NEW ehmmbh ff : HONA THA PYAAR CH 8 pg 73 - Page 34

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesome update i just loved it sooo much plzzz do continue soon and thanks for the pm👏⭐️
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wow awesome update i just loved it sooo much plzzz do continue soon and thanks for the pm⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice...but its a bit awkward to read intimate hot stuff abt da wrong combos...lolz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update !!~~ viren n manvi n virat n jeevika !!~~😛 loved the scene between both of them :D virat n jeevika were sweet !!~~ but tarun ne entry galad maari😆 waiting for next update!!~~ thanx for the pm :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
update soon next prt desperately waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
viren maanvi
virat jivika
differesnt story
plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was an hot update!!!!😳
Virat & jeevs together & over there viren & manvi together...great this is so cool!!!!😃

Their scenes were quite hot!😉

Amazing update! Continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omggg ye kya ho raha hai?????
Viren manvi were super hot..gosh I cant digest d fact of both of
Dem doing dat ufff...nd virat jeevs ewww hate her lol
It was fab... but m lil confused update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago

** CHAPTER 3 **
**ishq da rog**
viren calls up virat on his way to office while continuously cursing him for spoiling the moment.
virat sees the display name and excuse himself from others and picks up the calls n before he can even say hello
viren : mujhse baat mat kar mera mood bahut kharab h... (i m not in a mood to talk...)
virat : bhai par phone toh tune kia hai... (bhai but u are the one who called me...)
viren : virat bakwaas mat kar... rehne de.. main phone rakh raha hoon... (oh shut up virat... let it be... i am disconnecting the call...)
virat : ok big b... now tell me whats wrong...
viren : mujhe na kisiki supari deni hai...
virat : kya...??? supari...??? hua kya...???
viren : woh manvi... manvi ke dad hai na... tornado...
virat : yeah yeah... we have no other topic to talk... first your manvi n next is her tornado father...
viren : dekh sunna hai toh theek hai... warna... (if u wanna listen, then its okk... else...)
virat : bolo bhai sahab... hua kya...?? n bhai tu chod ne uss manvi ko... (ohh cmon... speak up bro... why dont u leave that manvi...)
viren : kya...???
virat : haan chod de... aisa kya hai usme... (yeah leave her... whats so special in her...??)
viren : tune aaj tak manvi ko dekha bhi nahi hai... aur tu (u havent seen manvi and youa re talking like this about her... )
virat : galti ho gai... karo continue
viren : aisi galti dubara mat kario... main bahut pyaar karta hoon... i love her more than myself...

virat : then why dont you get marrried to her...??
viren : because i dont belive in it... u know it... and why the hell are u questioning me... u are no saint... u are ready to marry jeevika just because she is crazy about you n on the top for u, she is just a substitute because you havent find your girl...
virat : bhai... i have acepted jeevika... i am trying my level best to love her back...
viren : good for you but dont ever think that i love manvi less...
virat : okk... i got it...
viren : yaar m sorry... main manvi ko leke such jyada hi senti ho jata hoon... i will die if she goes away from me... i love her bro...
virat : bhai i am very happy for you... you are in love and she would never leave u... aakhir mere big b mein koi kami nahi hai...
viren : i just hope everything remains same... i need manvi to survive virat...
virat : oh cmon bhai... seems as if u are a changed man... no longer a playboy, i think...
viren : shut up... i do go for parties but thinking about any other girl... nooo... not in this lifetime...
virat : amazing... typical hindi movie types...

viren : love... love changes you... okk now gotto go... i reached office...
virat : sunday ko office...??? kaunse office jaa rahe ho bhai...??
viren : arrghhh... my boss... i feel like killing him... he called me for some important work...
virat : hehe... never mind... its okk... byeee...
viren : bye...
virat ended the call and saw jeevika standing there with her hands on her lips.
virat : what...???
jeevika : have u found a new girlfriend...???
virat : jeevi it was bhai... i am straight... so bhai isnt my girlfriend...
jeevika : viren called up... how is he...??

virat : bhai khush hai apni wali ke saath... and he is in love...
jeevika ran to the hall and broke this news to all...
vanshika : virat are u serious...?? kya viren... sach mein...
virat : haan maa...
swamini : thats a good news... then we should think of getting viren married...
jeevika : haan haan... toh hi toh bandar aur mera number ayega...
virat : why are u all over reacting...?? dont get your hopes high...
vanshika : virat...
virat : bhai isnt ready for marriage... infact he will never be... he doesnt belive in marriage after whatever happened...
vanshika : aisa nahi ho sakta... viren kyun kar raha hai aisa...???
swamini : try to understand bhabhi... whatever happened had an adverse effect on viren... we should give him some tume...
virat : i agree... bua ji is right...
jeevika : toh humari shaadi -
virat : jeevi please...
jeevika : okk main kuch nahi keh rahi... main ek dum chup hoon...
scene shifts
vivek : manvi... come here doll...
manvi goes to vivek and stands there looking down.
vivek : manvi meet sushant and sushant meet my princess, manvi...
sushant : hello... (forwarding his hand for a handshake)

manvi : namaste... (manvi fold her hand n greet him)
sushant : namaste...
vivek : u two talk... i have an important call to make... by the way doll why dont u show the house to sushant...
manvi : as u say dad... chale...
sushant : after you...
manvi took sushant to her room and ordered coffee...
sushant : u have a beautiful room... and its very tidy
manvi : thats because i am myself coming here after 6 months...
sushant : excuse me...
manvi ; yes i am not lying... i live with my boyfriend... oops... i think dad hadnt told you yet...
sushant : your dad knows about it...
manvi : yes... and he has no problem until u are ready to marry me n merge your busines with his...

sushant : what do u mean...???
manvi : cmon dont tell me u dont know what a " live-in relationship " means...
sushant : ofcourse i know...
manvi ; you know what i love my boyfriend but i wouldnt mind marrying a hot n sexy guy like you... but you have to promise me one thing...
sushant : promise what...??
manvi : u wouldnt stop me from meeting my boyfriend... i mean gimme atleast one fulll day with him...
sushant : have u lost it...???
manvi : no baby... we are supposed to get married and you will be sharing me with my boyfriend... so telling you in advance... and and and... my boyfriend will scare the hell out of you the day he meets you... because he loves me way too much to even let other guy sitting close to me... i mean if he sees us at this time in my bedroom sitting on the same bed... you are so gone dude... but after marriage, i will make him understand and handle everything...
sushant : do i look like a mad person to marry u ms. manvi...?? why would i marry a girl who is already in a live in realtionship with her boyfriend...??? i am not marrying you at any cost...
manvi : as u wish but i would have seriously loved marrying you... and sushant can you me a favour...??
sushant : yeah sure...
manvi : dont tell dad about this... he would separate me from viren or lock me in my room and torture me like he always does...
sushant : its okkk... i will not tell him... i wish u all the best in your life manvi...
manvi : wish u the same sushant... thank u...
sushant : anytime...
sushant goes and refuses mr. singhania that he cannot marry his daughter at any cost. vivek fumes in anger and yells manvi's name...
manvi came down running and looks down again...
vivek : what did u do ms. singhania...???
manvi : i did nothing dad...
vivek : spill the beans RIGHT NOW...
manvi : what to do dad...?? he said he is a gay and already has a boyfriend... what i am supposed to do in all this...??? i cant attract him because he likes men...
vivek gulped and turned around to leave after saying this...
vivek : i am going to greece for some work... will not be back until a month...
manvi (controlling her laughter n trying to make a depressed face) : i will miss you dad...
vivek : till the time i return, if ur boyfriend is interested in marrying you, i would like to meet him...
this made manvi sad.. genuinely sad because she knows viren would never agree and she replies by nodding her head.

Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago

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