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Posted: 12 years ago
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REUNION

The soft April night is looking at my windows and caressingly winking with the stars .He could not sleep he was so happy , he was filled from head to heels with a strange incomprehensible feeling the reason for his excitement was none but MANYATA , his bestie , the following evening was the Grand Reunion of Sunrise Elementry School of Jaigarh and the thing he was sure about was the fact that ALL students were going to attend it after all there batch was the one to outshine the school name in all ways their performance in games as well as their boards result was the best among the entire city and he too felt proud as he himself was the captain to many teams and he too topped from the school lacking behind just a fraction of five percent was his best friend . those crazy stupid days of teen , the gupchuk [ known as pucka] competition , fighting for place and the one for all attitude , Uday and Manyata was the bestest friend since nursery it was only after their boards that they drifted away , while uday went to Australia for his further studies , manyata was send to Kota for her medicals , they lost track but something they was sure that one day they will meet again . a day when she could confess her heart out and tell her what she always felt for him was not friendship but love , she was insanely in love with him , but back then she was judge as an over weighted , specky , greeky , snobbish girl far behind from those skiny beautiful girl those who stalked uday so she suppressed her feeling and promised herself that the next time when they meet she will prove herself as a perfect match for uday , hence forth she worked on her physical appearance groomed herself and the results were just awesome , she is the most hottest doctor of Rajasthan and each person 's heart skip beats as she walk pass them , her parents are extremely happy with her and gave her full liability to wait for uday and does not force her into any marriage as they too are aware of their daughter 's love , she too was equally excited she had shopped for almost a week to get the best dress and shoes this day meant a lot for her , and finally now she was in Jaigarh as she stood at the balcony of her hotel room feeling the fresh breeze as she adored the moon and the lines of the melachonic song she and uday used to sing came to her mind

Male lines

Kariye Na Kariya Na
Kariye Na Ho Kariya Na
Kariye Na Kariya Na Koi Vaada Kisise Kariya Na
Kariye Na Kariya Na Koi Vaada Kisise Kariya Na
Kariye Kariye Ho Ho
Kariye Kariye To Vaada Phir Todiye Na
To Vaada Phir Todiye Na
To Vaada Phir Todiye Na

Kariye Na Kariya Na Koi Vaada Kisise Kariya Na
Kariye Na Kariya Na Koi Vaada Kisise Kariya Na
Kariye Kariye Ho Ho
Kariye Kariye To Vaada Phir Todiye Na
To Vaada Phir Todiye Na
To Vaada Phir Todiye Na
Haath Kisika Pakadiye Na
Pakadiye To Phir Chhodiye Na

Unknown to her vertically opposite to her , was the hotel in which uday was standing adoring the beauty of the moon , he was now a successful engineer and his parents was very happy with him but like manyata parents they too did not discuss marriage to their son as they too knew that his heart was already reserved by manyata as the same song trickled his memory too

Female lines

Mainu Khich Paindiye Seene Vich Paindiye
O Mainu Khich Paindiye Oye Oye Oye
Seene Vich Paindiye Hay Hay Hay
O Mainu Kuchh Ho Gaya
O Mainu Kuchh Ho Gaya
O Mainu Kuchh Ho Gaya Duniya Kehnidye
O Mainu Khich Paindiye Oye Oye Oye
Seene Vich Paindiye Hay Hay Hay

O..
O Is Kuchh Ka Naam Jawaani Hai
Ye Umr Badi Deewani Hai
Tum Tananana Tum Tananana Tum Tananana Nananana
Sache Sab Sapne Lagte Hain Begaane Apne Lagte Hain
Apne Se Munh Modiye Na Sapnon Ke Peechhe Daudiye Na

the night was sweeped up by the morning , time flew as the evening crept in , the school was decorated so nicely with flowers and light and a red carpet to welcome all the guest as he entered from the enterance in a black tee shirt and a jeans such hot looks that got all girls eyes hooked on him as he made his entry his neck was trapped in an arm it was none but his friend jaggat and akash this was the way of greeting each other since their childhood as instead of getting ride of the grip he tried on trapping their necks too after a lot of fight they pulled themselves apart and laughed there heart out as they exchanged their conversation about how life had changed and all that happened in this days as uday eyes searched the whole party for a chubby cute girl well that is what uday assumed manyata to still look like but he was shocked as a girl in a black dress made her entry the spot light did not live her sight , her milky skin glowed as her curves were visible in the dress she purely looked like any model and the bigger shock that she was none but MANYATA as she introduced herself , uday could feel his mouth open in shock as he just could not believe what just had happened as she playfully teased and them after a long time they spoke together

"LETS GO AND SEARCH FOR OUR TIME MACHINE"

They chuckled at each other as they raced to the school garden and began digging the area under the mango tree it was like they had been digging forever as they found their treasure a jewel box but the real jewel was the two letters they had written to each other on the last day of school and promised to open only onces they come back as uday handed his letter to her and she to hims , both heart were racing as the read the letter , uday read

"Dear Uday my personal bodyguard ,

Some words have been stored in my heart since the very day I met you and I am pretty sure if not now then for sure I will end up in bursting my stomach . I know we are the bestest of friends but do know why or when did I fall in love with you .. I am madly in love with you but cannot confess I feel inferior complex from the girls who likes you but I do promise one of this days when we both are successful I will be a girl of your standard and make you proud of me till than please wait for me

Yours manyata"

As he read it he stared at manyata blankly as she was reading her letter and got a greater shock

"DEAREST manyata my personal bear,

I know I am stupid and crazy I do thing that irk you many a times but I will like to remind you that I am best in cooking and stiching and never will you get a better life partner than me I love you manyata and really I know you will marry me after all you will never get a better match than me and even if you do I will make sure HE is DEAD so do not keep your eyes scrolling down just kiss me dammit I have been dying for it since so long and now that we are old enough we can do what pleases us seriously you are still reading I said KISS ME I NEED TO FEEL YOUR LIPS ON MINE NOW

Yours and only yours uday"

She looked at him with a smile that could light up the entire world and placed her lips on his , shocking him as in middle of the kiss she mumbled to him

"I love you uday"

He took her waist into his arms and said to her

" I love you too"

They got married after a month and now they are happily married with a one year son named arya who is in nursery and have just dug a secret letter with his best friend shreya which they will dug out in there reunion

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NO RES BOX

SORRY I KNOW ITS A COMPLETE BORE

ACTUALLY I AM NOT THAT GOOD IN ROMANTIC OS OR SS


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Itsss faboulsss mona
love it yara
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Posted: 12 years ago
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what a treat for comeback
a happy ss and now an os
but too short
liked it so much
awn so cute storyy
and the lines were so good
kotha theke jepechiss bol toh
thanks for the pm
update asap
Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh m so sorry I read it in morning but god knows how I forgot to comment!!!
awesome update!!!
loved it loads!!!
it was truly awesome!!
you made my day!!
UV toh bachpan se hi bahot naughty hai han nahi toh!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its very cute specially Uday's letter so quoting those lines 😊


"DEAREST manyata my personal bear,

I know I am stupid and crazy I do thing that irk you many a times but I will like to remind you that I am best in cooking and stiching and never will you get a better life partner than me I love you manyata and really I know you will marry me after all you will never get a better match than me and even if you do I will make sure HE is DEAD so do not keep your eyes scrolling down just kiss me dammit I have been dying for it since so long and now that we are old enough we can do what pleases us seriously you are still reading I said KISS ME I NEED TO FEEL YOUR LIPS ON MINE NOW

Yours and only yours uday"


These lines are the best part of this OS 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Mona di
How u? 😊
Wow, what an awesome comeback 👏
The os was amazing, mind blowing
Seriously got no words to describe it ⭐️
Aww, it was soo cute
They both liked each other since childhood n were waiting for each other
Truly love it
The box were the letters were n how they searched for it was soo cute
Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww such a cute os.
Loved it loads!
The letter were sweet and uday
Calling manyata my bear was cute.
It was just fabulous.
The way they waited for each other and
Reunited after many years was very nice.
Do write more os because you are a fabulous writer.
Thnxx for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CUTE OS MONA.BEAUTIFUL.

LETTERS OF MANVEER WERE SO CUTE.

WELL WRITTEN.WRITE MORE.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I LOVED IT...SO MUCH MONU U ROCK YAR..!!!
PLJJ UPDATE UR OTHER WOKKSS...!!!
I REALLY LOVED THIS WRITTEN OMG IT'S AWSOME
YAR MANVEER SHREYA ALL AWSOME
UR THINKING WRITTING GREAT
N MANVEER PICTURES I LOVED IT
U R THE BRELIANT WRITTER JUST FANTABULOUS
PLSS U UPDATE UR WORKSS
WRITE MORE CUZ U ROCK
N I LOVED UR THINKING WRITTING SO MUCH
U R THE BEST WRITTER
I ALSO GIVE YOU LIKE DEAR
BDW MANYATA SO SWEET
PERSONAL BEAR SCENE SO SWEET
LAST MANVEER SAY EACH
I LOVE YOU IT'S AWSOME
FULL STORY WAS FABULOUS
U KNOW I LOVED UR WRITTING
LOL MAYBE U R THE JUST FABULOUSE WRITTER
THANK YOU 4 THE PM
N REALLY REALLY SORRY 4 THE LATE COMMENT
I M BUSY N GOT ACCIDENT SO THAT'S WHY COMMENTING LATE
AWSOME AGAIN LOVE YOU
MIUAHW
HUGSS
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: NaughtyDreamGal

I LOVED IT...SO MUCH MONU U ROCK YAR..!!!
PLJJ UPDATE UR OTHER WOKKSS...!!!
I REALLY LOVED THIS WRITTEN OMG IT'S AWSOME
YAR MANVEER SHREYA ALL AWSOME
UR THINKING WRITTING GREAT
N MANVEER PICTURES I LOVED IT
U R THE BRELIANT WRITTER JUST FANTABULOUS
PLSS U UPDATE UR WORKSS
WRITE MORE CUZ U ROCK
N I LOVED UR THINKING WRITTING SO MUCH
U R THE BEST WRITTER
I ALSO GIVE YOU LIKE DEAR
BDW MANYATA SO SWEET
PERSONAL BEAR SCENE SO SWEET
LAST MANVEER SAY EACH
I LOVE YOU IT'S AWSOME
FULL STORY WAS FABULOUS
U KNOW I LOVED UR WRITTING
LOL MAYBE U R THE JUST FABULOUSE WRITTER
THANK YOU 4 THE PM
N REALLY REALLY SORRY 4 THE LATE COMMENT
I M BUSY N GOT ACCIDENT SO THAT'S WHY COMMENTING LATE
AWSOME AGAIN LOVE YOU
MIUAHW
HUGSS


thank you so much dear i am sorry i am not being able to comment actually i suck when it comes to commenting and actually things are keeping me busy so it is being hard for me to update or comment thank you so much

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