TwoShot - The Awakening of Destiny (Part2: Pg 3) NEW!

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sharneil92

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Posted: 12 years ago

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apolloartemis

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Posted: 12 years ago

This is amazing! The description, the scenery, the weight of the moment. How "destiny" has different meanings for both Jodha and Akbar, yet there is the sense that has awakened only for them. In a way, they are both "self-centered" na? The right of a royal I suppose😊
Everything comes together so beautifully in this- Kudos and kudos again!
Now, I must be the ravening fangirl and demand you write more!

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sharneil92

@sharneil92

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: apolloartemis
This is amazing! The description, the scenery, the weight of the moment. How "destiny" has different meanings for both Jodha and Akbar, yet there is the sense that has awakened only for them. In a way, they are both "self-centered" na? The right of a royal I suppose😊
Everything comes together so beautifully in this- Kudos and kudos again!
Now, I must be the ravening fangirl and demand you write more!

Ah differences. Yes. While Jodha welcomes the light, Jalaal revels in the darkness before light. While she's serious, he's ridiculing. When Destiny "sheds light on their futures" Jodha treats her fate with some amount of seriousness, while Jalaal is careless about it. I think that is the turn even the show's taking, isn't it?

Self-centred, aren't we all? 😆 But I guess they the centres of their very own worlds. Two rather different worlds. And when they meet, reaching a mid-point would be difficult. And that would be the thrill of it.

😳 Now I'm crimson. HAHA! But writing again for this? 🤔 You should know that my bouts of so called "creativity" come once in a blue moon. There's some major blockage in the piping system of my brain these days. Haha. Gotta clean up a bit.

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disha

@disha15

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Posted: 12 years ago

res.!

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Loved the way you began the story with that paragraph from Moulin Rouge

You have amazing diction!Beautifully described scene of Jodha waking up in the morning! 👏

i loved the way how perfectly normal(yet beautiful) scene suddenly switched to something,not dangerous,but mysterious.

Ur description of Jalal!I love it when there is so much depth to a character.moreover,here,so much depth and thought put into your writing! 👏

i myself had been thinking about writing an os based on Jalal's complex mind.But i possibly couldn't,after reading this 😆 You're simply remarkable! 👏 PLEASE do not stop just here,we definitely want more!

oh and extra cookie points for that last quote by Bob Marley! <3

Edited by disha15 - 12 years ago

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aanchal_c

@aanchal_c

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

we need u to continue this os...plz...pretty plz.😊

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Incense

@Incense

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

hello sher minus neil 🤗 wow u brought as OS *rub eyes*😲 i m so excited and res 😳

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Piu Chatterjee

@Transference

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

BHALUUU RES RES RES DOES A HAPPY DANCEWA🥳

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sharneil92

@sharneil92

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: disha15
res.!

EDIT.

Loved the way you began the story with that paragraph from Moulin Rouge

You have amazing diction!Beautifully described scene of Jodha waking up in the morning! 👏

i loved the way how perfectly normal(yet beautiful) scene suddenly switched to something,not dangerous,but mysterious.

Ur description of Jalal!I love it when there is so much depth to a character.moreover,here,so much depth and thought put into your writing! 👏

i myself had been thinking about writing an os based on Jalal's complex mind.But i possibly couldn't,after reading this 😆 You're simply remarkable! 👏 PLEASE do not stop just here,we definitely want more!

oh and extra cookie points for that last quote by Bob Marley! <3

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! ☺️

I'm blushing right now as if Akbar just asked me to marry him or something. 😆

It's so heartwarming to have my feelings "sent" to you the way I want them to be. I love it, I love it, I LOVE IT DAMN IT! 😆

And EK MINUTE. YOU WON'T WRITE ANYMORE?! 😲 Do you know how hard I've been scouring the entire JA forum for written works of fiction?! Okay missy, lets have a deal here. If you write, then I write. 😉 OKAY! And I want to be notified whenever you're writing. DEAL DEAL DEAL?! 😆

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sharneil92

@sharneil92

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aanchal_c
we need u to continue this os...plz...pretty plz.😊

Hmm.. I've struck a deal. If the other party agrees, I shall come back with more. But I shall warn you. I get "creative ideas" only once in a while. And it could be a long while before another one comes up. hahha. 😆 But I'll definitely consider it. I have college, freelancing work, part-time job, a few other fictions "under construction." Phew! LOTS TO DO! 😭