sister i have even seen. i tell u, if interfer so much like anjali in bhai's life, he will kill me, like really!😆

arnav and khushi here also doing blurring rabba veys...why saiyu di? raabbba vey...(sad wala for me)

mami mama and nani talking about rabba vey and n.k didnt know about rabba vey,,lol lol! wow! u didnt miss mama here...our HHBB mami always do rabba vey wid makeup kits only,,,,mama left very early...rabbbaa veyyy(funny wala here)

baadam kheer. lol...yes, raizdas were obsessed wid badam kheer...and khushi had had enuff...! lol🤣

who add pineapple in suji ka halwa? 😲 mum never did! when i made suji ka halwa i add dry fruits in it no fruits like pineapple apple or orange,,,!

akash-payal married,,yayay!! fish the ring out of bowl,,,u know i attended so many marriages in my family but nobody never play this game! i wonder this game is only played on soap operas!!😲😲😲

khushi gave birth to twins?? chalo u gave us this sukh also..show mein adopted child hi mila jo kabi child jaisa nai laga..,,,,rabba vey to aarav!!

thinking and giggling...ASR handling kids and making them burp...more giggling...!!😆😆

hum samajte hai..??? hell! hum kya samajte hain? what she understand dammit? what was he asking for? was he taking some sort of prmission? urrghh telepathy sucks!😡

no views regarding rememberance...u said it all...! rabba vey is still in my phone...(no! not as my ringtone) but i do play it sometime,,,and thenn...rabba vey...rabba vey hooo...rabbbaaa vey...!!😳

about your note! kya bolun abb! we all had a life outside IF and one cant stay here and do FF rabba veys all his life, ya? i understand or i should say hum samajte hain!😳

u are moving out today as writer and i will move out tomorrow as a reader! bas u finished it and now i am waiting for others to finish.! u are an awesome wirter bas! no words...u are THE REASON i m here on IF...finding solace is something which i can never forget..and i had already told you that i am going to narrate ARHI FAIRY TALE to my grandchildren and great grandchildren...!

competitive exams needs full time focus! i know.!

abhi tak aapne muje novels naam nai diye,,,abb toh SS FF OS sab khatam ho gya abb toh bata do..!

aapko two wheeler chalana nahi aata????😲 i vrroomm my scooty in air...!

thanx for writing u will always remain in heart whether u are writing something or not..! do scrap/email/pm whenver u feel like!❤️

no arhi pics in this post! Laji kamaal hai..unki pics k aage humari pics ki kya jurrat? laji, jitna khoobsoorat aapka naam hain utni hi khoobsoorat hongi aap..! u did equally a tremendous job by providing beautiful pics always! so this for u too👏

Edited by avantisharma - 12 years ago

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#735

res

Edited!

Ab what should I say?? I am completely speechless!

With this story of yours I came to know about your other stories & also and the privilege to know you as a person😊

Ab jab ye khatam hoga toh dukh kaise nahi hoga😭

Ok, first I will comment on the update then I will write my 'gatha'

The update was fabulous! With the perfect mixture of emotional talk, comedy (dirty one though😆) & not to forget the extreme 'rabba ve', made it worth reading!

And not to forget the superrr long update which you gave, was like a icing on the cake though later I realized this is the last time I am going to read from you😭

I loved everything about this update. Everyone's love towards khushi, payal's dirty teasings, khushi's innocence, ASR's embaressment😆, her family's 'what the' looks, anjali's interference, shyaam's irritation, yet another coupling process started but poor anjali didn't knew they were already a couple😛

Arnav's naughty talks, Khushi's red cheeks, their cute romance, Anjali's delivery, lavanya & nk's talk, payal & akash's marriage, ArShi's happiness on knowing about their child & then the happiness of having twins!

Aryan & arya, must be cute as this couple <3

Overall this was the best does of IPK, having all those scenes which made me nostalgic & to crave for IPK even more.

Rabba ve is Arnav and Khushi. This is my definition of Rabba ve, bas!

P.S. Arya was someone's name in Finding Solace too, right? I have read first few parts but before I could proceed to more you removed that.

P.P.S And as always, I agree lavanyaji is as good as a co-author of this SS. Her apt pictures always do justice to the update.👏

Now meri gatha -

I had started reading your works recently & was really pleased with them. Though couldn't read your Fairytale & Finding Solace (completely). All your works had one thing for sure i.e., no dirty revenge & that was what I liked the most about them. I wish I had been active earlier, would have got to read you other works too. But luck wasn't on my side :(

As for your spare time, You have nice list of works. Two-wheeler - It is fun, till you don't fall down! 😆

I have voted for your story & it is NOT going to change, bas!

Dekho ji, Mujhe bhi bas ki aadat lag gai hai😉

Ab rone done se kuch nahi hoga, as you have made your final decision. It's true though that, in starting writing is loved by us a lot. But as the time goes on, the passion & zeal to write reduces. I respect your decision. Wishing you all the best for your exam!

Keep in touch :)

I can't help but post this one.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3KN3h6QGlo8[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by dj_arshifan - 12 years ago

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AR_EternalLove

@AR_EternalLove

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#736

loved the ending of ur ss

rabba ve meant for us alot😊

thank u for giving us such beautiful stories😊

i respect ur decision...but whenevr you will come back..we will be there😉

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#737

mine

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You no saiyu after reading the last part I couldn't stop laughing but after reading the note full ulta emotions!

hmm another fades away! but i guess everything does come to an end! just got to live it!

Cheers and a happy life!

Ps:will give complete feedback of last part in a while but i respect your decision!

Edited by TwilightStar_JP - 12 years ago

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#738

Res...

*Edited*

Sorry sorry Lakhon Sorry...an unwell child and a very very busy Asli duniya stopped me from editing my comments earlier.

I just loved the way you portray the Raizada family they are so cute and adorable and oh so loving. Every girl would love to have a family like this to call her own when she leaves her parents home.

And wow khushi not only gets such awesome in laws but also Arnavji as her patidev who is clearly the world's bestest hubby ever...😳

I loved the way Payal kept interrupting khushi with her teasing tones everytime khushi was singing praises of her darling hubby.

I am sure that i have said this earlier but would want to reiterate once again that the way you incorporate all the dialogues of IPK into your updates so effortlessly, its incredible. As if theses dialogues were written for these specific moments alone.

But khushi's naivety in speaking about her sleeping patterns had me up in splits...🤣Bechara arnav had no other option but to come and shut his dear wife's mouth.

The reaction of all the Raizada and Gupta parivar priceless. 😆

Anjali the 'innocent' master player...bechara Shyam thats all what i can say.

2 weeks and still no respite from Khushi's taekwondo poses for Arnav. But his shatir dimaag has learnt how to change this problem into an opportunity...😆Making Khushi pay.

Bechara Akash and NK. Di has already designed wedding cards for their marriage i am sure.

So finally after 2 months A & K did go for their honeymoon. Well amen to that thought. And sooji ka halwa ab mai kya bolon well like i told u earlier...In b'lore sooji ke halwe mai pineapple aur kabhi kabhi banana bhi dala jata hain...🤔

22 mths wow long wait but finally Akash and Payal are married and NK is dreaming of his too. 😉

And anjali got her raaj kumari as well. Which also helped her tone down a bit. Thank you god.

And you completed Arnav and khushi's family. A perfect sight. A handsome lad and beautiful pretty girl. **Happy Sighs**

And Arnav and Khushi lived happily ever after...Hamesha. A & K and their Rabba Ve...

What do i say about in memory of : A great serial to which i am hooked even till date. It has ruined TV for me forever. Can't seem to appreciate anyone else of TV now.

And Rabba Ve...which just bring a goofy smile and grin on my face. BAS

Going to keep my comments for your A/N really short as you wanted it:

Sad i am that this might be the last of your stories that i will get to read. Well i understand thats all i can say for now. If you don't feel the urge to write then nothing will come right too.

I am going to miss your stories and if you ever ever decide to get back. I am sure along with me lots of others too will be waiting for you.

All the best to you.

Edited by kondhili - 12 years ago

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Cest.la.vie

@Cest.la.vie

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#739

What's with the number dos?!? Hmmm

Oh louved the update!

Hahaha ...hilarious as ever!

The poor guy had to sleep on the side cause she'd kick him off the bed? But why?! She didn't do that before, did she? Hmm what had arnav done ...heheh

Anjali...honestly despise a character like hers. Oh that manipulative nature!

Man, payal ka number kyun no aya... She should've been teased too!! :( hahah

Bechari badam kheer ke liye itna gussa??

Regarding the note...I'm jus glad that I did get to read your stories.

Till we see another story by you... So long!

Wish you the very best for the exam, and ze future!

I shall miss your stories, dearly.

Edited by Cest.la.vie - 12 years ago