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1st of all..SO SORRY for being this late. I will be honest with you people.
I was in for a writer's block for this ff..
couldnt sleep for past 3 days and
finally.. finally deconstructed the whole story and framed it into something new and really exciting.
hope you all like it *fingers crossed*


PART 6

There was a complete silence and then she suddenly pulled away the pillow, "nothing is wrong with me... its something wrong with him. how dare he? Just wait till we meet the next time hot shot...", she spoke angrily, all to herself but then the 'other side' of hers was totally restless, "I hate you..."

She buried her face into the pillow again and slept off, giving into tiredness. The next day was going to be an important one—the meeting!

He stood by his window, watching the night city. Paris was indeed a beautiful place... and he smiled. The feel of her lips still lingered over his as he recalled how sweet she tasted.

"you are so different Geet... so different from what you seem to show off... I want to know you..more!"

She was like a flame, ready to burn everything around yet he was willing to become a moth and burn in her anguish. He didn't know what it was but he felt pulled towards her. he knew nothing about her except that she was very intelligent and she was an enigma... and it was quite strange for him to be thinking about a girl but he wasn't ashamed to recognise his feelings. He did want to know more about her. she was someone with a super magnetic pull...though she was rude and arrogant, that's what he had concluded from her face offs with myra but yeah, she pulled him close to him.


He didn't realise when she slept off, thinking about her...their kiss... he laughed recalling her shocked face. She was too stunned but then he never felt such an attraction for anyone and he didn't even shy away from that. he had indeed taken a liking for her. he was always surrounded by girls throwing themselves at him but today their dinner was something out of this world for him. there was no playing games, there was no sexual tension, there was no putting up faces...it was just them... only them. He loved it. the softness of her lips still lingered on his lips and his mind while he subconsciously prepared himself for the big day.


Geet woke up around 8am, still drowsy. She had been sleeping for a long time. She felt fresh... rejuvenated. She walked to the washroom and stood in front of the mirror. She saw herself in it... ruffled hair, still in the short black dress and her smudged lipstick. She stood still, watching herself—she had been trying to wipe off his feel from her lips but she had failed big time. She, for the first time, felt so restless about it... like there was something different but then she was Geet handa after all... she didnt have time for such useless matters. She has a meeting to attend and she has to keep the promise she had made to her dad. As for her hot shot, she'd get her compensation. She was ambitious... she wanted to do so many things in her life... she had so much to work...and thats why she didn't have emotions in her. she had been pampered so much by her dad...brought up in an environment that had made her to stand strong and not let her emotions falter. There was no room for emotions in business..she had been taught and she indeed had the knack for something that twisted.


She changed quickly into formals and tied her hair up in a neat pony. She had to get that khurana guy's signatures and she will no matter what. She checked her phone...5 missed calls from Chachi. She sighed and threw her phone on the bed not even caring to call back and got back to getting ready. She applied minimal makeup and walked down, carrying the documents. Her friends knew she was here for a meeting so they went ahead with their plans without her.


She waited for her breakfast in the hotel lounge, watching the people. She was very quite...she didn't know why. She was definitely serious about her work but then she couldn't distract from last night's memories. She touched her lips again softly and then recalled their soft rhythmic dance, his lopsided smile... and then she smacked herself...convincing herself that she had better things to take care of. She had learned business from dad... and she'd get this deal done no matter what!


He sat in the conference, listening to the presenter on the dias. he was bored...there were lot of dignitaries but he was bored. He checked his planner on his iphone and noticed the one he disliked the most—the handa meeting. He sighed... they were not leaving him this easily. There were so many talks on various topics but he just passed his time thinking of her—what she'd be doing now or how she'd have reacted after he left her... he wanted to meet her again and go out for dinner or lunch, spending time with her. her talks were quite sensible...actually very much sensible. Her choice of words... her opinions... he could easily guess she was perhaps an executive management student—well she indeed seem that she was still learning. He smiled to himself and checked his watch. 5 mins before the meeting got over. He stood up abruptly and just walked out, leaving everyone in awe of his arrogance.


He went back to his office and sat in his cabin with a mug of coffee. There were so many client meetings today and the most irritating was that of handas. He sighed and called adi to check on the schedule.

Geet ran into the lift, clutching the files. The day hadn't started very good today. First she was totally lost, god knows for what, secondly she was late... third, she didn't want to let her father down so she had to plan something very quick. The meeting scheduled with that khurana was for 1 hour only and she hated him for that. she was 20 minutes late and his arrogance..he had refused to extend the time.


Maan was irritated at first for he was quite strict in his ways and these people really pissed him off. But then he was glad that he didn't have to attend such a boring baseless meeting. He lazily looked into his laptop sending some mails and checking the finances. He heard a knock and adi came in.

"sir... the handas..."

He sighed...they finally managed to come. He definitely had them on his bad books..he hated their care-damn attitude. They irked him and the thought that they actually had the audacity to show their face after getting so late irked him even more. He breathed in sharply and decided to just let them know his stand once and for all.

"fine... get that file and I don't want to see anyone in my cabin.."

"but sir...how'd you meet them then?"

"I don't have to meet them adi... I will give them just what they need.."

"right sir..."

Adi knew maan was very firm in his decisions, so didn't probe further. He walked out to the waiting area and greeted Geet.

"welcome maam... Mr. Khurana shall see you in a bit.."

She nodded and followed him up to his cabin. They stopped right in front of his cabin.

"may I have the file please? Sir would like to see it..."

That was confusing for Geet. weren't they supposed to do it face to face?

"I want to see him...", she didn't falter either.

"sorry ma'am but we have got strict orders from him not to let 'anyone' into his cabin..."

"but we were supposed to meet today at this time right...', she tried to bite back. That khurana was really trying hard to get into her bad books. She tried to barge in but adi stopped her, "ma'am.. you are not allowed. Sir was disappointed to learn that you were late... he is quite particular about official matters. So please cooperate with me.. please hand me over the file. I shall get them done..."


Geet was hell irritated. This is not the way to treat your clients. But then she gave it a quick thought... even she'd have done that if anyone was late in her meeting and moreover she was all alone with this person far away from home...she definitely shouldn't take risk at this point of time. She tried to ease her ego and gave the file politely.

"thank you ma'am...please wait here for a while..."

She watched adi get into the cabin...she was eager to see that bas**** who dared stop her. she tried to peep into the cabin that was left a bit open as adi got in. She tried to look at his face but he was seated in the other side of the room which was completely invisible from that small open of the door. There was complete silence for a while... she felt so anxious. She stood by the door for she knew well she could hear their talks through that small gap.


A few moments of silence and she stood there shocked with the turn of event. She saw a few papers flying and then realized her file had been thrown away. She went numb seeing that utter rudeness with which the papers had been thrown away. How dare he? How dare he do that? she was ready to barge in and give him a piece of her mind when she heard adi speak out, "but sir... don't you think we should consider this?"

"they have made the same mistake again adi... I don't think the handas ever heed my warning. Its a mistake for the first time but a blunder when repeated again..."

Geet was sure she had heard that voice somewhere but then her anger blinded her. she was trying to get hold of herself when she heard them speak again.

"ma'am is waiting outside sir...if you wish we can speak to her about it..."

"its no use... if she'd have really read the papers then I would have considered it. seems like no one in the handas have tiniest of horse sense to even point out such a simple mistake..."

"we can let them know sir...this deal will be profitable..."

"I had pointed out in the first meeting itself to look into it and this is the 5th time am rejecting it...and its their job adi... I don't want to see any one from handa around my office ever again. They are just a waste of time..."


She was completely red hearing that...her eyes blood shot...waste of time? What the hell did he think of himself? So much attitude? She was ready to get in when adi came out, collecting all the papers and closed the door behind. He looked at Geet... and he understood she had heard everything. He felt a little sad but then he had to handle it. he gave the file to Geet and gestured her to sit on the couch nearby. Geet was numb with anger...she clutched the files tightly and sat there...she had never been insulted like this in her entire life.

Adi saw her expressions and forwarded her a glass of water, "an sorry ma'am but sir had already pointed out the mistake in the first meeting itself but it hasn't been corrected yet..."

Geet listened to him and that khurana's words echoed in her head. She closed her eyes, trying hard to gulp down her anger in front of business relations.


Maan was totally irritate at the irresponsibility. He had some other client meeting. He just took his laptop and walked out. He saw adi sitting with someone and didn't even look at her properly. He ignored and just went out, crossing her, totally unaware.

Geet slowly opened her eyes and felt something behind her. she turned back instantly. There were so many people going out and coming in... and she sighed. This was totally unacceptable on her part. Adi tried to make her understand seeing her state but she stood up abruptly.

"thank you Mr Adi and thank your boss as well. I will get back soon..."

She just walked out giving adi a royal ignore. Adi stood there watching her... she had a very different confidence on her face altogether. She was not like others, trying to guess maan's behaviour before handing over the papers. He sighed and looked for his boss. He was out and he knew he will be spending his day outside.


She sat on the steering closing the door with a loud noise and rushed out, driving madly. His words echoed in her ears making her burn with the fire he had ignited within her. she ran back to her suite and closed herself from the world. She looked at the papers in her hands and threw it on the table. She hated the outcome of the meeting and he had hurt her ego real real bad. No one dared to talk to Geet handa like that and he actually had the audacity to throw away those files so disrespectfully. She was reminded of her dad who had handed her the files so proudly and everything seemed to crush down.


Maan went around the clients and his day went totally busy with them. He had lunch with them and lot to catch up. It was around evening when he finally met up with arjun. He looked quite happy and maan knew the night was going to be a sleepless one. They greeted each other while he invited him to the disc at night. anyways maan had nothing to do in the evening so he might enjoy his friend and his gf who was accompanying him to the disc. Arjun gave him the address of the hotel where they would be partying. He was amused to find it as La Tramoille. He could never forget that it was the place where he had left her last night... he felt excited just by the thought itself. He would probably see her again. He smiled and agreed readily. He knew she was not the kind lof girl who would try to run away after what had transpired between them... she was too bold he knew and she would never run away. But then was she still here? He just wished he could just see her.


It was late evening when jazz knocked Geet's room. She hadn't come out of room since afternoon. She was a little worried. She knew Geet had some official work but then she had never stayed aloof for so long. She had been behaving weirdly since the dinner last night. she knocked again when a drowsy Geet opened the door.

"Geet...are you coming to the disc? We are all leaving arjun is already here..."

She was in no mood to go anywhere. She had been too lost in her thoughts about that khurana fellow. She had still not been able to come in terms with the fact that there was any mistake at all for it was her dad who had framed it. she never knew when she slept off listening to music. Jazz had informed her earlier about the disc but she was definitely not in a mood.

"you people go ahead... I want to stay alone for some time..."

"don't you think you have been staying too lonely off late? Are you alright?"

"yeah I am jazz.. you people have fun..."

"don't stress too much.. come over whenever you feel like... we all will be there in the disc..."

"umm..", she hummed and shut the door back. She looked at the papers on the table and her inner self burned in anger. She tried to divert her mind for she was indeed mentally exhausted from the day's events. She would see that khurana later. She ordered herself a hot chocolate and sat down to watch tv. She browsed through the channels for a long time but her mind seemed to get stuck with the same thing again and again. She tried to catch up with some business news but she couldn't. Everything seemed to remind her of the insult she had faced in the morning. She looked at the dinner she had ordered. Everything seemed to fail to gain her attention. It was already 10 at night when she dressed in a short black skirt, white off shoulder shirt, put on her black boots and walked down.


He stood at the bar holding his drink while he watched arjun and jazz dance. He had wished so much to see her again... to feel her close to him again but then neither did he know her full name nor did he have her phone number or even her room number. He didn't even know if she was still in Paris. He looked around...so many people... so many girls...and yep, the call girls trying to seduce people but he was least interested. He had met up with jazz and her friends and stayed aloof. Arjun was holding jazz closely and swaying to the music. He just didn't feel like staying there. His heart was already with someone who wasn't even present here and there was no reason to be here as well. her kiss still lingered on his lips... how he wished she was there for him. he turned to leave when his eyes fell on someone with a vodka bottle in her hands. His lips curved into a smile recognising that slim sexy figure even in the dark.


He just wished what he thought was true. He watched her sit in a nearby table and pour out the drink in her glass. She took a shot and looked towards the dance floor. The light fell on her face making his heart jump. She was here...right in front of him. he just wanted to run to her...his heart was elated and he didn't deny it either. But she looked rather disturbed today, he noticed her taking the fifth shot. He got his glass filled and walked to her. she had a very disturbed look on her face.

She was about to take the next shot when he kept his glass on the table harshly with a sound. She looked at him... and gave a weak smile, "hey hot shot..."

Her voice wasn't lively as it used to be when she called him like that. he was expected to at least pounce on him with the what-the-hell-did-you-do-last-night question but she was totally lost... totally not herself. He sat beside her and took away the shot she held and gulped it down.

"I had missed you so much...', he confessed honestly, holding her hand and caressing her palm softly.

She just looked at him all lost and took his glass sipping the drink, "but I didn't miss you at all..', she spoke making a face. He smiled at her honesty yet a lie. He clutched her hand tighter, "so.. are you sure you didn't think about me at all?"


She was totally not in her senses...so she didn't even get the hint of what he was talking about. She didn't even reply and took in another sip from his glass. He noticed her very quite...so withdrawn...someone who was completely not her. he wondered what might have happened to her...it was her birthday just the previous day and suddenly she was so low. The music was at its peak..the party was just warming up but here she lay on the chair, all lost into something. He sat quietly, giving her company, waiting for her to speak up. He watched her pick up a cigarette from the pack the waiter carried. She held it between her hot red lips, reminding of their taste he had felt. The waiter lighted her puff and walked away with utmost curtsey. He watched her take in a puff and blow out the smoke into the darkness. She held the cigarette between her fingers so gracefully... he wondered even holding a cigarette looked that sexy ever. She took in another puff and his hold on her hand tightened.


A few moments passed with none speaking anything. She tried her hardest to forget everything when he leaned closer and pulled out the cigarette that she held between her lips. Her eyes snapped open and glared at him as he dipped it into the ashtray.

"now speak up..."

She gave him a sarcastic look wondering what his gestures meant. He kept up his calmness and held both her hands softly, "spit it out sweetheart...what bothers you? You might just feel better..."

She sighed and looked at the man sitting in front of her. a complete stranger but she didn't hesitate to confide in him. she pushed her hair away and threw her head back in frustration, "there is this person who is finding fault in everything I do...i had sent my work earlier, he rejected..and he did the same yet again... I don't understand what should I do?"

He heard her silently and caressed her hands softly, "do you trust your work sweetheart?"

She straightened herself and looked at him, her eyes opening wide, "what do you mean? Of course I do..."

"did you even think why that person rejected you?"

"yeah...because he found faults..."

"then there must be definitely one... don't you think?"

"but how is it even possible? I have taken utmost care to make it..."

"there are some thing with our eyes cannot see. Try to see your work critically for once... you might find the reason behind it..."

As he spoke he was reminded of the morning incident with the handas and sighed, "trust me Geet...there are people who could annoy you to death... "

"hmm... so all I need to do is review my works right..."

"yeah..but this time critically and honestly..."


There was a smile that crept on her lips and he knew she was convinced. She stood up delightfully, "thanks a lot hot shot... pata nahi what could have I done had it not been for you...I owe you one, big time!"

He smiled and stood up, "so, you realize what to do?"

"yep...", she spoke confidently, "I must hurry up now...I have to make sure someone gets a kick right on his a**.."

"all the best with that...", he laughed with her words.

He watched her part away with her hands slipping softly yet sensuously away from him. he was glad that she felt better...he actually loved the whole feel of it. she walked graciously, swaying her hips with the rhythm of her steps and disappeared into the dark.


She took out the files and her laptop and sat down to study the whole project. Her hot shot was right... she hadn't even known the basics of what was in the project. She searched the financial data of her company through the company's website and various other market information. She didn't even realize how long she worked... probably the whole night? reading each and every line and examining the minutes of everything and she did find the silliest of the mistakes that was ignored. she corrected a lot of things, made numerous changes and eventually had her final data ready in her hands by 6 in the morning. She finally rested her head o the table and didn't even realize when she dozed off.


It was around 10 when she woke up. She took a quick shower, changed into formals, had her juice and dashed out to his office. She had to show him whom he had messed up with. She'd make sure he apologized for making such comments on her family. She ran into the elevator and up to the 5th floor where he was supposed to be there. She came out of the lift but was amazed to see a very strange thing. Things were being packed and people all around...its as if someone was going somewhere. She looked around for someone and found adi taking care of somefiles. Adi recognised Geet and immediately greeted her.

"wheres mr khurana? I want to meet him, urgently..."

Adi looked at her for a while and the file she had in her hands, "am sorry ma'am..", he spoke sadly, "but sir had already left for India last night..."

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Edited by kawaii_geet - 12 years ago
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That was an awesome one aishu...
So yet again she missed meeting, " The" Mr. Khurana...
Maan is slowly falling for her... though he doesnt seem to realize the depth of it, but he does realize that he feels different about her ... and he doesnt deny his liking for her company!!
On the other hand, Geet is so confused about the kiss, but yet she doesnt wanna think about it coz she feels geet handa cant pay attention for such things...
And then goes the meeting, where they didnt get to meet... There was a mistake... but again she is not able to accept the fact and he is not able to be ok with handa's as well.. Arrogance is high with both of them... but with a difference again...
Maaneet convo on the disc was quite sensible... i think the first sensible thing they discussed so far... and it was a surprise that Geet actually listened to what he said...
She was irritated with Khurana's rudeness, but she failed to realize that there was something amiss in the file...
This one was very interesting with such flow of events... so maan kind of interested to spend time with her, however Geet is lost in her own things...

Eagerly waiting for the next.. ab jaldi next one update karo..
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