TwoShot - The Awakening of Destiny (Part2: Pg 3) NEW! - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very well written update. Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Awesome OS...Really loved it esp the quotes 👏 ⭐️ 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Lovely. Loved how you play with contrasts. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Bhalu m here I am here👏👏FABULOUS!!
Ok bacha I needed some time to read it agin at peace and ponder over the kind of depth and contrast as well as similarity you brought between both of them through the simplicity of a sunrise -THE UNIVERSE INDEED CONSPIRES.The destiny cannot be UNDERMINED..
Moulin RougeThe quote itself brought the memories of Satine*Those cherry red lips*
Ok Gushwa ends here But the profound beauty used with the sun rays and the way they both look upon it and their perceptions..Makes me shake HEAD now...WE NEED A JA FICTION SHALU PERIOD!!*makes a White kurta mein qiad wala Puppy facewa*

I WANT IT I WANT IT I WANT IT..I want you TO RIP*no not talking about the sherwani*
*Whispers to herself*😉(That will an added benefit LOL)
But I want you to rip his soul turn him inside out like you did with this one..I WANT A JA FICTION BAS !!
NO IF NOT BUT !
FF LIKHO PHATAPHAT😆😆😆*happy TEARS *back to my ghatiya shayari😛
P.S-I will personally make a bannerwa FOR YOU ..if you write this JA fiction...
DON'T MAKE ME BEG MORE*rolls eyes*

Edited by manzilmukul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful👏👏 These two have a marked difference in welcoming the new day sun...however, at last it's their destiny...the ultimate winner...

Continue please...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome post...

Moulin Rouge is one of my favorite writer...

That's why an extra mark...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Super Kool

Beautiful👏👏 These two have a marked difference in welcoming the new day sun...however, at last it's their destiny...the ultimate winner...


Continue please...😳


Thank youu! Yes! And they do win each as well. Everything happens for a reason, you see. 😳

Continuing, I'm still contemplating that thought. 😳 But when I do, You'll be the first to know. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Bhalu m here I am here👏👏FABULOUS!!
Ok bacha I needed some time to read it agin at peace and ponder over the kind of depth and contrast as well as similarity you brought between both of them through the simplicity of a sunrise -THE UNIVERSE INDEED CONSPIRES.The destiny cannot be UNDERMINED..
Moulin RougeThe quote itself brought the memories of Satine*Those cherry red lips*
Ok Gushwa ends here But the profound beauty used with the sun rays and the way they both look upon it and their perceptions..Makes me shake HEAD now...WE NEED A JA FICTION SHALU PERIOD!!*makes a White kurta mein qiad wala Puppy facewa*

I WANT IT I WANT IT I WANT IT..I want you TO RIP*no not talking about the sherwani*
*Whispers to herself*😉(That will an added benefit LOL)
But I want you to rip his soul turn him inside out like you did with this one..I WANT A JA FICTION BAS !!
NO IF NOT BUT !
FF LIKHO PHATAPHAT😆😆😆*happy TEARS *back to my ghatiya shayari😛
P.S-I will personally make a bannerwa FOR YOU ..if you write this JA fiction...
DON'T MAKE ME BEG MORE*rolls eyes*


You really shouldn't bring up the white kurta this often. 😲 That's EMOTIONAL BLACKMAIL!! 😲
Yaar, firstly, thank youuu! 😳 I'm glad you liked it.
secondly, Okay, I'll write it. But it should have no inhibitions, like, frequency of updates, the pace of the story, the length, the content, EVERYTHING! If I have full rule over what I want to write, then I'll consider it. Plus, now I'll be working on Gullu as well right? 😆

HAYEEE!~ Your shayaris are my FAV! 😆 DA BEST!

Dil aur mangta hai! 😳

And I'll take you up on the offer for banner. Let's discuss the deets on FB! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharneil92


You really shouldn't bring up the white kurta this often. 😲 That's EMOTIONAL BLACKMAIL!! 😲
Yaar, firstly, thank youuu! 😳 I'm glad you liked it.
secondly, Okay, I'll write it. But it should have no inhibitions, like, frequency of updates, the pace of the story, the length, the content, EVERYTHING! If I have full rule over what I want to write, then I'll consider it. Plus, now I'll be working on Gullu as well right? 😆

HAYEEE!~ Your shayaris are my FAV! 😆 DA BEST!

Dil aur mangta hai! 😳

And I'll take you up on the offer for banner. Let's discuss the deets on FB! 😃


DONEWA !!👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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