EVERYTHING IS FAIR, WHEN LOVE IS WAR -ch19 - pg 84 - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: andy.a

thanks for the lovely comment mahi... loved it 😃

hehhehehe veer khooni hai its not shocking kyunki pata hi nahi hai ki woh hai kon!!!!!!!!!
hawww aur uday ko mar dungi toh lead kon hoga???? MAJNU??? LOLZZZ
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

hehhehehe veer khooni hai its not shocking kyunki pata hi nahi hai ki woh hai kon!!!!!!!!!
hawww aur uday ko mar dungi toh lead kon hoga???? MAJNU??? LOLZZZ

VEER is a 17 year-old kid who exacting revenge for a very grave reason , that will be revealed later. Uday mar jayenge , toh who aakhri chapter honge 😉😆 ... kissi aur "HERO" ki zaroorat nahi padhenge .
PS - I forgot to say : MAJNU IS ALREADY DEAD 🤣!!!!!!
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...



<font color="#ff0000">VEER is a 17 year-old kid who exacting revenge for a very grave reason , that will be revealed later. Uday mar jayenge , toh who aakhri chapter honge 😉😆... kissi aur "HERO" ki zaroorat nahi padhenge .</font>

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<font color="#ff0000">PS - I forgot to say : MAJNU IS ALREADY DEAD 🤣!!!!!!</font>

are han!!! majnu toh already mar gaya hai!!!!
wah veer only of 17 yrs??????? itna gussa???
haye Uday mar gaya toh akhri chapter hi hona padega kyunki sare toh mar rahe hai ek ek karke🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashish.Addict

awesome update andy! thnaks sanju😃

well as all predicted, that Veer is the killer. ya, the 17 year old murderer
n yeah killing Akash was the best thing ever on this earth ya, we are glad you felt so
wow sucha tragic death for him you seem so happy😲
well i shud not be so happy on his death ya, but lets enjoy the end of such a jerk ...
what did akash do that he went to the yamraaj before tanisha?
(well thats actually good) well he tried to rape a young girl, for his cheap behavior he deserved the death he got😃
i dont know wether being with Maya is gud for Uday or no, but i dont like him being with Aarti. eh!!😲arthi is his wife and maya is his mistress😃
so...
overall, beautiful update
loved it thanks sanju😃
thanx for the pm welcome

thanks for the lovely comment sanju. just loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

are han!!! majnu toh already mar gaya hai!!!!
How could u forget THAT Mahi ?
wah veer only of 17 yrs??????? itna gussa???
The reason is EXTREMLY LARGE , that is why his anger is SO MUCH!
haye Uday mar gaya toh akhri chapter hi hona padega kyunki sare toh mar rahe hai ek ek karke🤣 Haan kyun serial killer ANDY , kisi ko nahi chhorte😈!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 8

Uday was perturbed about his outburst on Arthi. He was angry with himself for talking to her so rudely . He couldn't believe that he actually told that he'd "slap" her if she didn't stop questioning him.

"What's happened to you?", he asked himself while standing in front of the bathroom mirror.

"No!!!!!! This can't go on ... I have to get my priorities straight - and my "priorities" DO NOT include Maya. She was a FANTASY which became a REALITY , but now , I got what I wanted , I had my fun ... THE AFFAIR MUST STOP! My wife and daughter come first , THEY ARE MY FAMILY ... and I can't cheat my family anymore!", Uday decided.

He straight away descended the stairs and pulled Arthi into a hug. She resisted at first , but sensing the tension in his body , she hugged him back. "Uday - what's the matter?"

"I'm sorry Arthi ... I shouldn't have shouted at you. We shouldn't have fought. It's just that ... just that ... work , work has become really stressful and I took out that frustration on you!" , he lied.

She pinched his nose and laughed at him : "Uday , I knew that you must've been tensed over something at work , because MY HUSBAND would never raise his voice against me!" He smiled meekly at her. "That means we're cool", he enquired. She smiled broadly and nodded.

"Dinner pe chale?" , she suddenly asked.

Uday : "Huh ... HAAN , okay"

"phir movie?" , she asked again.

"Sure Mrs Singh ... anything for you!", Uday agreed to the date , happy that he was forgiven ... but something VERY IMPORTANT had to be done as soon as possible ...

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'Uday I think we need to postpone our date tonight' said Arthi and she sounded worried.

'What happened Love?', Uday asked... ' Did the babysitter say she won't come tonight?'

'No, it's just Tani is not well. Running nose, sneezing and all the signs of cold. I need to be with her tonight, you know how cranky she gets when she is sick, so shall we postpone for tomorrow night?' she asks expectantly.

Uday pulls her close to his chest and kisses her forehead 'anything for you arthi. You are the best thing that ever happened to me'

And then he began to think how to get rid of the "OTHER" best thing that ever happened to him

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Uday called Maya in the morning from his office 'Maya, I need to meet you today, what time will your shift be over?'

'At 2, uday, why? Cant you wait till then or should I come your office', asked a teasing Maya.

'I will meet you at 2, I need to talk to you '

'So do I! It's days since we "know" each other and yet we don't know anything about each other ... maybe nothing!'.' She said with a double meaning

Uday : 'I know what you mean.. I will see you at 2 then, bye Maya'

'Bye sweetheart, missing you' she said seductively

'Bye' he said dryly

It was then , that Jainandini entered his cabin, walking and flashing her assets.

'Sir you have a meeting in 10 minutes! Sir, can I ask you something?', she said looking at him from under her eyelashes

Uday : 'ya, what is it?'

J : 'sir, does this dress suit me, I mean see over here, 'she points to her upper portion of her torso.

Uday clearly got irritated, he snapped: 'just get of here this very minute, I have my own f**king troubles to sort out! OUT, OUT - I SAID GET OUT!!! THIS VERY MOMENT'

He wanted to throw everything that was in front of him that very moment. He was angry, no he was mad., HELL HE WAS FURIOUS! He was trying to set his life back in order, and here she was trying to seduce him. He already have his pockets full with this Maya business and now his secretary is trying HER luck' YUCK!!!

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Uday drove his car to the florist shop... Yes - the moment had come! As long as he wants his family first, he needed to get this relation; stopped. He kept thinking about how he would break this news to her...

'Maya, we need to stop this relationship, I just can't do this any longer' ... na, that was too blunt... how about something mild like 'Maya, there is something I wanted to tell you, its about us ...'

No. that's not good too'oh maybe he should say what comes to his mind then and there'

Entering the florist shop he went and stood in front of the counter

'There you are, always on time' ,said an excited maya

'ummm' ,mumbled Uday and he managed to give a small smile.

'Wait, let me get my purse and we are good to go' ,she said

After grabbing her purse she walked next to him, the shop was empty and she took this opportunity to kiss him.

At first he resisted ;thinking it had to stop, but having her close to his body, inhaling her heavenly smell and feeling her body heat, he forgot his decision, he too pulled her to him, no space left between them. He kissed her deeply'

After their kiss Maya said: 'Uday you seriously must have missed me, that kiss was too intense'

'I missed you baby, I missed you and ... I love you' said uday

M : So lets go, you needed to talk na ...

'yes - maybe that could wait' he said suggestively as he tucked a lock of hair behind her ear.

M: 'Na, lets talk,,, we need to know more about each other for this relation to move forward na'

U : ok, get into the car, lets go somewhere

As he drove away from there with Maya by his side, he forgot his promise of breaking up with her, he COULDN'T do it. He wanted her in his life & he wanted Arthi too. But Maya made him feel DIFFERENT ... SPECIAL and he was now realising that he LOVED her, loved her body and her soul ... 'he wanted her ; he could not leave her ... HE WOULDN'T LEAVE HER!'

He took her hand in his and squeezed it and said ' I really love you Maya'

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His love confession lead to a passionate round of love-making. "Uday - we were supposed to TALK na", she giggled. "TALKING IS SO BORING , don't u think?" , he told and moved to kiss her again. She stopped him by putting her finger over his lips.
M : Please Uday...?
U : Sure sweet heart ... what do u want to talk about?
M : I want to know how old u are and howcome you're not married?
"Not married?", he repeated.
M :Ya , U are such a successful businessman and u are extremely good looking, why ...
Uday quickly interrupted , "because I was waiting for YOU my Jaan!" ... obviously ignoring the tiny voice in his head which was yelling out Arthi's name. Maya began blushing after hearing his statement.
U: And as for my age ... I'm a little older than you.
M : Are u 21?
U : Are we playing a guessing game?
M: Hmmm ... are u 22?
U : Babes , for every wrong guess ...I SHOULD GET A REWARD!
M: HUH!!!!!!
U : Hmmm , for every WRONG GUESS U GIVE ... I will extract it in kisses!!!!!
M : HAWWW!
U : yep , and since u already gave 2 wrong guesses ...
He kissed her on her neck and the next on her shoulder. Maya began guessing WRONG ON PURPOSE thereafter ...
M : 90 years old ? (he kissed on her bosom) 80 years? (he kissed between her breasts) 70 years? (he kissed her stomach) and the game continued ... OBVIOUSLY Maya never guessed the correct answer!
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Uday and Arthi was at the mall to catch something to eat. He held her hands as they walked around, window shopping and buying a thing or two..

'oh, Uday. I just love going out like this, it reminds me of the time before our marriage when we used to go out and chill. '

U : ya me too ; Arthi

M : uday, see red roses, let me go buy a bunch

U : ok, I will wait for you here

He stood there looking around, crowds of unfamiliar faces went past him. 'Man , what a day!!!' he thought

'Uday' called a familiar voice.. he was beyond shocked

It was Maya. 'Hi Uday, what are you doing here?'

'Ehhh' , he did not know what to say when suddenly Arthi came over there and told : 'don't they look beautiful Uday, it would look good in our room!' She noticed Maya standing next to Uday and asked : 'Who is she Uday??' a smile still on her face

'This.. this is Maya ... a friend of mine' , he said softly

'Hi maya, good to meet you. I'm Arthi ... Uday's wife.'

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thats all for today
hope that you all liked it😳
now what will maya do once she knows uday is married?? tell us
do hit the like button and do comment too
love😳
Andy and Navi
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Posted: 12 years ago
hiii andyyy😃
awsssmmm updateee👏
jai yahan bhi nahi sudhri BITCH😡
maya nay tu uday ki dicision ki watt laga di😆
OMG maya meet arthi 😲
wanna see maya's reaction😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey... Andy...
Hey... Navi...
Yipee I am the second one...
Now keeping my excitement aside...
The chappy was awesome...
You both are one of the best jodi's...
On DEK forum...
There was no veer here...
Uday is still playing this double game...
Uff ur ending...
Update soon...
Thanx for the pm...
Edited by nityatandon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


fantastic chapter andy and navi...just loved it...so now Uday is caught...Poor Maya..will be hurt beyond imagination😭😭...would eagerly wait to see what happens in the next chapter..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome chapter !
Perfectly written 👏
Great going Andy and Navi 👍🏼
Loved the chapter 😳

Uday is feeling guilty ... 😆
He should 😡

But he cannot leave Maya ... 😕

I loved the part when Arthi said that SHE WAS HIS WIFE ... 🤣
I am not at all sorry for Uday ... 🤣

You guys stopped at the right moment ... 😉
I want to see Maya's reaction ... 😈
I have a feeling she WON'T BE HAPPY ... 🤣

Ok i am in a CRAZY MOOD today ... 😆
Maybe because i am happy for some UNKNOWN REASON ... 🤣
So just forgive me if you didn't like all those laughing emoticons ... 😆
~ Sorry ~ 🤣

Waiting to read more ...
Continue soon ...
Thanks for the PM !
Edited by catty2000 - 12 years ago

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