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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: minahil1996



Bhai tumhe tou abhii say hii lag gaya hai , agay kya banay ga! :D 🤣


Lol minahil nahi mujhay roza nahi lagta 😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
what is this?😕 hope ARSHI is ok...
Edited by dieforasr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it
hope arnav and khushi are fine 😭
update soon
Edited by Rohinid - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG
And you stop at such a cliff hanger and now we have to wait till Eid :(
Excellent Update!!!
Give us a SUPER LONG Update for Eidi ;0)
Ramzan Kareem!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res 😉

Sandy cliffhanger 😭
Nooo...
Ese tau nahi krti, ab aik month full aik month i've to wait...
How can you do this??? Anyways...
Awesome update...
Amazing superb but still cliffhanger... 😭
Edited by Aasmaali - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
arnav is trying to mend the relationship with khushi
and im happy for them
who the one want arnav dead?
i hope nobody get hurt
why it has to happen now only they are coming closer .
im scared waitng for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago

nice update👏

Ramzan kareem Mubarak😊

Edited by mishal07 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update.who got shot? I bet it will be Khusi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
the uppdate was good

best points
a. khushi's dialogue on not wasting food and money
b. thriller at end


bad points

a. The money issue is an important part. the chapter u wrote about the mall,lehenga gold digger and then the spa scenes...all were very properly justified But here this jalebi scene was important to make arnav realise and remember how bad she must hv felt wen arnav taunted her in lehenga showroom. How later khushi purchased gifts for all with her less money but didnt buy any thing for herself till now with raizada free money. so that money /self respect issue was important but u made a comedy out of it..arnav and khushi fighting like kids.
that was an important part of FF but that scene lost its importance cause the treatment given to that scene was not good at all. The soul of the scene got lost.

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