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Posted: 12 years ago
RES I'm on my phone but I shall give you a nice lamba comment on all chapters tonight!

Ok I'm back! Sorry that took so long. But what to do! Life got in the way 😆

First of all YAY! YOU WROTE AGAIN! I LOVED the first FF Pehla Pyaar. I could relate to Zoya on so many levels (except the reciprocation lol) But any how. This is about "Untitled"

First of all, the title... I've been racking my brain, and nothing seems apt. But after the last chapter, I feel like it should related to love, parental love, forgiveness and stuff etc. Hope that gets the ball rolling for ya 😛 (Actually how about "Little Angel" 😳 for Aakeer and for Zoya coming back in their lives)

OMG you totally shocked me with Zoya being married to Zoya. And I was also a little shocked (but immensely relieved) that Tanveer IS NOT his wife. THANK GOD.

Dilshad will never cease to amaze me. The way she thinks ahead, and is willing to put her life at risk to reveal the truth of the Cat's ways to her son is amazing. Her maternal love for her kids is just amazing. And you totally did it justice. I wanted to scratch and quarter that stupid cat for putting Dilshad in that state.

The way you described Zoya and Asad's emotions when they see each other, and Zoya's dread at seeing Asad was amazing. Haha Tanveer. That woman never ceases to surprise me. Even after seeing Zoya back, she has to gloat. What a blithering idiot. You described her character and crudeness to a T.

Their relation (Asya) and their heartfelt talk was so necessary. I actually love that you didn't get Zoya to try to tell him the truth until she had gathered a GOOD amount of proof against the cat. (Sorry I just can't think of her as human 😆) And Asad's reaction when he did find out was perfection. The anger, the guilt, the disbelief. Amazing. That's all I can say. How their relation improved afterwards and how Zoya insists on keeping up the charade was so sad but so well done.

And then their little romantic scenes were just tooo cute! I loved them! Tanveer is just... UGH she needs to die. No that's too good for her. She needs to be in a mental asylum. 🤣

All in all your story is AMAZING. And as much as I would hate to see a one year leap in the show, IF they had done it instead of Zoya going to a madressa, THIS would have been a KILLER way to go about the current track of the cat high jacking Asya's suhaagraat.

Loved it hun! NOW UPDATE SOON! Pretty please 😳

And thank you! For the compliment! You're too sweet 😳😳😳 🤗
Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just caught up with this ff, beautifully written. it is going better than da serial itself, pls cont
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Originally posted by: sohu_ksgian

This one was just A-H-M-A-Z-I-N-G 👏
You write freaking so well..Cant wait for the next part!!! Im loving every bit of it😳

Thank you Soni Embarrassed..glad you like it..
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Originally posted by: mochhug

RES I'm on my phone but I shall give you a nice lamba comment on all chapters tonight!

😃 Look forward too it..
Can't wait..especially coming from such a awesome writer like you.
Gona start fangirling now 😆 ..
Thank you for reading and commenting..made my day 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...just wow...I read a good amount of qubool hai fan fics but this one is by far one of the best! I mean I love the ones that are completely out of the story line like there childhood friends or like there actually secret agents but this story is something more "realistic" for the show I hope you get what I mean...I stayed up until 5 in the morning reading this many times...it's so good please update soon! And please pm me the next update...
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Wow...just wow...I read a good amount of qubool hai fan fics but this one is by far one of the best! I mean I love the ones that are completely out of the story line like there childhood friends or like there actually secret agents but this story is something more "realistic" for the show I hope you get what I mean...I stayed up until 5 in the morning reading this many times...it's so good please update soon! And please pm me the next update...

😲 5 in the morning..
Thank you so much for liking and reading. Can't tell you how much that means to me. There are some awesome writers on the forum, with much more experience than me, to have my imagination termed as one of the best it truly awesome and quite humbling 😳
Thank you once again for reading.
I have added you to my PM list..
Please do keep commenting it keeps me inspired to write some more..
Have an awesome day..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey friend,
Thank you so much for all the encouragement and awesome comments. I am glad some of you actually like my story to the current story line on the show. The negativity is quite depressing. But I still hope that the show would actually turn around. In the meantime I continued with my imagination and how I would love things to go..
So in this chapter I experimented I wrote my first ever "MATURE" scene 😳 ..Please do let me know what you think.
Please ignore any errors not proof read..
Will send PM's later..
Please do comment..
PS : Keep the title suggestion s coming..

Chapter 10

"Asad Tanveer signed the adoption papers Aakeer is ours"...

Zoya's excitement knew no bounds. She was ecstatic. She jumped up and threw her arms around Asad and kissed him on the cheek loudly. Asad wrapped his hands around her. He would do anything to keep her happy. Asad knew he took a big gamble by getting the adoption papers ready and signed without her permission but he was equally ecstatic now that she approved and was happy. But this was his Zoya ready to sacrifice anything for the sake of others. He tightened his hold around her. "Zoya, are you happy, will you do this with me, "he asked just needing a verbal confirmation from her. Zoya pulled away a little and looked him in the eye, "Yes, Asad. I am more than excited. You made me an ammi, without all the hard work" she said with a giggle "and we are very happy as well" they heard from behind them. Najma and Dilshaad had witnessed everything. They stood there with their excitement evident on their face. Dilshaad walked to Asad and kissed him on the forehead "I am so proud of you Asad. Thank you so much, for making me a daadi" beemed Dilshaad proudly. Najma ran forward and hugged Zoya, "We just came up cos we were so surprised to hear bhai jaan singing after so long but this was a double surprise. Zoya, you are an ammi and I phuphi" Najma was almost bouncing with excitement, "thank you thank you bhaijaan" Asad hugged Najma. Zoya picked a sleeping Aakeer out his stroller and hugged him tightly, "You are mine now baby boy, I promise to love you even more than an ammi ever could. I will never leave you" said Zoya with tears in her eyes thinking of her ammi. Dilshaad slowly walked to Zoya and touched her shoulder "Zoya you will be the best ammi ever, I have full confidence in you" Dilshaad lovingly stroked Zoya's hair and kissed a sleeping Aakeer. Najma went to the duo and hugged them both, "Zoya, I knew when you came home everything will be perfect", Asad feeling a little left over went and put his hands around his family. "It's is perfect now" he smiled. Dilshaad smiled and touched his face, remember always "Zindagi ki yehi reet hai, Haar ke baad hi jeet hai "her family was complete now. "No ammi, not just yet. We have to get rid of the evil that is still in our home. Tanveer does not know about this yet, I have other plans in revealing this to her" The ladies understood as they felt his arms tighten around them, their lion was back. Najma broke the hug and took Aakeer from Zoya, "Today my nephew is going to sleep with us" announced Najma. Dilshaad smiled "Yes, he abbu and ammi have a lot of catching up to do. I want a lot more grand children" teased Dilshaad. Asad and Zoya blushed. Everyone wished each other good night. Asad and Zoya both kissed their now son good night and watched him go to with his daadi and phuphi. This all still felt like a dream to Zoya. Asad held Zoya by the shoulders, "Thank you Zoya," said Asad. Zoya looked at him confused "Without you I would have never been able to give them that joy, without you my family would still be incomplete. Thank you" continued Asad and pulled Zoya in for a hug. Asad knew Zoya was content with everything when he heard her sigh, but he could also feel that she was missing something. "Zoya, tomorrow I think we should go to the orphanage you were adopted from" said Asad surprising Zoya. Zoya pulled away and looked at him with surprise "Zoya, we are starting our new life together. I know you wanted to find out about your past. For our future to be okay, I won't say perfect cos we will have our moments "teased Asad and Zoya smacked his arm. "We have to get rid of our past. Zoya I want to help you just like how you have always helped me and my family, I want to help you find yours" said Asad. Zoya was speechless for the second time that night. Zoya fell in love more with Asad at that moment. She threw her arms around him and said "I love you Asad, thank you for coming into my life. I know we will be okay as long as we are with each other" and she hugged him tighter. Asad picked up Zoya and carried her to their room.

AN: Mature Content (Please excuse any errors, it's my first time writing a scene like this)

He gently laid her on the bed like she was a glass doll and hovered just above to afraid to touch her. Asad gently ran his finger tips along the curve of her cheek. Yes, thought Zoya he had touched her like that before yet it still seemed like the first time. Why hadn't she paid attention to all these little gestures before? Why hadn't she realized how much it meant to her? Did she need words so much that she ignored the quieter simpler signs of affection? Asad's finger tip took a little jump as if he touched something hot unexpectedly he moved away from her, the look in her eyes was something he could not walk away from. "Not a good idea for the both of us. You should sleep. Tomorrow is a big day for you" Said Asad moving away. Zoya held onto his retreating hand. "I don't want to think about tomorrow, or today or next week or yesterday. I just want now "said Zoya softly. "We are alive and I don't want to alone", continued Zoya with tears forming in her eyes. Zoya wasn't speaking for just tonight but of all the nights without him. "You are not alone ever" whispered Asad coming back to her. Asad took her hand and brought it to his lips, "Close your eyes" he whispered. Instead Zoya rose, sliding up body to body until her arms were chained around his neck. "Be with me" she looked in the eye and whispered. Zoya covered his mouth with hers and poured herself into the kiss before he could change his mind, "Please be with me" she whispered against his mouth again. She was trembling he realized. Part fear at her boldness, part need and part love. Asad gathered her closer, pressed his face into her the curve of her neck. "Tell me you need me, tell me you love me, just once" said Asad softly. "I do need you. I love you always. You are the only one I ever could really love. Touch me" said Zoya with her tears glistening. "Asad, don't think. We have waited too long. Just feel". "I can't stop shaking, Zoya are you sure this is what you really want", asked Asad for the last time giving her a chance to back out before he lost all control. Zoya looked at him in the eye and gave him all the confirmation and reassurance he needed. He unbuttoned her kurti bending over to brush light kisses on her throat, her shoulders. But when she reached for him he eased back and pressed her hands down again. "No, wait. Close your eyes. Just close your eyes. This is our first time and I want it to be the most special for us. I will touch you" whispered Asad. She let her lashes lower. The air was cool against her skin when he removed her kurti. He loving looked at the scar on her arm and gently trailed kissed over the scar. Zoya felt the warm tears down her cheeks at his gesture. His fingers were warm as they trailed over her. Warm, she thought. Asad was so slow like he was worshipping every inch of her body. Her belly quivered as his hands trailed over her pants. He pressed his lips lightly over her belly button as his hands tugged at her pants. She lifted her hips so it could easily slip off. As he removed her pants he trailed kisses down her leg. He didn't stop when he got to her feet and kissed her instep. Zoya was lost now and Zoya being Zoya remembered a Google fact "Do you know that as per proven theories the first true orgasm started with the feet" blurted Zoya. Asad smiled as he stopped kissing her feet. Nervous babbling he thought, Zoya could almost face palm herself, where did that random thought come from she thought, what an idiot I must have sounded like. She kicked herself mentally. "I like you feet, they're small and almost delicate" said Asad normally. He ran his teeth along the side and smiled again when her body jerked. "And very sensitive. Then there's your legs which I can't stop fantasising about since I saw you in that napkin of a skirt" confessed Asad. He let his mouth roam above her ankle and up her calf "I can't say enough about your legs." Then suddenly he pressed his face to her belly " Mashallah Zoya, you smell the same. I'd wake up smelling you when you were a thousand miles away. Wake up wanting you everyday" He confessed and captured her mouth in his. Every day, every night he thought as her scent surrounded him. Haunting him and taunting him until he wished with every fibre in his being he could hate her for leaving him. Now she was here, her arms tight around him her mouth was eager under his and this made him weak. Love for her blew through him like a gust of wind and left him helpless. His hand came up to cup her face, His lips softened, gentled on hers. The change in the tone had Zoya open her eyes "Asad". "ssh" he said and he laid a kiss of utter tenderness in the hollow of her throat, "don't think" he repeated "Just feel " When his mouth came back to hers in a kiss of lingering sweetness, she went plaint under him. A surrender he realised. Both of them surrendering in a way they never have before. Her heart was thudding thickly under his lips and breath was slow and ragged. And still the tenderness for her drifted over desire like a mist. The air was so heavy, so warm, and so soft. It was gliding over her and Zoya went over to a world where there was only pleasure. Asad had taken her there. Zoya sighed his name on his lips. Asad's lips, tongue and hands slid over her as they soothed and aroused, calmed and awakened all at once. When his lips found hers again when they lingered as if there were nothing more important in the world than that single kiss, Zoya's heart simply melted. The feel of him under her hands that long, lean torso when he stripped his kurta away. Those narrow hips and hard muscles. His body excited her and knowing it was hers, hers for the taking and only hers brought her unbearable pleasure. She shuddered with it and nipped her teeth into his shoulders when the pressure built "Asad". Asad just smiled into his kiss and deepened it. Time, nothing but time. The scent for her, the quiver of her body, the heat that was beginning to radiate out of her skin, he wanted all of that and so much more, this feeling erased every lonely hour he spent without her. Asad pressed his lips over her throat, her shoulder her mouth and let the need for her rage through him. As he nudged her over the first peak, he heard the strangled cry of his name beat in his blood. Now they watched each other and moved tighter, they saw each other's eyes blur, both pleasure and tears. Asad gripped Zoya's hands with his and crushed her mouth. Asad stripped Zoya's heart bare. She wondered if he didn't feel it quivering in his hand. Love filled her eyes, Asad's love in his eyes for her made tears well up, she kept her hands in his and he never moved his eyes of her. She stayed and he stayed with her until they both shattered. "I love you" they both said together and drifted slowly to sleep. Asad pulled the sheet over both of them and Zoya snuggled in close. Asad kissed Zoya's head and whispered I Love you forever before they both drifted off to sleep.

Zoya slept deeply and peacefully then fitfully the dreams began to chase her. In a room, fire all around her. She could feel the heat, her throat getting dry. She could feel herself screaming but no voice coming out. She couldn't get out. She couldn't save her ammi. The smell of flesh burning was blinding her, she couldn't breathe. As she struggled, the air became thicker with the smell, she could not breathe. Zoya woke up with a start, struggling for breathe. The room was cool, there was no smell. She felt an arm around her waist. She was safe. She looked over to Asad and smiled. She loved this man with every cell, fibre, breathe she had. Zoya turned his arms so that she was facing him. Zoya was staring at Asad's peaceful face. How innocent he looked, she thought. He looked at peace finally. Zoya remembered the first time she had seen him when he almost ran her down. How she hated him them, who would have thought then she would be here in his arms now not able to think of life without him. "Zoya, if you stare any longer, you might burn a hole in my face" said Asad sleepily bringing a surprised and embarrassed Zoya closer. Zoya could feel his six pack against her belly. Asad could actually feels Zoya's hot cheeks against his skin, he smiled "Zoya it's a little too late to be blushing" he teased. Zoya's eyes widened with surprise , she pushed him and sat up on the bed holding the sheet around her. "Mr Khan, since when did you became so besharm" asked Zoya whose cheeks was still red. Asad smiled and sat up as well, not bothering to cover his chest, knowing full well the effect it had on Zoya "Well Mrs Khan, I can be besharm with you only" he said looking at Zoya. Zoya looked at him and said "And you better remember that" she warned. Asad brought her closer and kissed her forehead lovingly, "Zoya, I am yours" he placed her hand over his heart "This heart beats for you only". Zoya kissed him lightly on his lips. "Good, now we better get out of bed and go get our son" she said jumping out of bed and then she got right back in. "Allah Miya, I got no clothes in her." Asad had already had his pants on. "Well, good then you should have moved into our room a long time ago" he teased. Oh really, thought Zoya, Mr OCD Khan, watch what I do now. Zoya took a deep breath in and mentally said Zoya you can do this, he is your husband after all. Zoya got out of bed and walked very slowly to Asad's closet, she knew Asad's eyes were following her bare body. She smiled when she heard him gulp. Zoya turned around and looked Asad with his comic stunned expression. Yeah baby, got you thought Zoya. She reached the closet and took his black favourite shirt of the hanger and put in on. Asad walked to Zoya and helped her button the shirt up. "Mrs Khan, I don't think this shirt has ever looked so good like it does now on you" whispered Asad holding Zoya close. Zoya, being the cheeky person she was, wiped her nose with his sleeve. Asad's eyes grew wide. Zoya knew his OCD was eating at him now, she rubbed her sleeve again over her nose. Asad got her a tissue quickly. "Zoya can you not wipe your nose" shouted Asad annoyed. Zoya didn't mind the shouting "No, Mr Khan, this is so much softer" teased Zoya and wiped her nose again. Asad made a move to catch Zoya, but she ducked and ran out the room, only to stop at the door and stick her tongue out him. Asad could only stare at her retreating back "Shit I love her" I said falling onto his bed.

Najma and Dilshaad was already at the breakfast table with Aakeer when Asad came in, he greeted everyone and kissed Aakeer. "Did you miss abbu" asked Asad to Aakeer. Tanveer walked in at that point. Abbu? Did she just hear Asad call himself Aakeer's abbu. Ya Allah, thank you so much, Tanveer thanked God. Tanveer adjusted her dupatta and walked to the table. "Salaam" she said to no one in particular. Every one ignored her. Dilshaad continued feeding Aakeer. " Arrey Khala, you rest I will feed Aakeer after all he is my ladla beta" said Tanveer sweetly. Tanveer tried to feed Aakeer, but he started howling. Asad picked up Aakeer and quietened him. Najma came and took him. "Bhai-jaan, please don't be upset but I have arranged for abbu to come take ammi and I to the doctor today" said Najma softly. Asad dropped his spoon in his cereal. Najma was expecting a shouting today. And Tanveer was waiting for the explosion. "Bhai-jaan Zoya arranged this with abbu last night and informed ammi and me today" continued Najma. Oh, this gets even better thought Tanveer, I don't have to do any work. Tanveer sat back and waited for the lion to attack his prey. "Asad, I will not go if you don't want me to go, but I think we should tell you that every day since I have been sick, Rashid has been calling and checking up on me all the time I have sick." Said Dilshaad. Tanveer could see the rage in Asad's eyes. This is like Eid, she thought, all this all together so many gifts. Ya Allah I could die of excitement thought Tanveer. Everyone expecting some serious roaring was quite surprised when Asad said "ammi, do you mind taking Aakeer with you as well?" There was silence at the table. The ladies were shocked. Najma was the first to recover "No Bhai-jaan, I actually wanted to ask you if we could". The door bell rang. Asad got up to answer it whilst Najma got Aakeer's bag ready. As Asad opened the door he was almost tackled in a hug.

"Bhai-jaaann, I missed you so much" shrieked Ayaan. Asad hugged Ayaan back. Asad looked over Ayaan's shoulder and saw his "abbu". "Salaam" said Rashid. Everyone held their breaths and waited for Asad "Salaam" returned Asad. "Come in" said Asad. Najma went up to Rashid carrying Aakeer. Rashid hugged Najma. And picked up Aakeer, "So this my grandson" asked Rashid to no one in particular hugging Aakeer. Tanveer thought she would explode with joy her son was being accepted into this family. He will be their heir. Tanveer stood next to Asad, waiting for some sort of recognition. Asad and everyone ignored her. Ayaan brought Dilshaad to the door after saying bye and all the luck to Zoya. Asad kissed Aakeer and his ammi good bye and made Najma promise to call him every 15 minutes. They left. Asad and Ayaan went into the kitchen. Tanveer was once again left standing on her own. Oh well, she thought everything is working out just how she wanted it without her doing any work here. Maybe it's time she sought out an old friend.

"So my bhai-jaan is an abbu now, Wow! I can't believe it" Ayaan was excited. Asad smiled and Ayaan and handed him his coffee. "Bhai-jaan you have changed so much. You didn't even react when you saw abbu. You even accepted a child that is not yours, the same child's mother that have given you nothing but grief, why bhai-jaan? Why are doing all this" asked Ayaan. Asad smiled "Ayaan my reason, will walk in here in a few seconds, asking me not to forget the milk and sugar in her coffee" said Asad happily. Ayaan heard a door open and Zoya walked out in a green anarkali busy on her iPad. She didn't look up and she said "Jahapanah, please don't forget to add milk and sugar to my coffee". Ayaan's mouth hung open. Ayaan looked at his bhai-jaan smile and understood just how in love his bhai-jaan was. Zoya looked up finally and saw a stunned Ayaan, "what happened Raabert? Did I miss something?" Asked Zoya totally oblivious to the brother's conversation. Zoya sat down at her place and Asad placed the coffee in front of her and kissed her on top of her head. Zoya looked at Asad and said Arz kiya hai, galti ki saaza hota hai, bol ki hota maafi, jahanapanah 6 pack Kaneez ki banaka liya coffee , shukriya shukriya" Asad rolled his eyes and smiled. "Okay, that's it! " Said Ayaan loudly "Who are you and what have you done with my bhai-jaan"? Zoya throw a napkin at Ayaan. Zoya held Asad's hand and said "When you find love you will understand". Asad squeezed Zoya's hand in reassurance. "Waise, how is Rajni?" asked Zoya. Asad smiled. "What? You think I don't know about the going on's here. I will let you know abbu has filled me in all the details." Said Zoya. Ayaan and Asad was shocked, Zoya looked at them "What? You guys forget that he was my dost before he became my abbu. Granted I did not speak to him in the last 3 months but I know some things. So how is Rajni?" Ayaan smiled "Humera is fine. She has gotten her memories back. I realised that maybe I care for more than I know. You never know how much you care about someone until you away from them" said Ayaan softly. Asad and Zoya looked at each other, they knew that feeling all too well. Breakfast was done. Ayaan and Asad cleared the table whilst Zoya did the dishes. Asad went to his room whilst Ayaan gave Zoya company in the kitchen. "Where are you guys off too" asked Ayaan sitting on the counter eating an apple. "Lall Jumma Madressa" said Zoya wiping her hands and applying hand lotion to her hands "Perfect ! "said Ayaan "I will just get a ride from you guys". Asad walked out with Zoya's music box, "I thought you would like to have this with you" he said handing it to her. Zoya smiled and looked at Asad. Who would have thought Akdu Ahmed Khan would be so sweet. Asad turned Zoya and put on her mother's ear rings. Zoya was shocked she thought she had lost the ear ring. Asad hugged her an whispered "I wanted you to have a bit of both them today" he wiped Zoya's tears. Ayaan was happy seeing them like this it's about time they get some happiness. "Ahem" Said Ayaan "Can we go, I am beginning to miss Humera" he whispered the last part.

They drove in silence to madressa. When the stopped in front of the building, Zoya remembered the time she was there. Ayaan got out and walked to the back of the madressa. What he saw stumped him. He felt like he had been hit by a truck. There stood Humera covered with sand running behind several kids, laughing loudly. It was then Ayaan realized he was in love. He cared about the sweet, shy, perfect dressed and groomed Humera, but he fell in love with this dirty, loud beautiful Humera. Humera saw Ayaan looking at her, she looked at him and shrugged her hands and smiled. Ayaan of his own will walked slowly to Humera and hugged her. Humera was shocked but ecstatic she finally felt loved in his arms. Meanwhile Asad and Zoya were walking hand in hand up the stairs. Asad saw the wall he rescued Zoya from. He squeezed her hand tighter. Zoya put her head on his shoulder to reassure him that she was here. He saved her then and he will always save her. Zoya smiled at the sight in front of her. She smiled and looked at Asad and then Asad followed her gaze. HE smiled as well. Well it's about time he thought. Asad held Zoya's hand and said "Zoya, listen before we go in. I want you to know, I love you no matter who your parents are and where you come from, all that does not matter to me. I don't care where you come from whatever you find out I'll always be by your side no matter what , I'll be there to comfort you during the difficult times when your upset when you feel like crying you can always depend on me, I'm right then when you need me I'll come immediately when you call or if you need a shoulder to cry on I'll always be by your side. When you are hurt or sad so am I - When your upset I get a deep cut in my heart if you want to scream I'll be right next to you screaming along. I love you and that's never going to change. I'll always protect you from anything because I love you I'll never give you up because I believe you are the only one that can bring me joy no matter what happens I'll always be by your side...."

Edited by Denita-ishq - 12 years ago
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Beautifully written...looking forward to the next part
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awesome and romantic update...👏
loved it..
very well written...
Ayaan my reason, will walk in here in a few seconds, asking me not to forget the milk and sugar in her coffee
loved this dialogue... 😳
conti soon
thnx for pm..🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurnASYA

awesome and romantic update...👏

loved it..
very well written...
Ayaan my reason, will walk in here in a few seconds, asking me not to forget the milk and sugar in her coffee
loved this dialogue... 😳
conti soon
thnx for pm..🤗

😃 So glad you like it..
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