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Mujhe pm nahi Mila...
sanju ki bacchi... 😡

Me tuzhashi bolnar nahi...😡

Awesome update 👏
Loved each n every bit
Plz continue soon 😊

ossum ossum ossum update

HELLO!!!

In case you don't remember me, than I am not forgiving you. :x btw I know you would'ver forgotten me, who remembers a lost soul :'(
I hardly visit the forum!!!

The update was super good as always, well i didn't need to tell you, but i had to, you know!
ek bat bta dey? ye bandar kab maray ga. I seriously hate him like changeez khan. Manyata did good justice with him, lol.

haye the GAME got the truth out!!! i wonder what would be her reaction :| will she feel the same? gosh!!! why did you have to stop it at the highest peak, you are so so so cruel...

ufff...I am gonna die out of curiousity!!! ab agr tunay jaldi update nai mara na to teri khair nai...majnu k sath tera bhi keema bna dun gi!!!

update soon
&
Thanks for the PM.
LOVE YOU <3
HUGS XD

wah kia update mara!!! :D
sab sey achi bat ye ki main wqt par comment kr rahih hun... yakeen hi nai a raha...zra chutki to katna ;)

haye * flattered* what a romantic and sweet update :) i was lost in the dreamland...where majnu is ManVeer's cook and they are happily married with ManVeer doing romance in the kitchen and majnu cutting onion with teary eyes looking at his ex-wife romancing with her new husband. lol :p

the patang bazi is a good idea, i hope uday wins and he asks manuata out on a date and then everything happens and then you know :p

update soon
&
no thanks for the PM :p
LOVE YOU <3
HUGS.

awesome loved it the way uday was staring at manyata... and where they were they were wishing each other good luck and how uday kissed her cheeks was awesome... lol even i was upset when uday interrupted the lovely moment cant wait for the kite flying to start update soon and thanks for the pm

Okay sanju I had free time while I was waiting for u so I decided to read something and read ur story
So here is the comment
Chapter 1:
This update was really awesome but monash married ewww lol
Manveer scenes were sooo cute and lovely I truly loved them
The fight was tooo cute
Over all this update had everything I loved the humour and I was soo glad it did not have some emotional drama
Truly loved it keep it up

Chapter 2
This chapter was super amazing too just like chapter 1
Uday helped manyata poor him he is soo love struck lol
Kantabai and manyata conversation was superb
I am soo glad she got the slap lol
Manveer moments were tooo cute
Haha uday in the bedroom and akash at home lol
Sooo exciting lol
Loved the chapter
And it was very entertaining

Chapter 3
This updates was super fablous
Manveer sooo hot
I can imagine that whole scene it was beautiful
I love how u write the dialogues
Love it again
Haha akash can never beat udayveer
Awesome update

Chapter 4

This chapter was superb also although a little short
I loved unnati and manyatas conversatios
I loved the promo precap thing
it was amazing to see how much unnati loves her dada
And everything was superb awesome
I want more manveer lol

Chapter 5
Beautiful chapter sanju
Loved it tons and tons
Udays confessions were sooo amazing
Poor him he had became devdas lol
Waiting for manyata to get a reality check and confess her feelings too
Loved the reply manayat gave akash
Loved the brother sister bonding and everything else
Awesome keep up the fantastic job
BTW the update was emotional n I liked it so that's achievement lol

Chapter 6 and 7

The story is dedicated to me why did I not know it before
I am so sorry to be such a lazy bitch
Okay coming to the update
I loved jai actually I love her character here its awesome
Loved the episode tons
Vijaybhai is my favorite too
Thank u sooo much for the double update treat
Loved it soiooo much
Loved DS here

Chapter 8
K I am finally done with reading and this chapter was awesome
I am sooo happy with manveer centric update ayayaya lol
Awesome superb update
This update was sooo amazing
Loved manveer scenes
Uday indirectly taking manyatas name
And the love
I loved the desciptions and the minor details that u added in
Everything was superb
Thank u for such amazing chapters
Looking forward to read more

Sorry for short comments

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

Okay sanju I had free time while I was waiting for u so I decided to read something and read ur story
So here is the comment
Chapter 1:
This update was really awesome but monash married ewww lol
Manveer scenes were sooo cute and lovely I truly loved them
The fight was tooo cute
Over all this update had everything I loved the humour and I was soo glad it did not have some emotional drama
Truly loved it keep it up

Chapter 2
This chapter was super amazing too just like chapter 1
Uday helped manyata poor him he is soo love struck lol
Kantabai and manyata conversation was superb
I am soo glad she got the slap lol
Manveer moments were tooo cute
Haha uday in the bedroom and akash at home lol
Sooo exciting lol
Loved the chapter
And it was very entertaining

Chapter 3
This updates was super fablous
Manveer sooo hot
I can imagine that whole scene it was beautiful
I love how u write the dialogues
Love it again
Haha akash can never beat udayveer
Awesome update

Chapter 4

This chapter was superb also although a little short
I loved unnati and manyatas conversatios
I loved the promo precap thing
it was amazing to see how much unnati loves her dada
And everything was superb awesome
I want more manveer lol

Chapter 5
Beautiful chapter sanju
Loved it tons and tons
Udays confessions were sooo amazing
Poor him he had became devdas lol
Waiting for manyata to get a reality check and confess her feelings too
Loved the reply manayat gave akash
Loved the brother sister bonding and everything else
Awesome keep up the fantastic job
BTW the update was emotional n I liked it so that's achievement lol

Chapter 6 and 7

The story is dedicated to me why did I not know it before
I am so sorry to be such a lazy bitch
Okay coming to the update
I loved jai actually I love her character here its awesome
Loved the episode tons
Vijaybhai is my favorite too
Thank u sooo much for the double update treat
Loved it soiooo much
Loved DS here

Chapter 8
K I am finally done with reading and this chapter was awesome
I am sooo happy with manveer centric update ayayaya lol
Awesome superb update
This update was sooo amazing
Loved manveer scenes
Uday indirectly taking manyatas name
And the love
I loved the desciptions and the minor details that u added in
Everything was superb
Thank u for such amazing chapters
Looking forward to read more

Sorry for short comments