FF - Untitled is now The sins of the father (Epilogue Page 112)

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Gudduluvs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#311

Wow..d awedum ort...bequtiful writtn...gr8..wrk..jst luvd it...thnks for pm...

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Nim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#312

Hey dear, the part was simply FANTABULOUS!

I am in love with Asad, like I wasn't before duh, but his sweet love filled gestures towards Zoe & his family make me fall for him deeper. his world n all his actions revolve around Zoya only.

Nothing much to say abt Zoe, she's always been like this, a doll with a heart of gold, sacrificing herself for others.

the Ayaan & family's part where dey are over whelmed to have Aaakeer as their, is so heart touching. I felt sad for da poor child to be dat bitch's son, but not anymore, cause now he has da best parents one could have

love.

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Alisha

@luv angel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#313

Hey just read all 10 parts in one go! Great work! Please add me to your pm list! Thank :)

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#314

Nice! I'm excited to see what happens next ! Tks

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kundra

@kundra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#315

Awesome. No Tanveer in this chapter.

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#316

hey i read your entire story (almost ...last 6 parts i think😕) and its just A-H-M-A-Z-I- N-G!!! 👏Hats off to you!! you are a freakin'awesome writer and the way you have brought about this story is FANTASTIC!!!👏 and since i couldn't comment on your last parts i came up with a title suggestion as you asked...how about "Correcting my Mistakes" or "The Truth cannot be hidden" or...okay i'll stop or i'll risk giving you a headache. I know my suggestions are crap but then again...that's me😆

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#317

tis is really amazing...totally luv it...it superb...

wow aakheer is now legally asad n zoya baby n zoya dilshad n najma all are happy with the decision...asad n zoya share the most beautifull bond n hw strong is their love for each other n they will be together to overcome all the problem...wow asad is not angry when rashid came to take dilshad n najma for the check up...totally addicted to tis ff n it one of my favourite...thx fr the pm n please pm me for the next part...please continue soon n eagerly waiting for the next part...

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Denita

@Deen...

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#318

Originally posted by: Madame_Noddy
hey i read your entire story (almost ...last 6 parts i think😕) and its just A-H-M-A-Z-I- N-G!!! 👏Hats off to you!! you are a freakin'awesome writer and the way you have brought about this story is FANTASTIC!!!👏 and since i couldn't comment on your last parts i came up with a title suggestion as you asked...how about "Correcting my Mistakes" or "The Truth cannot be hidden" or...okay i'll stop or i'll risk giving you a headache. I know my suggestions are crap but then again...that's me😆

Thank you Srija 🤗

Cannot tell you how much you have boosted my morale..

Lol..no head ache at all keep the suggestion and comments coming..😊

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Denita

@Deen...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#319

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
Hey dear, the part was simply FANTABULOUS!
I am in love with Asad, like I wasn't before duh, but his sweet love filled gestures towards Zoe & his family make me fall for him deeper. his world n all his actions revolve around Zoya only.

Nothing much to say abt Zoe, she's always been like this, a doll with a heart of gold, sacrificing herself for others.

the Ayaan & family's part where dey are over whelmed to have Aaakeer as their, is so heart touching. I felt sad for da poor child to be dat bitch's son, but not anymore, cause now he has da best parents one could have

love.

thank you Nim 🤗 I love Asad as well, in my world this is how Asad should be. Don't get me wrong I love him to bits..but the way he is being portrayed right now in the show is breaking my 💔 his character is capable for so much more..

Thank you for reading and the awesome comments..keep them coming..

xoxo