Saathiya #3 Part 24/pg95/Sept 26 - Page 13

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Part 20

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Thanks Shruthe so much for this awesome banner.
saath to hum
pahle bhi the
par ab ,
yeh kya naya
khumaar sa hai !

tu
saath hai mere
par aur paaas aaye
iske liye
yeh dil bekaraar sa hai !

hum mille the
kyoki milna tha hame !
har kadam
saath chale the
kyoki ,
dost banaaya tha tumhe !
par
is kadar
saanso main
bas jaauge tum
yeh to nahi
bataya tha tumne !

ab yahaa aa kar
chalo
kuch to behisaab
kar jaaye
aao
itne paas aa jaye
ke
judaa hone ke
har derwaaje ko band
kar aaye

Thanks @9n9i9s9h9u9 for this wonderful poem dear

Geet wanted to open up with Maan, she wanted to shed her hesitation, she knew she loved Maan, he loved her too, they have been knowing each other since her birth.. she has actually grown up with him' she was realizing it now, how deeply they knew each other' they knew each movement, each expression on others face.

They were actually absorbed in each other's veins then why should she not open up with him.. she wanted to enjoy vegas with Maan to full'. She wanted to see the world from his eyes..

"take me to all those places where you would have gone with you other friends if you would have come with them"

So that night Maan took her to the night club, The music was loud, it doesn't matter in vegas what the average age of crowd was.. all were lost in music drink and dance.

Though the crowd was mostly young yet some elderly people were full on top too.

Geet's basic nature, she stood on side, Maan smiled knowing her originally and didn't say anything. But the whole environment and Geet looking too damn sexy was taking toll on his own mood, Maan was Maan too' he went to bar, took a shot of vodka and turned to see Geet standing on corner, observing the crowd' uff after one shot she looked even more smoky to him. Her single piece red, A line strapless dress and on top of it she had gone to parlour to get her look done and when she had come out Maan could have never expected to see such Geet' she had got it done especially for Maan and she herself was enjoying doing it, Maan loved these style.

Not to get carried away if he goes near her he just waved her from far, she waved too' Knwoing Geet, he knew she will not be comfortable to do the rough mad dance he was wanting to do now, seeing her so beautiful was adding to his mood. So he just himself went on dance floor, but uff the handsome hunk enjoying the floor, was it possible, girls came up and caught up with him' he took one more shot of vodka and then started his wild dance' Geet was all over his mind just not in his arms, coz he knew this was not at all her type thing'.

But Geet felt pained, why he did not pull her to dance floor, when she has said him she was ready to enjoy it his way' she wanted to see world completely from his view and he was restricting'

The mad way he was dancing and other girls enjoying it.. she wanted to be there.. she wanted him to be mad like this with her, take her along in his madness.

Maan turned in Dance for a while and then again turned back, even in drunken state, he spoted the place where she was standing but she was not there. But soon he felt a hand on his back, Geet was there and seeing her he soon knew she has taken shots of vodka or rum or something strong'

He tried to hold her straight, his own whole nasha went away, though he himself was somewhat not in control "Kitni lee" She showed him 4 fingers

"Ek saath sare, now you can dance with me'" It then hit Maan hard, she had really meant she wanted to enjoy his way and with him.

"Lets dance" and doolte doolte she placed his one hand on her shoulder and other on her waist

"Make me fly in air as you were doing with others" she said in stumbling voice while she herself stumbled

"is halat me? " "hmm tum sambhaloge na mujhe, kitnee ladkiyon ko sambhala.. mujhe nahi'"

Maan knew Geet was completely not in her control "Geet u r not at all in condition"

"shhh" she placed her fingers on his lips, burning whole existence of his with her sensual ways. Its already being hard for him to control himself with his drinks on and her sensual looks and now her advance will completely kill him if he tries to fight more

"Bohut baatein kerte hoo, Dance na" but her condition was no good at all' he took her in his arms to take her out of club but Geet in drnk state imagined he was dancing with her. Maan himself stumbled due to effect but he had to control' by the time they were out, Geet puked, made whole her and even his dress dirty'

In hotel room, Maan placed Geet on couch' she just settled, her eyes just fixed on him other than that her mind knew nothing.. where she was, even if she was sitting or standing'

Maan took his change of clothes and was going to washroom

"Washroom kyun' mujhse to nahi sarmatee tum, aaj kyun" even in those drunk lost state, how her eyes was following him'

What should Maan do, she was taking patience test of a person who did not even know definition of it other wise'

He somehow made her change her dress first, he tried his best to be descent but she was not helping.. nor was his own drunken state.. he intentionally got a loose dress for her which can go in her easily, making his job easier' but stiil could not stop from getting some beautiful view of her hidden skin' Maan for a while just got lost as his eyes stuk on her beautifull flawless skin

"Chor kahin ke" she hit him, bringing him back to real world.. he turned his face but she turned it back to her again with her palm "dekho na.. kahan rooka maine" Maan closed his fists to control himself, he was so much desiring to dip his head inside those beautiful soft skin, even if it smelled of puke, nothing mattered to him'. And he knew there would be no resistance from her side'

"I. I will just change and come"

Maan had at last to go to washroom without his change of clothes and she got stubborn on that'

When he came out, he was wrapped in towel and bare top but he was soon stopped by Geet leg floating in air as she had passed away due to drink' Maan took a shigh of relief but one side of his heart was dying to take the opportunity she was giving' later when he went to sleep even he did not know'.

Next morning ' actually they woke up late afternoon' he was getting ready for lunch when

Geet did not remember much of last night but whatever she remembers all she knew was Maan was restricting himself with her' but why' he had always been free with girls then why her

He had been seeing her and knew what she was thinking. He came behind her, placed a soft peck on her cheeks.

"woo u were totally drunk yesterday" Geet's eyes almost got teary and she turned her face "I don't want this kiss kind of kiss of yours"

Maan smiled, turned her towards him "tou kaisee wali chahiye" he raised his eyebrows to tease her. He was feeling much lighter now, last night in his all lost drunk state just one thing was going on in his mind that she had wanted him and he had denied her.

She jerked him and turned her face' "u are making me feel I am desperate" he lifted her chin with his index finger "how could I when I am ten times desperate, isliye tou"

She cut him in middle "I don't see it." She was looking so cute and edible in her anger' she would have never been so open about what she wants, had it been a different love affair but Maan was her friend and now her lover, they were used to express each other openly.

Maan slowly slipped closer to her, his lips near her quivering and his eyes locked with her. Geet closed her eyes in anticipation, she wanted to feel their relation as lovers. Maan's lips were shaking near her shaking ones, he wanted to take those plumb pink lips in his and he knew she was waiting for it but their whole life long friendship came infront of his eyes. Had she not been so submitting and trusting him with everything, he would have advanced but now the whole responsibility was on his shoulder.

He once again looked at her face, she was completely his lover now, she clutched his collar in anxiety of why it was taking so long' bas he could stop no more'.

He softly placed his lips on her, and the moment the entire world felt burning hot on fire to both.. room was silent with just their heart beat sounding loud'. Maan slowly increased his intensity of pecks on her lips' Geet shied in moan, clutching his shirt even tighter.. As Maan rolled his tongue on her entire lips she pushed herself even closer to him, to get a balance. He placed his one palm on her back to support and bring her closer and bit her lower lips hard' when he got lost in her, his tongue exploring her entire within, Geet holding tight on him. Her hands went around his neck and his palm on her back gluing her to him' both were lost.. it felt so devine to be each others, they felt so much one soul.. after long Maan separated to breathe.

Geet's eyes were still closed, she was living the moment and did not want to come out of it.

Next: Part 21

Thanks to all my readers for giving your love and support to this FF...
🤗 to all of you...
Hope you like the progress of story...
-Anu
Edited by tellyme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww wowww me 1st

dinka chika dinka chika yeyeye

me 1st me 1st

will read this part at night

so will give big comment just like bandhan badi wali

i didnt given comment for this at my health not well soo plz spar me plz
Edited by Twilightsparkle - 12 years ago
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its beautiful...

geet wanted maan to beahve like how he with others...
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Loved it
plz update soon

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awesome update!!!😉
geet wantng maan to open up...
while maan being the responsible one!!!
lovd it...😃

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